Wuu. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Then persist on it, or let them make a new way of duel monsters! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Then persist on it' date=' or let them make a new way of duel monsters![/quote'] tru, dat. ;) anymore readers? come on, people.. i write this for you guys.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Then persist on it' date=' or let them make a new way of duel monsters![/quote'] tru, dat. ;) anymore readers? come on, people.. i write this for you guys.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Chapter 3 was really good. I knew it was Kal all along, but, yeah. Nice Chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Chapter 3 was really good. I knew it was Kal all along, but, yeah. Nice Chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Chapter 3 was really good. I knew it was Kal all along' date=' but, yeah. Nice Chapter![/quote'] yeah, that wasnt meant to be a surprise. ;) thank you for reading! i appreciate it a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Chapter 3 was really good. I knew it was Kal all along' date=' but, yeah. Nice Chapter![/quote'] yeah, that wasnt meant to be a surprise. ;) thank you for reading! i appreciate it a lot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Chapter 3 was really good. I knew it was Kal all along' date=' but, yeah. Nice Chapter![/quote'] yeah, that wasnt meant to be a surprise. ;) thank you for reading! i appreciate it a lot!You're welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 I didn't think it was Kal, but it was somewhat spoiled by this line: Kal removed the card by sticking it in his breast pocket, and then he drew another card. ...Before we knew it was Kal! Of course, we don't know who would have won the duel between Kal and Trey. I suppose I could stick to the belief it is merely another cyborg given the appearance of Kal for some malicious purpose, but nah. I'll think he's Kal for now. Course, now it has to be wondered what he is doing, and what happened to him, and his deck. But we know the cops are still out, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Well, good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 I didn't think it was Kal' date=' but it was somewhat spoiled by this line: Kal removed the card by sticking it in his breast pocket, and then he drew another card. ...Before we knew it was Kal! Of course, we don't know who would have won the duel between Kal and Trey. I suppose I could stick to the belief it is merely another cyborg given the appearance of Kal for some malicious purpose, but nah. I'll think he's Kal for now. Course, now it has to be wondered what he is doing, and what happened to him, and his deck. But we know the cops are still out, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Well, good luck![/quote'] I knew I messed that up.. :| sorry 'bout that. Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it! :) Chapter 4 is on the way. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:ABC: Posted April 19, 2009 Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 dude kale, loved the new chap. also lovin that one part with the ,wel you know:mrgreen: can't wait for next chap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 dude kale' date=' loved the new chap. also lovin that one part with the ,wel you know:mrgreen: can't wait for next chap.[/quote'] You mean the make-out section that changed this to a PG-13 fic? :D I liked writing it too.. Thank you for reading! I appreciate it. ;) I'm working as fast as possible so I can apply for sticky-ship. ;) (note: new terminology) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 19, 2009 Bump for 2009.4.19! please read! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 Bump for 2009.4.19! please read! :D Bump for 2009.4.21... Why didnt anyone comment on this for the past few days? do you guys just get fed up with nothing being added for a few days? alrighty then' date=' to appease your desire, i will add in some spoilers. [center']Spoilers![/center]Dont read ahead if you dont want to see some spoilers from the next chapter. First off, the next chapter will be called War Heroes pt 1. Take what you want out of that, for i will not say one way or another. The plot will start to unfold, showing the way for the rest of the fic. i will tell you, there will be a struggle between 2 forces. Just like there is in 5D's, there will be a team of 5 individuals. Take guesses of who those individuals will be. There will be an introduction of two entirely new characters from me. There will be no new characters from my contest as of yet. The next chapter will have an epic duel in it between a character that has been introduced and a character that will be introduced in the next chapter. ;) Anything i have said here can be interpreted in multiple ways, just please guess at it. Just guys, please post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 21, 2009 Report Share Posted April 21, 2009 War Heroes... Well, Kal could be called a 'war hero'. Trey probably could too. Five individuals... Very little clue to be honest. Possibly Kal, Trey, and the first, second and third from that contest you're doing? Unless of course, you next line is telling us that isn't right, not quite made clear to me. But next chapter will involve two new characters. Pretty neat, pointless to guess though I think. Perhaps Kal will duel again! Well, anyway. Wish you luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted April 22, 2009 Report Share Posted April 22, 2009 Simple. The Heroes are the ones whose eyes glow. I wonder who the last one is. This seems too 5Ds for me!I cannot wait for this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 War Heroes... Well' date=' Kal could be called a 'war hero'. Trey probably could too. Five individuals... Very little clue to be honest. Possibly Kal, Trey, and the first, second and third from that contest you're doing? Unless of course, you next line is telling us that isn't right, not quite made clear to me. But next chapter will involve two new characters. Pretty neat, pointless to guess though I think. Perhaps Kal will duel again! Well, anyway. Wish you luck![/quote'] good guess with the contest winners, but that is too far away, and i dont want you guys to wait that long. :| one of the remaining 3 in the 'group' has been mentioned in the fic before.... :D Simple. The Heroes are the ones whose eyes glow. I wonder who the last one is. This seems too 5Ds for me!I cannot wait for this! well, i try to make it similar to 5D's.. i want it to be exciting. :D but! i will have an entirely new storyline, no plain and simple copy-cat. ;) The next chapter should be out by the end of this weekend. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted April 24, 2009 Report Share Posted April 24, 2009 Next chapter should be Awesomeness!It really hould, with two new people intro'd and all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 War Heroes... Well' date=' Kal could be called a 'war hero'. Trey probably could too. Five individuals... Very little clue to be honest. Possibly Kal, Trey, and the first, second and third from that contest you're doing? Unless of course, you next line is telling us that isn't right, not quite made clear to me. But next chapter will involve two new characters. Pretty neat, pointless to guess though I think. Perhaps Kal will duel again! Well, anyway. Wish you luck![/quote'] good guess with the contest winners, but that is too far away, and i dont want you guys to wait that long. :| one of the remaining 3 in the 'group' has been mentioned in the fic before.... :D The next chapter should be out by the end of this weekend. :D Hmm... Talia perhaps? I'd say that person at the end of chapter one, but I'm pretty sure that was Kal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 25, 2009 Report Share Posted April 25, 2009 Oh noez! Kale is desperate for posts!? All hope is gone, he will eat us all! I know one thing, on of those two new characters will evolve around Dark Emanater, probably someone like Yami Marik. And 'War Heroes pt. 1' Is this gonna be like the battle against Pegasus in Yu-Gi-Oh! ? YOU MAI SIREH ARE TEH SMEXEH EPIC! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BulletMan Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 This is turning up to be awesome Kale. Nice job. I read all 3 chapters. And so if I win your Fan Fic Contests, will my character make an appearance? That would be so cool! He totally fits in! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Sorry about the long wait, i had a major test on Thursday that took all my time to study for, and, well, yesterday was Friday night.. :D so, i have been writing the next chapter, and i am halfway done. it should be out by tomorrow. ;) i have made an official title banner with Trey's signature card on it, Irith. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted May 16, 2009 Report Share Posted May 16, 2009 Hey, that's cool. The long wait has just made our expectations rise to a level that may be difficult for even you to overcome. I'll just re-read the last chapters to find some extra hints to keep myself occupied... Oh YEAH! I forgot why Trey entered the city, he is looking for some mysterious item... I'm assuming the guy at the end of chapter one is Kal... But what if it isn't? And Trey, like Kal, seems to have a supernatural ability, so one of 'them'. A psychic, or part of another group? *laughs* must have burst your bubble slightly that the Fifth Signer's arm was actually Rudgers. But it's easily handwaved as the guy simply took his own facts in the wrong direction. 'Program Malfunction, Irrational Compute – Unable to Complete Request,’ So he is unable to tell a lie? Or at least anything involving emotion rather then logic. Then again, his fight with the cyborgs in the last chapter... ...And, that's about it for now. Perhaps more hints that I missed. Still, tomorrow? Awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Crud, obviously i didnt get the chapter out on time. :| im sorry guys, i got caught up in the weekend, but i finished most of it. And i would write the rest now, but i am making new cards to be included in the fic. :D im sure you guys would appreciate that. :D these cards will be written about first, and then be posted in the thread they go in in realistic cards. please, please, please be patient with me. School ends for me next week, and i will have loads more time for subsequent chapters. i will definitely have this out by either tomorrow or wednesday, for certain. i have nothing else really going on at school to occupy my time. ;) thank you all for being loyal readers and followers through all this suspense that i put you through. :| ~Kale. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Awesome chapters Kale! (I haven't been on in a while, so I had to catch up) Can't wait for more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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