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Depth is ok, but you should have blurred the inner part of the emergency ward less.

The Spaltter brushing all over the tag is over-sharpened; to the point it looks messy.

Colors are kinda meh =/ A few more adjustment layers wouldn't hurt.

A few more effects would make the tag a little less bland ;)

Blending is fine, although comp is wierd.

Ligthing is pretty meh too. Would be interesting thugh if it was coming out of the emergency door thing.

 

Not bad, but I've seen you do better =)

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What the hell did you do to the render!? Please, fix that NAO!

 

Meh, at least you'll fix the mistakes.

 

-Sharpening isn't too good.

-Depth isn't great either.

-Teh flow is meh.

-Looks like you dropped a few c4ds for no reason.

-That little transparent thing you got going on with the render sucks! Were you trying to blend it?

-Lighting needs work.

-There is just something about this tag that seems......off. I can't really put my finger on it.

 

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