Prada Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 I started over again from scratch with the same render. Again, neither are finished and need work, but so far, which is better? Any suggestions would help, as well. New, almost finished one. V1 V2 Old one, which sucks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 2nd 1 is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 2nd 1 is better =/ Buzz off. First off, your a major beginner, and unless you're JG or a beginner like that, GTFO. Second, you gave no suggestions. Anyone with experience want to help? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 Well i still like the second 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 Well i still like the second 1 That's fine. NOW STOP SPAMMING BEFORE I REPORT YOU....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 1st more is spelled like this second look pretty cool I really think the 1st one is too boring Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 1st more is spelled like this second look pretty cool I really think the 1st one is too boring Fail post. Do you not read? I spelled more like that because I felt like it. Second, did you read my first post and the post after Conker's first post? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 1st more is spelled like this second look pretty cool I really think the 1st one is too boring Fail post. Do you not read? I spelled more like that because I felt like it. Second' date=' did you read my first post and the post after Conker's first post?[/quote'] I do not follow your typing in circles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 1st more is spelled like this second look pretty cool I really think the 1st one is too boring Fail post. Do you not read? I spelled more like that because I felt like it. Second' date=' did you read my first post and the post after Conker's first post?[/quote'] I do not follow your typing in circles I don't follow your bad grammar. NOW STOP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 I started over again from scratch with the same render. Again' date=' neither are finished and need work, but so far, which is better? Any suggestions would help, as well. [img']http://i497.photobucket.com/albums/rr332/DenreiHeru/Competitioncopy.png[/img] The first could use darker colors. The blending on it is better though. Maybe add a few blending c4ds, then blurring around the focal ;) The second still has that blue >.> Maybe add a c4d over it, blending in with the BG, but still making the blue obscure o.O The second also needs more focal attention and blending added, and I'm sure Altair or somebody can give you some nice tips to add on to mine ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 I started over again from scratch with the same render. Again' date=' neither are finished and need work, but so far, which is better? Any suggestions would help, as well. [img']http://i497.photobucket.com/albums/rr332/DenreiHeru/Competitioncopy.png[/img] The first could use darker colors. The blending on it is better though. Maybe add a few blending c4ds, then blurring around the focal ;) The second still has that blue >.> Maybe add a c4d over it, blending in with the BG, but still making the blue obscure o.O The second also needs more focal attention and blending added, and I'm sure Altair or somebody can give you some nice tips to add on to mine ;) Mhm. I actually didn't edit the original. I might edit it. Or I could just stick with the newer one. I like it a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 YEaH, I like it better too. It can have ALOT more done to it. Another tip is to blend a little more ;) See what teh outcome is ^_^ even if it isn't finished Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 YEaH' date=' I like it better too. It can have ALOT more done to it. Another tip is to blend a little more ;) See what teh outcome is ^_^ even if it isn't finished[/quote'] Mhm. I agree. It has better flow than the first. Partially why I like it more. Plus, since I used a space stock, it gives me a feeling of The Skull Kid playing God. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Doesn't blend, you'll achieve much better if you take another direction =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Doesn't blend' date=' [b']you'll achieve much better if you take another direction[/b] =P Explain. XD BTW, the first doesn't even have a bit of blending? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superbull Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 I like the lighting effect of the first one but the second one goes toghter the best. Ithink u should try to combind the two and see ehat u could do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 2nd 1 is better =/ Buzz off. First off' date=' your a major beginner, and [b']unless you're JG[/b] or a beginner like that, GTFO. Second, you gave no suggestions. Anyone with experience want to help? Thanks! Anyways, I like the old one better actually, the first one you have removed that *shock* effect that you have on the first one, and second, the colours match really well but they don't look spooky enough. On the last one it just looks plain ugly. The inverted or w/e colours just don't fit and teh reflection in the bottom right corner just looks ugly as well. I like the old one better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 2nd 1 is better =/ Buzz off. First off' date=' your a major beginner, and [b']unless you're JG[/b] or a beginner like that, GTFO. Second, you gave no suggestions. Anyone with experience want to help? Thanks! Anyways, I like the old one better actually, the first one you have removed that *shock* effect that you have on the first one, and second, the colours match really well but they don't look spooky enough. On the last one it just looks plain ugly. The inverted or w/e colours just don't fit and teh reflection in the bottom right corner just looks ugly as well. I like the old one better. Lol. The last one I didn't keep that same color. I added a Hue/Saturation layer, played with the settings, and it turned uber creepy. XD But yeah, I didn't keep it that way. BTW, keep in mind that I'm not done with the tag just yet. I'm trying to get some of the old one's elements while improving flow and blending ETC. Thanks. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 -The purple doesn't match. I don't know how it will turn out, but replace the purple with a brown-green.-At least the the background is visible, now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Your creepy one is the best, except for the bottom right corner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 The creepy one is best, except for the whole "creepy" crappy colour scheme. It might be a bit better if you dupe the render and blur it 1px, then put it behind the normal render on multiply. Other than that, I can't really comment until I see the 3rd with a normal colour scheme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Thanks Kizzi, and Hope. Although, some people don't seem to realize that I AM NOT LEAVING THE COLOR SCHEME THAT WAY. I just thought it was funny without being edited. I'm that bad to leave like that. By the way, Hope, the thing down in the bottom right corner looks good in my opinion. It's a clipping mask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Bumpercars! I added an updated version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Disturbed, who Whizzed in your Cheerios this morning?They're just telling you their opinion. Nothing wrong with that.Now, in my Opinion, they both seem Pretty Good. 1st is better than the 2nd, but both are Good.Maybe make it a bit less Dark on the Mask, and that's kind of it. -Yoshi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sbamber Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Is this a stock? I like V1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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