L33t Jenkins Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 [spoiler=chap 1]Chapter 1: Mime in a box It was a cold January in the U.K. and Ben was making his way to the youth club. His brown hair sticked up all over the place and his back pack was sliding off his shoulder. He was wearing a blakc short sleeved top and some blue jeans. he had a blue and red duel disk strapped to his arm and his deck was tucked in his jeans pocket. He shortly arrived to a small building by the news agents down his road. he pushed open the door and entered a large room with other people his age."Hey Ben," said a young adult with long short green hair and a brown leather jacket. "Hey Gale," Ben said back waving his arm in the air at the young man.Ben then went to the small mini bar in the corner and picked up a can of Coke. He took a light sip and then leant agianst the wall. he look around the room and then his eyes drew towards a rounded boy at the other end of the room. The boy was pushing a boywho was about 5 years old and demanded the young boy for his cards. Ben put the can down on the table and walked towards the 2 boys. When he arrived the larger boy turned to Ben."What the hell do you want?" he asked rudley garing at Ben."I want you to leave that kid alone tuuby!" Ben quickly repliedThe boy then saw the cards in Ben's pocket and gave off a little smurk."I'll make a deal beat me in a duel and i'll leave this puny kid alone and if i win which of course i will i get your cards.""It's always the big headed that lose," Ben said confiently, "I accept your challnge."Both Ben and the boy went outside into a small field where they stood at either end. They then both placed there decks in there duel disks and started the del(Dule Speesch)Boy: 8000Ben: 8000Boy: I'll start by suing Mime Jr.'s effect which by paying 500 Life Points i can Special Summon it ote the field (ATK/300) and then play Bonsy in deffecne (DEF/300) and then end my turn.Boy: 7500Ben thought: I can read that turn like a book. He is plannig to use Bonsy and as a tribute fodder and seeing as Mime Jr. is in attack he thinks i'll go straight for it but i know i take care of his Bonsy he can use his Mime Jr. as a tribute fodder.Ben: My tun and I summon Shuppet in attack (ATK 1600) and then he will attack Bonsy.Boy: Perfect you fell right into my trap.What! Did you say you going for Bonsy!Ben: Yes.I'm not just your duelist who does a move without a second thought about it.Boy: Well do you end your turn?Ben: YeahBoy: Good cause now i play the spell Give and take. I discard a card from my hand and draw 1 from my Deck. Now i play Revie which alows me to summon a card from my Graveyard but it's Attack is halved and my Monster is the 1 i discarded Ditto (ATK/?) and of course it does not have any attack so it cant be halved. Now when Ditto is summoned it can transforom into a monster on the field and i choose Mime Jr. get ready to sse a morph (ATK/300) and now i play 2 mimics which by tirbuitng both my Mime Jrs. i can Summon 2 Mr Mimes (ATK 2400). Now 1 will Attack Shuppet while the other will Attack directly.I always come up with a back up plan.Ben: 4800Boy: I end my turn and now have your last with those cards.Ben: Right here it goes. (gives off a smile) I play my revie to bring back shuppet (ATK/800) and then tribute it to Special Summon Bantete (ATK/2800) then i play shadow ball which allows me to destroy 1 of your monsters that is weaker than 1 of mine. NOw 1 of your Mimes is going down and also you take damage equal to the difference in attack. Boy: 7100Ben: Now I summon Duskull (ATK/1400) now banttete destroy his other Mime and the Duskull direct attack.Boy:5300Boy: Hmmm. My puzzle is complete soon you will see my ture strength as this draw will be my last as you will face defeat. -----END OF CHAPTER------ [spoiler=chap 2] Chapter 2: Rise to the sky Murkrow Boy: 5300Ben: 4800 Boy: Okay here it goes i activate both of My Mr Mimes effect. By paying 500 Life Points each i can draw 1 card from my Deck.Boy:4300Boy: Know i summon Bonsy and then play Mimc to make it become Sudowoodo (ATK/ 2200) Next of i play double summon so know i can summon another monster so here it goes Happiny (ATK/100) now Sudowoodo attack Duskull.Ben:4000Boy: Konw I set 1 card and end my turn.Ben: Banteete is still out and he will attack Happiny.Boy: Hmm. I activate double team. Which creates 1 double token which is the same as Happiny which you have to attack instead.Boy:1600Ben: But still you take damage from the token destrction.Boy: well its now my turn and every turn Happiny is on the field it gets a happiness counter and next i play oval stone which i equip to happing which gives it 2 extra counters and know when i tribute happiny with 3 or more happiness counters and an oval stone i can summon Chansy (ATK/800) now i play helping hand which stopping Sudowoodo from attacking it attack power is given to chansy (ATK/3000) for tihs turn. Now Chansey destroy Batnteete whch Egg Bomb.Ben: 3800Ben: But know Banttete effect activates you take dmage equal to half the ATK of Chansey whin it destroyed Banttete Boy: 100Boy: When Chansey inflicts dmage it gains a happiness counter.Ben: Well know its my turn. And i play my new card Murkrow (ATK/1700) and he will finish off your chansey and you.Boy: Foll when Chansey is attacked it swithces to deence (DEF 2700)Ben: I know but when Murkrow attacks a monsters in Def which has higher DEF you take 500 points of damge.Boy: what. NOBoy: 0(Normal Speech)"Know will you leave the young kid alone," ben said as he streched out his hand to help the boy get up."No. I won't. because i know have completed my misson i can be taken back to storage," said the boy."What?" Ben aksed confused.The boy turned around showing a pannel of wires. He was a machine. The machine was suddenly teleported into an above helicopter where a man in a green suit whent up to Gale."What do you want?" Gale asked."I'm a member of Team Envoy and i challenge you to a duel.-----end of chapter---- [spoiler=chap3] Chapter 3; First hit first winDuring the duels at the youth club in the City of London a young teen was running down the street. He had Spiked Red Hair and an oragne t-stirt. he was being chased by a woman in the same green clothes of the Envoy Grunt Gale dueled. Alex was chases to an allway which was clsed at the toher end."Youre trapped now," said the Grunt, "give me the card.""Only if you beat me in a duel""Okay Alex. We shall have our duel."(duel speech)Alex:8000Grunt:8000Alex: Seeing as i challenged you i'll go first and i summon Chimchar (ATK 1400) and then use him to special summon Monferno (ATK 2300) and lay 1 card face-down and end my turn.Grunt: it's my turn and i play the ritual skull fossil which means by discarding a card that level is four i can bring Craindos (ATK/1700) and then play shield fossil and doing the same tihng i can bring Shieldon (ATK 800) and then play helping hand which now gives Cranidos a boost (ATK 2500) now attack MonfernoAlex: I reveal my face Down Mach Punch which when you attack 1 of my monsters and you have 2 monsters i can attack the other monster before your attack continues.Grunt: 6500Alex: and because shieldon not on the field the attack bonus is gone.Grunt: Dam it!Grunt: 5700Alex: but now Monferno can;'t attack in my next turnGrunt; i end my turnAlex: Lets go. I tribute Monferon to special summon Infernape (ATK 3200) and next off i summon vulpix (ATK 1800) and then play the spell card close combat which if i attack directly this turn you take an extra 500 dmaage for each direct attack. now attack the Grunt directly.Grunt: 0A ligth appaerars on the grunt and then she disapeared.(Normal Speech)"I better get on the train to meet up with that kid who may be able to help. What was his name now. Oh yeah Ben."-----end of chapter----- [spoiler=chapter 4] Chapter 4: Crecent of Mystery.Ben was walknig down the street when a Young Woman in a simmilar uniform to the Envoy Grunts but she had a customised green duel-disk."What do you want?" asked Ben."I'm Roza, Admin of Team Envoy and i am here to finish your dueling will." said the woman.Ben stepped back in shock. Roza was a close friend to Ben. The lost contact during a shop robberry where Roza was taking hostage and then thought dead. Ben saw her eyes. The were emoitonless. Ben had no choice he had to duel here. She wasn't Roza any more."Fine, I'll duel you," said Ben in a sadened voice.(Duel Speech)Roza: 8000Ben: 8000Roza: I'll start with double summon to Summon Unkown B (ATK/1000) and Unkown J (atk 1000) and then play 1 face down trap card.Ben (thought): Why is Roza being like this. Maybe if i beat her in a duel the shock will snap her out of this. Lets hope it works.Ben: I summon Gastly (ATK 1900) and then play shadow ball which will destroy 1 of your Unkowns and you take dmage equal to the difference then by Gastly will destroy your second Unkown.Roza: 6200.Roza: Now you have cuased your destruction i play my face-down trap Crecent Moon Summoning which can only be activated when you destroy 2 level 4 monsters in one turn. I can summon the creature of the Crecent Moon from my hand. Rise my almighty being Cresselia (ATK/ 2500) now destroy his pathetic Ghost and you take double the battle dmage when this card battles a monster with 1500 atk or more.Ben: 6800Roza: Then i play Cresselias second effect by remoivng 2 Psycich type Monsters from play you take 500 points of damge.Ben: 6300Roza: Your death will be a sweet one.----end of chapter---- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NDS Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 :) cool, don't suppose u need any1 to follow Gales story? *cough* me *cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 :) cool' date=' don't suppose u need any1 to follow Gales story? *cough* me *cough*[/quote'] yeah i'll give oyu some info later today Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NDS Posted January 24, 2009 Report Share Posted January 24, 2009 :) cool' date=' don't suppose u need any1 to follow Gales story? *cough* me *cough*[/quote'] yeah i'll give oyu some info later today actually, i'm not into birds/wind anymore tho, i don't suppose Gale can have a change of deck? I'm into lightning atm :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 :) cool' date=' don't suppose u need any1 to follow Gales story? *cough* me *cough*[/quote'] yeah i'll give oyu some info later today actually, i'm not into birds/wind anymore tho, i don't suppose Gale can have a change of deck? I'm into lightning atm :) Hmm. I suppose so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NDS Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 we just waiting for some more characters now? i wanna see the 2nd part of ur battle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 chhapter 2 posted (chapter 1 gale will begin when NDS is rdy) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 I like the mix of Pokemon and Yu-gi-Oh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NDS Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 nice i'll do team envoy guy later, i got stuff to do.[spoiler=kk chapta 1 Gale]Gale was watching the kids at the youth club. "hey Ben""Hey Gale"He watched Ben get a coke. He had his deck in his jean pocket. Gale had stopped playing yu-gi-oh long ago, only taking his deck out to give little kids tips or helping his younger brother. He watched Ben approach a tubby kid."Hey leave that kid alone tubby!"The rest of the conversation was lost in a sea of children talking and laughing.Then he saw Ben take his deck out.Gale wasn't worried. Ben was an extremly talented duelist, he wouldn't lose to some fat kid.Gale had his deck with him. But none of the kids wanted any pointers. They were avoiding him, something wasn't right.He saw Ben finish off the kid with his murkrow. But then the kid turned around and he had loads of wires in his back. Suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder. It was a guy in a green suit. "What do you want?""I'm a member of Team Envoy and i challenge you to a duel."Gale 8000Envoy Grunt* 8000 *From pokemon games, u usually fight grunts."dammit i gonna be out of practice....""All the easier for me!"Envoy Grunt draws."I summon Sandshrew in attack mode and activate graceful charity"Sandshrew ATK 1500Discards Ultimate Tyranno and Trojan Horse.Draws Monster Reincarnation Sandshrew and Geodude."I end my turn"Gale draws.Gale thinking: My main Soul of Birds deck is at home, i'm stuck with my 2000 volts deck."Ok i summon Pikachu"ATK 1500"And i equip it with thunderstone, and tribute my pikachu to special summon Raichu from my deck"Raichu ATK 2100"I set 1 face down and attack your sandshrew"Grunt 7400"I select my trojan horse to add to my hand thanks to Sandshrew effect (using DHH's Sandshrew :P)"end my turn"Grunt draws.Drew double summon."hehe, your going down!" "I activate monster reincarnation! i discard my geodude and add Ultimate Tyranno to my hand! i then activate double summon! I summon trojan horse and tribute it to summon Ultimate Tyranno!""oh...damn...""ATTACK HIS RAICHU!!!!""not so fast! i activate magic cylinder!""ARGH!!"Grunt 4400"I...end...my..turn"Gale drawsDrew change of heartGale thinking: This it, i win."I activate change of heart."Takes control of Ultimate Tyranno"I then attack you directly with tyranno and Raichu, you lose!""NOOOOOOOO I'VE FAILED!! FORGIVE ME VITERN!"A light flashes from the grunts wrist and he disappears.And all the while, Ben had been watching... [spoiler=chapta 2 Gale]Gale ran home, he had this gut feeling that something wasn't right.As he approched his house he opened the door and beheld a terrible sight.His little brother was dueling an Envoy Grunt.Kez 3000Grunt 5000"Gale! what should i do?"Gale knew that his brother could defeat the grunt, with a little thought."Think about it! What would you do if you were dueling me?"Kez's hand: Zigzagoon, Super potion, Linoone and Hyperbeam.Kez's face down: Sakuretsu armorKez'z face up monster: Lombre 1900 ATKGrunt's hand: SneaselGrunt's face-up monster: Weavile 2100"Ok i summon Zigzagoon! and tribute it to summon Linoone!" Linoone ATK 2000Kez had a glint in his eye. "I then activate hyperbeam!""no!"Grunt 2000"i activate super potion!"Linoone ATK 2500"LINOONE ATTACK HIS WEAVILE!""NOOOO!"Grunt 1600"your finished...lombre attack!"Grunt 0000"Vitern will have my head..."The grunt disappears in a flash."Kez that was brilliant!""y-y-you think so?""Yea! That was some good duelling."If only Gale knew that the Grunt's task wasn't to defeat Kez...End chapta [spoiler=chapta 3 gale]Gale was having a strange dream.He was in this meadow and he could see an envoy grunt attacking a Shinx."Hey leave it alone!""wha-?"the shinx stared at gale with its BIG yellow eyes. suddenly it flashed and turned into a card. Gale picked it up and stared at it. "not bad...""Hey you can't do that! I challange you to a duel!" Gale 8000Grunt 8000Gale draws.Hand: Shinx, Super potion, ragek,i lightning vortex, magic cylinder and Electabuzz"Ok i summon Shinx in attack mode and put one card face down! Your move!"Grunt draws."Ok i summon Poliwag! Poliwag ATK 1300"attack!""I activate shinxes efect!" discards super potion."fine i attack directly!""pfff...magic cylinder."Grunt 6700Gale draws"ok i activate rageki!""i then tribute my shinx and summon electabuzz!!" Gale was on a roll and losing his calm and collected nature.Electabuzz ATK 2400"ARRGHHH!!"Grunt 4300Grunt draws."I activate monster reborn and tribute poliwag to summon Wartortle!"Wartortle atk 2100"I then activate axe of despair! attack his electabuzz!!""..."Gale had regained control, he couldn't allow another mistake.Gale 7300Gale drawsPot of greed."I activate pot of greed!"Change of heart and Monster Reborn."yea...i activate change of heart and monster reborn!"Shinx atk 1200 wartortle atk 3100"i did exact numbers to rub it in hehe, attack!!!""NOOOOOOOOO..........project....MAP....successful..."Gale awoke clutching the Shinx card tightly in his hand.chapta end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 My chapter 3 now posted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NDS Posted January 25, 2009 Report Share Posted January 25, 2009 chapta 3 Gale done. for those wondering MAP stands for Mind Attack Protocol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted January 27, 2009 Report Share Posted January 27, 2009 interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted January 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2009 I dont konw where your plot is going now NDS could you pm me about what this MAP is fully about. Plus when is this version of kaiba coming in your chapters? My next chapter will be Alex meeting Ben and the revealing of the card that grunt was after Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NDS Posted January 29, 2009 Report Share Posted January 29, 2009 MAP basically can be used to crush a duelists dreams. If they lose in a MAP duel their spirits are crushed and no longer have the will to duel. The conditions in a MAP duel obviously are u lose, u lose ur cards. So MAP also takes your cards if you lose. Basically its a duelist assasination sort of speak.and i'll add the kaiba guy soon, i'm waiting for ur chapta 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L33t Jenkins Posted February 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 Can a mod close this as the other writer NDS seems to have lft YCM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zimiri of the Muse Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 no this is good don't u dare close this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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