Wuu. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Again' date=' D.B was generous so he changed my name on a basis of 1 day. It's Legendary Tapion now. Care to change the subscribing list?[/quote'] I will change the sub, and chapter 3 is still under the works. Turns out I had an exciting Friday evening, something that doesn't happen to computer geeks like me. ;) Anywho, It will be done this weekend! I promise that to you all. I read both chapters and I have to say' date=' I really like it. I read your other fan-fic (Edge of Justice), but never really commented, but this is really good. I like to see where the duel goes. Again, really good fan-fic.[/quote'] I remember when you commented. ;) thanks for viewing this one! I really do appreciate it. Would you like a subscription for Chapter 3: Dissension when it comes out? Btw: ^ that there was a slight spoiler. ;) At bolded = yeah. Chapter 3 sounds good by the name. :) What happened on that friday then? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 View in my blog, Please post comments here. [spoiler=Chapter 3: Dissension] 2 Months Ago Kal walked over to the elevator, sliding the key into the newly upgraded key slot to get to the top floor as he entered, completely ignoring the many faces that were still staring at his godly perfect figure. He was only thinking about the squatter that was using his penthouse prize for their own. But who could have told the clerk that he wouldn’t have minded if she stayed? Why would someone do that? Kal couldn’t wrap his mind around it, but he was determined to find out who it was. They couldn’t stand against him, not with his cyber limbs. The elevator stopped; Kal got off on the top floor: his apartment. The doors didn’t make a sound as he entered, and his lithe form made him quieter than a cat in a field of mice. That is when he started noticing subtle changes in the atmosphere in the apartment. The front entryway now had interesting paintings of abstract shapes; the walls were painted a very bright white; the furniture was very ultra modern. The apartment was very clean, very streamline. It looked very impressive, but it didn’t have the original homely feel that Pegasus had in it. But this was just the entryway; he still had the rest of the apartment to go through. He walked through the wide, but short hallway across from the entryway, past the closets and the bathroom and into the great room. The kitchen was updated: deep marble counters, stainless steel appliances, stone tiles. The ultra-modern feel continued into the living room, where there were several new couches and chairs where the three large, comfy couches used to be. He was happy to see the enormous flat screen still where it was originally. ‘What happened here?’ Kal thought to himself. That is when he heard something: from the start he had heard a strange noise, like the sound of running water. But it was really faint, and he thought that it could have been from somewhere downstairs. But then he heard the water stop, and he heard some rustling around further down in the apartment. Kal walked back to the master bedroom at the end of the great room, determined to find the person who had taken over his space. Kal walked into the bedroom, which had too changed into a more modern space, with a monochromatic white to black atmosphere. He walked back to the private master bath, the door being closed, where the noise had been coming from. He heard something rustling, but he couldn’t be sure what it was. That is when the door suddenly opened, and out came a woman in only a towel. Kal was startled at first: out of all the people that could have been in his apartment a half-naked woman comes out of his bathroom? The woman had semi-short, straight, dark hair which was hanging in front of her face. She had somewhat light skin, and she was of average height. She flipped the hair out of her face, revealing large, perfect lips, a soft, sanguine face, and eyes that were of the most startling green. That is when she noticed that Kal was standing there. She almost screamed, fear in her eyes, but that immediately dissolved into confusion. “Kal…?” she asked to the figure in front of her. “Talia…?” Kal asked the woman standing in front of him. It was true: the woman that he was looking for was the very same woman that was staying in his apartment. How opportune. “What happened to you? You look… amazing,” she said, seeming to be a little taken aback from the result of the procedure that he had undergone. “You are the woman in my apartment?” Kal asked, completely ignoring the compliment he just got. Talia stared at him angrily; the happiness of seeing him suddenly all disappeared. “More like keeping it from going on the market. And do I hear a ‘thank you’?” Talia said, heavy with the attitude. Kal had never thought of it that way. “How long have you been here?” Kal asked, trying to ask in a way that wouldn’t provoke her. “How about I change into some clothes and I tell you the entire story? I’m starting to feel uncomfortable…” Talia motioned to the towel, which was considerably too small to stay on by itself. She had to hold it with a tight grip to keep it from falling straight off. Kal blushed. “Right, umm... I will just go out into the great room…” Kal said, hurrying his way out of the room. Talia closed the door behind him, swinging herself back-first onto the door. She smiled to herself, and then set off to finish readying herself. Kal decided to sit and let his batteries start recharging. He didn’t know how busy he would be, and he didn’t know how often he would need to, so he just decided to start. A few minutes later, Talia, dressed in a spaghetti strap halter top and some shorts, came out of her room, all dressed up. Somehow her hair became entirely dry just after five minutes, but he hadn’t heard a hair dryer. He was curious as to how she did that, but it was not important enough for him to ask. He just liked that it was dry; the way she had her hair fixed was extremely attractive to Kal. It was almost like she dressed to suit everything he liked, but he couldn’t think that. He had to believe that it was a coincidence. “So…” Kal said, “How long have you been here?” “Right to the point, huh? Well…” Talia walked over to the kitchen area and fixed a glass of water, “I have been here around three months.” “That is around the time I… left,” Kal censored his sentence. He didn’t want to drop his problem on her too fast. “Yeah, I know. Why was that?” Kal became very anxious, “Umm… I thought this was your story?” Talia seemed pleased by this non-answer, as she kept talking, “Well then, when I was released from the hospital wing downstairs I went looking for you. I wanted to find out just what this apartment looked like, to see you basking in the glory of winning the tournament. But when I went looking I couldn’t find you.” She also wanted to add that she had hoped to see him there when she woke up, but that further disappointed her. “So, when I went up here, I found that the elevator let me off, even though I didn’t have a key. I was not sure why that happened; I am leaving it to chance. But when I looked around in here you still weren’t to be found. So, I decided to stay, just incase you came back.” She edited out that she wanted to surprise him while he was there, but she would have been embarrassed if she had actually said that. “One day I was confronted by the woman downstairs, the one who runs the front desk. A large package for you came from Pegasus, and it didn’t fit in your mailbox. So she hand-delivered it. She didn’t believe my story that I was a friend, and that you allowed me to stay. She threatened to turn me in, and at that I decided to pay her off, so that she would stay quiet. It worked, and she left me alone.” Talia drank half the glass of water and walked over to the chair next to the couch that Kal was sitting on, sitting her glass on a side table between the two pieces of furniture. “Days turned into weeks, and those into months. And you never returned. So, slowly, I remodeled the place. I honestly didn’t know if you were coming back.” Kal looked down, not knowing what to say. He didn’t know if he could bring himself to tell her that he was abducted, much less that he was not even human anymore. “Where have you been all this time?” The dreaded question was asked yet again, and Kal didn’t know how to answer. He didn’t want to; he wished that he would have just left her out of this. Now that she had seen him, talked to him, she was an accessory. She could get in trouble with the DPF just as much as he could. “Kal?” Talia asked, her voice shaking. Kal looked up at her; if he were human a tear would have been coming down his face. He didn’t have that luxury anymore. “Talia, I…” Talia, fearing the worst, started to cry. “What happened to you, Kal?” as she said this, she moved from that separate chair to the seat next to him. She wrapped her arms around his closest arm, trying to both comfort him and herself. When she touched him, though, she noticed that something was different. His skin, though seeming to have the texture of skin, didn’t have the temperature. He felt so cold, like he had not been heated inside. He wasn’t like ice; he just wasn’t up to the normal temperature he should have been. It was almost like he had no heat at all. He also seemed tougher, like he was more solid under that skin than muscles and bones allowed. It almost felt like he had one, large, sculpted bone that supported his arm, like it wasn’t even real. Talia cringed and shirked away. Kal looked at her, anguish in his eyes. “What happened to you?” she asked again. “I…” Kal couldn’t bring himself to say it. ‘Program Malfunction, Irrational Compute – Unable to Complete Request,’ the on-board computer said in his head. He didn’t understand what it meant, but all of a sudden he began to feel odd, like he couldn’t move. His two ideas must have conflicted, and so he froze. He had to tell her now, because if he wanted to and he didn’t, he would never unfreeze. ‘Cruddy computer system…’ Kal thought to himself. He would have to review this, so that this never happened again. Kal decided to tell her, and he instantly unfroze from his stance. “Talia, on the day that I won the tournament I came up here to see the prize after I left you in the hospital wing. When I got up here I was abducted, taken to the Cyborg Unit of the DPF. The transformed me… It must have taken a long time to completely remake me, because when I woke up it was three months later, today. I escaped, and I came to see you.” Talia couldn’t believe the words at first, but she slowly began to put the facts together. He was cold, hard, and undeniably gorgeous. This fits in with his story about a remake, and his story about the three month procedure explained his disappearance for forever. She didn’t need any more explanation than that. She put her arms around him, holding his perfect body against hers. “I hoped that I would see you again, Kal.” Kal turned to face her, “I hoped that I would find you.” For a moment they stared into each others eyes, holding each other in embrace. There was a power emanating between them, and they could both feel it. The both moved forward at the same time, kissing each other so deeply that they felt they would never part again. Present Day: Down Town Aequitas Trey: 8000 – 3Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 3 “Now I activate the Equip Spell Card Discharge Debris Gauntlet, and equip it to my Pycer!” The card flipped and revealed itself, increasing the ATK of the monster by 500. Pycer- ATK: 1700 ~ 2200 “Now, Pycer, attack his machine!” The monster on horseback went to strike, moving closer to the enemy line. It went to strike Vector 1 of the opponent’s Stack, which happened to be the third Xinthi the Assimilate Scanner, and this one had a level of 3. This made its ATK 900, by its effect. The 900 ATK monster didn’t seem to stand a chance against the Pycer coming its way. “I activate my Trap Card, Assimilation Block Defense!” the mysterious man said, revealing the face-down card on the field. To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “What does that do?” Trey asked, irritated. “It makes it so that my monsters aren’t destroyed this turn, and you take the damage from an attack, since I have three monsters with the same name.” Pycer ran straight into a Trap, and a cheap one at that. Not only is that Trap chainable, but it ruins the sport of high-powered monsters. This man certainly duels differently than the real Kal, not this two-bit hack that hides behind non-Ally support. Trey was sure that this man could not be Kal Iszarc. He was sure of it. As soon as Pycer touched the Xinthi it backfired. Flames shot straight back from the machine and into the D-Wheel of Trey, knocking him off balance. He was sent farther behind the mysterious man, signifying the turn of the duel to his favor. Trey: 6700 – 3Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 3 “Care to attack again?” the mysterious man asked, goading him. “No, you imbecile. I will not fall for that again. I set one card face-down and end my turn. The mysterious man drew his card out of the dashboard of his D-Wheel and stuck it in his hand-slot of the left arm rest on the side. Trey: 6700 – 2Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 4 “I Summon my Jyruun the Balking Zephyr, in Attack Mode!” the mysterious man said. An elf appeared, a bird perched on its shoulder, who wore green clothing. [spoiler=info]Jyruun the Balking Zephyr••••WINDWarrior/Ally1500/1400While you control another Ally monster, once per turn you can change this card from face-up Attack Position to face-up Defense Position to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Ally monster in your Deck. If you activate this effect, this card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, except with a card effect. Once per turn you can move 1 Ally monster you control to Vector 1 or the last Vector in 1 Stack you control. “I now activate his special ability, allowing me to switch his battle position and Special Summon another monster from my Deck!” The elf crouched down and turned a discolored blue, signifying its battle change. At the same time, the bird flew off his shoulder, escaping the battle change. It flew into the air and began to glow. It then disappeared, and standing on the field was a new creature, a small man with a spirit on his shoulder. [spoiler=info]Albiien the Familiar Castor•••WATERSpellcaster/Ally700/1600Once per turn you can tribute 1 Ally monster you control, other than this card, to select 1 Ally monster you control. That monster can attack your opponent directly this turn. If your opponent controls 2 or less monsters during the turn you activate this effect, the damage inflicted is halved. “I activate the final ability of my Jyruun, moving my newly summoned Albiien the Familiar Castor to the bottom Vector of my largest Stack, with my Xinthis.” The man moved over behind the 3 other creatures, changing their levels. “But before their levels are officially calculated, I will use the ability of my Vector 1 Xinthi to copy the level of an Ally monster I control or that is in my Graveyard, and I select my Level 4 Thuxzu the Licentious Blade that I discarded last turn.” Stack ContentsXinthi #1 - Level 4 ~ Level 7 = 2100 ATKXinthi #2 - Level 1 ~ Level 2 = 600 ATKXinthi #3 - Level 1 ~ Level 1 = 300 ATKAlbiien #4 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “I now activate the special abilities of my Albiien! By releasing my Defense Position Jyruun, I can select 1 Ally monster to attack you directly! So I select my Vector 1 Xinthi!” The elf disappeared, fueling the energy of the little man. He generated an energy ball in the palm of his hand, and then threw it into the back of the top monster of his Stack. The monster began to glow, and it drew on that power to jump over the two opposing monsters and go straight for the opponent. Trey: 5650 – 3Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 3 “Since you had 2 monsters when I activated this effect the damage is halved,” Kal explained. Trey started to get furious. Not only did this attack not allow his Trap to activate as he had planned, but he was being toyed with. “You could have powered up that Xinthi of yours last turn, but you didn’t. You wanted me to attack you, and then allow you to attack me directly this turn for minimal damage each time. Why are you toying with me?” Trey asked angrily. The mysterious man grinned, though Trey was so far back he couldn’t have seen that. “I’m just having some fun.” This dude started to remind him of this one kid at Duel Academy when he attended there. But that guy’s deck was entirely different, no where close to this dueling style. “Well, do me a favor? Stop.” “I set one face-down and end,” the mysterious guy said, seemingly ignoring the last remark. Trey drew his card, wanting to end this duel this turn, if possible.” Trey: 5650 – 4Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 2 “Due to my Pycer’s effect, I lose 700 points for drawing my card.” Trey: 4950 – 4Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 2 “I Summon my Iengy the Discharge Combatant in Attack Position!” A flaming zombie appeared, holding a sword in one hand. To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Next I activate the Continuous Spell Card Discharge Wave!” Trey slid the card into one of five parallel slots on the dashboard of his D-Wheel, activating it. A green card appeared in holographics next to the D-Wheel.[spoiler=info]Discharge WaveContinuous Spell CardWhen a card(s) your opponent controls is destroyed by a "Discharge" card you control, inflict 700 damage to your opponent and add 1 Ember Counter to this card (max. 4). You can remove 2 Ember Counters from this card to increase the ATK of 1 "Discharge" Monster you control by 400 until the End Phase. “Now, my Pycer will attack your monster!” Just as the creature on the menacing horse was about to strike, the mysterious man activated his face-down yet again. “I activate my Quick-Play Spell Card, Battle Catapult Flare!” To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “This card makes it so that you lose Life Points for each Vector in one Stack I control, so since I control only one Stack, you lose 400 points for each of my 4 monsters, totaling 1600 damage!” The spell activated and disappeared, leaving the flames of combined force to be shoved straight back into the opposing D-Wheel, shoving Trey farther back down the long highway. Trey: 3350 – 2Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 2 This was ridiculous, Trey thought. There was no way that a random man could come up and challenge him to a duel and then beat him. No way. This was the most Life he had ever lost in an entire duel, and he vowed to himself that that would be the farthest that he would get. “When my Spell Card is sent to the Graveyard, I can remove it from play to add 1 Level 3 Ally monster in my Deck to my hand.” The mysterious man on the similar D-Wheel took a card from his deck in his dashboard and stuck it in his hand slot. “Pycer’s attack still goes through!” Trey said, anger teeming off his vocal cords. The creature swarmed straight through to the top Vector and smashed it into pieces. There was only a 100 ATK difference. Trey: 3350 – 2Mysterious Guy: 7300 – 3 “Remember my Equip Spell Card, Discharge Debris Gauntlet? Well, now its effect activates!” Pycer raised his arm, revealing a glove that started to glow blue. “When I destroy a monster of yours, the remnants of that creature combine with the flaming power of my creatures to form a Debris Token on your side of the field.” The glove glowed again, and a small creature appeared on the field in a monster card zone of its own. After all, a non-Ally monster can’t be on the top of the Stack. Debris Token: (Fiend-Type/FIRE/Level 2/ATK 700/DEF 700) “Now the effect of my Discharge Wave activates! Since I destroyed a card of yours with a Discharge Monster, you lose 700 more Life!” A wave of flames cascaded onto the opposing D-Wheel, taking a chunk out of his Life Points. Trey: 3350 – 2Mysterious Guy: 4800 – 3 “Now I attack that Debris Token with my Iengy!” Iengy went forward to destroy the Token, and with the included 700 damage from the Discharge Wave, the total damage came out to 1800. “Now the last effect of my Discharge Debris Gauntlet activates! I send the top 2 cards of my Deck to the Graveyard and I gain 600 Life Points since the Token was removed from the field!” Trey: 3950 – 2Mysterious Guy: 4800 – 3 This seemed to make Trey a bit happier; his D-Wheel started to merge the gap between them. The end of this road was coming up, and they both turned on the next long street. They ended up on the outer-belt highway that surrounded Aequitas. There was some traffic, but since it was late at night there was not much. They swerved in and around the slower cars, some honking their horns for either liking the duel or from the annoyance of having holographics obstruct their view of the road. It was illegal to duel on main roads, so many of them alerted the police. “Since my Vector 1 disappeared, a new Vector 1 took its place. This changes the Levels of my remaining 2 Xinthis.” The mysterious man said. Stack ContentsXinthi #1 - Level 2 ~ Level 3 = 900 ATKXinthi #2 - Level 1 ~ Level 1 = 300 ATKAlbiien #3 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “That creature still is not powerful enough to avoid destruction! My Keech will destroy that menace!” With the added damage from his Discharge Wave, the damage total came to 1200. Trey: 3950 – 2Mysterious Guy: 3600 – 3 Trey took the lead and passed the mysterious duelist by a few feet, narrowly missing a car on his way. “This changes the Level of my remaining Xinthi.” Stack Contents Xinthi #1 - Level 1 ~ Level 2 = 600 ATKAlbiien #2 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “This ends my turn.” Trey was still happy that there was still that face-down on his field. In total, he had 6 cards on the field, his 3 monsters, 2 spells, and 1 face-down. The mysterious guy only had 2, the two cards in his Stack. But he had hand advantage, 3 to 2. Who knows what is in his hand? The man drew his card in silence, contemplating what to do. He got an idea. “I Summon that creature I gathered with that Spell Card effect during your turn, my Biex the Frontline Vanguard!” The card flipped and revealed a man in a flowing, blue coat. [spoiler=info]Biex the Frontline Vanguard•••EARTHWarrior/Ally1500/100 Once per turn, you can reveal a number of Ally monsters in your hand. Increase this card's Level by 1 for each card you revealed. You can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 Ally monster from your Deck whose Level is equal to this card's Level. “Now I activate his special ability! By revealing these two monsters in my hand…” The mysterious man revealed a blue machine monster and a man in a white coat with magic flying from his hands. “…I can increase his Level by 2! And now I can remove him from the field to Special Summon a Level 5 monster from my Deck!” The monster kneeled down and formed a magic circle. In a flash of blue light the man disappeared and left in its place a man in white armor with a long sword. [spoiler=info]Kuure the Prodigal Force•••••WINDWarrior/Ally2200/1900Once per turn, move this card to Vector 1 of 1 Stack you control and add a number of Ally Counters to this card equal to the number of Vectors in it. You can remove 2 Ally Counters from this card to send 1 card on the field to the owner's hand. When this card is removed from the field, send 1 Level 3 or lower Ally monster in your Deck to the Graveyard. “Now I can activate the special ability of the my Kuure the Prodigal Force! I move him to The top Vector of my Stack to add 3 Ally Counters on him, one for each Vector in the Stack!” The monster moved, and then three glowing orbs appeared in front of him. “Now I remove 2 of them to send your face-down to your hand!” the mysterious man said. “Damn it!” Trey exclaimed. That was his only protection. He added it to his hand in anger. Stack Contents Kurure #1 ~ Level 5 = ATK 2200Xinthi #2 - Level 2 ~ Level 1 = 300 ATKAlbiien #3 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “Now I activate the final ability of my Xinthi the Assimilate Scanner. By paying 600 Life Points I can treat it as a Tuner monster. And with its first ability, I have its level treated as the same as my Albiien, so now it is level 3. Since there is a Vector above and below my Xinthi, there is no change in Level. Now that I have a level 5 monster and level 3 Tuner, I release them to Summon my Level 8 Synchro monster!” Vector 2 of the Stack separated in a flash of light into 3 glowing rings, which descended upon Vector 1. Kuure broke apart into 5 white orbs. All of the rings and orbs fell into each other, and in a flash of white light a monster was left in the place of the two. The monster was a man with black armor, and a long sword in its hands. [spoiler=info]Cocanxi the Slayer••••••••LIGHTWarrior/Synchro/Effect2500/1600 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.This card is treated as an Ally monster while it is Face-Up on the field and in the Graveyard. Once per turn you can select and activate 1 of the following effects: • Send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. • Tribute 1 monster you control and send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to destroy all monsters your opponent controls, then change this card into Defense Position. Trey: 3950 – 2Mysterious Guy: 3000 – 2 “When my Kuure is removed from the field, I can send 1 Level 3 or lower Ally monster in my Deck to the Graveyard, so I send my Jubex the Relentless Gear. This activates his effect, so I Special Summon him to the bottom Vector under my Albiien. This changes his Level to 2, since that is his Vector.” A monster appeared behind the man with the spirit on his shoulder, seemingly out of nowhere. To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Now I release this card for the effect of my Albiien, allowing my Cocanxi Synchro to attack you directly this turn!” The machine monster disappeared, leaving a glowing orb in the man’s hand. He used this to power up Cocanxi, which used that energy to hop over the enemy line of 3 monsters. Because he had over 2 monsters, the damage to Trey’s Life Points wasn’t halved. Trey: 1450 – 2Mysterious Guy: 3000 – 2 “Now the effect of my Cocanxi can be activated. I send the top card of my Deck to the Graveyard to destroy your Iengy.” The Synchro Monster slashed its sword, and the Zombie monster was destroyed. “I would have destroyed your stronger monster, but I remembered that cost for having it on the field. Each time you draw, you lose life. This will halve your remaining Life Points when you draw.” ‘Damn it,’ Trey thought. “I activate the special ability of my Xinthi. When it is in the Graveyard, I can remove it from play to draw a card.” Kal removed the card by sticking it in his breast pocket, and then he drew another card. “That ends my turn.” This man is really irritating to Trey. Not only was he making a fool of him, but he was winning! And having a grand time at his expense nonetheless! Trey was fueled with rage as he drew his card. “I take 700 damage from the effect of my Pycer.” Trey: 750 – 3Mysterious Guy: 3000 – 3 “Now I release my two remaining monsters, taking my equip spell with it, to Special Summon my Garawroth the Discharge Dragon from my hand!” To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Now the last effect of my Pycer is activated! Since he was sent to the Graveyard, I can Special Summon my Level 2 Tuner monster from my Deck! So I summon my Alede the Discharge Amalgamate!” To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Now that I have a Tuner and total Levels of 10, I can release these two monsters to summon my Synchro Monster, Ziranat the Discharge Hellion!!” The two monsters disappeared, breaking into 10 orbs of light and two rings. The rings and orbs fell into each other, breaking into a flash of white light. This left behind a monster, a terrifying flame dragon. [spoiler=info]Ziranat the Discharge Hellion••••••••••FIREDragon - Synchro - Effect3200/20001 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, you can destroy 1 card on the field. You can remove a number of "Discharge" cards in your Graveyard from play to increase this card's ATK by the number of cards you removed x 300. If you activate this effect, destroy this card during the End Phase and remove it from play. “Now, since it was Synchro Summoned, I can destroy 1 monster of yours! And I choose your Synchro Monster! And this will trigger the effect of my Discharge Wave, inflicting 700 damage to you!” The Dragon rose up into the air, poised for the attack. It sent a cascade of power into the opposing monster, destroying it on contact. This power also took a chunk out of the mysterious man’s Life. Trey: 750 – 2Mysterious Guy: 2300 – 3 “Now, when I attack your monster, this Duel is over!” Trey said, exalting prematurely his win. “You think that,” the mysterious man said. This threw off Trey. He wondered what else he could possibly have. Did he have something in his hand? Did he have a new card in the Graveyard? What did he have that could defeat his powerful Dragon? He decided to go for it and attack anyway. The Dragon was poised for the attack, getting ready to through the final blow. That was when they heard the first siren. “What is that?” Trey asked aloud. “Crap, they found us…” the mysterious man said, “I have to leave.” “You can’t leave now! This duel isn’t over yet,” Trey responded, angered. “You don’t understand, Trey. If I don’t get out of here now, this would have been for nothing. I know you are who I was looking for now. And if the DPF find us they will take us both away. I cannot let this happen.” “How the hell did you know my name?” “I know more about you than you think.” “How?” Trey was irritated more than he had been that night. His eyes began to glow a faint red color, something that only the mysterious guy noticed. His eyes grew wide. “Follow me, now. Turn off your D-Wheel and come with me, I have a safe place.” “And why would I trust you.” “I figured you would ask that.” The mysterious man turned his D-Wheel around, so he was essentially driving backward. He then took off his helmet, revealing his true identity. He had longish, dark hair and blue eyes. His face seemed perfect, like a movie-star. Trey’s eyes grew wide. “I am Kal Iszarc.” Trey wanted to know more about this guy, so even though he was reluctant to follow him he decided to go anyway. Kal turned his D-Wheel around, and following closely was Trey. This was the beginning of something bigger, but Trey didn’t know what. He had hinted at it being something bigger, but he never expanded that thought. What what it? To be Continued… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 View in my blog, Please post comments here. [spoiler=Chapter 3: Dissension] 2 Months Ago Kal walked over to the elevator, sliding the key into the newly upgraded key slot to get to the top floor as he entered, completely ignoring the many faces that were still staring at his godly perfect figure. He was only thinking about the squatter that was using his penthouse prize for their own. But who could have told the clerk that he wouldn’t have minded if she stayed? Why would someone do that? Kal couldn’t wrap his mind around it, but he was determined to find out who it was. They couldn’t stand against him, not with his cyber limbs. The elevator stopped; Kal got off on the top floor: his apartment. The doors didn’t make a sound as he entered, and his lithe form made him quieter than a cat in a field of mice. That is when he started noticing subtle changes in the atmosphere in the apartment. The front entryway now had interesting paintings of abstract shapes; the walls were painted a very bright white; the furniture was very ultra modern. The apartment was very clean, very streamline. It looked very impressive, but it didn’t have the original homely feel that Pegasus had in it. But this was just the entryway; he still had the rest of the apartment to go through. He walked through the wide, but short hallway across from the entryway, past the closets and the bathroom and into the great room. The kitchen was updated: deep marble counters, stainless steel appliances, stone tiles. The ultra-modern feel continued into the living room, where there were several new couches and chairs where the three large, comfy couches used to be. He was happy to see the enormous flat screen still where it was originally. ‘What happened here?’ Kal thought to himself. That is when he heard something: from the start he had heard a strange noise, like the sound of running water. But it was really faint, and he thought that it could have been from somewhere downstairs. But then he heard the water stop, and he heard some rustling around further down in the apartment. Kal walked back to the master bedroom at the end of the great room, determined to find the person who had taken over his space. Kal walked into the bedroom, which had too changed into a more modern space, with a monochromatic white to black atmosphere. He walked back to the private master bath, the door being closed, where the noise had been coming from. He heard something rustling, but he couldn’t be sure what it was. That is when the door suddenly opened, and out came a woman in only a towel. Kal was startled at first: out of all the people that could have been in his apartment a half-naked woman comes out of his bathroom? The woman had semi-short, straight, dark hair which was hanging in front of her face. She had somewhat light skin, and she was of average height. She flipped the hair out of her face, revealing large, perfect lips, a soft, sanguine face, and eyes that were of the most startling green. That is when she noticed that Kal was standing there. She almost screamed, fear in her eyes, but that immediately dissolved into confusion. “Kal…?” she asked to the figure in front of her. “Talia…?” Kal asked the woman standing in front of him. It was true: the woman that he was looking for was the very same woman that was staying in his apartment. How opportune. “What happened to you? You look… amazing,” she said, seeming to be a little taken aback from the result of the procedure that he had undergone. “You are the woman in my apartment?” Kal asked, completely ignoring the compliment he just got. Talia stared at him angrily; the happiness of seeing him suddenly all disappeared. “More like keeping it from going on the market. And do I hear a ‘thank you’?” Talia said, heavy with the attitude. Kal had never thought of it that way. “How long have you been here?” Kal asked, trying to ask in a way that wouldn’t provoke her. “How about I change into some clothes and I tell you the entire story? I’m starting to feel uncomfortable…” Talia motioned to the towel, which was considerably too small to stay on by itself. She had to hold it with a tight grip to keep it from falling straight off. Kal blushed. “Right, umm... I will just go out into the great room…” Kal said, hurrying his way out of the room. Talia closed the door behind him, swinging herself back-first onto the door. She smiled to herself, and then set off to finish readying herself. Kal decided to sit and let his batteries start recharging. He didn’t know how busy he would be, and he didn’t know how often he would need to, so he just decided to start. A few minutes later, Talia, dressed in a spaghetti strap halter top and some shorts, came out of her room, all dressed up. Somehow her hair became entirely dry just after five minutes, but he hadn’t heard a hair dryer. He was curious as to how she did that, but it was not important enough for him to ask. He just liked that it was dry; the way she had her hair fixed was extremely attractive to Kal. It was almost like she dressed to suit everything he liked, but he couldn’t think that. He had to believe that it was a coincidence. “So…” Kal said, “How long have you been here?” “Right to the point, huh? Well…” Talia walked over to the kitchen area and fixed a glass of water, “I have been here around three months.” “That is around the time I… left,” Kal censored his sentence. He didn’t want to drop his problem on her too fast. “Yeah, I know. Why was that?” Kal became very anxious, “Umm… I thought this was your story?” Talia seemed pleased by this non-answer, as she kept talking, “Well then, when I was released from the hospital wing downstairs I went looking for you. I wanted to find out just what this apartment looked like, to see you basking in the glory of winning the tournament. But when I went looking I couldn’t find you.” She also wanted to add that she had hoped to see him there when she woke up, but that further disappointed her. “So, when I went up here, I found that the elevator let me off, even though I didn’t have a key. I was not sure why that happened; I am leaving it to chance. But when I looked around in here you still weren’t to be found. So, I decided to stay, just incase you came back.” She edited out that she wanted to surprise him while he was there, but she would have been embarrassed if she had actually said that. “One day I was confronted by the woman downstairs, the one who runs the front desk. A large package for you came from Pegasus, and it didn’t fit in your mailbox. So she hand-delivered it. She didn’t believe my story that I was a friend, and that you allowed me to stay. She threatened to turn me in, and at that I decided to pay her off, so that she would stay quiet. It worked, and she left me alone.” Talia drank half the glass of water and walked over to the chair next to the couch that Kal was sitting on, sitting her glass on a side table between the two pieces of furniture. “Days turned into weeks, and those into months. And you never returned. So, slowly, I remodeled the place. I honestly didn’t know if you were coming back.” Kal looked down, not knowing what to say. He didn’t know if he could bring himself to tell her that he was abducted, much less that he was not even human anymore. “Where have you been all this time?” The dreaded question was asked yet again, and Kal didn’t know how to answer. He didn’t want to; he wished that he would have just left her out of this. Now that she had seen him, talked to him, she was an accessory. She could get in trouble with the DPF just as much as he could. “Kal?” Talia asked, her voice shaking. Kal looked up at her; if he were human a tear would have been coming down his face. He didn’t have that luxury anymore. “Talia, I…” Talia, fearing the worst, started to cry. “What happened to you, Kal?” as she said this, she moved from that separate chair to the seat next to him. She wrapped her arms around his closest arm, trying to both comfort him and herself. When she touched him, though, she noticed that something was different. His skin, though seeming to have the texture of skin, didn’t have the temperature. He felt so cold, like he had not been heated inside. He wasn’t like ice; he just wasn’t up to the normal temperature he should have been. It was almost like he had no heat at all. He also seemed tougher, like he was more solid under that skin than muscles and bones allowed. It almost felt like he had one, large, sculpted bone that supported his arm, like it wasn’t even real. Talia cringed and shirked away. Kal looked at her, anguish in his eyes. “What happened to you?” she asked again. “I…” Kal couldn’t bring himself to say it. ‘Program Malfunction, Irrational Compute – Unable to Complete Request,’ the on-board computer said in his head. He didn’t understand what it meant, but all of a sudden he began to feel odd, like he couldn’t move. His two ideas must have conflicted, and so he froze. He had to tell her now, because if he wanted to and he didn’t, he would never unfreeze. ‘Cruddy computer system…’ Kal thought to himself. He would have to review this, so that this never happened again. Kal decided to tell her, and he instantly unfroze from his stance. “Talia, on the day that I won the tournament I came up here to see the prize after I left you in the hospital wing. When I got up here I was abducted, taken to the Cyborg Unit of the DPF. The transformed me… It must have taken a long time to completely remake me, because when I woke up it was three months later, today. I escaped, and I came to see you.” Talia couldn’t believe the words at first, but she slowly began to put the facts together. He was cold, hard, and undeniably gorgeous. This fits in with his story about a remake, and his story about the three month procedure explained his disappearance for forever. She didn’t need any more explanation than that. She put her arms around him, holding his perfect body against hers. “I hoped that I would see you again, Kal.” Kal turned to face her, “I hoped that I would find you.” For a moment they stared into each others eyes, holding each other in embrace. There was a power emanating between them, and they could both feel it. The both moved forward at the same time, kissing each other so deeply that they felt they would never part again. Present Day: Down Town Aequitas Trey: 8000 – 3Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 3 “Now I activate the Equip Spell Card Discharge Debris Gauntlet, and equip it to my Pycer!” The card flipped and revealed itself, increasing the ATK of the monster by 500. Pycer- ATK: 1700 ~ 2200 “Now, Pycer, attack his machine!” The monster on horseback went to strike, moving closer to the enemy line. It went to strike Vector 1 of the opponent’s Stack, which happened to be the third Xinthi the Assimilate Scanner, and this one had a level of 3. This made its ATK 900, by its effect. The 900 ATK monster didn’t seem to stand a chance against the Pycer coming its way. “I activate my Trap Card, Assimilation Block Defense!” the mysterious man said, revealing the face-down card on the field. To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “What does that do?” Trey asked, irritated. “It makes it so that my monsters aren’t destroyed this turn, and you take the damage from an attack, since I have three monsters with the same name.” Pycer ran straight into a Trap, and a cheap one at that. Not only is that Trap chainable, but it ruins the sport of high-powered monsters. This man certainly duels differently than the real Kal, not this two-bit hack that hides behind non-Ally support. Trey was sure that this man could not be Kal Iszarc. He was sure of it. As soon as Pycer touched the Xinthi it backfired. Flames shot straight back from the machine and into the D-Wheel of Trey, knocking him off balance. He was sent farther behind the mysterious man, signifying the turn of the duel to his favor. Trey: 6700 – 3Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 3 “Care to attack again?” the mysterious man asked, goading him. “No, you imbecile. I will not fall for that again. I set one card face-down and end my turn. The mysterious man drew his card out of the dashboard of his D-Wheel and stuck it in his hand-slot of the left arm rest on the side. Trey: 6700 – 2Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 4 “I Summon my Jyruun the Balking Zephyr, in Attack Mode!” the mysterious man said. An elf appeared, a bird perched on its shoulder, who wore green clothing. [spoiler=info]Jyruun the Balking Zephyr••••WINDWarrior/Ally1500/1400While you control another Ally monster, once per turn you can change this card from face-up Attack Position to face-up Defense Position to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Ally monster in your Deck. If you activate this effect, this card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, except with a card effect. Once per turn you can move 1 Ally monster you control to Vector 1 or the last Vector in 1 Stack you control. “I now activate his special ability, allowing me to switch his battle position and Special Summon another monster from my Deck!” The elf crouched down and turned a discolored blue, signifying its battle change. At the same time, the bird flew off his shoulder, escaping the battle change. It flew into the air and began to glow. It then disappeared, and standing on the field was a new creature, a small man with a spirit on his shoulder. [spoiler=info]Albiien the Familiar Castor•••WATERSpellcaster/Ally700/1600Once per turn you can tribute 1 Ally monster you control, other than this card, to select 1 Ally monster you control. That monster can attack your opponent directly this turn. If your opponent controls 2 or less monsters during the turn you activate this effect, the damage inflicted is halved. “I activate the final ability of my Jyruun, moving my newly summoned Albiien the Familiar Castor to the bottom Vector of my largest Stack, with my Xinthis.” The man moved over behind the 3 other creatures, changing their levels. “But before their levels are officially calculated, I will use the ability of my Vector 1 Xinthi to copy the level of an Ally monster I control or that is in my Graveyard, and I select my Level 4 Thuxzu the Licentious Blade that I discarded last turn.” Stack ContentsXinthi #1 - Level 4 ~ Level 7 = 2100 ATKXinthi #2 - Level 1 ~ Level 2 = 600 ATKXinthi #3 - Level 1 ~ Level 1 = 300 ATKAlbiien #4 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “I now activate the special abilities of my Albiien! By releasing my Defense Position Jyruun, I can select 1 Ally monster to attack you directly! So I select my Vector 1 Xinthi!” The elf disappeared, fueling the energy of the little man. He generated an energy ball in the palm of his hand, and then threw it into the back of the top monster of his Stack. The monster began to glow, and it drew on that power to jump over the two opposing monsters and go straight for the opponent. Trey: 5650 – 3Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 3 “Since you had 2 monsters when I activated this effect the damage is halved,” Kal explained. Trey started to get furious. Not only did this attack not allow his Trap to activate as he had planned, but he was being toyed with. “You could have powered up that Xinthi of yours last turn, but you didn’t. You wanted me to attack you, and then allow you to attack me directly this turn for minimal damage each time. Why are you toying with me?” Trey asked angrily. The mysterious man grinned, though Trey was so far back he couldn’t have seen that. “I’m just having some fun.” This dude started to remind him of this one kid at Duel Academy when he attended there. But that guy’s deck was entirely different, no where close to this dueling style. “Well, do me a favor? Stop.” “I set one face-down and end,” the mysterious guy said, seemingly ignoring the last remark. Trey drew his card, wanting to end this duel this turn, if possible.” Trey: 5650 – 4Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 2 “Due to my Pycer’s effect, I lose 700 points for drawing my card.” Trey: 4950 – 4Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 2 “I Summon my Iengy the Discharge Combatant in Attack Position!” A flaming zombie appeared, holding a sword in one hand. To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Next I activate the Continuous Spell Card Discharge Wave!” Trey slid the card into one of five parallel slots on the dashboard of his D-Wheel, activating it. A green card appeared in holographics next to the D-Wheel.[spoiler=info]Discharge WaveContinuous Spell CardWhen a card(s) your opponent controls is destroyed by a "Discharge" card you control, inflict 700 damage to your opponent and add 1 Ember Counter to this card (max. 4). You can remove 2 Ember Counters from this card to increase the ATK of 1 "Discharge" Monster you control by 400 until the End Phase. “Now, my Pycer will attack your monster!” Just as the creature on the menacing horse was about to strike, the mysterious man activated his face-down yet again. “I activate my Quick-Play Spell Card, Battle Catapult Flare!” To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “This card makes it so that you lose Life Points for each Vector in one Stack I control, so since I control only one Stack, you lose 400 points for each of my 4 monsters, totaling 1600 damage!” The spell activated and disappeared, leaving the flames of combined force to be shoved straight back into the opposing D-Wheel, shoving Trey farther back down the long highway. Trey: 3350 – 2Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 2 This was ridiculous, Trey thought. There was no way that a random man could come up and challenge him to a duel and then beat him. No way. This was the most Life he had ever lost in an entire duel, and he vowed to himself that that would be the farthest that he would get. “When my Spell Card is sent to the Graveyard, I can remove it from play to add 1 Level 3 Ally monster in my Deck to my hand.” The mysterious man on the similar D-Wheel took a card from his deck in his dashboard and stuck it in his hand slot. “Pycer’s attack still goes through!” Trey said, anger teeming off his vocal cords. The creature swarmed straight through to the top Vector and smashed it into pieces. There was only a 100 ATK difference. Trey: 3350 – 2Mysterious Guy: 7300 – 3 “Remember my Equip Spell Card, Discharge Debris Gauntlet? Well, now its effect activates!” Pycer raised his arm, revealing a glove that started to glow blue. “When I destroy a monster of yours, the remnants of that creature combine with the flaming power of my creatures to form a Debris Token on your side of the field.” The glove glowed again, and a small creature appeared on the field in a monster card zone of its own. After all, a non-Ally monster can’t be on the top of the Stack. Debris Token: (Fiend-Type/FIRE/Level 2/ATK 700/DEF 700) “Now the effect of my Discharge Wave activates! Since I destroyed a card of yours with a Discharge Monster, you lose 700 more Life!” A wave of flames cascaded onto the opposing D-Wheel, taking a chunk out of his Life Points. Trey: 3350 – 2Mysterious Guy: 4800 – 3 “Now I attack that Debris Token with my Iengy!” Iengy went forward to destroy the Token, and with the included 700 damage from the Discharge Wave, the total damage came out to 1800. “Now the last effect of my Discharge Debris Gauntlet activates! I send the top 2 cards of my Deck to the Graveyard and I gain 600 Life Points since the Token was removed from the field!” Trey: 3950 – 2Mysterious Guy: 4800 – 3 This seemed to make Trey a bit happier; his D-Wheel started to merge the gap between them. The end of this road was coming up, and they both turned on the next long street. They ended up on the outer-belt highway that surrounded Aequitas. There was some traffic, but since it was late at night there was not much. They swerved in and around the slower cars, some honking their horns for either liking the duel or from the annoyance of having holographics obstruct their view of the road. It was illegal to duel on main roads, so many of them alerted the police. “Since my Vector 1 disappeared, a new Vector 1 took its place. This changes the Levels of my remaining 2 Xinthis.” The mysterious man said. Stack ContentsXinthi #1 - Level 2 ~ Level 3 = 900 ATKXinthi #2 - Level 1 ~ Level 1 = 300 ATKAlbiien #3 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “That creature still is not powerful enough to avoid destruction! My Keech will destroy that menace!” With the added damage from his Discharge Wave, the damage total came to 1200. Trey: 3950 – 2Mysterious Guy: 3600 – 3 Trey took the lead and passed the mysterious duelist by a few feet, narrowly missing a car on his way. “This changes the Level of my remaining Xinthi.” Stack Contents Xinthi #1 - Level 1 ~ Level 2 = 600 ATKAlbiien #2 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “This ends my turn.” Trey was still happy that there was still that face-down on his field. In total, he had 6 cards on the field, his 3 monsters, 2 spells, and 1 face-down. The mysterious guy only had 2, the two cards in his Stack. But he had hand advantage, 3 to 2. Who knows what is in his hand? The man drew his card in silence, contemplating what to do. He got an idea. “I Summon that creature I gathered with that Spell Card effect during your turn, my Biex the Frontline Vanguard!” The card flipped and revealed a man in a flowing, blue coat. [spoiler=info]Biex the Frontline Vanguard•••EARTHWarrior/Ally1500/100 Once per turn, you can reveal a number of Ally monsters in your hand. Increase this card's Level by 1 for each card you revealed. You can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 Ally monster from your Deck whose Level is equal to this card's Level. “Now I activate his special ability! By revealing these two monsters in my hand…” The mysterious man revealed a blue machine monster and a man in a white coat with magic flying from his hands. “…I can increase his Level by 2! And now I can remove him from the field to Special Summon a Level 5 monster from my Deck!” The monster kneeled down and formed a magic circle. In a flash of blue light the man disappeared and left in its place a man in white armor with a long sword. [spoiler=info]Kuure the Prodigal Force•••••WINDWarrior/Ally2200/1900Once per turn, move this card to Vector 1 of 1 Stack you control and add a number of Ally Counters to this card equal to the number of Vectors in it. You can remove 2 Ally Counters from this card to send 1 card on the field to the owner's hand. When this card is removed from the field, send 1 Level 3 or lower Ally monster in your Deck to the Graveyard. “Now I can activate the special ability of the my Kuure the Prodigal Force! I move him to The top Vector of my Stack to add 3 Ally Counters on him, one for each Vector in the Stack!” The monster moved, and then three glowing orbs appeared in front of him. “Now I remove 2 of them to send your face-down to your hand!” the mysterious man said. “Damn it!” Trey exclaimed. That was his only protection. He added it to his hand in anger. Stack Contents Kurure #1 ~ Level 5 = ATK 2200Xinthi #2 - Level 2 ~ Level 1 = 300 ATKAlbiien #3 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “Now I activate the final ability of my Xinthi the Assimilate Scanner. By paying 600 Life Points I can treat it as a Tuner monster. And with its first ability, I have its level treated as the same as my Albiien, so now it is level 3. Since there is a Vector above and below my Xinthi, there is no change in Level. Now that I have a level 5 monster and level 3 Tuner, I release them to Summon my Level 8 Synchro monster!” Vector 2 of the Stack separated in a flash of light into 3 glowing rings, which descended upon Vector 1. Kuure broke apart into 5 white orbs. All of the rings and orbs fell into each other, and in a flash of white light a monster was left in the place of the two. The monster was a man with black armor, and a long sword in its hands. [spoiler=info]Cocanxi the Slayer••••••••LIGHTWarrior/Synchro/Effect2500/1600 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.This card is treated as an Ally monster while it is Face-Up on the field and in the Graveyard. Once per turn you can select and activate 1 of the following effects: • Send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. • Tribute 1 monster you control and send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to destroy all monsters your opponent controls, then change this card into Defense Position. Trey: 3950 – 2Mysterious Guy: 3000 – 2 “When my Kuure is removed from the field, I can send 1 Level 3 or lower Ally monster in my Deck to the Graveyard, so I send my Jubex the Relentless Gear. This activates his effect, so I Special Summon him to the bottom Vector under my Albiien. This changes his Level to 2, since that is his Vector.” A monster appeared behind the man with the spirit on his shoulder, seemingly out of nowhere. To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Now I release this card for the effect of my Albiien, allowing my Cocanxi Synchro to attack you directly this turn!” The machine monster disappeared, leaving a glowing orb in the man’s hand. He used this to power up Cocanxi, which used that energy to hop over the enemy line of 3 monsters. Because he had over 2 monsters, the damage to Trey’s Life Points wasn’t halved. Trey: 1450 – 2Mysterious Guy: 3000 – 2 “Now the effect of my Cocanxi can be activated. I send the top card of my Deck to the Graveyard to destroy your Iengy.” The Synchro Monster slashed its sword, and the Zombie monster was destroyed. “I would have destroyed your stronger monster, but I remembered that cost for having it on the field. Each time you draw, you lose life. This will halve your remaining Life Points when you draw.” ‘Damn it,’ Trey thought. “I activate the special ability of my Xinthi. When it is in the Graveyard, I can remove it from play to draw a card.” Kal removed the card by sticking it in his breast pocket, and then he drew another card. “That ends my turn.” This man is really irritating to Trey. Not only was he making a fool of him, but he was winning! And having a grand time at his expense nonetheless! Trey was fueled with rage as he drew his card. “I take 700 damage from the effect of my Pycer.” Trey: 750 – 3Mysterious Guy: 3000 – 3 “Now I release my two remaining monsters, taking my equip spell with it, to Special Summon my Garawroth the Discharge Dragon from my hand!” To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Now the last effect of my Pycer is activated! Since he was sent to the Graveyard, I can Special Summon my Level 2 Tuner monster from my Deck! So I summon my Alede the Discharge Amalgamate!” To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Now that I have a Tuner and total Levels of 10, I can release these two monsters to summon my Synchro Monster, Ziranat the Discharge Hellion!!” The two monsters disappeared, breaking into 10 orbs of light and two rings. The rings and orbs fell into each other, breaking into a flash of white light. This left behind a monster, a terrifying flame dragon. [spoiler=info]Ziranat the Discharge Hellion••••••••••FIREDragon - Synchro - Effect3200/20001 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, you can destroy 1 card on the field. You can remove a number of "Discharge" cards in your Graveyard from play to increase this card's ATK by the number of cards you removed x 300. If you activate this effect, destroy this card during the End Phase and remove it from play. “Now, since it was Synchro Summoned, I can destroy 1 monster of yours! And I choose your Synchro Monster! And this will trigger the effect of my Discharge Wave, inflicting 700 damage to you!” The Dragon rose up into the air, poised for the attack. It sent a cascade of power into the opposing monster, destroying it on contact. This power also took a chunk out of the mysterious man’s Life. Trey: 750 – 2Mysterious Guy: 2300 – 3 “Now, when I attack your monster, this Duel is over!” Trey said, exalting prematurely his win. “You think that,” the mysterious man said. This threw off Trey. He wondered what else he could possibly have. Did he have something in his hand? Did he have a new card in the Graveyard? What did he have that could defeat his powerful Dragon? He decided to go for it and attack anyway. The Dragon was poised for the attack, getting ready to through the final blow. That was when they heard the first siren. “What is that?” Trey asked aloud. “Crap, they found us…” the mysterious man said, “I have to leave.” “You can’t leave now! This duel isn’t over yet,” Trey responded, angered. “You don’t understand, Trey. If I don’t get out of here now, this would have been for nothing. I know you are who I was looking for now. And if the DPF find us they will take us both away. I cannot let this happen.” “How the hell did you know my name?” “I know more about you than you think.” “How?” Trey was irritated more than he had been that night. His eyes began to glow a faint red color, something that only the mysterious guy noticed. His eyes grew wide. “Follow me, now. Turn off your D-Wheel and come with me, I have a safe place.” “And why would I trust you.” “I figured you would ask that.” The mysterious man turned his D-Wheel around, so he was essentially driving backward. He then took off his helmet, revealing his true identity. He had longish, dark hair and blue eyes. His face seemed perfect, like a movie-star. Trey’s eyes grew wide. “I am Kal Iszarc.” Trey wanted to know more about this guy, so even though he was reluctant to follow him he decided to go anyway. Kal turned his D-Wheel around, and following closely was Trey. This was the beginning of something bigger, but Trey didn’t know what. He had hinted at it being something bigger, but he never expanded that thought. What what it? To be Continued… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 View in my blog, Please post comments here. [spoiler=Chapter 3: Dissension] 2 Months Ago Kal walked over to the elevator, sliding the key into the newly upgraded key slot to get to the top floor as he entered, completely ignoring the many faces that were still staring at his godly perfect figure. He was only thinking about the squatter that was using his penthouse prize for their own. But who could have told the clerk that he wouldn’t have minded if she stayed? Why would someone do that? Kal couldn’t wrap his mind around it, but he was determined to find out who it was. They couldn’t stand against him, not with his cyber limbs. The elevator stopped; Kal got off on the top floor: his apartment. The doors didn’t make a sound as he entered, and his lithe form made him quieter than a cat in a field of mice. That is when he started noticing subtle changes in the atmosphere in the apartment. The front entryway now had interesting paintings of abstract shapes; the walls were painted a very bright white; the furniture was very ultra modern. The apartment was very clean, very streamline. It looked very impressive, but it didn’t have the original homely feel that Pegasus had in it. But this was just the entryway; he still had the rest of the apartment to go through. He walked through the wide, but short hallway across from the entryway, past the closets and the bathroom and into the great room. The kitchen was updated: deep marble counters, stainless steel appliances, stone tiles. The ultra-modern feel continued into the living room, where there were several new couches and chairs where the three large, comfy couches used to be. He was happy to see the enormous flat screen still where it was originally. ‘What happened here?’ Kal thought to himself. That is when he heard something: from the start he had heard a strange noise, like the sound of running water. But it was really faint, and he thought that it could have been from somewhere downstairs. But then he heard the water stop, and he heard some rustling around further down in the apartment. Kal walked back to the master bedroom at the end of the great room, determined to find the person who had taken over his space. Kal walked into the bedroom, which had too changed into a more modern space, with a monochromatic white to black atmosphere. He walked back to the private master bath, the door being closed, where the noise had been coming from. He heard something rustling, but he couldn’t be sure what it was. That is when the door suddenly opened, and out came a woman in only a towel. Kal was startled at first: out of all the people that could have been in his apartment a half-naked woman comes out of his bathroom? The woman had semi-short, straight, dark hair which was hanging in front of her face. She had somewhat light skin, and she was of average height. She flipped the hair out of her face, revealing large, perfect lips, a soft, sanguine face, and eyes that were of the most startling green. That is when she noticed that Kal was standing there. She almost screamed, fear in her eyes, but that immediately dissolved into confusion. “Kal…?” she asked to the figure in front of her. “Talia…?” Kal asked the woman standing in front of him. It was true: the woman that he was looking for was the very same woman that was staying in his apartment. How opportune. “What happened to you? You look… amazing,” she said, seeming to be a little taken aback from the result of the procedure that he had undergone. “You are the woman in my apartment?” Kal asked, completely ignoring the compliment he just got. Talia stared at him angrily; the happiness of seeing him suddenly all disappeared. “More like keeping it from going on the market. And do I hear a ‘thank you’?” Talia said, heavy with the attitude. Kal had never thought of it that way. “How long have you been here?” Kal asked, trying to ask in a way that wouldn’t provoke her. “How about I change into some clothes and I tell you the entire story? I’m starting to feel uncomfortable…” Talia motioned to the towel, which was considerably too small to stay on by itself. She had to hold it with a tight grip to keep it from falling straight off. Kal blushed. “Right, umm... I will just go out into the great room…” Kal said, hurrying his way out of the room. Talia closed the door behind him, swinging herself back-first onto the door. She smiled to herself, and then set off to finish readying herself. Kal decided to sit and let his batteries start recharging. He didn’t know how busy he would be, and he didn’t know how often he would need to, so he just decided to start. A few minutes later, Talia, dressed in a spaghetti strap halter top and some shorts, came out of her room, all dressed up. Somehow her hair became entirely dry just after five minutes, but he hadn’t heard a hair dryer. He was curious as to how she did that, but it was not important enough for him to ask. He just liked that it was dry; the way she had her hair fixed was extremely attractive to Kal. It was almost like she dressed to suit everything he liked, but he couldn’t think that. He had to believe that it was a coincidence. “So…” Kal said, “How long have you been here?” “Right to the point, huh? Well…” Talia walked over to the kitchen area and fixed a glass of water, “I have been here around three months.” “That is around the time I… left,” Kal censored his sentence. He didn’t want to drop his problem on her too fast. “Yeah, I know. Why was that?” Kal became very anxious, “Umm… I thought this was your story?” Talia seemed pleased by this non-answer, as she kept talking, “Well then, when I was released from the hospital wing downstairs I went looking for you. I wanted to find out just what this apartment looked like, to see you basking in the glory of winning the tournament. But when I went looking I couldn’t find you.” She also wanted to add that she had hoped to see him there when she woke up, but that further disappointed her. “So, when I went up here, I found that the elevator let me off, even though I didn’t have a key. I was not sure why that happened; I am leaving it to chance. But when I looked around in here you still weren’t to be found. So, I decided to stay, just incase you came back.” She edited out that she wanted to surprise him while he was there, but she would have been embarrassed if she had actually said that. “One day I was confronted by the woman downstairs, the one who runs the front desk. A large package for you came from Pegasus, and it didn’t fit in your mailbox. So she hand-delivered it. She didn’t believe my story that I was a friend, and that you allowed me to stay. She threatened to turn me in, and at that I decided to pay her off, so that she would stay quiet. It worked, and she left me alone.” Talia drank half the glass of water and walked over to the chair next to the couch that Kal was sitting on, sitting her glass on a side table between the two pieces of furniture. “Days turned into weeks, and those into months. And you never returned. So, slowly, I remodeled the place. I honestly didn’t know if you were coming back.” Kal looked down, not knowing what to say. He didn’t know if he could bring himself to tell her that he was abducted, much less that he was not even human anymore. “Where have you been all this time?” The dreaded question was asked yet again, and Kal didn’t know how to answer. He didn’t want to; he wished that he would have just left her out of this. Now that she had seen him, talked to him, she was an accessory. She could get in trouble with the DPF just as much as he could. “Kal?” Talia asked, her voice shaking. Kal looked up at her; if he were human a tear would have been coming down his face. He didn’t have that luxury anymore. “Talia, I…” Talia, fearing the worst, started to cry. “What happened to you, Kal?” as she said this, she moved from that separate chair to the seat next to him. She wrapped her arms around his closest arm, trying to both comfort him and herself. When she touched him, though, she noticed that something was different. His skin, though seeming to have the texture of skin, didn’t have the temperature. He felt so cold, like he had not been heated inside. He wasn’t like ice; he just wasn’t up to the normal temperature he should have been. It was almost like he had no heat at all. He also seemed tougher, like he was more solid under that skin than muscles and bones allowed. It almost felt like he had one, large, sculpted bone that supported his arm, like it wasn’t even real. Talia cringed and shirked away. Kal looked at her, anguish in his eyes. “What happened to you?” she asked again. “I…” Kal couldn’t bring himself to say it. ‘Program Malfunction, Irrational Compute – Unable to Complete Request,’ the on-board computer said in his head. He didn’t understand what it meant, but all of a sudden he began to feel odd, like he couldn’t move. His two ideas must have conflicted, and so he froze. He had to tell her now, because if he wanted to and he didn’t, he would never unfreeze. ‘Cruddy computer system…’ Kal thought to himself. He would have to review this, so that this never happened again. Kal decided to tell her, and he instantly unfroze from his stance. “Talia, on the day that I won the tournament I came up here to see the prize after I left you in the hospital wing. When I got up here I was abducted, taken to the Cyborg Unit of the DPF. The transformed me… It must have taken a long time to completely remake me, because when I woke up it was three months later, today. I escaped, and I came to see you.” Talia couldn’t believe the words at first, but she slowly began to put the facts together. He was cold, hard, and undeniably gorgeous. This fits in with his story about a remake, and his story about the three month procedure explained his disappearance for forever. She didn’t need any more explanation than that. She put her arms around him, holding his perfect body against hers. “I hoped that I would see you again, Kal.” Kal turned to face her, “I hoped that I would find you.” For a moment they stared into each others eyes, holding each other in embrace. There was a power emanating between them, and they could both feel it. The both moved forward at the same time, kissing each other so deeply that they felt they would never part again. Present Day: Down Town Aequitas Trey: 8000 – 3Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 3 “Now I activate the Equip Spell Card Discharge Debris Gauntlet, and equip it to my Pycer!” The card flipped and revealed itself, increasing the ATK of the monster by 500. Pycer- ATK: 1700 ~ 2200 “Now, Pycer, attack his machine!” The monster on horseback went to strike, moving closer to the enemy line. It went to strike Vector 1 of the opponent’s Stack, which happened to be the third Xinthi the Assimilate Scanner, and this one had a level of 3. This made its ATK 900, by its effect. The 900 ATK monster didn’t seem to stand a chance against the Pycer coming its way. “I activate my Trap Card, Assimilation Block Defense!” the mysterious man said, revealing the face-down card on the field. To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “What does that do?” Trey asked, irritated. “It makes it so that my monsters aren’t destroyed this turn, and you take the damage from an attack, since I have three monsters with the same name.” Pycer ran straight into a Trap, and a cheap one at that. Not only is that Trap chainable, but it ruins the sport of high-powered monsters. This man certainly duels differently than the real Kal, not this two-bit hack that hides behind non-Ally support. Trey was sure that this man could not be Kal Iszarc. He was sure of it. As soon as Pycer touched the Xinthi it backfired. Flames shot straight back from the machine and into the D-Wheel of Trey, knocking him off balance. He was sent farther behind the mysterious man, signifying the turn of the duel to his favor. Trey: 6700 – 3Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 3 “Care to attack again?” the mysterious man asked, goading him. “No, you imbecile. I will not fall for that again. I set one card face-down and end my turn. The mysterious man drew his card out of the dashboard of his D-Wheel and stuck it in his hand-slot of the left arm rest on the side. Trey: 6700 – 2Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 4 “I Summon my Jyruun the Balking Zephyr, in Attack Mode!” the mysterious man said. An elf appeared, a bird perched on its shoulder, who wore green clothing. [spoiler=info]Jyruun the Balking Zephyr••••WINDWarrior/Ally1500/1400While you control another Ally monster, once per turn you can change this card from face-up Attack Position to face-up Defense Position to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Ally monster in your Deck. If you activate this effect, this card's battle position cannot be changed until the end of your next turn, except with a card effect. Once per turn you can move 1 Ally monster you control to Vector 1 or the last Vector in 1 Stack you control. “I now activate his special ability, allowing me to switch his battle position and Special Summon another monster from my Deck!” The elf crouched down and turned a discolored blue, signifying its battle change. At the same time, the bird flew off his shoulder, escaping the battle change. It flew into the air and began to glow. It then disappeared, and standing on the field was a new creature, a small man with a spirit on his shoulder. [spoiler=info]Albiien the Familiar Castor•••WATERSpellcaster/Ally700/1600Once per turn you can tribute 1 Ally monster you control, other than this card, to select 1 Ally monster you control. That monster can attack your opponent directly this turn. If your opponent controls 2 or less monsters during the turn you activate this effect, the damage inflicted is halved. “I activate the final ability of my Jyruun, moving my newly summoned Albiien the Familiar Castor to the bottom Vector of my largest Stack, with my Xinthis.” The man moved over behind the 3 other creatures, changing their levels. “But before their levels are officially calculated, I will use the ability of my Vector 1 Xinthi to copy the level of an Ally monster I control or that is in my Graveyard, and I select my Level 4 Thuxzu the Licentious Blade that I discarded last turn.” Stack ContentsXinthi #1 - Level 4 ~ Level 7 = 2100 ATKXinthi #2 - Level 1 ~ Level 2 = 600 ATKXinthi #3 - Level 1 ~ Level 1 = 300 ATKAlbiien #4 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “I now activate the special abilities of my Albiien! By releasing my Defense Position Jyruun, I can select 1 Ally monster to attack you directly! So I select my Vector 1 Xinthi!” The elf disappeared, fueling the energy of the little man. He generated an energy ball in the palm of his hand, and then threw it into the back of the top monster of his Stack. The monster began to glow, and it drew on that power to jump over the two opposing monsters and go straight for the opponent. Trey: 5650 – 3Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 3 “Since you had 2 monsters when I activated this effect the damage is halved,” Kal explained. Trey started to get furious. Not only did this attack not allow his Trap to activate as he had planned, but he was being toyed with. “You could have powered up that Xinthi of yours last turn, but you didn’t. You wanted me to attack you, and then allow you to attack me directly this turn for minimal damage each time. Why are you toying with me?” Trey asked angrily. The mysterious man grinned, though Trey was so far back he couldn’t have seen that. “I’m just having some fun.” This dude started to remind him of this one kid at Duel Academy when he attended there. But that guy’s deck was entirely different, no where close to this dueling style. “Well, do me a favor? Stop.” “I set one face-down and end,” the mysterious guy said, seemingly ignoring the last remark. Trey drew his card, wanting to end this duel this turn, if possible.” Trey: 5650 – 4Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 2 “Due to my Pycer’s effect, I lose 700 points for drawing my card.” Trey: 4950 – 4Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 2 “I Summon my Iengy the Discharge Combatant in Attack Position!” A flaming zombie appeared, holding a sword in one hand. To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Next I activate the Continuous Spell Card Discharge Wave!” Trey slid the card into one of five parallel slots on the dashboard of his D-Wheel, activating it. A green card appeared in holographics next to the D-Wheel.[spoiler=info]Discharge WaveContinuous Spell CardWhen a card(s) your opponent controls is destroyed by a "Discharge" card you control, inflict 700 damage to your opponent and add 1 Ember Counter to this card (max. 4). You can remove 2 Ember Counters from this card to increase the ATK of 1 "Discharge" Monster you control by 400 until the End Phase. “Now, my Pycer will attack your monster!” Just as the creature on the menacing horse was about to strike, the mysterious man activated his face-down yet again. “I activate my Quick-Play Spell Card, Battle Catapult Flare!” To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “This card makes it so that you lose Life Points for each Vector in one Stack I control, so since I control only one Stack, you lose 400 points for each of my 4 monsters, totaling 1600 damage!” The spell activated and disappeared, leaving the flames of combined force to be shoved straight back into the opposing D-Wheel, shoving Trey farther back down the long highway. Trey: 3350 – 2Mysterious Guy: 7400 – 2 This was ridiculous, Trey thought. There was no way that a random man could come up and challenge him to a duel and then beat him. No way. This was the most Life he had ever lost in an entire duel, and he vowed to himself that that would be the farthest that he would get. “When my Spell Card is sent to the Graveyard, I can remove it from play to add 1 Level 3 Ally monster in my Deck to my hand.” The mysterious man on the similar D-Wheel took a card from his deck in his dashboard and stuck it in his hand slot. “Pycer’s attack still goes through!” Trey said, anger teeming off his vocal cords. The creature swarmed straight through to the top Vector and smashed it into pieces. There was only a 100 ATK difference. Trey: 3350 – 2Mysterious Guy: 7300 – 3 “Remember my Equip Spell Card, Discharge Debris Gauntlet? Well, now its effect activates!” Pycer raised his arm, revealing a glove that started to glow blue. “When I destroy a monster of yours, the remnants of that creature combine with the flaming power of my creatures to form a Debris Token on your side of the field.” The glove glowed again, and a small creature appeared on the field in a monster card zone of its own. After all, a non-Ally monster can’t be on the top of the Stack. Debris Token: (Fiend-Type/FIRE/Level 2/ATK 700/DEF 700) “Now the effect of my Discharge Wave activates! Since I destroyed a card of yours with a Discharge Monster, you lose 700 more Life!” A wave of flames cascaded onto the opposing D-Wheel, taking a chunk out of his Life Points. Trey: 3350 – 2Mysterious Guy: 4800 – 3 “Now I attack that Debris Token with my Iengy!” Iengy went forward to destroy the Token, and with the included 700 damage from the Discharge Wave, the total damage came out to 1800. “Now the last effect of my Discharge Debris Gauntlet activates! I send the top 2 cards of my Deck to the Graveyard and I gain 600 Life Points since the Token was removed from the field!” Trey: 3950 – 2Mysterious Guy: 4800 – 3 This seemed to make Trey a bit happier; his D-Wheel started to merge the gap between them. The end of this road was coming up, and they both turned on the next long street. They ended up on the outer-belt highway that surrounded Aequitas. There was some traffic, but since it was late at night there was not much. They swerved in and around the slower cars, some honking their horns for either liking the duel or from the annoyance of having holographics obstruct their view of the road. It was illegal to duel on main roads, so many of them alerted the police. “Since my Vector 1 disappeared, a new Vector 1 took its place. This changes the Levels of my remaining 2 Xinthis.” The mysterious man said. Stack ContentsXinthi #1 - Level 2 ~ Level 3 = 900 ATKXinthi #2 - Level 1 ~ Level 1 = 300 ATKAlbiien #3 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “That creature still is not powerful enough to avoid destruction! My Keech will destroy that menace!” With the added damage from his Discharge Wave, the damage total came to 1200. Trey: 3950 – 2Mysterious Guy: 3600 – 3 Trey took the lead and passed the mysterious duelist by a few feet, narrowly missing a car on his way. “This changes the Level of my remaining Xinthi.” Stack Contents Xinthi #1 - Level 1 ~ Level 2 = 600 ATKAlbiien #2 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “This ends my turn.” Trey was still happy that there was still that face-down on his field. In total, he had 6 cards on the field, his 3 monsters, 2 spells, and 1 face-down. The mysterious guy only had 2, the two cards in his Stack. But he had hand advantage, 3 to 2. Who knows what is in his hand? The man drew his card in silence, contemplating what to do. He got an idea. “I Summon that creature I gathered with that Spell Card effect during your turn, my Biex the Frontline Vanguard!” The card flipped and revealed a man in a flowing, blue coat. [spoiler=info]Biex the Frontline Vanguard•••EARTHWarrior/Ally1500/100 Once per turn, you can reveal a number of Ally monsters in your hand. Increase this card's Level by 1 for each card you revealed. You can tribute this card to Special Summon 1 Ally monster from your Deck whose Level is equal to this card's Level. “Now I activate his special ability! By revealing these two monsters in my hand…” The mysterious man revealed a blue machine monster and a man in a white coat with magic flying from his hands. “…I can increase his Level by 2! And now I can remove him from the field to Special Summon a Level 5 monster from my Deck!” The monster kneeled down and formed a magic circle. In a flash of blue light the man disappeared and left in its place a man in white armor with a long sword. [spoiler=info]Kuure the Prodigal Force•••••WINDWarrior/Ally2200/1900Once per turn, move this card to Vector 1 of 1 Stack you control and add a number of Ally Counters to this card equal to the number of Vectors in it. You can remove 2 Ally Counters from this card to send 1 card on the field to the owner's hand. When this card is removed from the field, send 1 Level 3 or lower Ally monster in your Deck to the Graveyard. “Now I can activate the special ability of the my Kuure the Prodigal Force! I move him to The top Vector of my Stack to add 3 Ally Counters on him, one for each Vector in the Stack!” The monster moved, and then three glowing orbs appeared in front of him. “Now I remove 2 of them to send your face-down to your hand!” the mysterious man said. “Damn it!” Trey exclaimed. That was his only protection. He added it to his hand in anger. Stack Contents Kurure #1 ~ Level 5 = ATK 2200Xinthi #2 - Level 2 ~ Level 1 = 300 ATKAlbiien #3 - Level 3 = 700 ATK “Now I activate the final ability of my Xinthi the Assimilate Scanner. By paying 600 Life Points I can treat it as a Tuner monster. And with its first ability, I have its level treated as the same as my Albiien, so now it is level 3. Since there is a Vector above and below my Xinthi, there is no change in Level. Now that I have a level 5 monster and level 3 Tuner, I release them to Summon my Level 8 Synchro monster!” Vector 2 of the Stack separated in a flash of light into 3 glowing rings, which descended upon Vector 1. Kuure broke apart into 5 white orbs. All of the rings and orbs fell into each other, and in a flash of white light a monster was left in the place of the two. The monster was a man with black armor, and a long sword in its hands. [spoiler=info]Cocanxi the Slayer••••••••LIGHTWarrior/Synchro/Effect2500/1600 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters.This card is treated as an Ally monster while it is Face-Up on the field and in the Graveyard. Once per turn you can select and activate 1 of the following effects: • Send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. • Tribute 1 monster you control and send the top 3 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard to destroy all monsters your opponent controls, then change this card into Defense Position. Trey: 3950 – 2Mysterious Guy: 3000 – 2 “When my Kuure is removed from the field, I can send 1 Level 3 or lower Ally monster in my Deck to the Graveyard, so I send my Jubex the Relentless Gear. This activates his effect, so I Special Summon him to the bottom Vector under my Albiien. This changes his Level to 2, since that is his Vector.” A monster appeared behind the man with the spirit on his shoulder, seemingly out of nowhere. To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Now I release this card for the effect of my Albiien, allowing my Cocanxi Synchro to attack you directly this turn!” The machine monster disappeared, leaving a glowing orb in the man’s hand. He used this to power up Cocanxi, which used that energy to hop over the enemy line of 3 monsters. Because he had over 2 monsters, the damage to Trey’s Life Points wasn’t halved. Trey: 1450 – 2Mysterious Guy: 3000 – 2 “Now the effect of my Cocanxi can be activated. I send the top card of my Deck to the Graveyard to destroy your Iengy.” The Synchro Monster slashed its sword, and the Zombie monster was destroyed. “I would have destroyed your stronger monster, but I remembered that cost for having it on the field. Each time you draw, you lose life. This will halve your remaining Life Points when you draw.” ‘Damn it,’ Trey thought. “I activate the special ability of my Xinthi. When it is in the Graveyard, I can remove it from play to draw a card.” Kal removed the card by sticking it in his breast pocket, and then he drew another card. “That ends my turn.” This man is really irritating to Trey. Not only was he making a fool of him, but he was winning! And having a grand time at his expense nonetheless! Trey was fueled with rage as he drew his card. “I take 700 damage from the effect of my Pycer.” Trey: 750 – 3Mysterious Guy: 3000 – 3 “Now I release my two remaining monsters, taking my equip spell with it, to Special Summon my Garawroth the Discharge Dragon from my hand!” To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Now the last effect of my Pycer is activated! Since he was sent to the Graveyard, I can Special Summon my Level 2 Tuner monster from my Deck! So I summon my Alede the Discharge Amalgamate!” To see this card, go to: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-105340.html “Now that I have a Tuner and total Levels of 10, I can release these two monsters to summon my Synchro Monster, Ziranat the Discharge Hellion!!” The two monsters disappeared, breaking into 10 orbs of light and two rings. The rings and orbs fell into each other, breaking into a flash of white light. This left behind a monster, a terrifying flame dragon. [spoiler=info]Ziranat the Discharge Hellion••••••••••FIREDragon - Synchro - Effect3200/20001 Tuner + 2 or more non-Tuner monstersWhen this card is Synchro Summoned, you can destroy 1 card on the field. You can remove a number of "Discharge" cards in your Graveyard from play to increase this card's ATK by the number of cards you removed x 300. If you activate this effect, destroy this card during the End Phase and remove it from play. “Now, since it was Synchro Summoned, I can destroy 1 monster of yours! And I choose your Synchro Monster! And this will trigger the effect of my Discharge Wave, inflicting 700 damage to you!” The Dragon rose up into the air, poised for the attack. It sent a cascade of power into the opposing monster, destroying it on contact. This power also took a chunk out of the mysterious man’s Life. Trey: 750 – 2Mysterious Guy: 2300 – 3 “Now, when I attack your monster, this Duel is over!” Trey said, exalting prematurely his win. “You think that,” the mysterious man said. This threw off Trey. He wondered what else he could possibly have. Did he have something in his hand? Did he have a new card in the Graveyard? What did he have that could defeat his powerful Dragon? He decided to go for it and attack anyway. The Dragon was poised for the attack, getting ready to through the final blow. That was when they heard the first siren. “What is that?” Trey asked aloud. “Crap, they found us…” the mysterious man said, “I have to leave.” “You can’t leave now! This duel isn’t over yet,” Trey responded, angered. “You don’t understand, Trey. If I don’t get out of here now, this would have been for nothing. I know you are who I was looking for now. And if the DPF find us they will take us both away. I cannot let this happen.” “How the hell did you know my name?” “I know more about you than you think.” “How?” Trey was irritated more than he had been that night. His eyes began to glow a faint red color, something that only the mysterious guy noticed. His eyes grew wide. “Follow me, now. Turn off your D-Wheel and come with me, I have a safe place.” “And why would I trust you.” “I figured you would ask that.” The mysterious man turned his D-Wheel around, so he was essentially driving backward. He then took off his helmet, revealing his true identity. He had longish, dark hair and blue eyes. His face seemed perfect, like a movie-star. Trey’s eyes grew wide. “I am Kal Iszarc.” Trey wanted to know more about this guy, so even though he was reluctant to follow him he decided to go anyway. Kal turned his D-Wheel around, and following closely was Trey. This was the beginning of something bigger, but Trey didn’t know what. He had hinted at it being something bigger, but he never expanded that thought. What what it? To be Continued… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Καsτοr Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I had a good Friday night too, Kale. On Topic: I looved the 3rd Chapter. All my suspicions were correct! Yes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I had a good Friday night too, Kale. On Topic: I looved the 3rd Chapter. All my suspicions were correct! Yes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 I had a good Friday night too, Kale. On Topic: I looved the 3rd Chapter. All my suspicions were correct! Yes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Yay Chapter 3 It was awesome.....MOAR! im getting to it as fast as possible. ;) I had a good Friday night too' date=' Kale. On Topic: I looved the 3rd Chapter. All my suspicions were correct! Yes![/size'] Yep! They were! Thanks for reading! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Yay Chapter 3 It was awesome.....MOAR! im getting to it as fast as possible. ;) I had a good Friday night too' date=' Kale. On Topic: I looved the 3rd Chapter. All my suspicions were correct! Yes![/size'] Yep! They were! Thanks for reading! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Yay Chapter 3 It was awesome.....MOAR! im getting to it as fast as possible. ;) I had a good Friday night too' date=' Kale. On Topic: I looved the 3rd Chapter. All my suspicions were correct! Yes![/size'] Yep! They were! Thanks for reading! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 the mysterious guy is quite wierd good chapter kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 the mysterious guy is quite wierd good chapter kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 the mysterious guy is quite wierd good chapter kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 So it's treu! It was Kal all the time!? I thought you put in Kal's name on accident! (I'm talking about when Kal was the Mysterious Guy. You typed it was Kal at random turns.) Woot woot woot! I totally loved the lovey-dovey scene. Good job Kale! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 So it's treu! It was Kal all the time!? I thought you put in Kal's name on accident! (I'm talking about when Kal was the Mysterious Guy. You typed it was Kal at random turns.) Woot woot woot! I totally loved the lovey-dovey scene. Good job Kale! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 So it's treu! It was Kal all the time!? I thought you put in Kal's name on accident! (I'm talking about when Kal was the Mysterious Guy. You typed it was Kal at random turns.) Woot woot woot! I totally loved the lovey-dovey scene. Good job Kale! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 the mysterious guy is quite wierd good chapter kale yeah' date=' that dude is Kal.. :D thanks for reading. ;) So it's treu! It was Kal all the time!? I thought you put in Kal's name on accident! (I'm talking about when Kal was the Mysterious Guy. You typed it was Kal at random turns.) Woot woot woot! I totally loved the lovey-dovey scene. Good job Kale! i thought i did that.. oops.. :D well, it didnt really hurt the storyline i suppose.. i liked that scene too.. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 the mysterious guy is quite wierd good chapter kale yeah' date=' that dude is Kal.. :D thanks for reading. ;) So it's treu! It was Kal all the time!? I thought you put in Kal's name on accident! (I'm talking about when Kal was the Mysterious Guy. You typed it was Kal at random turns.) Woot woot woot! I totally loved the lovey-dovey scene. Good job Kale! i thought i did that.. oops.. :D well, it didnt really hurt the storyline i suppose.. i liked that scene too.. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted April 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 the mysterious guy is quite wierd good chapter kale yeah' date=' that dude is Kal.. :D thanks for reading. ;) So it's treu! It was Kal all the time!? I thought you put in Kal's name on accident! (I'm talking about when Kal was the Mysterious Guy. You typed it was Kal at random turns.) Woot woot woot! I totally loved the lovey-dovey scene. Good job Kale! i thought i did that.. oops.. :D well, it didnt really hurt the storyline i suppose.. i liked that scene too.. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Wow. so it was Kal...cool. I really like the duel. :) I can't wait for Chapter 4. I'll be sure to check it out. Kinda Off-topic: I read ths chapter outside while me and my family was fishing. I love laptops and wireless internet connection. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Wow. so it was Kal...cool. I really like the duel. :) I can't wait for Chapter 4. I'll be sure to check it out. Kinda Off-topic: I read ths chapter outside while me and my family was fishing. I love laptops and wireless internet connection. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted April 18, 2009 Report Share Posted April 18, 2009 Wow. so it was Kal...cool. I really like the duel. :) I can't wait for Chapter 4. I'll be sure to check it out. Kinda Off-topic: I read ths chapter outside while me and my family was fishing. I love laptops and wireless internet connection. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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