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  1. 1. How ist it so far?

    • Good, continue it.
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    • Ehh...not that well done. Maybe go back to the drawing board to try something a little different next time.
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I think part of what makes this fanfic great is the unique format, it's something that hasn't been done before on this site (from what I know anyway). So kudos to Fuzzie for doing something unique and fun :). But on a less happy-go-lucky note, I think at this point there really isn't too much of a plot yet. We are all kinda stuck in the get to know everyone part of the story and nothing else really happened. In your defense, it is only 10 chapters in and each one takes awhile. I'm just saying nothing really happened yet... (Hopefully I'm not bashing your work too much Fuzzball, you know I like you :)).

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I think part of what makes this fanfic great is the unique format' date=' it's something that hasn't been done before on this site (from what I know anyway). So kudos to Fuzzie for doing something unique and fun :). But on a less happy-go-lucky note, I think at this point there really isn't too much of a plot yet. We are all kinda stuck in the get to know everyone part of the story and nothing else really happened. In your defense, it is only 10 chapters in and each one takes awhile. I'm just saying nothing really happened yet... (Hopefully I'm not bashing your work too much Fuzzball, you know I like you :)).

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But at the same time, not every character has entered the manga yet. In every story there's always that generic introduction episode or chapter. That's all Fuzzie has written yet. On the other hand, i think a villian needs to be introduced within the next two chapters.

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1: sry for not posting

2: weather report, my drawings do NOT look like MS paint drawings :(

3: even though he rudely said it, like fenrirs herald said, he hit some points.

4: new chap. is cool although u really should start a plot twist or something by now XD

5: trying to think of something else to say...

6: this fanfic needs more of daliege! XD

7: thx

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I can be a villian if you need one and you want one ;) I can start using my Triky Crabs first so I can "test" the abilities of everyone else.

(I don't really know what plans does Fuzzie have for my character yet,I guess its hard to make plans with a character that hasn't introduced his Deck yet..) ^-^"

 

you don't have to introduce all characters in the manga right away :) keep some surprises for later, that way you can sort of start introducing the main plot of the season without worrying too much about the rest of us ;) surprises are good. makes little twists in a comic and reduces the ability of the reader to completely predict things (not that I could predict what's going to happen next, its been so dammit hard for me in the past ) xD

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Sorry to bother you' date=' NickLD, but I think it's time you started drawing Mike, Leo and Rea. ;)

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lolol XD

this isnt fair! everytime i draw the characters fuzz adds 3 more! XD XD XD

lol, im trying to update my space and spawn decks XD

i dont think im gonna draw them anytime soon. i dont like drawing manga XD

i like drawing stuff like this. if u know who green lantern is and u hav read the new series then ull know exactly what i drew ;)

 

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Sorry to bother you' date=' NickLD, but I think it's time you started drawing Mike, Leo and Rea. ;)

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lolol XD

this isnt fair! everytime i draw the characters fuzz adds 3 more! XD XD XD

lol, im trying to update my space and spawn decks XD

i dont think im gonna draw them anytime soon. i dont like drawing manga XD

i like drawing stuff like this. if u know who green lantern is and u hav read the new series then ull know exactly what i drew ;)

 

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3 more? my character has been in the list since the fan-fic started :( I'll be new in the manga but its been long since they introduced me already :(:(:(:(:(

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