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Sorry I haven't been active, same reason as said at the top of this page.

 

I wish had HGSS already :|

 

Anyone int he mood to, please tear this team to shreds telling me why I made it suck:

[spoiler=Team]

Swampert (M) @ Earth Plate

Ability: Torrent

EVs: 252 HP/6 Atk/252 Def

Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)

- Stealth Rock

- Earthquake

- Ice Beam

- Roar

 

Snorlax (M) @ Chesto Berry

Ability: Thick Fat

EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd

Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)

- Belly Drum

- Rest

- Earthquake

- Return

 

Umbreon (M) @ Leftovers

Ability: Synchronize

EVs: 252 HP/166 Spd/92 SDef

Sassy nature (+SDef, -Spd)

- Taunt

- Toxic

- Payback

- Wish

 

Gengar (M) @ Choice Scarf

Ability: Levitate

EVs: 6 Def/252 Spd/252 SAtk

Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)

- Shadow Ball

- Thunderbolt

- Focus Blast

- Trick

 

Porygonz @ Life Orb

Ability: Adaptability

EVs: 252 Atk/220 Spd/38 SAtk

Mild nature (+SAtk, -Def)

- Sharpen

- Return

- Dark Pulse

- Hidden Power [Fighting]

 

Lucario (M) @ Salac Berry

Ability: Inner Focus

EVs: 252 Atk/6 Def/252 Spd

Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)

- Substitute

- Swords Dance

- Close Combat

- Rock Slide

 

 

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I was able to hook a WiFi connection, but it's not very strong. Ehh, this is probably going to be one of my only two posts on YCM. Just know that I'll be back Friday night. If I am too lazy to log on, Saturday morning. ;D

 

Sorry I haven't been active' date=' same reason as said at the top of this page.

 

I wish had HGSS already :|

 

Anyone int he mood to, please tear this team to shreds telling me why I made it suck:

[spoiler=Team']

Swampert (M) @ Earth Plate

Ability: Torrent

EVs: 252 HP/6 Atk/252 Def

Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)

- Stealth Rock

- Earthquake

- Ice Beam

- Roar

 

Snorlax (M) @ Chesto Berry

Ability: Thick Fat

EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd

Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)

- Belly Drum

- Rest

- Earthquake

- Return

 

Umbreon (M) @ Leftovers

Ability: Synchronize

EVs: 252 HP/166 Spd/92 SDef

Sassy nature (+SDef, -Spd)

- Taunt

- Toxic

- Payback

- Wish

 

Gengar (M) @ Choice Scarf

Ability: Levitate

EVs: 6 Def/252 Spd/252 SAtk

Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)

- Shadow Ball

- Thunderbolt

- Focus Blast

- Trick

 

Porygonz @ Life Orb

Ability: Adaptability

EVs: 252 Atk/220 Spd/38 SAtk

Mild nature (+SAtk, -Def)

- Sharpen

- Return

- Dark Pulse

- Hidden Power [Fighting]

 

Lucario (M) @ Salac Berry

Ability: Inner Focus

EVs: 252 Atk/6 Def/252 Spd

Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)

- Substitute

- Swords Dance

- Close Combat

- Rock Slide

 

 

 

Felix and myself will rip apart your team... but I can't do it now.

 

Hey guys' date=' I am able to get WiFi on my Platinum game so can you battle me?

 

My Platinum Friend code is

 

2149-8450-1131

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I'll battle you when I get back on Saturday. Big hint: have a counter for Jirachi.

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Obviously Dark is running SubCM Rachi' date=' Colosoil is your best answer to this. Anyway, I'll battle today if anyone wants to.

 

FC: 5241-8531-2016

 

@the team, no, just no, please please please lrn2play.

[/quote']

 

That's what I'm TRYING to do... You guys are all freaking experts, so I'd figure you all could help me a bit, seeing as how Dark and Felix haven't made that school they working thinking about yet.

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Cool, I'll rip it up then.

Swampert (M) @ Earth Plate Leftovers is better

Ability: Torrent

EVs: 252 HP/6 Atk/252 Def

Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)

- Stealth Rock

- Earthquake

- Ice Beam

- Roar

Snorlax (M) @ Chesto Berry

Ability: Thick Fat

EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd

Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)

- Belly Drum

- Rest

- Earthquake

- Return Set sucks because of Ape, Scizor, and a sheet ton of other things that can threaten with a Physical move and is faster. Run Curselax or something.

 

Umbreon (M) @ Leftovers

Ability: Synchronize

EVs: 252 HP/166 Spd/92 SDef

Sassy nature (+SDef, -Spd)

- Taunt

- Toxic

- Payback

- Wish Too slow to taunt, needs Protect with wish. Overall, Yawn > Toxic, Protect > Taunt because Yawn helps phaze and Protect scouts for moves and turns 3hkos into lolfests as you heal off the damage.

 

Gengar (M) @ Choice Scarf

Ability: Levitate

EVs: 6 Def/252 Spd/252 SAtk

Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)

- Shadow Ball

- Thunderbolt

- Focus Blast

- Trick

 

Timid>Modest for Speed

 

Porygonz @ Life Orb

Ability: Adaptability

EVs: 252 Atk/220 Spd/38 SAtk

Mild nature (+SAtk, -Def)

- Sharpen

- Return

- Dark Pulse

- Hidden Power [Fighting] This set sucks so much ass it isn't even funny. PZ is weak as a straight man in a gay bar and can't live a Bullet Pawnch from Scizor. Sharpen doesn't help its shitty Atk stat and you should be abusing its godly special attack stat. Mix PZ sucks, run MixApe, or even funking MixVire in this slot. MixDialga is pro in Ubers, but won't run in OU.

 

Lucario (M) @ Salac Berry

Ability: Inner Focus

EVs: 252 Atk/6 Def/252 Spd

Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)

- Substitute

- Swords Dance

- Close Combat

- Rock Slide

No, just no. Please please please please lrn2play. Lucario is OU for a good reason and this moveset isn't it.

 

Swords Dance

Close Combat

Extremespeed

Crunch/Ice Punch

 

Crunch on Adamant sets, Ice Punch on Jolly sets, Crunch on Jolly sets on shoddy because it eats Rotom-A (which people seem to not understand).

 

Crunch eats things named Dusknoir and Cresselia and lolZam, Ice Punch anally rapes things named Gliscor. Gengar is the only thing done right. Your team is extremely mixape weak. Gengar outspeeds and KO's, but Scizor loves to pursuit it and only Lucario can abuse that. Machamp loves to rape this team too because nothing can stop it outside of a revenge kill on Gengar after its been weakened. Scizor can come in on ANYTHING bar a set-up Lucario and just rape things. Salamence can come in on alot too and start dancing and raping. Latias roams freely and needs to be revenged by Gengar, and EVEN ARBOK could beat this team once Snorlax Belly Drums down and something kills it with ease. There's just a lack of synergy overall and no strategy. 4 fighting weak pokes and a frail Scizorbait Ghost to dodge the fighting type moves, god no. 2 normal types is bad, lacks any type synergy outside of everything switches to Gengar, Skarmory loves this team because only Gengar can do anything to it.

 

Suggestions:

Anything over BDLax

Anything over MixZ

SD Luc @ Life Orb over SDSub Luc

Lefties on Pert

Preferably something bulky and wishy like Vaporeon or Jirachi or Blissey or something over Umbreon.

Needs a speedy physical revenge killer.

Everything with set-up can sweep after Gengar is gone.

Needs Synergy now.

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Cool' date=' I'll rip it up then.

Swampert (M) @ [b']Earth Plate[/b] Leftovers is better

Ability: Torrent

EVs: 252 HP/6 Atk/252 Def

Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)

- Stealth Rock

- Earthquake

- Ice Beam

- Roar

Snorlax (M) @ Chesto Berry

Ability: Thick Fat

EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd

Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)

- Belly Drum

- Rest

- Earthquake

- Return Set sucks because of Ape, Scizor, and a s*** ton of other things that can threaten with a Physical move and is faster. Run Curselax or something.

 

Umbreon (M) @ Leftovers

Ability: Synchronize

EVs: 252 HP/166 Spd/92 SDef

Sassy nature (+SDef, -Spd)

- Taunt

- Toxic

- Payback

- Wish Too slow to taunt, needs Protect with wish. Overall, Yawn > Toxic, Protect > Taunt because Yawn helps phaze and Protect scouts for moves and turns 3hkos into lolfests as you heal off the damage.

 

Gengar (M) @ Choice Scarf

Ability: Levitate

EVs: 6 Def/252 Spd/252 SAtk

Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)

- Shadow Ball

- Thunderbolt

- Focus Blast

- Trick

 

Timid>Modest for Speed

 

Porygonz @ Life Orb

Ability: Adaptability

EVs: 252 Atk/220 Spd/38 SAtk

Mild nature (+SAtk, -Def)

- Sharpen

- Return

- Dark Pulse

- Hidden Power [Fighting] This set sucks so much ass it isn't even funny. PZ is weak as a straight man in a gay bar and can't live a Bullet Pawnch from Scizor. Sharpen doesn't help its shitty Atk stat and you should be abusing its godly special attack stat. Mix PZ sucks, run MixApe, or even f***ing MixVire in this slot. MixDialga is pro in Ubers, but won't run in OU.

 

Lucario (M) @ Salac Berry

Ability: Inner Focus

EVs: 252 Atk/6 Def/252 Spd

Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)

- Substitute

- Swords Dance

- Close Combat

- Rock Slide

No, just no. Please please please please lrn2play. Lucario is OU for a good reason and this moveset isn't it.

 

Swords Dance

Close Combat

Extremespeed

Crunch/Ice Punch

 

Crunch on Adamant sets, Ice Punch on Jolly sets, Crunch on Jolly sets on shoddy because it eats Rotom-A (which people seem to not understand).

 

Crunch eats things named Dusknoir and Cresselia and lolZam, Ice Punch anally rapes things named Gliscor. Gengar is the only thing done right. Your team is extremely mixape weak. Gengar outspeeds and KO's, but Scizor loves to pursuit it and only Lucario can abuse that. Machamp loves to rape this team too because nothing can stop it outside of a revenge kill on Gengar after its been weakened. Scizor can come in on ANYTHING bar a set-up Lucario and just rape things. Salamence can come in on alot too and start dancing and raping. Latias roams freely and needs to be revenged by Gengar, and EVEN ARBOK could beat this team once Snorlax Belly Drums down and something kills it with ease. There's just a lack of synergy overall and no strategy. 4 fighting weak pokes and a frail Scizorbait Ghost to dodge the fighting type moves, god no. 2 normal types is bad, lacks any type synergy outside of everything switches to Gengar, Skarmory loves this team because only Gengar can do anything to it.

 

Suggestions:

Anything over BDLax

Anything over MixZ

SD Luc @ Life Orb over SDSub Luc

Lefties on Pert

Preferably something bulky and wishy like Vaporeon or Jirachi or Blissey or something over Umbreon.

Needs a speedy physical revenge killer.

Everything with set-up can sweep after Gengar is gone.

Needs Synergy now.

 

Allright, thank you VERY VERY much.

 

[spoiler=Revised (and incomplete) Team:]

Swampert (M) @ Leftovers

Ability: Torrent

EVs: 252 HP/6 Atk/252 Def

Relaxed nature (+Def, -Spd)

- Stealth Rock

- Earthquake

- Ice Beam

- Roar

 

Snorlax (M) @ (Suggestion)

Ability: Thick Fat

EVs: 170 HP/120 Def/220 Spd

Careful nature (+SDef, -SAtk)

- Curse

- Return

- Earthquake

- Selfdestruct

 

Gengar (M) @ Choice Scarf

Ability: Levitate

EVs: 6 Def/252 Spd/252 SAtk

Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)

- Shadow Ball

- Focus Blast

- Trick

- Thunder

 

Kingdra (M) @ Life Orb

Ability: Swift Swim

EVs: 252 Atk/18 Spd/240 SAtk

Naughty nature (+Atk, -SDef)

- Waterfall

- Hydro Pump

- Draco Meteor

- Rain Dance

 

Lucario (M) @ (Suggestion)

Ability: Inner Focus

EVs: 252 Atk/6 Def/252 Spd

Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)

- Swords Dance

- Close Combat

- Extremespeed

- Crunch

 

 

Any suggestions on a speedy rev killer that'll work with this?

And no two can have the same item, cause I eventually plan on making this team for in-game use.

 

Thanx again :)

 

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Here is my team:

 

Arceus lv. 100

 

Moves:

Fly

Perish Song

Judgement

Hyper voice

 

Tyranitar lv. 66

 

moves:

Stone Edge

Crunch

Aerial Ace

Fire Fang

 

Charizard lv. 78

 

moves:

Dragon Rage

Strength

Flare Blitz

Flamethrower

 

Gengar lv. 91

 

Maves:

Sucker Punch

Shadow Punch

Payback

Shadow Ball

 

Golbat(A Green One!) lv. 36

 

moves:

Confuse Ray

Air Cutter

Mean Look

Poison fang

 

Empoleon lv. 100

 

moves:

Aqua Jet

Surf

Brine

MetaL Claw

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Here is my team:

 

Arceus lv. 100

 

Moves:

Fly

Perish Song

Judgement

Hyper voice

 

Tyranitar lv. 66

 

moves:

Stone Edge

Crunch

Aerial Ace

Fire Fang

 

Charizard lv. 78

 

moves:

Dragon Rage

Strength

Flare Blitz

Flamethrower

 

Gengar lv. 91

 

Maves:

Sucker Punch

Shadow Punch

Payback

Shadow Ball

 

Golbat(A Green One!) lv. 36

 

moves:

Confuse Ray

Air Cutter

Mean Look

Poison fang

 

Empoleon lv. 100

 

moves:

Aqua Jet

Surf

Brine

MetaL Claw

 

Everything is wrong, start again my friend.

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Voice Chat is standard as being OFF. People like myself, who think out loud, and over analyze every possible situation, don't like having Voice Chat on because it gives away too much information. :]

 

Also, if you'd like a battle with me, PM ME ASAP WITH YOUR FRIEND CODE.

 

I have a free day tomorrow, and I'll pass on studying for math, so I can battle. I'm currently making 5 or 6 different sets of teams at the moment.

 

So, here is the thing. I was doing some event trading, and I got a legit 31 ATK, 31 Speed ExtremeSpeed Zigzagoon from the Pokemon Box game. If you want a clone of it (for ESpeed + Belly Drum NU Sweeping ownage skillz), contact me via PM.

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Yes I lost, like the 5th time. I know, I stink at pokemon. I really need to know how to be good. My team stinks and I need help. Please don't make rude comments, I KNOW my team and I stink.

 

Vaporeon lv 50:

 

Surf

Waterfall

Brine

Water Pulse

 

Jolteon lv 50:

 

Thunder

Thunder Fang

Charge Beam

Shock Wave

 

Flareon lv 50:

 

Overheat

Fire Blast

Fire Fang

Flamethrower

 

Glaceon lv 50:

 

Ice Beam

Ice Fang

Avalanche

Blizzard

 

Espeon lv 50:

 

Phychic

Psybeam

Reflect

Swift

 

Umbreon lv 50:

 

Assurance

Dark Pulse

Faint Attack

Pursuit

 

PLEASE help me get better.

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Yes I lost' date=' like the 5th time. I know, I stink at pokemon. I really need to know how to be good. My team stinks and I need help. Please don't make rude comments, I KNOW my team and I stink.

 

Vaporeon lv 50:

 

Surf

Waterfall

Brine

Water Pulse

 

[b']Vaporeon is a Water-type, yes, but having all 4 of the same type moves isn't a good idea. More, Vaporeon isn't meant to be an attacker. So, try changing the moveset so it doesn't entail four attacks. And make sure the attacks are different types. But keep Surf, for sure.[/b]

 

Jolteon lv 50:

 

Thunder

Thunder Fang

Charge Beam

Shock Wave

 

Same problem, you have 4 attacks of the same type. Get rid of all four moves, and add Thunderbolt and Substitute. Build it from there.

 

Flareon lv 50:

 

Overheat

Fire Blast

Fire Fang

Flamethrower

 

I think I am seeing a pattern. I haven't worked much with Flareon, so I'm not exactly sure if it needs Physical or Special moves.

 

Glaceon lv 50:

 

Ice Beam

Ice Fang

Avalanche

Blizzard

 

...same problem. Moreover, Glaceon isn't meant to be a full-out attacker. I saw a Sub set before, and that worked pretty well. SubPetaya, IIRC.

 

Espeon lv 50:

 

Phychic

Psybeam

Reflect

Swift

 

Get rid of the last three moves.

 

Umbreon lv 50:

 

Assurance

Dark Pulse

Faint Attack

Pursuit

 

Uhh, Umbreon isn't meant to be an attacker. You might want to try Mean Look, Baton Pass, and two other moves.

 

PLEASE help me get better.

 

Comments in bold.

 

Didn't get into too much specifics because of my lack of time.

 

A team full of Eeveelutions isn't that great, because it's not strung together very well.

 

smogon.com

 

USE IT OFTEN.

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