Doogle423 Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 the EX stands For Extreme Enjoy! i hope and aim to update as much as i can Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doogle423 Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 PrologueThe Story begins with a young boy called Yomato he is 14 and he's always dreamt of becoming the champion of the duel society.The duel society is a place for Master duelist to go and test there Skills the are many leauges in the duel society 13 being the worst of them all and 1 being the best, and after 14 years Yomato is finally old Enough to go,His friend justin Keeps telling him not to go on the ship to the duel society because if he loses wich he secret thinks he will his dreams will be crushed and he wont paly card games ever again.NOTE:ill be introducing all new card not real already made cards^_^CHAPTER 1-Rude Awakening"YOMATO YOUR GOING TO BE LATE AND MISS THE SHIP TO THE DUEL SOCIETY IF YOU DONT WAKE UP NOW"Bellowed yomatos mother. Yomato Is A 14 Year Old High Schooler Who Has Just Come Of Age And Is Now Able To Travel To The Duel Society Where He will Meet Many new duelist and face many new challanges.He burst out of his bedroom with his friend justin following behind."Mom, i've been ready to go for ages Me and justin were practicing for my entrance duel in the duel society"said Yomato.Then he rand to the front door opened it and burst outside the sun was gleaming Bright in the sky and there wasn't a cloud in sight he ran down the street justin tailing not close behind and jump into the dock he was greeted by his friend maria. maria was a 15 year old girl who was yomatos girlfriend she was also going to go to the duel society yomato was a much better duelist than she was but he let her win because he doesn't want to hurt her feelings."ATTENTION DUELIST'S,The Ship for the duel society will be leaving in one minute everybody who is going please say your goodbye's and step on board"said a voice over the intercom.maria and yomato said there goodbyes to justin and got on the boat.One Hour Later yomato was resting in the lounge then a Young Duelist stepped in front of yomato and said "are you one called yomato".confused yomato nodded."my name is Torin, I CHALLENGE YOU TO A DUEL!"Exclaimed Torin.Yomato still confused acepted and pulled out his duel disk version 6.25, a new version of KaibaCorp.'s duel disk version 1.0 they both walked on to the deck and began the duel.YOMATO:6000TORIN:6000yomato and torin both drew 5 cards. yamato was to go first.he played three face down spell and a Magna-Tech Warriortron in face down defence.Magna-Tech warriortron Light ATK/1200 Def/2000 ***Effect:FLIP:when this card is flliped into Face-Up Defence position destroy two spell and traps randomly off your opponents side of the field.then yomato handed the duel to torin. Torin drew a card.He then played 3 magics/traps onto the field the he play a Twighlight sworn king in face up attack.twighlight sworn king Dark ATK/1900 DEF/? ****Effect:when you succesfully summoned this card into face up attack position you can special summon one monster with twilightsworn in it's name.this cards origional defence become the defence of the card that was special summoned this turn.he then special summoned Twilightsworn Master in face up attackTwilightsworn Demon Dark ATK/3000 DEF/2600 *******Effect:when this card is special summoned from your hand destroy one card from your hand to destroy all monsters on your opponents side of the field.Torin activated the effect of this monster destroying Failed Spell.Failed Spell {Spell}When this card is activated it is destroyed.destroying yomatos face down Magna-tech Warriortron."I will activate BattleAxe of Pestilence on my twilightsworn demon."torin said.BattleAxe of Pestilence {Equip}when this card is equiped to a monster that monster gains 900 attack and has the abilty to attack twice this turn if the monster would be destroyed destroy this card instead."this makes twilight sworn demons attack power become an incredible 3900 and he can also attack twice,so My Demon ATTACK!""not so fast, i activate sakaretsu ribbon it destroys the attacking monster after battle damage is aplied".YOMATO:2100TORIN:6000"I was hoping you would do that battleaxe of pestilanecs effect is that if my monster would be destroyed destroy this card instead,Too Bad for me as now my demon doesnt get to attack twice"."Huh....Ok i cna still win"thought yomato."I will equip morse power to my twilightsworn king".Torin said.Morse power {equip}this card can only be equip to a monster with 2500 or less this monster gain 200 attack and is unaffected by any spell or trap card, excluding this card."now my King of The twilightsworns, ATTACK AND LET NOTHING STOP YOU!."Screamed Torin.YOMATO:0TORIN:6000"NoOoOoO...it cannot be i am beaten."shouted Yomato."I was told you were good but i have something to tell you... you are a worthless duelist you shouldn't be on this boat."torin toermented as he walked off into the distance... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 you need to break it up into paragraphs to make it easier to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doogle423 Posted January 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2009 Oki cant think of anymore it was all off the top of my head ill write more when i think of more lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 i found it helps to write it down on paper first. then you can cross out what you don't like and keep what you do. it lets you get organized more easily than writing it only online. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doogle423 Posted January 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 K thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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