Fen. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 WOW! The greatest battle is about to begin!!!!! Can't wait to see that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Ooohhhh, are u gonna love it!!! Here´s a taste of what´s gonna happen: "MHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAAHAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! AFTER ALL THESE YEARS, I WILL FINALLY HAVE MY REVENGE!!!!!!! YES, HEROIC LEGION, LOOK UPON MY TRUE SELF, AS YOU EMBRACE YOUR OWN DEMISE AND DESPAIR!!!!! I......AM........ ULTIMA DOOM!!!!!!!!! WITH THE STRENGHT OF VILGAX, THE SHARINGAN EYES OF ITACHI, THE WINGS OF THE ANGEL SEPHIROTH AND THE SWORD TALENT OF KISAME, NO ONE MAY STOP ME!!!!!!!!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Wow.......sounds a lot like Dartz......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 No no no no! It´s BLACK DOOM we´re talkin´ about here! He´s almost ten times as mean and ten times as powerful as Dartz......but I got to agree,yea. I kinda added that as an "Ultimate Evil Vs Good Faceoff", if you catch my meaning! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 He absorbed their powers....that's kind of the same........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Yea, but as I said: I kinda added that as an "Ultimate Evil Vs Good Faceoff". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 oh, ok then. I guess that's a little different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 [align=center][u][b]Chapter 16: The Real Battle Begins!!! Farewell, Protector of Men!![/b][/u] With a great explosion, the two teams barged into eachother!! Cloud was ferociously slashing at Sephiroth, as both of them jumped across the halls and towers, constantly attacking eachother. Ben was facing Vilgax, who tried to punch him. Ben slipped away, but tripped at a rock. Vilgax once again prepared to punch him, but as his fist closed up on him, Ben disappeared in a green flash, and Fourarms suddenly grabbed his fist! "WHAT?!" Vilgax was surprised, as Fourarms dragged him up and tossed him into a wall. He laughed. "Well, you see, before I jumped in here, Tails tinkered a bit with The Omnitrix, and Bang! I am able to use the Master Control again!" he replied. The "Master Control", was something that happened a long time ago, when Ben was toying with The Omnitrix, he accidentally activated something that allowed him to transform into any of the aliens with just a thought, and without time restrictions! It seemed as if Tails has been able to re-activate it, as Ben now transformed into Cannonbolt and smacked Vilgax through the wall he had landed in. Meanwhile, Naruto and Sasuke had a hard time fighting Itachi and Kisame, as they had to dodge both Itachi´s shuriken stars and the sweeps of Kisame´s sword. Suddenly, Kisame stretched his hand towards Sasuke, and yelled: "WATER STYLE: WATER SHARK JUTSU!!" A gigantic shark made out of water suddenly bursted from the floor and charged at Sasuke. He was quick to act though, as he dodged the shark and made hand signs, as he then put two of his fingers in front of his mouth. "FIRE STYLE! FIRE PHOENIX JUTSU!!" He blew between his fingers, and several fire birds formed and rushed at Kisame. His clothes were incinerated, but as he began to burn, he disappeared in a burst of water. "A Water Clone!!" Sasuke quickly looked behind him, only to find Itachi´s fist in his face! "UGH!" Next came Kisame, as he slashed him with his sword from above. He felt his energy disappear across his back. The sword had teared his Chakra! Sasuke fell to the floor. He was unable to move. Kisame charged at him, preparing to stab him. But suddenly, he was kicked in the side of his stomach! "UNNGH!" Kisame flew into a wall. Rock Lee had appeared from his side and kicked him! He landed next to Sasuke, and carried him up on his back. He knew that he was in no condition to fight. He ran away from Itachi and Kisame, but they were raging after them. "Shino! Distract them!" he yelled. Shino, who stood a bit further up, looked down at Itachi and Kisame. "Hmpf! Easy!" he scoffed, and stretched out his hands. "INSECT PLAGUE JUTSU: INSECT TYPHOON!!" Out of Shino´s arms erupted a gigantic swarm of insects, which he sended at Kisame and Itachi! They were swept away, like they were caught in a tidal wave, and disappeared in the "ocean" of bugs. A fly landed on Shino´s fingertip. He shrugged. "Hmpf! Pathetic!" Now it was Goku´s turn. He and Cell punched eachother, while disappearing and reappearing everywhere, even in front of the others fighting! Even with his Super Saiyan powers, Goku was still treated like a child by Cell, who pummeled him mercilessly. Suddenly, Goku disappeared, and hit Cell powerfully in the back! "UGH!" Cell was thrown to the ground, and Goku darted down after him, while charging a Kamehameha. "Kaa...Mee...HAA...MEE..." Cell stood up, and prepared himself to repell the attack. But as soon as Goku was in front of him and lunged his arms forward, he disappeared again! "HAAAA!!!!" The noise came from behind. Cell turned around, and saw a gigantic Kamehameha from up high! But he smirked. "A little late for that, Goku, hehehe!" He took his right arm to the left, and as the Kamehameha was about to hit him, he flinged it away with his right hand! The blast exploded in a part of the roof instead. "Dammit!" said Goku, and charged at Cell. In the meantime, Super Sonic and Super Shadow was surrounded by the Black Arms Elite Soliders. They were almost as strong as the hedgehogs Super Forms, as both of them had a few bruises. Both of them smirked. "Ready to go all out?" asked Sonic. "Hmpf, let´s do it!" replied Shadow, but he halted himself. "I have an idea! GOKU! Get over here!" "W-What?" said Goku, as he pummeled Cell into the floor. "Okay, I´m coming!" He warped himself between Shadow and Sonic. "What´s your plan, Shadow?" "You see, if the Chaos Emeralds can give us powers like these, and Goku can reach even Super Saiyan Level Four, if we once again shall transform them into Super Emeralds, maybe Goku can become even stronger!" "Hey, good idea!" replied Sonic. "Alright, let´s go!" Shadow and Sonic began to glow, as the Chaos Emeralds were charged with energy, and grew! They were now Super Emeralds, and they began to rotate around Sonic, Shadow and Goku. All of them were glowing with a white glow, that lighted up the entire castle, all the way into the atmosphere!! "HAAAAAAAHHHHH!!" "AAAAAAAAGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!! "KYYAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!! All of them started to glow white, and all the fighters stopped, and watched as they were glowing. Suddenly, the entire castle roof bursted, as a shockwave of pure energy exploded from the Super Emeralds center!! "WHAT?!!" yelled Black Doom. Then, the light faded, and from it emerged Sonic, Shadow and Goku. Sonic and Shadow´s fur was now coloured pure silver, exept for Shadow´s red hair stripes, and a silver aura emerged from their bodies. Goku, however, was completely changed. He had grown larger muscles, which was coloured slightly red, and he had also grown a silverish fur all over his upper waist. His hair had grown to his middle waist, and it was coloured silver. He still had his orange pants and blue shoes. but from the pants were a long, silverish tail grown! As he looked up, his eyes had a yellow colour. He smirked. The transformations were completed. [spoiler=Goku as Super Saiyan Lv 5][img]http://www.freewebs.com/dbhookups/DBAF_01.jpg[/img][/spoiler] "WHAT?! IMPOSSIBLE!!" shouted Black Doom in panic. "WHO ARE YOU?!" Shadow looked at Black Doom, and he disappeared. Next, he reappeared right in front of him! "I´m Shadow the Hedgehog!! The Ultimate Life-Form, born for the cause of destroying YOU!!!" Sonic appeared next to him. "And I´m Sonic! We are now Hyper Sonic and Hyper Shadow!!" Goku looked at Cell, who was as terrified as Black Doom. "And I´m Goku!" his voice was slightly darker. "And this...Is me as a Super Saiyan...LEVEL FIVE!!" "L-LEVEL FIVE?!!" stuttered Cell. "B-BUT THAT´S IMPOSSIBLE!!!" "Is it?" said Goku sarcastically. "Well, if it is, lets try it out!!" [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i00xU-or1ek]Background Music: The Three Surpreme[/url] (Original Name: Disturbed - Indestructible) He lunged his arms forward, and instantly created a fully-charged Kamehameha! But this one was about ten times bigger than a regular one, as it blasted Cell and sended him through the universe! Hyper Sonic and Hyper Shadow looked back and saw the Black Arms Elites that came closer. They smirked. "Elites, huh?" questioned Shadow. "Hehe, alright! Let´s test them out!!" chuckled Sonic, as they charged them. They blasted them with several small energy shots, that erupted in explosions upon impact with the ground. All Elites were destroyed. "H-Huh?!" Itachi and Kisame had just emerged from Shino´s attack, as they saw the three, silver-glowing figures ahead of them. They were scared. "W-What is that?!" gasped Kisame. Goku looked their way, and they were paralysed with fear. He then looked away, and aimed his hand at them. A small energy ball was sent at them, but as it touched them, it exploded violently. Itachi and Kisame fell to the ground, dead. "You will no longer spread death and destruction, Black Doom!" said Sonic, as he and Shadow teleported besides Goku. "We will stop you here and now!!" Black Doom didn´t know what to do. Suddenly, Sephiroth and Vilgax appeared in front of him, willing to sacrifice their own lives to protect him. He looked at them, then at the dead bodies of Itachi and Kisame. He cackled. "What´s so funny, Black Doom?!" asked Shadow. "Are you enjoying your last moments in life?!" "Hehehee...No." he replied. "Only that you did not realize one thing." He floated up, and suddenly, from his lower half erupted four tentacles! Two of the grabbed hold of Itachi and Kisame, and the other two pierced Sephiroth and Vilgax through their chests! "AAUUGHH! B-BUT WHY MASTER?!!" yelled Sephiroth, as he coughed up blood. "B-BLACK DOOOOMM!!" shouted Vilgax, before he died. "AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!" Black Doom was laughing insanely, as the tentacles suddenly absorbed the four of them!! All members of The Heroic Legion were terrified, as Black Doom began to mutate. (Black Doom´s Theme Begins) "I..." His left arm suddenly grew larger, and more muscular. "AM..." His eyes grew a little larger, and they changed into Sharingan Eyes. "FINALLY..." Out of his back bursted two, skeletal wings. One of them looked like a hollow bat-wing, while the other one looked like a crow wing that had losed a lot of feathers. "[size=large]REBORN!!!!!![/size]" A great, double-bladed sword emerged from his chest, and he grabbed it and pulled it out. He laughed hysterically: "MHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAAAHAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! AFTER ALL THESE YEARS, I WILL FINALLY HAVE MY REVENGE!!!!!!! YES, HEROIC LEGION, LOOK UPON MY TRUE SELF, AS YOU EMBRACE YOUR OWN DEMISE AND DESPAIR!!!!! I......AM........ ULTIMA DOOM!!!!!!!!! WITH THE STRENGHT OF VILGAX, THE SHARINGAN EYES OF ITACHI, THE WINGS OF THE ANGEL SEPHIROTH AND THE SWORD TALENT OF KISAME, NO ONE MAY STOP ME!!!!!!!!" He slashed at the three silver warriors, and a gigantic cloud of sharp energy needles was shaped. They were all hitted, as they lost power, and fell to the ground. Lucario rushed over to them, as they reverted to their original forms. "Chakra needles!" said Lucario "They´re draining them of their powers!" "BWAHAHAHAHA! WHAT´S THE MATTER, LUCARIO?! CAN´T YOU HELP THEM?! WELL THEN...SHARE THEIR FATE!!!!" Ultima Doom shouted, as he swung the sword a second time, and created another Chakra Needle cloud. "FIRE STYLE! DRAGON FIRE JUTSU!!" A large fire cone was created, as the Chakra Needles were incinerated. "WHAT?!!" Ultima Doom turned around. There was Sasuke, catching his breath. "YOU LITTLE...HUH?!" "RASENGAN!!" Naruto was suddenly behind him, with a fully charged Rasengan in his hand. But Ultima Doom foresaw it with his Sharingan eyes, and smacked him away with his left muscle arm. Naruto crashed into a pile of rocks, losing his consciousness. Next was Sasuke. Ultima Doom grabbed him and gave him a bone-splintering punch, as he flew into the Sierra´s side. All his bones were broken, and a small drop of blood flowed from his mouth. "AHAHAHAHAHAAA!!! WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO NOW THEN, LUCARIO????!!!! YOUR FRIENDS HAVE FALLEN, AND YOU ARE POWERLESS BEFORE ME!!!!!! YOU´D BE BETTER OFF JUST KNEELING OVER RIGHT NOW!!!! Lucario was angered, and devastated of what Ultima Doom had done. All of his friends, all of his noble companions...beaten....killed. He stood with his head down in the middle of all the bloodshed HE had caused. Cloud was the only one alive, and even HE was not enough to even make a scratch on Ultima Doom. "Cloud..." he said. "Tell Cid...to get the others out of here......" "Wha..." started Cloud, but Lucario interrupted. "I must now take responsibility for my actions....I will defeat him!" "B-But Lucario...." Cloud was once again interrupted. "NO! YOU MUST TAKE THE OTHERS AND GET OUT OF HERE!!! I.........I will face him.........alone.......as I should have done..........a long time ago....." He faced Ultima Doom, and shouted: "DOOM!!! IF YOU WANT TO FIGHT, FIGHT ME!!!!" "HEHEHEEE!! WHAT MAKES YOU THINK THAT YOU OF EVERY MISBEGOTTEN ABOMINATIONS OF YOUR SO-CALLED "HEROIC" LEGION ARE GOOD ENOUGH TO FACE MEE?!!" "BECAUSE....BECAUSE I´VE REALISED THE ERRORS OF MY WAYS!! AND I WILL REPENT FOR THEM!!!! I WILL DEFEAT YOU, ULTIMA.....DOOOOOOMMM!!! HHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!" (Lucario´s Theme Begins) Suddenly, Lucario´s body was engulfed in blue Aura Flames, and he crossed his arms. A great, blue aura sphere formed itself around him, acting as a shield. Ultima Doom tried to attack it, but his sword melted as soon as the blade touched it. "WHAAAAT?!!!! WHAT IS THIS........FOR A TRICK????!!!!!!!!!!!" "G-Goku.......Cloud...........N-Naruto........Sasuke...........S-Sonic........Shadow..........Bulma............T-T-Tails................................F-Forgive me..............FAREWELL!!!!!!!!" "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" "HHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" The aura suddenly expanded in a huge blast, which grew and grew rapidly. Ultima Doom was caught in it, and as the blast engulfed him, his body slowly was dissolved into tiny pieces of materia. Everything in the blast was destroyed, as it continued to expand, bigger and bigger, until it disappeared. A huge crater, so huge that it could be seen from space, was the only thing left. In the air was Lucario, floating, as a beam of light shined from the skies upon him. He smiled. [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_vUVI47QX8g&feature=related]Sad Ending Theme: Farewell, Everyone...[/url] (Original Name: The Promised Land) "I-It´s..............warm.........." "Lucario? Lucario! It´s me......" said a voice from the light. He was dressed in a blue robe and hat. "Sir........................Aaron.........................................." "You don´t have to hold on. Let it go." "Almost.....................................one............more............thing..........." He closed his eyes, and smiled as big as he could. "M-My................................F-Friends........................................fare.......................well......................................." Then, his body turned into millions of small silver spheres, as he dispersed into the sunlight..................... THE END......[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 ............................(dies from excitement and from cheering so loud)Even though I am sitting down, I am giving you a standing ovation.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 I would like to thank everyone who helped me through the making of this wonderful piece of art(namingly HyuugaKing), and a Damn good fanfic! It has been a long, long journey for the Heroic Legion, but at last, evil has been cast down into the dark oblivion it came from!!! Here is a short epilouge: In the middle of an abandoned graveyard stood the remaining members of the Heroic Legion. They were dressed in black robes and all of them cried. A stone ornament in the shape of a pokéball was in front of them. Goku stepped forward and hanged the Aura Enhancing Sapphire around the ornament, and said: "We shall never forget Lucario, our beloved leader an guider. He was our pillar of strenght in times of crisis and our beam of light in times of darkness. He...made the ultimate sacrifice...that none of us can repay. He was...indeed...a great leader...but also...a great friend." "Farewell, Lucario!" said the others. Tails and Ben bursted into tears and held around eachother, Cloud swore for himself, and Naruto and Sasuke was chanting an ancient Ninja Burial Song.After the ceremony was done, the Heroic Legion dispersed and went in different directions. Maybe their paths would cross again, maybe not.... Only faith would tell... 10 years after the victory over the Evil Union, the crater had been filled with dirt and was now a quiet farming spot, where the farmers lived in peace and prosperity along with the rest of the world. But, beneath the dirt, there was a small jet-blac and crimson shard buried.... "Mhmhmhmhmhmhmhmhmm......Heheheheheheheee........HEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAA............ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Wow, so Lucario, Sonic, Shadow, AND Goku are dead? wow.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Wow' date=' so Lucario, Sonic, Shadow, AND Goku are dead? wow..........[/quote'] Eh, no no no no no! You completely misunderstood! Sonic and Shadow are alive and well! Goku, well, he........when I post the sequel, you may read about what has happened to him. But, yes, Lucario is stone dead, not coming back. Or, is heee.......? btw, you think I should post the sequel? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 I'd wait a few days to do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Ok.... its just that I wanted to post it sooooo badly!! :( :( :( :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 .........well, if u want to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 YAY! :D :D :D I already have the prolouge and chapter 1 ready to go, but I think I can add chapter 2 too! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Sweet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Added Fan Fic!!! It´s called "The Neo-Legion: Rebirth of Evil!" Plz read it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Btw, HyuugaKing... Since this fanfic is done, I finally get to ask you: Which chapter did you like the most? LAST UPDATE! Added a Sad Ending Theme for poor, poor Lucario...... :( :( :( :( :( Plz listen to it, read the last part of chapter 16, and see if you can hold yourself from crying(I couldn´t "sniff") Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 [align=center]Sad Ending Theme: Farewell' date=' Everyone...[/url'](Original Name: The Promised Land) "I-It´s..............warm.........." "Lucario? Lucario! It´s me......" said a voice from the light. He was dressed in a blue robe and hat. "Sir........................Aaron.........................................." "You don´t have to hold on. Let it go." "Almost.....................................one............more............thing..........." He closed his eyes, and smiled as big as he could. "M-My................................F-Friends........................................fare.......................well......................................." Then, his body turned into millions of small silver spheres, as he dispersed into the sunlight..................... THE END......[/align] SOOOOO...........SAAAAAAAADDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!! Don´t you agree, HyuugaKing?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Btw' date=' HyuugaKing... Since this fanfic is done, I finally get to ask you: Which chapter did you like the most?[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Which chapter did u like??????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted January 5, 2009 Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 Currenty reading: Prologue Kisame and Itachi were portrayed horribly. They are fearless, and Itachi could have easily won had with Mangekyo Sharingan. I will continue reading and post when I think something needs to be said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2009 Roxas, I´m not saying this to be rude, but this is a fan fic, so you can write almost anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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