Deity Mitsu Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 New song posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 The 3rd song kinda creeped me out at first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Why?Haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 I couldn't understand it intil I read it again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Poc Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 These would make some awesome Metal songs. Do I have your permission to use your lyrics? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Permission granted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tehodis Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 I love that song! I have such a clear sound in my head for how I would sing it. It'll totally be the first one that I try out. I'm gonna write out some sheet music for myself right now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Glad you like it :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 I like them too I got2go I'm having a sleep over for 2 times in a row with blue-eyes and our friends see ya tommorow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 See ya.Also,if anyone wants me to write a personal song,PM me with what kind of feel you want to it and I'll see what I can do.:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 bump.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheLastGod Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Those are great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 I'll be adding more tonight,probably from my old stuff,which was in my mind,better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 Bump.Added a fourth song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tehodis Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 OMG. I love that one! You are so talented! I cannot wait until I'm not sick so I can try these out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 Thanks tehodis.Great to hear that my work is appreciated,although I really don't find it all that hard at all.I've been able to recover some songs from my old computer,so I'll be getting more on here shortly! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 That is the utter epitome of talent. Keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 Thanks a lot static,and I will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 Newest song posted.My favorite out of all that I've posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted September 18, 2007 Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 This one takes the cake. Deeper meaning is woven into the lyrics. Work on adding more verses, I saw that there was one verse, then two chorus's. Usually a song goes introverse 1(Pre chorus, optional)chorus 1verse 2(pre chorus, optional)chorus 1 repeatVerse 3 (smaller)(pre chorus, off by a little to the first two pre chorus's)chorus 2 (Off by chorus 1 by a couple of the rhyming words)Outro. I think you know this, but I think you should add a verse 2 to the new song you just made, but hey, if you want to, don't, its cool as it is. Just remember, the talent is there, utilize it as you wish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tehodis Posted September 18, 2007 Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 This one takes the cake. Deeper meaning is woven into the lyrics. Work on adding more verses' date=' I saw that there was one verse, then two chorus's. Usually a song goes introverse 1(Pre chorus, optional)chorus 1verse 2(pre chorus, optional)chorus 1 repeatVerse 3 (smaller)(pre chorus, off by a little to the first two pre chorus's)chorus 2 (Off by chorus 1 by a couple of the rhyming words)Outro. I think you know this, but I think you should add a verse 2 to the new song you just made, but hey, if you want to, don't, its cool as it is. Just remember, the talent is there, utilize it as you wish.[/quote'] "Verse 3" is called a bridge. And also, it's more boring if you follow an outline. I think DM's songs are fantastic the way they are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 Thanks so much tehodis.What did you think of the song? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Static Posted September 18, 2007 Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 This one takes the cake. Deeper meaning is woven into the lyrics. Work on adding more verses' date=' I saw that there was one verse, then two chorus's. Usually a song goes introverse 1(Pre chorus, optional)chorus 1verse 2(pre chorus, optional)chorus 1 repeatVerse 3 (smaller)(pre chorus, off by a little to the first two pre chorus's)chorus 2 (Off by chorus 1 by a couple of the rhyming words)Outro. I think you know this, but I think you should add a verse 2 to the new song you just made, but hey, if you want to, don't, its cool as it is. Just remember, the talent is there, utilize it as you wish.[/quote'] "Verse 3" is called a bridge. And also, it's more boring if you follow an outline. I think DM's songs are fantastic the way they are. They are, hands down. But, if there only 2 minutes long, he MIGHT want to attempt to add more, if he can, make it better if he feels it. I never at any point stated that he SHOULD use the outline, I stated that a song "Usually" follows that pattern. Deity, do what you will, but if you ever feel like adding more to something, I think it will become better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tehodis Posted September 18, 2007 Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 I thought it was awesome. I said it before, and I can't think of anything else to say, so you are just so talented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 18, 2007 This one takes the cake. Deeper meaning is woven into the lyrics. Work on adding more verses' date=' I saw that there was one verse, then two chorus's. Usually a song goes introverse 1(Pre chorus, optional)chorus 1verse 2(pre chorus, optional)chorus 1 repeatVerse 3 (smaller)(pre chorus, off by a little to the first two pre chorus's)chorus 2 (Off by chorus 1 by a couple of the rhyming words)Outro. I think you know this, but I think you should add a verse 2 to the new song you just made, but hey, if you want to, don't, its cool as it is. Just remember, the talent is there, utilize it as you wish.[/quote'] "Verse 3" is called a bridge. And also, it's more boring if you follow an outline. I think DM's songs are fantastic the way they are. They are, hands down. But, if there only 2 minutes long, he MIGHT want to attempt to add more, if he can, make it better if he feels it. I never at any point stated that he SHOULD use the outline, I stated that a song "Usually" follows that pattern. Deity, do what you will, but if you ever feel like adding more to something, I think it will become better. your right,when I did my old recordings none of my songs were longer then 3 and a half minutes.But,keep in mind that I haven't added instrument solos or breaks.i do get your point though,and I'll try to make some longer lyrics to see how you like them compared to the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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