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What Will Be Our Febuary Piece of Litterature to Write as a Club?  

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  1. 1. What Will Be Our Febuary Piece of Litterature to Write as a Club?

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Play with spacing' date=' and split the last sentence in two with more elaboration. Ah, and use more than two sentence structures.

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Not much more to say. It did peak my interest.

For the record, that one's spelled "pique".

 

If you post the link here The Genteman will review it and make it an official Fic of the guild (if it's good enough(which it evidently is if Supreme liked it)).

It is; if not, FFR has about as much taste in enigmatic prologues as the voters of the Kid's Choice Awards in movies.

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Play with spacing' date=' and split the last sentence in two with more elaboration. Ah, and use more than two sentence structures.

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Not much more to say. It did peak my interest.

For the record, that one's spelled "pique".

Thanks for the spell check.

 

So are you going to give us the link Snitch?

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Read' date=' Reviewed, and it's an Official Fan Fic of the YCM Writers Guild.

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I've read the review and I appreciate the high marks. I do have one query. Random battles are a large part of what Pokemon is... the concept of trainers and all that... what would you replace them with if you were writing it?

 

I'm just saying to make it so it's not randomly random (yeah cause that makes sense...)

 

What I mean is just don't make it like this:

Jake: Yo.

Guy: What's Up?

*BATTLE ENSUES!*

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Read' date=' Reviewed, and it's an Official Fan Fic of the YCM Writers Guild.

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I've read the review and I appreciate the high marks. I do have one query. Random battles are a large part of what Pokemon is... the concept of trainers and all that... what would you replace them with if you were writing it?

 

I'm just saying to make it so it's not randomly random (yeah cause that makes sense...)

 

What I mean is just don't make it like this:

Jake: Yo.

Guy: What's Up?

*BATTLE ENSUES!*

 

Don't worry. That only happened with his very first battle. Every other one will have a reason.

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