Finally a real fighter

[Dryad]

I have Sword Club Member but compared to this card their is difference.

[malin]

Nice i like it your coming out with some good cards, and some good cards deserves a REP :)

[Dryad]

Soul Immortal, two words:

 

Holy Cat

 

I noticed the level, type, attribute and attack plus effect and they are so eerily similar except mine is a tad different but none the less yours is cool and I really like the art of that card. If you don't mind, can I borrow "The Chosen One" he would fit in perfectly with a fanfic with a low level monster deck I use in it.

 

Thanks malin for compliment and rep.

[omega shogun]

Hmmm... very nice. Is it based on the monk job class for final fantasy?

(10/10)

[Lilrow]

I liked it until I saw the "cannot be destroyed as a result of battle" bit. Maybe make it like Gyroid's effect.

[StevenBray]

Despite my thinking that the second effect should be written as "When this card deals damage to your opponent's Life Points, inflict direct damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Spell and Trap cards on the field x100." and maybe making the cannot be destroyed in battle effect only applicable while it is in Attack Position, it is a very good card and a nice effect idea for the card idea, 7.5/10 :)

[Kocrow17]

There is 1 small flaw in your card. It's an OTK on its own!!! When you inflit damage with this card, it inflicts another 100 for each Spell/Trap, thus activating its effect again! This creates an endless chain. You have to specify "Battle Damage" on the card.

 

Or, to avoid conflict:

"This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, increase the amount of damage this card inflicts by 100 for each Spell or Trap Card on the field."

[Dryad]

Thanks GK for pointing that loop out

 

Soul Immortal, the attack on that should only be raised by 0 to make it a 1000 in ATK, if any higher it defeats the purpose of having Heart Of Clear Water or Buster Rancher, only a card I let be above a 1000 is my Sword Club Member, but she still applies for Heart Of Clear Water

 

Thanks for ratings everyone and comments as well

 

I never played a monk but I do play a Mithra (Face 6, Hair A) Red Mage / Summoner

[Dryad]

I'm sorry, I just didn't catch on fast enough to the effect. So GK and SI thanks for pointing out that card error.

[Death12328]

Humble apologizes, sister needs her bed rest, though I can't blame her on the effect part, she sort of made a card with a dangerous effect without checking several times to make sure she had made a good card (its not bad but then its a endless cycle).