legendhiro Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 started another one, huh? can you pm me about new chapters too? and if you don't mind, can you critique my fic. i've been working on it for years but just recently got the idea to post it (i'm a little slow) and i would be honored if you were t check it out! the link is in my siggy ^__^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Awesome new fic, Kale. 10/10 *Immediately asks for subscription in order to read Chapter 2 ASAP* "He's one of them." That sounds somthing like a Signer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Awesome new fic' date=' Kale. 10/10 *Immediately asks for subscription in order to read Chapter 2 ASAP* "He's one of them." That sounds somthing like a Signer.[/quote']I doubt it. If you check up on the Levels of all the monsters used in that Synchro Summon, they don't tally up to Level 7/8 (Signer Dragon Level) Alede(Level 2 Tuner)+Irith(Level 6 non-Tuner)+Grivelle(Level 2 non-Tuner)= Level 10 Synchro. (most likely another Discharge monster) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast 123 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Awesome new fic' date=' Kale. 10/10 *Immediately asks for subscription in order to read Chapter 2 ASAP* "He's one of them." That sounds somthing like a Signer.[/quote']I doubt it. If you check up on the Levels of all the monsters used in that Synchro Summon, they don't tally up to Level 7/8 (Signer Dragon Level) Alede(Level 2 Tuner)+Irith(Level 6 non-Tuner)+Grivelle(Level 2 non-Tuner)= Level 10 Synchro. (most likely another Discharge monster)Sorry. I didn't mean he WAS a Signer, but that dude watching him said "He's one of them." It's like he is a special person, and that he said "them" means that there are more than one. To me, it's sorta like a Signer, but different. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Awesome new fic' date=' Kale. 10/10 *Immediately asks for subscription in order to read Chapter 2 ASAP* "He's one of them." That sounds somthing like a Signer.[/quote']I doubt it. If you check up on the Levels of all the monsters used in that Synchro Summon, they don't tally up to Level 7/8 (Signer Dragon Level) Alede(Level 2 Tuner)+Irith(Level 6 non-Tuner)+Grivelle(Level 2 non-Tuner)= Level 10 Synchro. (most likely another Discharge monster)Sorry. I didn't mean he WAS a Signer, but that dude watching him said "He's one of them." It's like he is a special person, and that he said "them" means that there are more than one. To me, it's sorta like a Signer, but different.Based on the surrounding destruction caused, I think he may be something like a Psycho Duelist like Aki & Divine & all of Arcadia Movement Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Nice new fan-fic I hope it gets the same popularity as your last one. Lol, Ojamas ftw! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Great, as always. Subscription please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 i love your new fic' date=' 10/10, can i have a supsciption,Also will you check out my fan fic?i just noticed are you bringing back Kal[/quote'] oh yeah, i have. ;) subscription added. You put individual chapters in their own various pages...that could get messy & cloggy on the forum. Regardless' date=' it is a good 1st chapter & I knew there will be synchros, but you have to keep it secret for now! Rating: 8.5/10 P.S. I want to subscribe it just like before.[/quote'] im not quite sure what you mean by cloggy, i only have this one thread... are you referring to Edge of Justice being in a completely different place? well, there is a reason for that... Kal was the star in that fic, Trey is the star in this one. ;) Sub. added. Thanks Kale-sama! you are very welcome. ;) started another one' date=' huh? can you pm me about new chapters too? and if you don't mind, can you critique my fic. i've been working on it for years but just recently got the idea to post it (i'm a little slow) and i would be honored if you were t check it out! the link is in my siggy ^__^[/quote'] Sub. Added! :D and sure, i will try to do that.. ;) better late than never, eh? Awesome new fic' date=' Kale. 10/10 *Immediately asks for subscription in order to read Chapter 2 ASAP* "He's one of them." That sounds somthing like a Signer.[/quote']I doubt it. If you check up on the Levels of all the monsters used in that Synchro Summon, they don't tally up to Level 7/8 (Signer Dragon Level) Alede(Level 2 Tuner)+Irith(Level 6 non-Tuner)+Grivelle(Level 2 non-Tuner)= Level 10 Synchro. (most likely another Discharge monster)Sorry. I didn't mean he WAS a Signer, but that dude watching him said "He's one of them." It's like he is a special person, and that he said "them" means that there are more than one. To me, it's sorta like a Signer, but different.Based on the surrounding destruction caused, I think he may be something like a Psycho Duelist like Aki & Divine & all of Arcadia Movement ...i need to catch up on the Japanese 5D's.. :| anywho, you will see soon enough what i mean. ;) Nice new fan-fic I hope it gets the same popularity as your last one. Lol' date=' Ojamas ftw![/quote'] i hope so too! :D yeah, i saw the new Ojamas being released, and i wanted to see what they could do against my character. subscription? :) Great' date=' as always. Subscription please.[/quote'] thanks! Sub. Added. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Whoa, amazing work Kale. A good introduction. And lol, dueling over bike. The duel was really good and enjoyed it, it's nice to see the Ojamas were involved for a change. And I like the fact you made it more interesting at the end as it seemed like he couldn't win. Nice fanfiction, I hope to read more soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Awesome new fic' date=' Kale. 10/10 *Immediately asks for subscription in order to read Chapter 2 ASAP* "He's one of them." That sounds somthing like a Signer.[/quote']I doubt it. If you check up on the Levels of all the monsters used in that Synchro Summon, they don't tally up to Level 7/8 (Signer Dragon Level) Alede(Level 2 Tuner)+Irith(Level 6 non-Tuner)+Grivelle(Level 2 non-Tuner)= Level 10 Synchro. (most likely another Discharge monster)Sorry. I didn't mean he WAS a Signer, but that dude watching him said "He's one of them." It's like he is a special person, and that he said "them" means that there are more than one. To me, it's sorta like a Signer, but different.Based on the surrounding destruction caused, I think he may be something like a Psycho Duelist like Aki & Divine & all of Arcadia Movement ...i need to catch up on the Japanese 5D's.. :| anywho, you will see soon enough what i mean. ;)Thanks for subbing me in this thing. So he is not a Psycho Duelists, then what is he...the plot thickens...don't tell he's a cyborg duelist! Whoa' date=' amazing work Kale. A good introduction. And lol, dueling over bike. The duel was really good and enjoyed it, it's nice to see the Ojamas were involved for a change. And I like the fact you made it more interesting at the end as it seemed like he couldn't win. Nice fanfiction, I hope to read more soon.[/quote']Actually 5D's has shown a duel over a D-Wheel (refer to YGO-5D's Ep 2) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Awesome new fic' date=' Kale. 10/10 *Immediately asks for subscription in order to read Chapter 2 ASAP* "He's one of them." That sounds somthing like a Signer.[/quote']I doubt it. If you check up on the Levels of all the monsters used in that Synchro Summon, they don't tally up to Level 7/8 (Signer Dragon Level) Alede(Level 2 Tuner)+Irith(Level 6 non-Tuner)+Grivelle(Level 2 non-Tuner)= Level 10 Synchro. (most likely another Discharge monster)Sorry. I didn't mean he WAS a Signer, but that dude watching him said "He's one of them." It's like he is a special person, and that he said "them" means that there are more than one. To me, it's sorta like a Signer, but different.Based on the surrounding destruction caused, I think he may be something like a Psycho Duelist like Aki & Divine & all of Arcadia Movement ...i need to catch up on the Japanese 5D's.. :| anywho, you will see soon enough what i mean. ;)Thanks for subbing me in this thing. So he is not a Psycho Duelists, then what is he...the plot thickens...don't tell he's a cyborg duelist! youre welcome. ;) i always love hearing from you. oh, and he isnt a Cyborg... i kinda drifted from that idea. :D Whoa' date=' amazing work Kale. A good introduction. And lol, dueling over bike. The duel was really good and enjoyed it, it's nice to see the Ojamas were involved for a change. And I like the fact you made it more interesting at the end as it seemed like he couldn't win. Nice fanfiction, I hope to read more soon.[/quote']Actually 5D's has shown a duel over a D-Wheel (refer to YGO-5D's Ep 2) well, one of the first episodes of Edge of Justice was over his coat... XD i think fighting over technology is a bit better than clothing... then again it is the streets. i am glad you liked my Ojama bit. i had to have them make an appearance.. would you like a subscription? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 i do know what Kale is talking about.You know how Kals eyes go blue, and stuff like that. or something else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 i do know what Kale is talking about.You know how Kals eyes go blue' date=' and stuff like that. or something else.[/quote'] man, you are so close i bet you can see the answer right now... ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Sort of! All i truly know is the blue eyed peoples and how there related to the MI's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Beast user J Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Amazing Kale, 10/10 I'd like a subsciption please :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aelsthla-Mental Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 I pity the poor Ojama guy, sure he was trying to rob him, but he was up against freaky powers! The Ojamas were interesting to see expanded on, and for a commoner he did pretty well, so it looks like the duels are going to be pretty intense. Kal pretty much creamed the people at the start of Edge, but this guy manages to seem scarier yet more human (if you pardon the joke) then Kal (although admittedly, this guys deck is BASED on wiping out opponents on the brink of defeat). Awesome chapter, and can i have a subscription? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Docomodake Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 A subscription would be much appreciated.In other news, KALE IS EFFING GOD AT WRITING. Oh, um, if it's not too much trouble, could ya' check out mah new fic? No-one's commented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted December 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 just a reminder, my computer crashed so i dont know when i can write more. i am currently on a different computer. Amazing Kale' date=' 10/10 I'd like a subsciption please :D[/quote'] sure, you can have one. i am glad that you like it. :D I pity the poor Ojama guy' date=' sure he was trying to rob him, but he was up against freaky powers! The Ojamas were interesting to see expanded on, and for a commoner he did pretty well, so it looks like the duels are going to be pretty intense. Kal pretty much creamed the people at the start of Edge, but this guy manages to seem scarier yet more human (if you pardon the joke) then Kal (although admittedly, this guys deck is BASED on wiping out opponents on the brink of defeat). Awesome chapter, and can i have a subscription?[/quote'] thanks for reading! and you can have a subscription. ;) A subscription would be much appreciated.In other news' date=' KALE IS EFFING GOD AT WRITING. Oh, um, if it's not too much trouble, could ya' check out mah new fic? No-one's commented.[/quote'] thanks for reading my fic! :D you can have a subscription too. ;) i will try to read your fic as soon as i can... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seth Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 BUMP for an awesome fic But, when will you be updating it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 I love it Kale its just as amazing as edge of justice, I would love a subscription, also to answer your question, I believe the man on the roof in the alleyway at the end was Kal Iszarc, and I believe your refering trey as a phsyco duelist. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Wait, your saying hes a Crazy Duelist? Please say psychic, some people have not know what psycho truly means. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Wait' date=' your saying hes a Crazy Duelist? Please say psychic, some people have not know what psycho truly means.[/quote'] Yes alph your right, but basicly in the story same thing, but for now its refered to as psychic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 ok, then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 Bump for the second greatest Kale Fanfic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Darnit, Kale! I want the second chapter, i want it now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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