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Knight's Title: Book Two~ The Dark Side of His Heart. Finished redecorating {Updated 5/28/10}

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Sorry, my brain is just brewing up these thoughts.

 

Larxene wasn't killed, she was temporarily turned into a vegitable. Yes, so that just leaves Axel and Marluxia.

 

Every member will come in in this story, except Xion.

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Lol' date=' I will. But it's so long, I'm splitting it into two parts. I already know what the chapters will be

 

19: Truths- Some of Kellach's past

 

20: Fire and Flower- More of the Nobody fight

 

21: Lies- More of Kellach's past and early present before he was kiled.

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Impressive to say the least.

 

Still, with all these flashbacks you're just making it more likely for Kellach's return soon

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Sorry' date=' my brain is just brewing up these thoughts.

 

Larxene wasn't killed, she was temporarily turned into a vegitable. Yes, so that just leaves Axel and Marluxia.

 

Every member will come in in this story, except Xion.

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LOL! Vegetable Larxene!:lol:

 

YAY! Demyx and Xaldin! Xaldin is so cool! Plus that he's got FRICKIN AWZUM DREADLOCKS!

 

And Demyx is a real Comic Relief Character!

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Dang it! FF rocks...:(

 

And to answer ragnarok:

 

Kuja is able to fly, and he controls several silver spheres that hovers around him that he can turn into thunder, fire, ice, and such.

 

Golbez can also fly, and he is a master of telekinetics, which means he can make objects levitate that he uses to throw at his enemies. He can also use dark magics to create dark materia blasts, laser beams, and more.

 

And finally, ExDeath is the Lord of Nothingness, which allows him to control the Void to create dimentional tears in the sub-space continuum, create miniature black holes, and also allows him to teleport.

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Here we are! Chapter 19, the longest chapter in the story so far.

 

[spoiler= Chapter 19: Truths]

Chapter 19

 

Truths

 

Edward and Hermione sat close to each other, Edward with the book in his hand, Hermione beside him, looking over. He was unsure whether to open the book, or not to. He didn’t know what could be hidden in here. Imagine what this could do to Hermione, she loves him.....what if this changes her heart about him.

 

“What are you waiting for? Open it,” Hermione shoved Edward a bit. He still hesitated.

 

“What is it now?” she asked him, putting her hands on her hips. Edward sighed.

 

“Hermione, this could be big. Bigger than you could ever imagine. And who knows what’s inside?”

 

“That’s why I want you to open it,” Hermione said calmly, “no more secrets.......I want the truth.”

 

“What if you can’t handle the truth? No pun intended. This could change your mind about the one you love......” Edward said endearingly, trying not to shatter her spirit.

 

“But I’m not sure WHO I love anymore........Edward, he seems to get me........Neji just wants action, the stupid ninja. But god....that action was just...heaven. Oh.......and Kellach.........I just want him back in my arms.......that night, when we were on the roof. Looking into his eyes, I saw our future together......away from all this mess.......somewhere that’s green. He’s perfect for me yes I know..............but now...... I don’t know who would be sitting beside me on that porch......why do guys have to be so perfect here? This is so hard.... I don’t know if I can continue on like this.......I don’t know if I can-,”

 

“Hermione?”

 

“What?”she said, a bit dazed, out of her thought, “oh, yeah I’m fine. Please, just open the book.” She said with assurance. She was ready for whatever was in the book. Edward nodded at her, took a deep breath, and opened the book. The first cover looked quite interesting.

 

This journal belongs to Kellach Masons.

 

Intruders will be sorely punished.........

 

This quite disturbed the two. So it was Kellach’s private journal? This made them both want to read on, still Edward tensed.

 

“Good god, turn the page!” Hermione protested, “I want to know what he has been keeping from me........from his eternal lover,” Hermione quieted down, giving Edward a near desperate look. He couldn’t say no to those eyes, and he turned the page.

 

“Wow, this is pretty dated,” Edward said, reading the date on the page.

 

“Well, keep reading on......” Hermione thought, looking at the page.

 

August 8th, 2003.

 

Today I have begun it, the chance to prove myself and rid the world of evil. It has taken me 2 years to recruit people of my own beliefs and dreams. I have met two great and loyal teammates. One of them was Jake Long, a boy who has the uncanny ability to transform himself into a draconic creature. I just met him on a fun little trip in New York City with my master, Zendric.........

 

Kellach and a tall, aged man were walking down a crowded sidewalk. The people were going about their daily lives as if unknowing of what could happen to them. The two wizards did not wear their usual mage’s robes, which would give away their secrets indefinitely. Kellach was in blue jean shorts, a white tee shirt over an aeropostale blue sweater jacket. His flip flops smacked the gravel as he moved. He wore a pair of black sunglasses over on his forehead. He had changed his hair color as well. Instead of long blonde hair with a few warrior braids, he now had jet black hair that was very untidy. He held a twisty-Kone in his right hand. The old man next to him had a bit of a scowl on his face, but that is usually the way he looked. Originally this man had long flowing white hair, similar to Kellach’s but more wispy. But just as Kellach had done, he had changed his hair color to blonde, how it used to look 305 years ago. This man was over 500 years old, but you really could never tell. He now looked to be in about his early thirties, his wrinkles gone, his skin and tone less hollow and parched. Originally, this man would wear an intricate blue and black mage’s garb decorated with many magical symbols. But now he was in a black rented suit with matching pants. The two didn’t seem other worldly at all. The perfect disguises were up.

 

“Zendric, when are we getting there? I’m getting very impatient....ouch!” Kellach gasped as his master took his two fingers and wrapped them on the back of Kellach’s head.

 

“You insolent boy!” Zendric hissed to him, trying to be discrete with him, “can you just have some patience within that adolescent skull of yours?!” He snapped, as a boy walking his dog gave then a strange look.

 

“And what are you looking at?!” Zendric roared to the little boy, who began to cry and run off. Yes, his master was in a very foul mood.

 

“This place is so crowded....It’s a surprise we don’t drown out here, boy. I miss Curston already,” The man muttered to himself. Kellach wasn't paying attention. He was paying attention to a bird flying through the sky. It looked so free, unlike him. Trapped within his master’s clutches…..he knew his master was a kind man at heart….just not to him. The bird then flew into a telephone wire…..it was dead before it fell to the road. Kellach looked away as it was run over by a fast moving convertible.

 

“In and out….that’s life in a nutshell. Right when you get when you want more than anything….it’s violently ripped away from you.” Kellach thought looking up to the sky. The two then reached their destination. Kellach took a lick from his ice cream and looked at Zendric, confused.

 

“This is just a used electronics store…….” He started, still lost. He could hear loud noises coming from inside the shop.

 

“AIYA!!! JAKE, DON’T DROP THAT!!!! THAT’S AN ANCIENT CHINEESE RELIC!!!”

 

“Sorry gramps! I’ll be more careful!” A loud crash is heard, the sound makes the two wizards cringe.

 

“JAKE!!!”

 

“Aw man……” It was a teen boy. Kellach and Zendric then heard a flurry of Chinese drabble erupt from the shop.

 

“This is the place?” Kellach asked Zendric, who was massaging his temples.

 

“Unfortunately…….” He groaned.

 

“But they sound like a bunch of hooligans…..” Kellach replied, cringing again as another crash was heard from inside the shop.

 

“Relax Kellach, we won’t be here long……” Zendric finished as he walked inside the shop. Kellach followed close behind. When Zendric opened the glass door, a bell attached to it rung signaling that he entered. The scene before them stopped the two in his tracks. A short, old man in a blue robe was strangling the life out of a teen in a red jacket. He had spiked jet black hair with green highlights. His eyes signaled that he was of Asian descent. An African American girl and a parchment white boy were trying to rip the old man off of the Asian kid. But what really interested Kellach was a dog sitting on his two hind feet, reading a newspaper.

 

“The Mets lost last week’s game……ten to zero. Ah guh guh guh goo what a loss for the ol’ Foo dog.” The dog grimaced, turning a page of his newspaper.

 

“Uh…hi…….I’m Kellach. Nice to meet you…..” He said a bit awkwardly. Here he felt as if they would beat the living crap out of him just for giving eye contact. But the second the group took a look at Kellach and Zendric, they went back to their previous activities, as if the fight had never even happened.

 

“Um….hello?” Kellach asked the group, they ignored them.

 

“Let me handle this one Kell,” Zendric said with a rare smile. He then took a stick lying nearby and tested its strength. When he saw that it was sturdy enough, he smiled. He then smashed the bottom of his stick, and it transformed into a staff. A green and blue wave of pure power surged around the spot where he stood and rose several inches off the floor.

 

“ENOUGH!” Zendric roared, sending chills down the arguing group’s spine. Zendric then got a good look at the old man. He then gave a smile.

 

“Lao-Shi, it’s great to see you.” He said to the old man. He laughed back.

 

“Ah, Zendric. The years have been good to you!” Lao-Shi said happily, walking forward and hugging Zendric. By height, Zendric beat him by a good three feet. Zendric laughed along, enjoying the sight of his old comrade. The old man then piped up and faced the boy named Jake.

 

“Jake! Go with Trixie and Spud and make me and this old chap some tea,” he ordered, pointing a bony finger at an opening leading to a kitchen.

 

“Go with them Kellach,” Zendric said quickly, pushing him towards the three teens, “maybe you’ll make some new friends.” He said, and without a word he began to chat it up with the grandpa. Jake, Trixie, and Spud motioned Kellach to follow them into the kitchen. As he walked, Kellach pondered over the many objects and doodads on the shelves. He also saw that it was nearly spotless.

 

“Yal’ can thank us for that bit of nasty work,” Trixie said, a hand on her hip as she walked. She definitely had the New Yorker talk down. Kellach nodded and continued to walk.

 

“So what brings you to the shop?” Spud asked, “It’s boring here, and we usually don’t get that many customers,” he sighed, he was picking his nose. Kellach nearly retched.

 

“Hey don’t bug out, my nose just itches.” He muttered, going back to digging for gold.

 

“Uh-huh,” Kellach murmured absentmindedly, as he bumped into Jake.

 

“Hey, watch where you’re going!” He gasped out, backing away and bumping right against a podium that held a priceless Ming vase. It began to fall. Jake then surprised the crap out of Kellach by sprouting a spiked dragon tail and catching the vase before it fell. Kellach’s mouth gaped open wide like a dying goldfish.

 

“You…….you’re a dragon!” Kellach gasped out, backing away a few paces. Jake grinned, it was apparent that he took pride in his abnormality.

 

“That’s the Am-Drag dude!” he said confidently, flashing a thumbs-up. Kellach laughed.

 

“Thank god…I don’t have to wear this uncomfortable clothing anymore,” He said with a sigh. He snapped his fingers and pressed his palms to the ground. His old wardrobe transfigured into his usual magenta robes and long blonde hair. It was Jake’s turn to back away.

 

“You can do magic!” Jake and his friends sputtered out. He nodded with a smirk. Just like Jake, he too enjoyed his special talents. The four then entered the kitchen. As Trixie and Spud went to the shelves to grab the tea, Kellach pulled Jake along to the side. He had to show him his sides of life….and try to hook him in.

 

“So Jake is New York a nice place to live?” Kellach asked nonchalantly. He wanted to seem innocent and yet persuasive at the same time.

 

“It’s alright, hell of a lot of magic though……….it makes me very busy,” Jake sighed, and he walked forward to help his friends make the beverages. Kellach followed.

 

“What do you mean by busy?” He asked him, helping spud measure out water and placed it in an iron kettle. Jake scoffed.

 

“Being an almighty creature of myth can be tiring. I’m the protector of our magical worlds. Makes school a hassle in itself, or even the simplest of things. Whenever evil arises, I have to be there to stop it……and, there have been some……dark stories, I can’t even have a girlfriend,” Jake said suddenly, as if in his own world. Trixie then nudged Kellach.

 

“It’s best you don’t mention the term “girlfriend” around him, it’s a sensitive subject after…..well…..it’s a bit of a long story.” She sighed, putting the tea on the stove. Kellach shrugged.

 

“These friends seem to have been through quite a lot for their ages. They remind me of my friends………of my brother,” Kellach thought, looking out the kitchen window. Kellach was brought back to earth with the sound of a whistle. It was the tea, it was ready.

 

“That was fast,” Kellach said, a bit stumped about what just happened.

 

“Like I said, when you can breathe fire and fly, life is pretty easy,” Jake said with a grin.

 

“Finally, a smile in this group. You would think I was in a funeral home,” Kellach thought, chuckling to himself at his little joke. The four then came back, teacups in hand. They found Zendric and Gramps on the red sofa, chatting it up like Gossip Girls. A bowl of chex mix was half devoured and the two were laughing as if they had both made a funny. Kellach cleared his throat to announce that the beverages had arrived. Zendric smiled.

 

“Ah, good. Bring it over here.” He said outstretching a bony finger for the cup. Kellach obediently handed the two wise men their drink. He took a sip from his cup and smiled. It was then when Trixie gasped.

 

“Spud! We’re missing that concert we had tickets for! Shaniqa Chulabista” She spazzed out. She dragged Spud by the ear and ran out of the shop.

 

“Say wha? You gotta be playin’ me!” Jake fussed, attempting to follow them.

 

“Not you Jake!” Gramps barked, and it stopped Jake in his tracks. He motioned for him to sit next to him. Kellach sat next to his master.

 

“Fu Dong, go grab some paper and pen,” Gramps said to the dog. The dog sighed.

 

“Oh alright……but I don’t know where you keep your stuff in this whole junk castle,” the dog grimaced, walking out of the room on his fours. Grandpa then piped up.

 

“Zendric, I have trained this young mind with everything I know. He is highly skilled in martial arts and is also informed with ancient Chinese secrets. I believe his true calling is time.” Grandpa said, bowing slowly. Zendric put a hand on Kellach’s shoulder. Kellach nodded and fumbled in his robes for something.

 

“Hold out your hand for a little gift,” Kellach said, still fumbling in his robes. Jake closed his eyes.

 

“Yo, this better not be some kind of gay thing, a’ight?” Jake joked.

 

“Get your head out of the gutter,” Kellach muttered as he took a fist out of the robe, and dropped a very small object into Jake’s palm. He took a look at it. It was a silver dragon pin. It was curved to look like an S. Diamond dust was coming out of the draconic creature’s mouth.

 

“What is this?” Jake asked, looking at the pin curiously. Zendric looked right at Jake.

 

“It is a Silver Dragon pin. An artifact given only to the most powerful of teen warriors for justice. Jake, over the past two years, I have been watching you along with your grandfather. You are ready Jacob,” Zendric said with the air of a man who hath lived many a five century. Jake stared, eyes wide at the two wizards.

 

“Jake, you are ready to join me,” Kellach said, a smile on his face, “you said you wanted to protect the ones you love……..Rose, you want her safe right?” Kellach had him.

 

“Rose………” He muttered, looking at his hands, which were fluxing uncontrollably.

 

“Jake, you are ready. I know you will save mankind, along with this blonde boy. You were destined for great things. Going with them is the best you can do.” Gramps said to Jake confidently. Kellach then smiled.

 

“And it’s not even for forever! We take breaks, and family and friends will visit often. I know it’s hard to leave the ones you love,” Kellach said, thinking about what he left to become what he was now, “so, will you do it?” Kellach, Zendric, and Gramps looked at Jake for an answer. The answer came.

 

“If It will help make more people happy, then yes. Yes Kellach, I will join.” Said Jake, placing the pin in his pocket.” He said, laughing, “this is going to be the beginning of a new friendship, tru dat!” He said, he was enjoying this.

 

“Good, good. In exactly two weeks, we will return to bring you to the headquarters. That gives you time to prepare and make ends with things.” Zendric said, laughing as he got up. Kellach mimicked him.

 

“Alright Kell, I’ll be sooooooo ready when you return,” He flashed a wide smile.

 

“Exceptionally glad to hear that,” Zendric said, shaking hands with Gramps as Kellach did the same with Jake, “so the plans have been made, he will be part of the team in a fortnight,” he said closing the shake. He patted Kellach on the back and escorted him out of the shop.

 

“Good day Masters Long,” Zendric bowed, Kellach waved cheerfully.”

 

“Good day kind sages,” Grandpa said with a short bow, and the door closed. The two wizards walked down the New York sidewalk. Kellach was in high spirits.

 

“My dreams are getting so much closer……..”

 

…And since then, Jake has been very loyal to Knight’s Title. He has also been a loyal friend. He was right, that day was the beginning of a wonderful friendship. That day was also the amazing beginning of the greatest team of super hero teens the world has ever known. The dream was so close, I could taste it, I knew it. It’s the absolute truth.

 

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