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Knight's Title: Book Two~ The Dark Side of His Heart. Finished redecorating {Updated 5/28/10}

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Sorry bout the absense of the chapter guys' date=' there was a House Marathon yesterday and I got sidetracked.

I'll have the chapter up later.

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There was a house marathon?darn it i missed it!!

 

Well, not exactly.......... see, my parents bought me the 3rd season of House for Valentines day, and I had 1 and 2 already, but I didn't finnish all of 1 yet, so that's what I did all day yesterday. Oh and I went to a hockey game.

 

Almost done with the chapter.

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Ok, here's the next chapter! This Chapter starts at where the Organization left off. Let's see who The Blue Flash is!

 

[spoiler= Chapter 17: Rise of The Blue Flash]

Chapter 17

 

Rise of The Blue Flash

 

Larxene, Axel, and Marluxia were both panting against the seal’s barrier. They were cut, scarred, and burnt severely. They were all crumpled against each other, holding each other in pain. The Nobody, on the other side of the room didn’t have a scratch on him.

 

“Kid stuff,” The Nobody said with a laugh. His voice sounded cold, and a bit demonic. He came at them with his twin swords. Larxene then ran right in front of the two and defended the attack with her kunai knives. The contact made a large clanging sound. Sparks flew out from between them. Larxene took another one of her daggers and slashed at the Nobody with blinding speeds. He was prepared for this though and caught the kunai with his other sword. Larxene then disappeared and karate kicked Kellach in the back, sending him right for Axel.

 

“Don’t mess with us man!” Axel shouted as he took his disks and threw them at Kellach, like a Frisbee. Kellach leaped high up into the air, dodging the fiery disks.

 

“Axel, you idiot!” Larxene yelped as she narrowly dodged Axel’s spinning disks. Marluxia sighed in embarrassment and warped to the side of Kellach.

 

“We’ve been waiting for you,” Marluxia said to him, and he hacked at Kellach’s side. His scythe hit its mark, but the body just flashed into blue light.

 

“Damn, just a clone,” Marluxia groaned as he readied himself for another attack. Kellach then appeared in a flash of blue and slashed at all three of the Organization members at once.

 

“Argh!” the three Nobodies gasped out in pain. Larxene had been cut in the back, blood seeping from her black robe. Axel had been slashed at the chest, his frontal torso now scarlet red. Marluxia dodged the attack altogether, just barely missing his throat. Kellach was standing on the other side of them, an oddly shaped mark on his forehead. It was in the shape of a star, the same symbol the three had seen all over this castle. He had an electric-blue glow about him. He held both of his swords high above him.

 

“What is he up to?” Larxene asked, preparing to attack Kellach. The three were ready. Axel, Larxene, and Marluxia both disappeared and reappeared right beside him.

 

“Take this!” They shouted as the Kunai, Disks, and scythe hurtled towards Kellach. The air became hot, like fire. Then blue electricity flowed from Kellach’s blade and he sent it crashing to the ground, creating a blue shockwave. It was made from raw energy, and it ate up the tiles on the floor like they were made of rice paper. The three were slammed by the power and it sent them crashing into the barrier of the seal. The shockwave had paralyzed the three, and they couldn’t move.

 

“Do something!” Axel gasped out, struggling to move any part of his body. The other two followed suit. They could hear the clicking of Kellach’s boots as he walked closer to them, step by step. Larxene was slowly getting feeling in her fingers, but it was too slow. Kellach threw his swords in the air and traced symbols in the air with his fingertips. His two swords turned into six.

 

“Suffer!” Kellach cried out and the six swords plunged into Larxene, Axel, and Marluxia’s body. They both trembled, and fell to the ground with a thud. Kellach laughed with a cackle,

 

“This is just too damn easy!” He laughed, looking at the three bodies crumpled on the ground. He continued to laugh and stare at the three lifeless forms.

 

“NOW!” Marluxia shouted. Larxene ran at Kellach from behind and jammed a kunai right into his back.

 

“What?! A trick?” Kellach gasped in pain, attempting to slash at Larxene with his swords, but she was too fast for him. Axel leaped up in the air right above Kellach and cast a huge fire vortex around him. Marluxia then held his hand up in the air.

 

“Petal Dance!” He shouted, and a tornado of sakura petals whirled inside of the fiery cyclone. Larxene was running around the vortex, throwing her kunais into the inferno. They could hear Kellach’s mad screams of terror as they bombarded him with attack after attack on him.

 

“Ahhhh!!!!” They heard him wail in pain. The vortex then disappeared, revealing an unconscious Kellach, burnt on the ground, on his back. The three both cheered and slapped each other high-fives.

 

“Our objective wasn’t to kill him, so at least we solved that mishap,” Marluxia said, looking at Kellach’s body.

 

“Xemnas will be happy that we actually did our job right, it was hard anyways to come across,” Axel said, yawning a bit. Larxene chuckled.

 

“Looks like he underestimated us.” Larxene said with another laugh.

 

“No, you definitely underestimated me you twits,” said someone from across the room. Kellach was slowly getting up from the floor.

 

“No way!” Axel growled, “We toasted you alive! How can you be still alive, let alone walking?!” he gasped out, backing away, along with the other two. Kellach dusted himself off and laughed.

 

“You are going to have to try harder than fire, flowers, and fierce battle tactics to defeat an opponent of my caliber.” Kellach said, his twin swords flashing in his hands. Larxene, Axel, and Marluxia both stood their ground, weapons at the ready. Kellach closed his eyes and began to chant in an unknown language.

 

“Beroth, Demeque, Grox, tambien,” Kellach chanted furiously. His body began to glow a bright blue. He had his right hand above his head in the air raised palm up to the cavern’s ceiling. Blue orbs began to rise from the stone floor and hover in the air around him. The three Nobodies looked before them as the air around them became a little warmer.

 

“Lichedar, Onek, Morteah, Yyuone, “Kellach kept chanting, and the orbs began to shake a little, like they were in a blender. The other three just stood in a group, waiting for the golden opportunity to strike. Kellach then slowly brought his right hand down in a circular movement and raised his left hand palm up in the same pattern and speed.

 

“Hokata, Uputt, Firalga, jokohata,” Kellach continued to chant. The orbs were now being attracted towards him, melding into his skin. With each orb absorbed, his body flashed and cast a bright light over the cavern.

 

“What the hell is he doing?!” Axel yelled at the two beside him, because a loud ringing noise was beginning to arise. The sound was deafening and they covered their ears from the white noise. Kellach was glowing brightly now and all the orbs were gone. The noise got even louder.

 

“Feel the wrath of The Blue Flash!!” Kellach cried out, as his twin swords glowed bright blue, the silver color gone completely. He took his twin swords and interlocked them together at the hilt, creating a spear-like twin sword. He then let out a roar and slashed at the air around him with his new weapon. A bright blue beam erupted from where he slashed at and shot for Marluxia and the others.

 

“Look out!” Larxene shouted as the three warped away and reappeared a few feet from the blast.

 

“Oh no you don’t!” Kellach cackled and flash stepped at blinding speeds right for her. He took his blade and speared right into her shoulder. The attack gave off a blue spark of light. The symbol on Kellach’s head glowed and his smile turned into a gruesome sneer. Larxene gasped at the blow. Kellach then backed away and ran for Axel. Larxene went for Kellach, but she fell over onto her side. She attempted to bend her leg to get up, but instead, her arm bent. She then tried to bend her arm, hoping her leg would respond.

 

“Halphabah,” she sputtered out uncontrollably. Larxene began to panic, bending her index finger. Her torso twisted instead.

 

“What the hell is this?!” Larxene thought with growing hysteria. She tried to scream out and warn Axel and Marluxia of Kellach’s attack, but all she did was convulse slightly. She was rendered literally powerless. She attempted to raise her head up to look around, but all she did was kick to the side.

 

“Heh, I think you are starting to realize who you are dealing with,” Kellach said, looking to the powerless Larxene, “You see, I casted a special little spell a few minutes ago,” Kellach explained, flicking his hand to his side, “My sword has been enchanted from it, causing nerve disruption in whoever I stab with my weapon,” Kellach continued, walking towards her, “just try to move your foot, and your eyes will blink. Try moving your arm, and all you will do is sputter out gibberish. Try wiggling your nose, and you will cough. Try screaming for help........and your body will go into a seizure,” Kellach whispered into Larxene’s ear. Larxene wanted to scream. She wanted to punch him in the face. She attempted to make a fist with her hands, but her toes wiggled instead. She was done for.

 

“And now you can watch your friends die one....by.....one,” Said Kellach, patting Larxene’s head. She couldn’t do anything at all. All she could do was lie there and watch.

 

“And with one down, this makes the battle a hell of a lot easier,” Sneered Kellach, turning to Axel and Marluxia. The two looked and saw Larxene’s condition.

 

“What did you do to her?!” Axel shouted out, taking a step forward. Kellach laughed and held his spear forward.

 

“Nothing as bad as what I’m going to do to the two of you!” Kellach yelled as the space around him began to glow as he emanated a blue energy.

 

“One down!” Kellach cackled as he looked at his opponents, knowing that their pointless lives were about to end.

 

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