Master of Shadows Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Well watcha' think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 What can i say, Luxio overpainted with deoxys paint? Make it visable! I can't rate it cause it's too blurry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Rioulu + Deoxys? It looks ugly, no offense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber-Valley™ Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Head is distorted 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Its ok 6.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Oh right, riolu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Shadows Posted December 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Ok i forgot to take of the "glasses". Thanks for the advice, i did the best that i could. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 i dont really like it... 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 -I suggest altering the face to make it look like a deoxys child, not that of a dog.-Remove the dark shading on the tentacle, it is distracting and unappealing.-The left side of the face has been flattened with deoxys' ear behind it, make it flow like a real organism, not something made out of wood.-Same goes for the right ear.-Make the black part in the middle the darkest red Deoxys' pallate shading.-The feet look a little contorted, try repositioning them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 1 word. 4 letters. U- G- L -Y. It doesn't even look like a Deoxys, more like a dog with tentacles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Please use pokemon of the same size. Shrunken deoxys sucks with slightly bigger Rilou Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thekris Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 i like it .hey can some 1 tell me how to play one of my card on the new posts im beging you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Shadows Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Okay! Thanks for the advice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 There are flaws, that can't be denied. First off borders have a major issue. Some places have them, others don't. Some areas they seem thick, some areas they seem blocky. I don't feel like listing every location, so I won't. I will however point out a few. On the tentacle you have deviation in the size. In some areas it is 3 pixels wide while others have only two. It's important to keep this consistent if the object has consistent thickness, which in this case it should. At the tip you didn't quite close it right, it looks like it was chopped up. Try ending it in a different way. In general the shape of it also needs some work, it isn't quite smooth, try more gradual changes in direction. Shading is also off on the tentacle. You have green borders and black borders in different areas for seemingly no reason. The green borders should go where the tentacle is most bright. You also change shade color drastically. You have similar issues with border shading all over also. The legs need work, the one on the right seems skinny for no reason and you layered borders next to each other. On the right hand you also have too many thick borders. As everyone else has been saying already, you do have too many dog features. The main issue of course is the face. You kept too much of Riolu. The black mask is a major problem, it would be best to make that look more like Deoxys's face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Shadows Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 I agree it's blurry, i made it in 5 mins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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