Deity Mitsu Posted September 13, 2007 Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 This thread will be used to have your cards reviewed by CMA members as well as anyone else who wishes to review your cards on the forum,so you can update your cards and meet that 10/10 rating you've been looking for, or get tips on great card making!Cards that you wish to be reviewed by members in this thread should be sent to me via PM and I will post them in this post.Your cards will remain on this post for a maximum of 3 days,unless I find a good reason for your card review session to be extended(low amount of reviews,unhelpful reviews,etc.) Cards to be reviewed:Alordzynix: Invert_Remix: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted September 13, 2007 Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 Cool, can't wait for this to get going ^_^! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 This doesn't seem to be getting much attention.Maybe it wasn't a good idea?:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted September 13, 2007 Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 Well can you rate this card: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Deity Mitsu Posted September 13, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 They've both been added.Here are my reviews:Alordzynix's Freesed Hero:Name:Hero is used in the name twice.I would try to switch Freesed Hero to Freesed _____?Something other than Hero again anyways. Image:The image is great really. Level/Stats:A little overpowered.Looking at the fusion material monsters,I think that the ATK should be lowered by at least 300 and the DEF should maybe be 500-600 lower.I would also maybe switch its level to 5 if you were to use my advice. Effect:A bit overpowered with the whole 400 ATK boost for every Spell/Trap it destroys. The most I would add is 300 for an ATK increase per card(Unless the card had very low ATK).If you were going to use 400 as the boost,I think that you should add "until the end of your turn.".Some things need to be capitalized and the effect should be written like this:This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card is Summoned, destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. Increase the ATK of this card by 400 for every Spell or Trap card destroyed by this card's effect. My effect:This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. When this card is Summoned, destroy all Spell and Trap cards on the field. Increase the ATK of this card by 300 for every Spell or Trap card destroyed by this card's effect until the end of the turn this card's effect was activated. All together,I rate this card 7/10. Invert_Remix,your review will be posted shortly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted September 13, 2007 Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 Elemental Hero Freesed Hero:First off, change the name to something different, as freesed isn't a word, maybe Frozen Hero. The ATK stat is fine, but the DEF should be lower, around 1600. The effect is quite broken, maybe change it so it destroys all cards on the field, and gets 200 ATK for each one. Overall: 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 13, 2007 Report Share Posted September 13, 2007 What about my card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 14, 2007 Invert_Remix's Evil Hero Invert Wild Cyclone:Name:Cool. Image:Inverted images I don't find are all that creative(seeing as how you could just simply press a button on Paint and wala),but that wasn't really the big problem for me. Having the ATK right on the image of the card takes away the realistic-ness of it. Level/Stats:Shouldn't be an 8 Star monster.I would say 7 at the most,but 6 is your best bet.The ATK and DEF are realistic enough. Effect:Spell and Trap should be capitalized,but I don't see the effect being overpowered or underpowered at all.Try to add more originality if you really wanna wow some people. All together,I'll give it an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted September 14, 2007 Report Share Posted September 14, 2007 I will review Wild Cyclone if you post it's fusion material monsters (can that be a rule?). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Could you put this up for review while my membership is pendinig? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Alpha Encapsulate Cannon:Not much to say, it is very balanced and overall is a really cool card.9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Star Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 I would review it but I would give a biased opionion as I despise monarches. So I'll let Deity do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted September 16, 2007 Report Share Posted September 16, 2007 If I may, I'd like to put up another card: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 SGY's Demonic Speed Disruptor: Name: Pretty sweet. Image: Pretty cool.Looks kinda YGO-ish. Level/Stats: Accurate.I like the balance. Effect: Deck should always be capitalized. Don't use "insert",use "place". Overall rating is a 9/10. Invert,the card looks cool,but I think if you want it to be a part of the monarch set, make the effect more monarchy!:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 Disruptor is pretty broken with your opponent having to give up cards twice, I think it should either be more costly or less powerful. Nice idea though. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kocrow17 Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 If I may' date=' I'd like to put up another card: [img']http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/6286/extremespeedbykansaiboutz9.jpg[/img]I vote overpowered. It can be constantly summoned back if drawn and shuffled right back in via suicide. Running 3 would greatly hurt your opponent by too much. Recommended Change:"When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, shuffle this card card face-up in your opponent's deck. When you opponent add this card from his/her deck to his/her hand, Special Summon it to its owner's side of the field. Then, your opponent selects 1 card in his/her hand and adds it to your hand." Also, raise its ATK to 1600 or 1550 so you can't search for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted September 21, 2007 Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 I fixed it. What do you think now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deity Mitsu Posted September 21, 2007 Author Report Share Posted September 21, 2007 Pretty nice!I like it a lot now.The image looks kinda weird to me still(might just be me)but oh well.Its got a 9/10 in my books. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 I need some help with these, these and these cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God GAK Posted September 22, 2007 Report Share Posted September 22, 2007 I need some help with these, these and these cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 can i join??????????????????????????????????????????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Supreme Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 can i join??????????????????????????????????????????? Umm...This thread has not been posted on for a month please dont post anymore on this thread people Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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