The YCM Writers Guild

[Juuzou]

the answer to this:

SHAME ON YOU HARBINGER!

 

The voting only ended two days ago ='(

 

Anyway' date=' we shall began now. I have decided to go with Gamemasters plot for originality and plain out being the best to the three judges =\

 

I'm giving Gamesmaster the lead on this project, so every idea MUST go through him first. After all it's his idea but it's OUR short story.

 

COMMENCE DE WRITING!

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so what is his idea i am new but i am here to help.

 

is this:

Urk.

 

Pocket Watch is too long; it requires a couple chapters' date=' and a short story is never divided in any way, shape, or form. Besides, the murder is highly unlikely.

 

Man on the Moon is just weird. The kid would have been caught by then. Besides, if he's gone for long enough that his uncle can be hospitalized without him knowing, how can he meet Neil Armstrong in any timely fashion?

 

Also, both are roughly the same, and I dislike the core concept in each.

 

Instead of voting for one or the other, I propose a new story idea, as I loathe both variations. Please forgive my blatant rip-off of [i']The Lady, or the Tiger?[/i]; that's basically what short stories should be, IMO.

 

Suggestion Title: More Than a War

•Two brothers are told by their dying father that each shall inherit their own half of his kingdom

•One brother is good, the other evil

•The brothers are distant, and the evil one schemes to kill the good one

•Upon inheriting their kingdoms, the wicked brother declares war on the good brother

•Rebels protesting the war form their own military alliance and declare war on both kingdoms

•The good brother must decide whether to surrender and die or join forces with his evil brother

 

Discuss, improve, et cetera.

 

see?

[Soul Legacy]

Am i excepted

[Lemniscate]

Yes. You are accepted. Welcome.

[Soul Legacy]

Oh ok, thank you :D

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

@Harbinger Evil:

Accepted for affiliation spot

 

@Queen-Dragon:

As of right now I'm waiting for Gamesmaster's decision on how we should start.

 

@¦Kylarnatias Soul¦:

Accepted as member.

[Juuzou]

a little part of the story i wrote, i think there isn't enough detail =/:

 

The Man on the bed lied beside me and my brother as a cold chill went thruogh my body. "I am dieing," the man said, "And it is a very unfortunate. But as I give you my last words, I give you a gift. Each of your shall own half of my kingdom. i hope that you will live EGHHH." and then silence. it was over. Father was dead.

[Queen-Dragoon]

The man on the bed lay beside me and my brother as a cold chill went through my body. "I am dying' date='" the man said, "And it is very unfortunate. But as I give you my last words, I give you [b']each[/b] a gift. Each of you shall own half of my kingdom. I hope that you will live EGHHH," and then silence. It was over. Father was dead.

 

It's OK. If this man was royalty he may need some changes to his vocabulary, and some extra description of their surroundings may be an idea. 'EGHHH' may be a bit overly violent. A sigh might be more appropriate.

[Juuzou]

The man on the bed lay beside me and my brother as a cold chill went through my body. "I am dying' date='" the man said, "And it is very unfortunate. But as I give you my last words, I give you [b']each[/b] a gift. Each of you shall own half of my kingdom. I hope that you will live EGHHH," and then silence. It was over. Father was dead.

 

It's OK. If this man was royalty he may need some changes to his vocabulary, and some extra description of their surroundings may be an idea. 'EGHHH' may be a bit overly violent. A sigh might be more appropriate.

 

your probably the best 3-star, in terms or grammar, I've ever seen. most of them can't type =/

 

thanks, I will edit it soon.

[Queen-Dragoon]

I appreciate the Kudos but I've been writing a novel for nearly a year :).

[Juuzou]

I appreciate the Kudos but I've been writing a novel for nearly a year :).

 

0_0

 

that's impressive. any fan-fic i write immediately falls down the drain xD

[Lemniscate]

My last Fan-Fic didn't get much support.

I am also writing a book though. It is really good so far.

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

I'm currently getting a book of my poems published within the next year and a half.

[Lemniscate]

Great. Good for you.

 

How many poems are there in it?

[Zimiri of the Muse]

Member Name: elite duelists

Favorite Book*: i don't have one

Do you prefer: i read anything

[Davok]

I apologize for my brief inactivity. Anyway, I have completed the prologue for a new Fan Fic that I am going to be writing, known as the "Meta Anomaly".

 

[spoiler= Prologue: "I Told you So"]

This is about one of those times that I gasp in inexplicable embarrassment while Reno goes on to say how "he told me so" and pointing out my many follies in the particular statement that I made. But then, maybe none of us will be alive to even say to each other "I told you so". But I quickly withdrew myself from such dangerous (and deadly) thoughts and came back to the task at hand. Survival.

 

My suit cracked and crumbled as the intense heat from the enormously large blast furnace below me erupted lava and flames into the small but strong dark metal grate in which I was clinging on for my life. My skin was peeling as my armor's shields evaporated from the intense heat and I look down cautiously toward the looming pit of molten lava sending out sparks and geysers destined to destroy me if I do not hurry soon. I had since dumped my suit's plasma deposits in danger of a spark getting in and ending my existence prematurely so my plasma whip would do no good.

 

I attempted rocking back and forth along the grate's bars in an attempt to back flip myself to the top of the grate, but in this action one of the rusted away bolts came loose and propelled itself into the lava. This unfortunately led to the grate tipping from one side and flip vertically, which led to be slamming hard against the wall. As if my suit wasn't cracked hard enough. I let out a scream of pain as pain shot up my spine from the impact, and began to sweat uncontrollably from the even more intense heat from below.

 

The grate was pressed so hard against my skin that I could hardly move, let alone escape this harsh predicament. Then to my horror I looked down. The lava level was slowly but surely rising. I struggled but for all my great strength I could not pull up the grate which confined me to my fate.

 

"Damn..." I managed to splutter out this one single word amidst the pain and heat. After countless jobs, I was going to go down like this?

 

Oh, by the way, you are probably wondering how I managed to get to this predicament in the first place. And also who I am. The former is a long story, but the latter I can tell you now.

 

My name is Samus Aran.

 

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

That' a very good prologue Davok, when will you be writing chapter 1?

 

@Elite Duelist: Accepted

[Freeman The Master]

the answer to this:

SHAME ON YOU HARBINGER!

 

The voting only ended two days ago ='(

 

Anyway' date=' we shall began now. I have decided to go with Gamemasters plot for originality and plain out being the best to the three judges =\

 

I'm giving Gamesmaster the lead on this project, so every idea MUST go through him first. After all it's his idea but it's OUR short story.

 

COMMENCE DE WRITING!

[/quote']

 

so what is his idea i am new but i am here to help.

 

is this:

Urk.

 

Pocket Watch is too long; it requires a couple chapters' date=' and a short story is never divided in any way, shape, or form. Besides, the murder is highly unlikely.

 

Man on the Moon is just weird. The kid would have been caught by then. Besides, if he's gone for long enough that his uncle can be hospitalized without him knowing, how can he meet Neil Armstrong in any timely fashion?

 

Also, both are roughly the same, and I dislike the core concept in each.

 

Instead of voting for one or the other, I propose a new story idea, as I loathe both variations. Please forgive my blatant rip-off of [i']The Lady, or the Tiger?[/i]; that's basically what short stories should be, IMO.

 

Suggestion Title: More Than a War

•Two brothers are told by their dying father that each shall inherit their own half of his kingdom

•One brother is good, the other evil

•The brothers are distant, and the evil one schemes to kill the good one

•Upon inheriting their kingdoms, the wicked brother declares war on the good brother

•Rebels protesting the war form their own military alliance and declare war on both kingdoms

•The good brother must decide whether to surrender and die or join forces with his evil brother

 

Discuss, improve, et cetera.

 

see?

 

no./

[Queen-Dragoon]

A Metroid fan fic huh? I look forward to reading more if you'll post it?

[Soul Legacy]

Same, a Metroid fan fic sounds very nice and fresh

[Queen-Dragoon]

By the way has Gamesmaster been online recently?

[Soul Legacy]

I don't think so.......

[Queen-Dragoon]

It's going to be hard to finish the project without him.

[Final Fantasy Revolution]

he was online today in fact

 

 

Great. Good for you.

 

How many poems are there in it?

 

It's a collaboration with me and four other poetry artists. We're supposed to put in twenty five poems each for a total of one hundred twenty five poems.

 

 

Unrelated:

I should really update that first post >.>

[Queen-Dragoon]

Should we try and write some of it without his input then (obviously he should get a lot anyway)?

[Careless Whisper]

You think you can hide this from me? :D

 

 

Member Name: Meti (soon to be Avanz)

Favorite Book: The Amber Spyglass

Do you prefer:

--1st: Novels

--2nd: Poems