ghostbom Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Well, enjoy this is the first fanfic that I started and I plan on continuing it. Also, if anyone could explain to me how to put the different episodes into those small little boxes that expand I would be really appreciative, thanks and plz leave comments/any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Without further ado, enjoy your crummy fanfic :P Oh ahhh yea, that was a LOT of hours lol sorry mb oh well, now to start up again. Episode 1: Enter the Fray Our story starts with our hero, Matt getting out of bed and realizing that today was Saturday, not only the 1st day of his holidays but also a day that his local store threw a large tournament. After getting dressed, eating breakfast and brushing his teeth he was off to his local store, Monster Masters. After 15 minutes of running he realized that he forgot his deck. He then ran back looked through is bedside draws and then grabbed his deck and duel disk (which was on his computer table). Then, once again, he was running to the shop. On his way he saw his two friends Samantha (or Sam) and Edward. After a quick look at the schedule for the tournament that he and his friends received in the mail, Matt realized that it was about time for his duel. He ran inside to see the two people before him duelling. One was a large man who, according to Matts schedule was Harbo T. and the other was an unknown but eyrie character who wore a cloak with a tattered hood. Duelists: Harbo and ?????Lifepoints: 1300 and 1900 Harbos turn: I then activate Double Summon to summon Ojama Yellow and Ojama Green. Then I activate Ojamuscle to sacrifice my two monsters and power up Ojama King by 2000 points! Now, my King will attack, and finish you off!!! Ojama king starts to do a bellyflop on the opponent. A trap activates and two cylinders appear. Ojama King falls into one and then comes out of the other one onto Harbo. Harbo: 0000?????: 1900 Duel ends “Well,” Harbo says cheerfully “I had a lot of fun, although I would have loved to have won one more than 1 pack of ‘Duelist Genesis’ ha ha ha.” “The winner of this round is, well….um we don’t know his name but we will call him The Victor” said the shop owner/announcer. “Next up, we have Matt B. against the stores enchantress, Katie B. !!!!” As Matt climbed up onto the stage he was playing around with his dueldisk as a nervous twitch. He had never really been good in front of crowds and the fact that he was dueling the shops 'Enchantress' didn’t help much either. But he didn’t care, he wanted to win the prize money to buy presents for his family and he wanted to win a few packs of ‘Crossroads of Chaos’ to get a few more Synchro monsters for his deck. After he realized that everyone had been staring at him he tried to play it cool. He grabbed his deck out of the deck compartment on his belt and put it in his dueldisk. He activated his dueldisk, faced the beautiful girl and in unison with he said “Duel!” Episode 2: Hello to Synchro "Duel," they said in unison. "I'll start" said Katie Katie's turn:-Draws one card-Summon 'Beautiful Elf' in attack (1600/1800)-Gains 100 attack for ever other 'Beautiful' monster-Activates 'Double Summon' allowing her to summon again-Summons another 'Beautiful Elf'-Sets two cards face-down (4000) Matt's turn:-Draws one card-Activates 'The Tricky's effect (Discard 1 card and special summon it)-Summons 'Dark Resonator'-Tunes the two monsters to summon 'Colossal Fighter'-Attacks one of the elves with 'Collossal Blast'(Collossal Fighter)-Ends turn(4000) Katies turn:-Draws one card-Activates 'Beautie Role'-Equips to 'Beautiful Elf'-When 'Beautiful Elf' is attacked, it can negate the attack once per turn.-Switches 'Beautiful Elf' to Defence mode and ends her turn(3000) At this stage Matt was starting to feel confident and completly lost himself in the duel thus, forgetting about the crowd. Matt's turn:-Draws 1 card-Activates 'Smashing Ground' But is negated by Katies 'Cover Up' trap-Summons 'Gladiator Beast Darius' in attack mode-Attacks 'Beautiful Elf' with both Monsters-Destroys 'Beautiful Elf'-Sets one card and ends his turn(4000) Out of all the excitement Matt compleatly forgot about 'Darius' abilitie. Katies Turn:-Draws one card-Sets one card-Special Summons 'Beautiful Demoness' (with its own effect)-Summons 'Beautiful Harpy' -Tunes the two monsters to summon 'Magiril, The Beautiful'-Attacks Darius-Ends Turn(3000) Matts Turn:-Draws one card-Activates 'Synchro Blast'-By destroying 1 Synchro monster that Matt owns Katie takes damage = to one monster on her field and one other monster on her field is destroyed-Selects Magiril (Katie = 200)-Ends turn(4000) Katies Turn:-Draws one card-Activates 'Foul Turning'-Sends all 'Beautiful' monsters in the graveyard out of play-Summons 'Maxtrix, the Vile' (2000 ATK/1000 DEF)-Activates its effect, removes from play all 'Beautiful' monsters from her deck to give it 100 Atk for every one. (4200 Atk)-Attacks 'Colossal Fighter' (Matt = 2600)-Ends turn(200) Matts Turn:-Draws one card-Activates last hope-Rolls a dice, based on the number rolled a different effect will activate-Rolls a 6 which will destroy 1 monster on the field then a coin is flipped and a player taked damage equal to the monster attack points-Coin is flipped At this stage every player is silent and staring, waiting. Both duelists have a bead of sweat runing down their face -Coin stops Silence -Matt cheers for victory as the coin reveals a heads (he wins) -The Duel ends with Matt coming out victorious As the 'Enchantress' falls to the floor in disappointment Matt helps her up with a hand. He then truely sees why they call her the 'Enchantress'.He then realized that he had to hurry off stage for the next duel to take place. As he was walking off he saw his friend Edward walking on and slapped him a hi-five of good luck. End Episode 3:One Morpha of a Duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 interesting beginning, although there wasn't as much details as I had hoped for in the duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Beginning is good,get that uel coming! 7/10Please read my fanfic too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghostbom Posted January 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 Just wondering when someones gunna tell me how to do those pop up things Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 I was thinking about making the duel part like the story part, or in a script part, where the Duelists' dialogues and acts are shown completely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghostbom Posted January 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 hey u think u could pst me a sample of it thanks oh and btw i love your fanfic...do u mean like your one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 6, 2009 Report Share Posted January 6, 2009 is another chapter coming soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jovi Siagian Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 hey u think u could post me a sample of it thanks oh and btw i love your fanfic...do u mean like your one? Yeah. If you think it's too hard to follow my newest chapters style, try Script version. It's on my earlier chapters of my fan fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Just wondering when someones gunna tell me how to do those pop up things If you mean the "Click to View" boxes' date=' then right now: First, put [spoiler and then an equals sign and then the title of the Click to View box. Then put a right bracket, hit enter, and write the text you want in the box. Then at the end of the text . So here is how it should look, except you should remove the spaces in the computer code:[ / spoiler = Title ']Text[ / spoiler ] Here is how it should really look:[spoiler=Title]Text See? It's really easy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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