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Kyle Mizeko

Age: 14

Deck: The Force

Trump Card: Force Monarch - Zhulah

Signature Card: Force King - Razz

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Tanya Huverth

Age: 14

Deck: Angel's Love

Trump Card: Fallen Angel - Serenity

Signature Card: Angel of Love - Kaitlyn

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Joe Kimakio

Age: 34

Deck: None

Trump Card: none

Signature Card: none

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Villians:

Komo "Him" Kiniherfght

Age: ???

Deck: Demon Possesed

Trump Card: Demon General - Heret

Signature card: Gengis Khan - Demon Knight

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Shades

Age: Ages ranging from 10-40 years old.

Deck: Many, but consists mainly of DARK/LIGHT decks

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[spoiler=Introduction]

Once every 10,000 years a pharoah who can see the future is born. Pharoahs don't always have to live in Egypt, and they don't always have the right of passage to look into the future by means of their third eye. Pharoahs with this gift can only use it while their asleep or... daydreaming. This is the story of a young boy who possesses this gift and is excellent at the game of Duel Monsters. There is only one problem, he has to choose a path, The DarkForce or The ShiningLight, both who wish to use his powers to their own twisted desires. Will he choose one of these or choose a different path? I think you'll have to find out. IT"S TIME TO D-D-D-D-D-D-DUEL!!!!!!

 

[spoiler=Chapter 1]

Hello. My name is Kyle Mizeko and I am destined to become the greatest Duel Monsters champion ever. Or that's what came to me in a dream once. I was in the greatest tournament ever when I made it to the finals. Me and My opponent were tied 900 to 900 when it became my turn. Then I woke up.

 

Tuesday, September 32 3004, 12:30 PM

 

I was standing outside of my friend Tanya's apartment complex when I heard yelling from around the corner. I ran to see what was wrong when I found a nerd being jumped for his Dueling Deck. Okay, I might not have helped anyone in a fight but this guy was the owner of Kikimoro's Card Shop, so I ran over to help him out. As I arrived the two thugs had already taken the nerds cards and were laughing at him. That's were I intervened. I grabbed the first thugs arm and twisted it behind his back, while he was stuggling to free his arm I kicked him in the ribs and he fell like a sack of potatoes. The other thug ran at me and I stepped to the side and took the nerd's Dueling Deck from his pocket. I tossed the cards back to the nerd and he stood ready to fight. But it was already to late, as he stood the thug came chargina at me and I jumped up onto his shoulders. I grabbed his neck and then I heard a sickening cracking noise and the thug fell. I had won.

 

Tuesday, September 32 3004, 12:42 PM

I started walking away when the nerd called me over to him.

"Hey, thanks for saving me and my deck." he said. "It was no problem. But why were they after your deck?" I asked. The man merely smirked "They weren't after a deck, in this container are the only packs that contains all 40 'Force' cards." I was confused. "Force cards? What are they?" I asked. As the man explained that they Force cards were a set of monsters, spells, and trap cards that when put into a deck could actually come to life. Well, 1 monster, 1 spell, and 1 trap at a time really. But then I heard more yelling. "Oh my god, I forgot Tanya!!!" I yelled as I scrambled to my feet. The man looked at me solemnly as I was beginning to leave. "Here. I can tell you will need these seeing as how you're going to enter that there tournament." he said. "What do you..." as I looked around the man had dissapered. All that was left was the Force Container (The only container able to hold the Force Set) and a new Duel Disk w/ a note attached to it. As I picked it up it read:

Kyle Mizeko,

You are destined for greatness. But in order to reach it you must choose a path. Your choice will not be up to you, but up to your loved ones. Destiny isn't created it is followed and you must follow ONE of yours. Use this Duel Disk with The Force Set and you will start your journey. I now bid you farewell, enter the tournament in Neosha, and turn around.

"There you are Kyle!!" exclaimed Tanya as I turned around to face her. "I was worried sick. You do know that you're supposed to enter the Neosha Grand Prix today right?" she stated calmly. "What??? Who told you that?" I questioned expertly. She looked puzzled. "You silly!!! You told me right now. And I'm entering it to!!!" she was so happy it looked as if she would explode. But how did she know that? Did I read the note out loud? Wait! I looked around quicklly, but to my surprise, no note! Tanya picked up the Force Container and tossed it to me. She told me to put my Duel Disk on. It was beautiful half of it was as dark as the ocean waters and the other half as bright as the morning sun. Tanya's Duel Disk was painted Hot rod red with a little bit of burned out yellow. Then we headed out to sign-up for the tourney, a pair of red eyes following our every move.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 2]

 

Tuesday, 9/32/3004, 2:20 PM

As we arrived at the sign-up counter, I had the strangest feeling. It felt like I was being watched, by... red eyes? I spun around doing a quick 360 and surveying the environment around us, nothing. How peculiar! I never had that feeling before, and yet when I concentrated I could see myself. I realized that I was looking through the other person's third eye. The way I did with Tanya when she was gossiping with her friends. I did a 360 in my head when I was looking through my followers eyes when I saw someone sneaking up on Tanya, who had gone ahead of me and was registering for the tourney. As the man got closer so did I. I took a few steps so I was perfectly behind him, then I ran as hard as I could and kicked him in the back of his legs making him crumple to the floor. The man was bawling like a baby, when I heard Tanya call for me to come inside. As I got closer to her I asked if I was supposed to sign-up. She told me she signed me up when I was talking to myself again. As she was beginning to walk into the building, she tossed a card behind her back, I caught it and, of course, it was from my deck. The more I held it the more it called out to me, the more it..."AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!" I yelled. The more it burned! I slid it back into the Force Container and walked inside, just as the pair of glowing red eyes stepped out of the bushes and took form. A man with a fairly muscular build, a red polo shirt, khakis, and green shoes took form with glowing red eyes. He stepped up to the sign-in counter and wrote his name in the worst handwriting known to man: "Him".

 

[spoiler=Chapter 3]

 

Tuesday, 9/32/3004, 3:00 PM

 

"Tanya, I'm going to get a hotdog want one?" I asked "Sure. Oh, and extra mustard!" she replied not looking up from the duel that was taking place. As I stood up I heard someone scream. I spun around in time to see a creature, no more than 3 feet tall, walking down the stands. As I looked closer I could see the zipper of the costume, oh my god that scared me. I walked calmly up the stairs asking myself why I was even participating in this tourney, when I remembered what the note had said, I wasn't going to choose my destiny it was going to be decided for me. I stood at the counter for the hotdogs I ordered when a little girl tugged on my sleeve. I turned around and asked what the little girl needed. "My mommy. I can't find my mommy!" she said as she began to bawl. "Okay. We'll find your mommy. Here have a hotdog." I said as I handed her my snack. She ate it, which seemed to calm her down, some. She couldn't be more than 5 years old, so I picked her up and we began to walk in the direction of the tables. As we got to the tables the little girl looked as if she had all the time in the world to find her mom. "Now little girl. Whats your name?" I asked calmly "Martha-Jane Crombell" she said as soon as I had finished my sentence. "Okay now, when did you last see your mother?" I was breaking through! "When she was talking to the man at the sign-in counter." she replied thoughtfully "Okay. Good. Now do you remember what this man had on?" I asked. The little girl pointed behind me just as I used her third eye and saw a Magnum 44 being pulled out of a mans coat. The gun was being aimed at me and I spun around, throwing the chair with so much force that it knocked the man unconscious. I told the little girl to get down as another man came at me with a switch. Then I had the strangest feeling. I saw everyting happening in slowmotion, but when I moved I moved at a normal pace. The same word came through my mind over and over: Choose. The world was slower now, the man barely moving at all. Choose? Choose what? Then I remembered Martha-Jane and turned around, I saw a lady rushing past security guards coming for Martha and I realized she was her mother. I understood then. Choose either to save my life or the girl's. "I can do both" I said aloud. I turned and grabbed the switch out of the mans hands and pushed the chair Martha-Jane was in, with my foot, back to her mom. The world returned to normal, to soon. The man still swung his arm but hit nothing, I slammed him into a wall and he crumpled to the floor. 'BANG'! The first man had regained conciousness and had fired his gun. Right into my back. Right above my heart. I fell to the ground blood gushing from my newly found wound. The last thing I remember seeing was a man in a red polo shirt being tackled by... Tanya? Yes, but, she had a gun in her hand. I could still see the bullet residue. The gun had just been fired.

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Now that I see it proper, I can give a better evaluation of it.

 

Like I said, it's somewhat short & brief, but it's just the beginning still. Like it how the story is made out in the personal recount with time/date...and the last part with the red eyes...could it be the enemy?

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