ObsoleteAcc Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 well they are supposed to be both the background and her wings so great ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 Yeah...I would suggest not doing that in the future... In my opinion, it looks kind of plain, and 2 dimensional...but that's just one person's opnion. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted July 23, 2009 Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 guys' date=' check this out! i finished a pic for mirage![spoiler= Fire Fairy'] waddya think? Meh, seen better. But that's just how I am.It looks weird. And what did .Mirage. want? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2009 I think it is supposed to have that strange look to it, as it is a fairy. ;) Nick, I think I finally figured out why the wings are bothering me-they don't look attatched. When I was younger, I would draw wings that just looked like it was laying on top of whatever was in the picture. I think making the wings narrower coming towards the object (in this case, a fairy) will help a lot. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 well, there not meant to be like angel wings, they are supposed to look like she made them out of fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 guys' date=' check this out! i finished a pic for mirage![spoiler= Fire Fairy'] waddya think?hhmmm.....needs cleavage XD I jk.......mostly I like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 That was unexpected...I didn't expect a 13-year old guy to ask for more cleavage! :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 i suck at drawing cleavage (for obvious reasons ;) lol)but im getting better :D xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I don't worry about it, because I don't draw things that can be identified as male or female. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 How hard is it to move clothes down, and add more skin color? and a line.......PERVS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 how am i a perv? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted July 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 ...or me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 Ok nick I'm just gonna tell you how you could improve your next drawingBecause I know you know it's good so I'm gonna to try and help you make it better1. I'm not gonna lie it looks like a manTo help with these problems you need to -make the body more curvy and slim, rather then bulky and broad sholderish -I know you know about the cleavage, but yes they need to be bigger( looking a little flat) -last but not least the face, it needs to have more girly features, eyelashes, rounder cheeks, and usually it helps if some hair is in the faceAlso I have an idea for the wings( you don't have to use) you could outline it on the top part of the wing, then when it flares out leave it unlined(understand?) Ok well I hope this helps some Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 I don't do shading with PC. I do shading with Pencil. The main reason why I don't make cards with my drawings =/ I don't like shading.And that's why.Things like Nick tried are better Pencil only. Unless you can't draw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 That was unexpected...I didn't expect a 13-year old guy to ask for more cleavage! :shock: don't judge me for being 13' date=' My Pre AP teachers say I have a higher order thinking sssoooo cleavage FTW!![hr']i suck at drawing cleavage (for obvious reasons ;) lol)but im getting better :D xDu have put a horrid image in my headHow hard is it to move clothes down' date=' and add more skin color? and a line.......PERVS![/quote'] Fo sho, I am the Teenage Jiraiya roflmao Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 ok, i really dont think it looks like a man >_>and i made the wings like that on purpose, if i change it to the way u said nikki, it would be to much like all the others i drew....and only on manga chicks are the boobs uber-huge like ur thinking xP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 ok' date=' i really dont think it looks like a man >_>and i made the wings like that on purpose, if i change it to the way u said nikki, it would be to much like all the others i drew....and only on manga chicks are the [b']boobs uber-huge[/b] like ur thinking xP all I payed attention too XD when making women u must curve!! Curve is the key!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 i did. my girl doesnt look like a block does she? didnt think so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nikkiboy029 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 ok' date=' i really dont think it looks like a man >_>and i made the wings like that on purpose, if i change it to the way u said nikki, it would be to much like all the others i drew....and only on manga chicks are the boobs uber-huge like ur thinking xP[/quote'] Ok maybe I didn't exlain it very well it's not that it looks like a man( because of obvious reasons) it's when you make the chest area you make it to much like how a guys chest, morelike rib cage looks instead of how a girls is (is this making any sense?)I'm not saying the drawing is bad, it's really good just like all drawings you drawBut I'm trying to help you improve on your drawing skillsAnd the wing thing was just an ideaAnd the boobs(ok I will admit) that are in mangas are huge, ones on cards are bigger than what you did on this drawing and I would suggest a slight growth in them(I hope this isn't making you hate me :() Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 i did. my girl doesnt look like a block does she? didnt think so...but she has no butt, imperfect!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 ok' date=' i really dont think it looks like a man >_>and i made the wings like that on purpose, if i change it to the way u said nikki, it would be to much like all the others i drew....and only on manga chicks are the boobs uber-huge like ur thinking xP[/quote'] Ok maybe I didn't exlain it very well it's not that it looks like a man( because of obvious reasons) it's when you make the chest area you make it to much like how a guys chest, morelike rib cage looks instead of how a girls is (is this making any sense?)I'm not saying the drawing is bad, it's really good just like all drawings you drawBut I'm trying to help you improve on your drawing skillsAnd the wing thing was just an ideaAnd the boobs(ok I will admit) that are in mangas are huge, ones on cards are bigger than what you did on this drawing and I would suggest a slight growth in them(I hope this isn't making you hate me :()to late, i hate you.jk xDi must admit i dont like criticism xDbut i need it.im practicing a face right now, ill post it when im done...remember, just practice xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 But Nick said he's gay, so he shouldn't give a sheet about how he draws girls lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 But Nick said he's gay' date=' so he shouldn't give a s*** about how he draws girls lol[/quote'] i wanna become a comic book artist, so ill have to learn eventually xDhows this?http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-140466.htmli think it came out pretty well for my first time trying a close up female head :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 One word, excellent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ObsoleteAcc Posted July 24, 2009 Report Share Posted July 24, 2009 thx! :D EDIT: OMG, 3 posts away from 5 stars!!! :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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