EliminateHRN Posted January 17, 2009 Report Share Posted January 17, 2009 Welcome, to my newest fan-fic. I wanted to make a fan-fic that was dark, but wasn't to dark. Anyway, I have nothing to say, so let's get on with the fan-fic. [align=center]Rated: PG-13For violence, mild swearing, and a little romance. You have been warned.[/align] [spoiler=Character's Profile]*Coming Soon* [spoiler=Episodes][spoiler=Prologue - The Shadow Winds]Everyone has a dark side in them, no matter if they are good or bad. It's caged inside your soul, waiting to break out of it's cage. Only the most experienced people can control and, even then, it is hard to control. Everyone goes through this nightmare atleast once in their life. If the darkness does break out of it's cage, it's like a straight toxic. Poisoning anything in it's path. If you can't control it and lock it back in it's cage, then it'll take over your mind and mess your life up. You will lose alot of love, family, and friends. But the darkness does have a weakness, it has a weakness to love. Love can easily overpower the darkness, but it depends on how the person feels. If the person likes it, they can absorb the love and grow even stronger, and if they want to leave their living nightmare, then the darkness will go back in it's cage. But it'll take a hell of a lot of time to get your life back to normal... ...This is what going to happen to Ike Turner. I know it's short, but I wanted something dark and mystery-like. Also, Ike Turner is the main character of the fan-fic. Well, I hope to have episode 1 up tomorrow sometime. See ya 'till then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted January 18, 2009 Report Share Posted January 18, 2009 A couple of spelling errors.Everyone goes through this nightmare atleast once in their life. atleast needs a space between 'at' and 'least' You will lose alot of love, family, and friends. perhaps lose the 'alot of', more of a suggestion then anything. But anyway, as you said it was short and doesn't reveal too much of what is going on. I'd like to see chapter one to know how the story is going to play out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2009 A couple of spelling errors.Everyone goes through this nightmare atleast once in their life. atleast needs a space between 'at' and 'least' You will lose alot of love' date=' family, and friends.[/i'] perhaps lose the 'alot of', more of a suggestion then anything. But anyway, as you said it was short and doesn't reveal too much of what is going on. I'd like to see chapter one to know how the story is going to play out. I knew I was going to have spelling mistakes. I'm not very good at Grammar. But I should get episode 1 up later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted January 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 21, 2009 Guys, I have to put this on Hiatus for a while. I'm busy with real life stuff and I hardly have no time to write the first chapter. But I will start writing it when I have free time. So, until then, this is put on hiatus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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