Tantara Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 [/align][align=right]Hi everyone, these are my first cards! Please post any OCG errors that I missed (especially in the tuner...) I can take criticism, so don't hold back :) Oh, and I know that they're slightly overpowered, the fairies are supposed to be but any tips on how to fix the DARK one would help :) Since some of the writing is pretty small, here are some of the effects - Archlord Zeranos - 1 LIGHT Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Fairy-Type monstersWhile "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is on the field, by discarding a LIGHT Fairy-Type monster, destroy all monsters on your opponents side of the field. If "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is not on the field, then this effect is not applied. You can tribute a LIGHT Fairy-Type monster you control to Special Summon a LIGHT Fairy-Type monster with 2000 or less atk from your deck. Dark Zaloog - When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, select and activate one of these effects:* draw 1 card off the top of your deck and show it to your opponent, if it is a DARK monster send it to the Graveyard or remove it from play, if it is a Spell or Trap Card pay 1500 life points, if you do not, send the card to the Graveyard. * Your opponent randomly discards one card from their hand. Link to comment
Ayasato-chan Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 1. No Attachments 2. "When "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is on the field, by discarding a LIGHT Fairy-Type monster from your hand, you can destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field. You can tribute a LIGHT Fairy-Type monster you control to Special Summon a LIGHT Fairy-Type monster with 2000 or less ATK from your deck." "When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, select and activate one of the following effects:* Draw 1 card off the top of your deck and show it to your opponent, if it is a DARK monster send it to the Graveyard or remove it from play. If it is a Spell or Trap Card, pay 1500 life points, if you do not, send the card to the Graveyard. * Your opponent randomly discards one card from their hand." Not bad. 5/10 Link to comment
Tantara Posted January 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 How do I just paste the cards on? I couldn't figure out how to do it without attachments, Sorry :) Link to comment
Ayasato-chan Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 When you're done with your card, click on it. It'll say uploading. A link will appear under it. Copy and Paste the link to your thread and your card will appear. Link to comment
Bloodrun Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Right, well I am going to move this to written cards, and remember, no attachments. Link to comment
Tantara Posted January 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 ahhh thanksw8... what? written cards? should I just redo this thread? Link to comment
Subtlety Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 yeah, OCG's and less power Link to comment
Mysty Posted January 11, 2009 Report Share Posted January 11, 2009 Everything looks good except for one thing: There are only Dark-counterpart monsters for monsters that aren't already DARK attribute. Therefore, since Don Zaloog is a DARK monster, it theoretically cannot have a DARK-counterpart. Effect-wise your cards are pretty good. I'll rate your cards 7/10. Link to comment
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