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Knight's Title: Book Two~ The Dark Side of His Heart. Finished redecorating {Updated 5/28/10}

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OK I finally finished! Here's the chapter you have all been waiting for!

 

[spoiler= Chapter 15: Blast From The Past!]

Chapter 15

 

Blast from the Past

 

Larxene, Marluxia, and Axel walked out of yet another portal. They had been at this for more than a week now. The three were exhausted.

 

“We’re never gonna find him. . . . . .” Larxene panted. Axel punched her him the shoulder.

 

“Stop being a wuss Larx, he’s gotta be here, this is the ONLY place we haven’t searched.”

 

“But where IS here?” Larxene asked the boys.

 

“We’re in Tragic Kingdom,” Marluxia mused, “Well, whatever’s left of it,” Said Marluxia as he flicked his bubblegum pink hair. The three were standing on a rocky valley. That was on a flat, cracked plateau. Above them was a large hill. On top of that hill was an old, decrepit castle. It was a tall five story fortress with four tall lookout towers at the tops. The large iron gates were open ajar.

 

“He’s in there,” Marluxia said with a tremor, “be prepared for a fight, this one isn’t coming easily,” Marluxia said quickly. The three then made the trek up the hill. It took them a good half hour because it was a steep hill. There was no life there, no trees, no grass, not even weeds choked this wasteland. The area was also swallowed in pure darkness. The light of the moon was the only light they had to follow by. The three walked in silence. They then came to the top of the mountain. Clear drops of water descended from the sky as soon as they stared upon the derelict castle. They gazed at the old castle where inside, their prize waited. There was only one obstacle left now. Before them was a deep chasm. Larxene gulped and looked over the deep gorge. She could not see the bottom of the abyss. She took out a kunai from her weapon pouch and dropped it down into the wide pit. The three listened for it to hit bottom. About twenty seconds later, they heard a small *plink*.

 

“Woah, that’s a deep ass trench. . . . . .” Marluxia said with a smirk. Axel looked forward.

 

“Let’s just hope the door works!” Axel said as he made a running jump for the gates. He however slipped and fell headfirst into the chasm.

 

“Axel, you idiot!” Growled Larxene, face palming her head.

 

“Do we have to go in after him?” Marluxia said with an annoyed sigh.

 

“We don’t have a choice now. . . . . .” Larxene said with a groan. Marluxia sighed again, spread out his arms and eagle dived down into the chasm. Larxene followed suit. Marluxia and the others were now dive-bombing right to the chasm’s floor. Marluxia then held his right hand out in front of him. A faded pink scythe materialized into his outstretched hand. He found Larxene and held onto her tight with his free hand as the two freefell. Axel was mere feet ahead of them, he would hit bottom first. Marluxia knew if that if nothing happened soon, they would all die. He then held out his palm.

 

“Petal Storm!” From out of his hand, a tornado of sakura petals flew down the chasm. The amount of cherry blossom petals created from this was amazing. Now they were falling through the chasm with beauty and style.

 

“What the hell did that do to help us?!” Larxene cried out, furious with her colleague. Marluxia then pointed below them, where the bottom was zooming in view at an alarming rate. The petals all fell faster than the three members did, making a cushiony bed of flower petals below to fall on. Then ground was seconds away.

 

“Brace yourselves!” Marluxia shouted over the roaring of wind velocity in his ears. The three then landed in a gargantuan pile of flower petals. It broke their fall from a bone crushing death.

 

“Quick thinking Marluxia,” Axel said with a thankful sigh. The three then looked around to get a view of their surroundings. They were now in some sort of prayer room. The windows were made of stained glass. There were majestic murals of snakes and dragons in breathtaking detail. On the floor, petals were scattered on every inch of stone. Marluxia waved his hand and a gust of wind removed the petals from existence. Doing this revealed a large star shaped symbol painted right on the stone floor.

 

“What is that?” Axle questioned. Larxene put her fingertips to the mark. She then knelt back up. There was a thin coat of blue paint on the ends of her fingers.

 

“The paint is fresh, this was done not too long ago,” Larxene said to the two, grimacing.

 

“It’s as if he planned all this out . . . . .” Axel said more to himself than the others. The symbol on the ground then glowed neon blue. A sense of evil filled the room.

 

“We gotta get out of here, it’s a trap!” Marluxia shouted. The three ran for it, trying to find a quick escape. They came to an emerald door with golden handles. Larxene tried to open the door, but it was sealed shut. She flicked her fingers forward, sending a bolt of lightning at the door, creating a small explosion. Nothing happened. The door was still there.

 

“Damnit!” Larxene screamed. Behind them, little black orbs were appearing out of thin air in the prayer room.

 

“Hurry!!” Larxene screamed. Axel then held out his hands and a large plume of fire erupted from his hands and smacked against the door, melting it down. The three then ran hell bent out of the room. They were now in a long spiraling stone stairwell. The three then ran up the stairs with amazing speed, they had to get some distance from those orbs. As they ran upward they saw old, burnt paintings hung on the wall. After about five minutes, they ceased running.

 

“This place has to be booby trapped!” Panted Larxene, her ponytails flopped downward, framing her face.

 

“It’s like the castle is trying to kill us,” Axel said, breathing heavily.

 

“Calm down you two, we must find Kellach’s nobody!” Said Marluxia, not seeming tired at all.

 

“Ugh!” Larxene groaned, “what if his nobody wasn’t pure enough to take human form? For all we know, he could just be dusk!” Larxene complained.

 

“No, the energy coming from this castle is much higher than I expected, this nobody is no dusk,” Marluxia said with a shudder.

 

“You are so full of crap it’s coming out of your mouth,” Larxene groaned again.

 

“Larx, shut up,” Axel groaned back.

 

“DON’T call me that!” Larxene yelled.

 

“You’re just being a total jabroni,” Axel called back.

 

“”You’re just being totally irrational!”

 

“SHTU UP YOU TWO!” Marluxia shouted, loosing his cool. He then gracefully regained his elegant composure. He grabbed the back of their hoods and pulled them apart.

 

“If you two banter with each other just one more time, I’m tossing you both down the stairs,” Marluxia said calmly. That shut the two up. Larxene then leaned up against a painting of two green eyes looking over a single black rose.

 

“God I hate this- CASTLE!!!!” Larxene screamed as she fell through the painting as if she were a ghost.

 

“Larxene!” The two boys gasped. As if on cue, the stairs began so slide inward with a gravelly shudder.

 

“Luxy, where are the stairs?” Axel yelled out, fear creeping in. Marluxia glared at him for using his pet name. Axel and Marluxia then began to grope at the walls from some support and claw themselves upwards, but no dice.

 

“Oh . . . . . . . crap,” Axel muttered. The two boys slid down the stairs like a funhouse ride. The two yelped and tried to skid their heels against the slippery stone, it wasn’t helping at all. They were picking up speed, heading to the bottom floor, back to square one. The orbs were going to be there to greet them. They had now evolved into one-eyed spiky dark blue balls. They were coming in masses upwards the stairs as Marluxia and Axel fell downward. Axel and Marluxia were about to slide right into the prayer room.

 

“Goodbye cruel world!” Axel cried out. Right in front of their eyes, a trapdoor opened up, and the two fell right in. The prayer room disappeared before them in an instant. The two were now traveling though a slippery tunnel filled with a small stream of water. They were sliding downward and bumping into each other. The water was making them travel faster through the chutes. Then the tunnel ended, dumping them into a pool of water. . . . . . and right onto Larxene. The three resurfaced from the depths. Larxene was couching and sputtering out water. Her lightning blonde hair was soaked along with her clothes.

 

“This place is like some twisted maze,” Larxene groaned, wringing out her hair. Axel was standing below the spout the two had fallen out of, and water was falling on his head.

 

“I hate this place with a fiery passion, no pun intended you two,” Fumed Axel, walking out of the water’s way. He shook his head to clear the dampness away. The three then took a look around to see where they were now. They were standing in a low ceiling room with blue stone for its walls, floor, and ceiling. There were no doors, windows, entrances, or exits, except for the chute they came in from. The spout about a foot above was leaking clear blue water. It was already up to their knees, and gaining.

 

“We’re going to drown in here if we don’t think of something fast,” Marluxia commanded to his allies. The three ran for all sides of the room, feeling the stones for an exit. The stones were sealed with tar; no water was escaping this room.

 

“There’s no way out!” Larxene cried out. Then as she said that, like turning the handle of a faucet, the water’s pressure increased. The spout was now spewing water like a pump. It was now up to their waists, the water was rising faster now. Axel and the others stood back to back. The water was reaching their necks!

 

“Swim upward!” Axel yelled. Above them, the only lights to the room short circuited, sending a shower of sparks and glass at them.

 

Larxene screamed as it hit her and the others. The water was almost filling 3/4ths of the room now. The three put their hands up to the ceiling.

 

“So we’re going to die here? Perfect,” Muttered Larxene. The water was now to their shoulders at the top of the room. Axel then got an idea. He took a deep breath and dove underwater. Axel swam for the bottom of the room. He noticed a large white mass on the ground. It was a drain plug! Above, Larxene and Marluxia were gasping their maybe last breaths. Axel then grabbed the large drain plug and pulled. Its suction to the ground was too strong. He needed the others to even have a chance of moving it. He quickly swam up to the others. There was a sliver of air left.

 

“Help, need help!” Axel managed to gasp out as he pointed below. Larxene and Marluxia followed Axel to the drain plug. Axel then motioned underwater for them to pull. The three grabbed the plug and yanked. No luck. They yanked harder. Still no budge. They were running out of air. The three then each took out their weapons and slashed at the drain plug. It did its work; the drain plug shattered and tore. Water began to flow down the gaping hole in the floor. The force was tremendous, creating a large whirlpool. The three were spun around in the pool of water, still holding their breath. Finally the force of the drain pulled them down into the drain. They were pushed through yet another tunnel, this time, full of water. They were pushed up, down, sideways, even a loop around they felt. The entire time they couldn’t breathe, their lungs ached. Finally, the tunnel ended and they were drifted onto solid ground, unharmed. They were standing in a grand altar room. The walls were made of stone and were engraved with carvings of snakes. It looked a little like the prayer room, except a lot more majestic and large. The floor even had that same star shape as the prayer room.

 

“NO!” Marluxia gasped. The symbol glowed, and a faded blue barrier rose around them, creating a circular barrier.

 

“Another trap!” Larxene gasped. The three ran to all the sides of the barrier, banging their fists against it. No way out. They then heard someone laugh with amusement. They turned around. Someone else was in this barrier now. He wore black boots made of dragon scales. His purple steam pressed robes were slightly worn now. Under that robe, the three could sense a great, malevolent power. The man had a sadistic sneer on his face, his black eyebrows arched up in interest. His violet eyes were volatile and malicious with glee. He had milk white hair with midnight highlights. A blue energy was crackling all around his body. And on his forehead burned the same mark the three had been seeing on the floor. This guy was ready for a fight. His traps had lead the three nobodies straight where he wanted them. Larxene held out her hands, and four kunais appeared between each finger, crackling with electricity. Axel held out his hands to each of his sides and his spiraling disks burst into his hands with a burst of flame. Marluxia had his hand up to the air, and his signature scythe flashed into his outstretched hand, ready to fight. The man gave a strong, booming laugh. He clasped both of his hands together. He then slowly separated them. A sword materialized into his hand. He had both hands on the sword. He then separated his hand from the other; he held a double-edged sword in each hand. The swords crackled with blue energy. He looked at his prey, ready to strike. Larxene, Axel, and Marluxia held their weapons and aimed for the man before them. At last, they had found him.

 

Kellach’s Nobody.

 

 

 

 

 

WOW! wonder what will happen next?

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First off, you forgot to double space to make it easier to read.

 

Ok, now the review: Well done of a chapter, absolutely perfect. After portal after portal of travel, the 3 of them end up in the worse place possible: the castle of death. Fortunately they're still alive. I'm anxious to see how they'll fare against Kellach's Nobody

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