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Shall I again? Ok, here goes:

 

I like the Sig overall, but the right side seem very blank this time. Yes, I can see taht somethings there, but it's very hard to see. The red streak looks so out of place in almost pure blankness. I don't realley like where the render is placed, but then again, I can't see where else it should go. Flow and blending seems ok, lighting is also ok, maybe a bit to much difference between light and dark though.

 

Enough?

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The right side is way dark.

The red streak is just not good where it is.

Work on better depth.

You should have put the lighting on the top and bottom of the render, instead of just the top.

The bubble c4d that runs through the render kills.

The hand there is just throwing the whole sig off I would have erased the hand, or just smudged it a bit.

the very top right corner is just blank...meh?

I would have added more light over on the left side and right side and put the render in between the light.

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The right side is way dark.

It's to give the left side more attention

The red streak is just not good where it is.

idc.

Work on better depth.

looooooooool' date=' the depth is better in here then ANY of your tags.[/b']

You should have put the lighting on the top and bottom of the render, instead of just the top.

I've gotten comments that the lighting is really good, besides NONE of your tags have lighting at all so improve on that before running your mouth.

The bubble c4d that runs through the render kills.

Maybe.

The hand there is just throwing the whole sig off I would have erased the hand, or just smudged it a bit.

Lets thank god I'm not you.

the very top right corner is just blank...meh?

Again it's because I didn't wanna throw attention of the left section.

I would have added more light over on the left side and right side and put the render in between the light.

Again I'm lucky I'm not you. The light is just perfect, any more right would have hurt it >.>

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The right side is way dark.

It's to give the left side more attention

The red streak is just not good where it is.

idc.

Work on better depth.

looooooooool' date=' the depth is better in here then ANY of your tags.[/b']

You should have put the lighting on the top and bottom of the render, instead of just the top.

I've gotten comments that the lighting is really good, besides NONE of your tags have lighting at all so improve on that before running your mouth.

The bubble c4d that runs through the render kills.

Maybe.

The hand there is just throwing the whole sig off I would have erased the hand, or just smudged it a bit.

Lets thank god I'm not you.

the very top right corner is just blank...meh?

Again it's because I didn't wanna throw attention of the left section.

I would have added more light over on the left side and right side and put the render in between the light.

Again I'm lucky I'm not you. The light is just perfect, any more right would have hurt it >.>

 

Cyber, I just love the way you kick other peoples brainz out like that.

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When will c&c prizes be given?

 

When I finish. =D

 

Not bad. I like the last one better, but cool.

 

-Nice use of clipping masks (I think it's teh clipping masks 0.o)

-Lighting is good.

-Flow is kinda bad, compared to your usual work. =/

-Depth is fine. Could be better, but oh well. =)

-Blending is pretty good. Again, clipping mask. =P

-Honestly, I do not like that red streak. It just seems out of place, compared to the rest of the tag.

-V2 is better, it seems. I like what you did to the far left of the tag. The blur added depth, IMO.

 

Nice job, as usual. Although I still stick with my opinion that your last tag is better.

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