ragnarok1945 Posted February 20, 2009 Report Share Posted February 20, 2009 a little short for a chap, I'll wait until you update it to review it properly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 Chapter 16 is finished. Please read and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 now hopefully Nick will be able to get Neos back later on. Good chap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted February 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Here's Chapter 17 everyone. Enjoy. [spoiler=Chapter 17]Nick then awoke in the daylight with his head on Rachel's lap. "Hey, you okay?" asked Rachel. "Yeah, I think so. (gasps)" said Nick weakly. Flashback: ("This will fullfill my masters order." said Neos. ""Elemental Hero S. Comet Neos" destroy "Zeo The Chaos Warrior". And thanks to "Elemental Hero S. Comet Neos"(s) effect, when he destroys a monster, all of your monsters are destroyed and you take half of the ATK of those monsters as damage.") ("NEOOOOOOOOOOOS!!!! (Nick: LP 0)" echoed Nick's scream.) The story continues: "Wait a minute! Where's...?!" yelled Nick as he looked at his hand. Nick then noticed Neos' card was in his hand. "But how?" said Nick. ("I destroyed the Black vein myself." said Neos as a Duel Spirit.) ("You did?" thought Nick.) ("Even though my body may be gone, my spirit still holds strong and it was all thanks to you Nick." said Neos. "Because you never gave up on me when things start to get worse. And for that, I thank you.") ("No problem." thought Nick. "By the way, what were those new Neo-Spacians you had with you and there was something about a brother?") ("I think one of your friends can answer that for you." said Neos as he faded away.) "Say what?" said Nick. "What is it?" asked Rachel. "Hey." said Cody. "Me and Rein just got your message, Rachel." "Nick are you okay?" asked Rein. "Yeah." said Nick. "So what happened?" asked Rein. "Well, I was Dueling Elemental Hero Neos and..." said Nick. "And what?" asked Rachel. "I lost." said Nick. "What?!" yelled Rein. "Nick, I've seen you Duel. There's no way you could've been beaten by Neos. Even if he is the smartest Elemental Hero." "But that's just it." said Nick. "I was facing Neo-Spacians I never even seen before. And the strangest thing Neos said was that he had a brother that can use "Contact Fusion" with the Neo-Spacians I never seen or heard of before." ("A brother and new Neo-Spacians? Uh-oh." thought Rein.) "Did he say his brother was named Elemental Hero Star Neos?" asked Rein. "Wait. How did you...?" asked Nick before just realizing it. "YOU created them?" "Yes, alright." said Rein. "When I was traveling in the Duel Monster Realm, I saw Neo Space. It looked like a wasteland. I talked to Neos about what happened and told me you saved them just in time, but they were unable to defend themselves again, so I had an idea. I said I can create them another world which you already know is called "Galaxy Space", then since they don't have much reinforcements, I created his brother, Elemental Hero Star Neos. And I also created Neo-Spacians that can go well with Star Neos. Then after that, all of them started training. They making "Contact Fusions" left and right, but Star Neos was victorius, then it was decided that Star Neos was to rule Galaxy Space that was on the other side of Neo Space and come to their rescue whenever they were under attack." "So you made them to protect the other Neo-Spacians?" asked Nick. "That's right, but now that I heard the Dark one was using them to destroy you, I don't know what to do with them next." said Rein. "Don't worry Rein." said Nick. "We'll pay her back. Right now, let's get ready for School." So they got ready for School and got on the bus and headed for School. And a beautiful, white, pale blond girl walked into Nick's class. "Everyone, I'd like you to meet our new student, Alice Daniels." said the teacher. "Nice to meet you, everyone." said Alice. "Wow, she's beautiful." said a boy. "But we're not giving up on you Rachel." "Yeah, thank you." said Rachel all embarassed. ("Why does she look so familiar?" thought Rein.) "Alright, Alice. choose a seat to your liking." said the teacher. "Yes, sir." said Alice. Alice then approaches Nick and the gang. "Heh, heh, heh." giggled Alice as she winked at Nick. "What the...?" said Nick all confused. ("Why that little..." thought Rachel angrily.) ("Alright, two beautiful girls for each arm, but why did the other girl wink at Cunningham?!" thought Zane.) Alice sat next to Rein. ("So familiar." thought Rein.) After class, it was free period and Alice walked and sat next to Nick. "Hi. My name is Alice." said Alice. "Hello. I'm Nick." said Nick. "I know." said Alice. "You're the one who saved the School and the town countless times." Then Alice starts to move in closer to Nick's face while she was talking. "So tell me." said Alice. "How do you win so many times? Are you a genius or something? Did you create those cards yourself? I want to know everything about you." Nick was running out of room to back up. "So?" asked Alice. "Uh, you're moving in a little too close to my face." said Nick. Then Nick fell out of his seat along with Alice. "Whoa!" said Nick & Alice as they fell. Nick & Alice opened their eyes and as soon as they looked at each other, Alice was on top of him and they were both embarrassed. "(blushing) Aah! I'm so sorry." said Alice all embarassed. "No! I'm sorry." said Nick. "I never should've fell out of my seat." "Shut it, Cunningham!" yelled Zane. "You done enough. I'm sorry about him. He's a loser." "Why you...!" yelled Nick clenching hs fist until... Alice slapped Zane in the face so hard, his whole face turned red. "OW!" screamed Zane. "He's not a loser!" yelled Alice. "Nick, are you okay?" "Dang, woman." said Nick. "That's some arm you got." "Heh, heh, heh." giggled Alice. "By the way, I've been meaning to ask you... Will you Duel me?" "What?" asked Nick. "Pleeease?" asked Alice. "I just want to see how you Duel that's all. And to see if my cards are worthy enough to Duel you, so pleeease?" "(sighs) Alright, alright. I'll Duel you." said Nick until... Alice, in a surprise attack, hugged Nick and they both fell down again. "Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!" said Alice as she hugged him tightly. "You won't regret this. I swear." "No problem." said Nick suffocating. When Rachel saw them, she was angry as ever. After free period, it was P.E. and Nick and Alice got prepared. "I can't believe I'm about to Duel the hero of Oxford." said Alice. "(blushing) This is so amazing! Yet, I feel so embarrassed about what happened today." "Don't worry about what happened just focus on the Duel." said Nick. "Alright let's go." Duel!Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000Alice/ 5 cards/ LP 8000 Nick: Ladies first. Alice: Thank you. Alice: Turn 1I draw. I play the Field Spell "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt", then I play my 5 Continuous Spell Cards, "Easter Egg(s) 1", "2", "3", "4", and "10". (Nick says: Wow, you must really love Easter, don't you?) (Rein says: (in thought) Wait. Now I recognize her. (out loud) Nick, I should...) (Nick says: Don't worry, Rein. Just let her do her thing. Sorry about that. Continue.) Thank you. Now I activate the effects of "Easter Egg 3", once per turn, if "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" is on the field, I can draw 1 card. (Alice: Hand: 1) Now I activate "Easter Egg(s) 1, 2, and 4"(s) effects, just like the same with "Easter Egg 3", but not the same effect, their effects activate while "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" is on the field. "Easter Egg 1" lets me gain 500 LP. (Alice: LP 8500) "Easter Egg 2" lets me inflict 500 LP to you. (Nick: LP 7500) And finally "Easter Egg 4" lets you discard 1 card from your hand. (Nick: Hand: 4) Now I activate the effect of "Easter Egg 10", I can Special Summon 1 LV3 or higher monster from my hand and you can Special Summon 1 LV2 or lower monster from your Deck, so I Special Summon "Dragon of the Many Eggs"(LV4/WIND/Dragon/Effect/ATK/2100 DEF/1300) (Nick says: And I Special Summon "Warrior Synchron"(LV1/LIGHT/Warrior/Tuner/ATK/200 DEF/800) Now I activate my fields effect, once per turn, I can activate 1 "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell Card from my Deck, so I activate "Easter Egg 5", so I pay 1500 LP (Alice: LP 7000) and draw 2 cards. (Alice: Hand: 2) Next, I activate my fields other effect, once per turn, I can remove from play 1 "Easter Egg" card on my field, so I choose "Easter Egg 10". I play 1 card face-down and end my turn. "So what do you think so far?" asked Alice. "Uh, I'm taking a wild guess, but did you create those cards yourself?" asked Nick. "Yes!" yelled Alice. "Finally, somebody notices my cards." "That's what I've been trying to tell you." said Rein as he runs up and whispers in Nick's ear. "I met this girl in the Duel Monster Realm." whispered Rein. "She created a new dimension there, which you already noticed. She's been really anxious to meet ever since you were traveling there." "For real?" asked Nick. "It's true about what he said." said Alice. "You also read lips too." said Nick. "Anyway, let's get back to the Duel." Nick/ 4 cards/ LP 7500Alice/ 1 card/ LP 7000Field: "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" Nick: Turn 2I draw. (Nick thinks: Yes! Another one.) I summon "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub"(LV4/WATER/Machine/Union/ATK/1500 DEF/1200) and when this card is summoned, I can add "Chaos Spirit Hydroc"(LV3/WATER/Spirit/Effect/ATK/700 DEF/600) and "Chaos Spirit Tsunami"(LV4/WATER/Spirit/Effect/ATK/1500 DEF/1000) to my hand. Next, I play "Double Summon", so I summon another Chaos Vehicle known as "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet"(LV4/FIRE/Machine/Effect/ATK/1500 DEF/1600). When this card is summoned, I can add "Chaos Spirit Searon"(LV3/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/600 DEF/800) and "Chaos Spirit Lava"(LV4/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/1600 DEF/1000) to my hand. Now "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub" and "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet" combine together to form "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine"(LV7/WIND/Machine/Fusion/Effect/ATK/2400 DEF/1500) I should tell you that whenever a "Chaos Machine" monster is summoned, the Material Monsters are put in my Spell & Trap Card Zone. Now I activate its effect, I select 1 of its Material Monsters and use it as an Equip Spell Card and this card gains the effects of the selected monster, then I select another one of its Material Monsters and Special Summon it to the field, so I choose "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet" as the Equip Spell Card and Special Summon "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub"(LV4/WATER/Machine/Union/ATK/1500 DEF/1200) And since "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet" is equipped to "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine", "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine" gains "Chaos Vehicle Fire Jet"(s) effect of increasing the equipped monsters ATK by 300 for every Spell & Trap Card on the field, so he gains 1800 ATK since there 6 Spell Cards on the field. (2400 + 1800 = 4200 ATK) Now "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine" destroy her "Dragon of the Many Eggs". (Alice counters: I activate the trap "Easter Mine", when this card is activated, I can remove from play any number of "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell Cards on my field and inflict 500 points of damage to you for each one, so I remove all of them and you take 2000 points of damage. Not only that, but your monster loses 1200 ATK. Am I right?) (Nick: LP 5500) (4200 - 1200 = 3000 ATK) (Alice: LP 6100) Now "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub" attack her directly. (Alice: LP 4600) Next, I attack with "Warrior Synchron". (Alice: LP 4400) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn. "You're doing really good." said Nick. "Really?!" asked Alice. ("I can't believe it. He actually acknowledged me." thought Alice. "Okay, Alice. Keep it together. You still haven't pulled out your ace yet. And once he gets a good look at what my Deck is capable of, he'll probably ask me out. Alright, let's go!") Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 5500Alice/ 1 card/ LP 4400Field: "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" Alice: Turn 3I draw. I activate my fields effect, so I activate "Easter Egg 5" from my Deck again. (Alice: LP 2900/ Hand: 4) Now I activate "Pot of Greed", so I draw 2 cards. (Alice: Hand: 5) Now I summon "Easter Baby Dragon"(LV3/EARTH/Dragon/Effect/ATK/1200 DEF/700) (Nick says: What do you know, it's Baby Dragon in Easter form.) Thanks. (Alice thinks: Yes, now it's time to bring him out.) Now I Special Summon the ace of my Deck. Come forth, "Easter Knight"(LV7/EARTH/Warrior/Effect/ATK/2400 DEF/1500) (Nick says: Whoa. Nice monster.) (Z says: Hmph, He doesn't look so tough.) He can be Special Summoned if I have 5 "Easter Egg" Continuous Spells removed from play by the effects of "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt". (Nick says: Wait. You only removed 1 "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell thanks to your fields effect.) Don't you remember my trap card? Because thanks to its effect, all "Easter Egg" Continuous Spells removed from play by its effect are treated as being removed from play by my fields effect. (Nick says: I'm impressed.) (Alice thinks: Yes! Finally. I hope I get through this all right.) Now I activate his effect, by equipping the following monsters to him, he gains 1 of his 3 effects, so I equip "Easter Baby Dragon" to him. Now I activate his first effect, once per turn, I can Special Summon 1 LV4 or lower EARTH monster from my hand, so I summon "Milus Radiant"(LV1/EARTH/Beast/Effect/ATK/300 DEF/250) Thank to its effect, it increases the ATK of all EARTH monsters on the field by 500 and decreases the ATK of all WIND monsters by 400, so your monster loses 400 ATK (3300 - 400 = 2900 ATK) while my "Easter Knight" gains 500. (2400 + 500 = 2900 ATK) (Nick says: So they're equal.) Not after this. I equip him with "Easter Egg Sceptor", when this card is equipped to "Easter Knight", he gains 1000 ATK. And not only that, once per turn, I can activate an "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell Card that was removed from play by my fields effect. (Nick says: What?!) (2900 + 1000 = 3900 ATK) Now I activate the effects of "Easter Egg 2", so you lose 500 LP. (Nick: LP 5000) (Nick says: With another Spell Card in play, my monster gains another 300 ATK. (2900 + 300 = 3200 ATK) Now "Easter Knight" destroy his "Warrior Synchron". (Nick: LP 4150) Wait. How come you took half the damage and "Warrior Synchron" wasn't destroyed? (Nick says: Thanks to his effect, he can't be destroyed once per turn and I take half the damage inflicted to him and since I took Battle Damage from this card, I can Special Summon 1 Warrior-type monster from my hand, Deck, or Graveyard, so I Special Summon "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/1900 DEF/1500) Wow! (Z says: Alright, "Easter Knight". Let's see what you got.) I end my turn. Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 4150Alice/ 1 card/ LP 2900Field: "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" Nick: Turn 4I draw. Now I'm tuning "Warrior Synchron"(LV1) with "Chaos Machine Jet Submarine"(LV7) to Synchro Summon "Stardust Warrior"(LV7/WIND/Warrior/Synchro/Effect/ATK/2500 DEF/2100) (Alice says: Wait. How come your monsters LV is 7?) Thanks to "Warrior Synchron"(s) effect, I can increase his level to 2 or 3 or decrease it to 0 and I chose 0. Now I activate "Stardust Warrior"(s) effect, when he is Synchro Summon, I can destroy 1 monster on the field, so I choose your "Easter Knight". (Alice counters: When "Easter Egg Scepter" goes to the Graveyard, any "Easter Egg" Continuous Spell removed from play are put into my Graveyard. And I can inflict 500 points of damage to you for each one.) (Nick: LP 1650) Sorry about this, but this Duel ends here. Now "Stardust Warrior" and "Chaos Vehicle Aqua Sub" END THIS! Nick: LP 1650/ WinnerAlice: LP 0/ Defeated "(sighs)" sighed Alice. "Alice." said Nick. "Look, Alice. I'm sorry that I..." said Nick until he could finish... Then she ran up to him and hugged him for some reason. "Why are you hugging me?" asked Nick all confused. "I'm just so happy that you acknowledged me and my cards." said Alice. "I wanted to be like you. To become a better Duelist." "Then how about you join our group?" asked Nick. "We could need another Duelist for our mission." "Mission?" asked Alice. "To defeat the crisis in the Duel Monster Realm." said Nick. "A rouge monster calling herself the Dark one. So what do you say? Want to save the world?" "(crying) (sniffs)" cried Alice. "Hey, I didn't mean to make you cry or anything." said Nick. "I..." "Thank you. Thank you. Thank you!" said Alice as she hugged him again. Nick and Alice walked over to Cody, Rein, and Rachel who is still jealous. "Hey guys. We got a new addition to the team." said Nick. "I don't blame you." said Rein. "That was some Duel back there. You pulled off some good strategies." "That's great." said Cody. "Nice Duel." "Uh... Rachel." said Alice. "Yes." said Rachel. "You think we can hang out sometime?" asked Alice. "Just us girls?" "Sure." said Rachel. "That'd be cool." "Thank you." said Alice. Zane walks over to the girls. "So girls, how would you two like to ditch the geeks and hang out with a real man?" said Zane. The girls looked at each other. "On three?" asked Rachel. "Let's do it." said Alice. "1, 2, 3!" said Rachel & Alice as they went in for the punch. They both punched Zane so hard in the face, that both his nose and mouth was bleeding. "OWWWWW!!" screamed Zane. "I STILL LOVE BOTH OF YOU!!" "Let's get out of here, guys." said Nick as they got on the bus. So they all got on the bus and rode all the way home. "So he's the great Nick Cunningham." said a voice. "I'll teach him what happens when he messes with my sister!" Card of the Day: "Stardust Warrior"  So Nick and the gang got a new ally in the group, but what of the mysterious person saying he'll teach Nick what happens when he messes with his sister? Question is, who is that guys sister? "Next Chapter"! Nick gets an unexpected visitor from some kid and the kid challenges him to a Duel with a crazy surprise. Will Nick pull out of this one, or will the snot-nosed kid come out cheering? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 Major problem with Zane. You know at this rate I expect him to go somewhere along the lines of killing soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 I wonder if she uses Doll Parts and Doll Chimera. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 23, 2009 Report Share Posted February 23, 2009 that can be revealed later on when the next chaps are up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted February 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 No, she doesn't use Doll monsters, but she'll use cards that you like, Mystery Guest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted February 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 Chapter 17 is updated. Please read and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 No' date=' she doesn't use Doll monsters, but she'll use cards that you like, Mystery Guest.[/quote']Â Cool that my Easter Eggs are recycled again, Haou. Also, I just realized that you congratulated me on my 4th star. Thank you for the recognition. Also, great duel so far in Chapter 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 25, 2009 Report Share Posted February 25, 2009 yeah, I'm loving the duel myself. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted February 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 Sorry I have to say this, but I'm gonna have to update Chapter 17 this weekend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 26, 2009 Report Share Posted February 26, 2009 that's fine, I'll probably be busy myself until then anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted March 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Chapter 17 is finished. Please read and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Nice to see Nick won, and Zane is going to have his challenge for both the girls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 Easter Egg Scepter. I'll have to remember that card. You'll probably see it in my Easter Egg thread. Nice work, Haou Devil 12, your duel was excellent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 1, 2009 Report Share Posted March 1, 2009 will you begin chapter 18 soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted March 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 Here's Chapter 18 everyone. Enjoy. [spoiler=Chapter 18]Nick awoke this morning on the weekend. It was 67 degrees outside, so he decided to go out and play Basketball with Rein and Cody. "Ha! Another point for me." said Nick. "How much is that?" asked Rein. "So far Nick has 32 points and you have 24, so Nick is still beating you." said Cody. "Not for long he's not." said Rein. "Bring it on." said Nick. Then soon after Rein got in a few points, Rachel came outside and Alice arrived at Nick's house. "Hi guys." said Alice. "Hey, Alice." said Rachel. "So who's winning?" "Me." said Nick. "In your dreams." said Rein. Just then, a short kid with black spiky hair and a red shirt on. (that looked like Leo's height from Yugioh 5D's) came up to Nick's driveway when they playing Basketball. And he screamed... "I CHALLENGE YOU!" yelled the kid. "Huh?" The Basketball bounced off the backboard and came flying straight towards the kid. "Look out, kid!" said Nick. Luckily for him, Alice stopped and caught the ball before it even hit him. "Mikey, what are you doing here when you're supposed to be at home?" asked Alice. "You know this kid?" asked Nick. "He's my brother." said Alice. "Oh." said Nick. "So what brings you here?" "REVENGE!" yelled Mikey. "You don't have to scream you know." said Nick. "And what's this about revenge? Revenge on who?" "On you!" yelled Mikey. "For making my sister cry when you defeated her. You probably forced her to Duel! Now I'm here to make her happy again." "Are you challenging me?" asked Nick. "By the way, I'd never force anyone to Duel me. Where did you get an idea like..." "Shut up!" yelled Mikey. "Are you gonna Duel me or not?!" "If it'll shut you up, then fine." said Nick. "Go easy on him, alright?" asked Alice. "He not too big on losing." "Got it." said Nick. ("Mind if I use your Deck, Z?" thought Nick.) ("Not at all." said Z as a Duel Spirit. "I've been waiting to test out my powers again. Let's go!") "You ready?" asked Mikey. "Always." said Nick. Duel!Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000Mikey/ 5 cards/ LP 8000 Nick: Turn 1I draw. I summon "Sealed Spirit Light"(LV2/LIGHT/Spirit/Effect/ATK/200 DEF/300) (Alice says: Aw, it's so cute.) Thanks. Now I play the spell "Double Summon", so I summon "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/1900 DEF/1500) Next, I activate the Field Spell "Soul Garden". Now I activate "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(s) effect, once per turn, I can select 1 "Sealed Spirit" monster from my Deck and equip it to "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior" as an Equip Spell Card. Once equipped, "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior" gains the effect of the selected "Sealed Spirit" monster, so I equip "Sealed Spirit Fire"(LV2/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/200 DEF/300) to "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior". Now my fields effect activates, it gains its effects for every "Sealed Spirit" monster equipped to "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior" and since there is 1 equipped to him, I activate its first effect, which means he gains 1000 ATK. (1900 + 1000 = 2900 ATK) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn. Nick/ 1 card/ LP 8000Mikey/ 5 cards/ LP 8000Field: "Soul Garden" Mikey: Turn 2I draw! (Nick counters: I activate "Sealed Spirit Light"(s) effect, during your Draw Phase, when you draw a card, you lose 400 LP. (Mikey: LP 7600) I play the Field Spell "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" (Nick says: Why does he have your Field Spell, Alice?) (Alice says: Actually, it's a copy of it for his cards.) (Nick says: Then let's see he's got.) (Mikey thinks: Heh, heh, heh. He's gonna regret Dueling me.) Now I activate my "Bad Eggs 1", "2", "4", and "5" Continuous Spells. (Nick says: Bad Eggs? Your family must really love eggs, don't they?) (Alice says: Actually, he created those cards. When I was transported to the Duel Monster Realm, he came along and started making cards of his own. Although, he is using some of my cards.) Shut up, shut up, shut up! I'm trying to win a Duel here. I know thanks to your Duel Disk that you need 2 Field Spells to destroy mine and that gives me the advantage. Now I play "Pot of Greed", so I draw 2 cards. (Mikey: Hand: 2) Now I play my own spell "Egg Draw", with this card, I can draw cards equal to the number of "Easter Egg" or "Bad Egg" Continuous Spell Cards I control. And since there are 4, I can draw 4 cards. (Mikey: Hand: 5) I play a monster and 1 card face-down and end my turn. And since it's my End Phase, my "Bad Egg" Continuous Spell Cards are switched to your side. (Nick thinks: I don't like the looks of this.) Nick/ 1 card/ LP 8000Mikey/ 3 cards/ LP 7600Field: "Soul Garden" & "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" Nick: Turn 3I draw. (Mikey counters: Now that it's your Standby Phase, my "Bad Egg" cards activate. "Bad Egg 1" makes you lose 200 LP. (Nick: LP 7800) "Bad Egg 2" makes you give control of a monster you have to me. (Nick says: Sorry "Sealed Spirit Light".) "Bad Egg 4" makes you send a card from your hand to the Graveyard. (Nick: Hand: 1) And finally "Bad Egg 5" lets me Special Summon 1 LV4 or lower monster from your hand, so let me see your hand. Alright, I Special Summon "Sealed Spirit Dark"(LV2/DARK/Spirit/Effect/ATK/200 DEF/300). Since their effects were activated, they are now removed from play. Now it's your turn. Come on! I don't have all day!) (Nick thinks: That can be arranged.) I activate my face-down "Pot of Forgiveness", so I draw 3 cards. (Nick: Hand: 3) Now I activate "Sealed Spirit Dark"(s) effect, he can take the effect of 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field and since "Sealed Spirit Fire" is treated as a Spell Card, he gains his effect, meaning he gains 200 ATK for every Spell & Trap Card in your Graveyard and since there's only one, he gains 200 ATK. (200 + 200 = 400 ATK) And the same goes for "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior" since he also has "Sealed Spirit Fire"(s) effect. (2900 + 200 = 3100 ATK) Now I play the spell "Wandering Spirit", if I control 1 "Chaos Spirit" or "Sealed Spirit" on my side of the field, I can Special Summon 1 "Soul Token"(LV1/LIGHT/Token/Effect/ATK/0 DEF/0) to my side of the field. Now I activate "Creature Swap", which means we both select 1 monster from our fields and control of those monsters switch, so I choose my "Soul Token". (Mikey says: And I choose... your "Sealed Spirit Light".) Thank you. Now "Sealed Spirit Light" destroy his "Soul Token". Now "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior" destroy his face-down monster. (Mikey counters: I don't think so. I activate the Continuous Trap "Egg Barrier", when this card is activated, I can place Egg Counters on this card. 1 for each "Easter Egg" and "Bad Egg" Continuous Spell removed from play, so that makes 4 Egg Counters. (EC: 4) Now by removing 1 Egg Counter from this card. (EC: 3) I can negate your attack.) Fine then. I play the spell "Pot of Greed", so I draw 2 cards. (Nick: Hand: 2) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn. Nick/ 1 card/ LP 7800Mikey/ 3 cards/ LP 7600Field: "Soul Garden" & "Easter Egg Scavenger Hunt" Mikey: Turn 4I draw. (Nick counters: Now "Sealed Spirit Light"(s) effect activates again. (Mikey: LP 7200) I play another "Pot of Greed", so I draw 2 cards. (Mikey: Hand: 5) Now I activate "Bad Egg 6" from my hand, then I'll play the Quick-Play Spell "Trap Booster", so I can activate a Trap Card from my hand, so I'm activating "Bad Egg Explosion", when this card is activated, I can remove from play a number of "Bad Egg" Continuous Spells I control and you take 200 points of damage for each one. (Nick: LP 7600) And they're treated as being removed from play by their own effects. (Nick says: Just like when I dueled your sister.) Shut up! Like I said, I'm here to make her happy again by defeating you! Now I flip over my face-down monster "Rotten Baby Dragon"(LV3/DARK/Dragon/Effect/ATK/1200 DEF/700) Now from my hand, I Special Summon "Rotten Knight"(LV7/DARK/Warrior/Effect/ATK/2400 DEF/1500) He can be Special Summoned if I have 5 "Bad Egg" Continuous Spells removed from play by their effects. Now I equip "Rotten Baby Dragon" to "Rotten Knight" and one of his effects activates, if he's equipped with "Rotten Baby Dragon", he can't be destroyed in battle. "So from what I see, you copied your sister's cards and made some new changes of your own." said Nick. "Well... I guess you can say that." said Mikey. "Then you already made her happy." said Nick. "What do you mean?" asked Mikey. "Look at her." said Nick as he pointed towards Alice. "Ah." said Mikey as he looked at Alice. "(smiles) Wow, Mikey you've really given your cards a lot of thought and you put a lot of heart into making them." said Alice. "R-Really?" asked Mikey. "Don't you see?" asked Alice. "I am happy. Happy to have you for a brother, Mikey." "Oh, Alice." said Mikey as he tears up. "So what do you say, Mikey?" asked Nick. "You want to surrender, or keep fighting till' the very end?" "Like I'm going to give up. Let's go!" yelled Mikey. Mikey: Turn 4 (cont.)Now I equip "Bad Egg Scepter" to "Rotten Knight" giving him a 1000 ATK boost. (2400 + 1000 = 3400 ATK) Now "Rotten Knight" destroy his "Sealed Spirit Light". When "Rotten Knight" attacks while equipped with "Bad Egg Scepter", I lose 500 LP. (Mikey: LP 6700) (Nick counters: Sorry, Mikey, but I'm afraid to tell you that I've won this Duel. I activate the trap "Soul Obliteration", if a "Chaos Spirit" or "Sealed Spirit" monster is attacked by one of my opponent's monsters, I can inflict damage to my opponent equal to double the ATK of the attacking monster.) NOO! Nick: LP 7600/ WinnerMikey: LP 0/ Defeated "You okay, kid?" asked Nick as he helped him up. "Yeah, I'm okay." said Mikey. Nick helped him up. And Mikey ran to Alice and hugged her. "Oh, Alice. (sniffling)" said Mikey. "It's okay." said Alice. "Wow, that kind of reminds me how close me and my sister was before what happened." said Rachel. "Isn't it beautiful, Nick? Nick?" As Nick looked at them, he dreams back to when he was little and he and his sister were that close to each other. "(sighs)" sighed Nick. "Nick is something wrong?" asked Rachel. "Huh? Oh... It's nothing." answered Nick. ('You're real lucky to have her for a sister, Mikey." thought Nick. "Don't let go of her until the time comes.") Card of the Day: "Rotten Knight"[spoiler="Rotten Knight"(s) Effect]This card can be Special Summoned if you have 5 or more "Bad Egg" Continuous Spell Cards with different names removed from play by their effects. By equipping the following monster(s) to this card, this card gains the appropriate effect(s):*Rotten Baby Dragon: This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.*Rotten Dragon: Every time you take Battle Damage, increase this card's ATK by 300.*Rotten Ancient Dragon: During your Standby Phase, Special Summon 1 "Bad Egg Token" (DARK/Dragon/Level 2/ATK/500 DEF/500) to your opponent's side of the field in Attack Position. While your opponent controls a "Bad Egg Token", this card can attack your opponent directly.    Now that was a heart-warming ending. A brother and sister who love each other that much. "Next Chapter"! The Day has finally come for the Dark one to take her revenge on Nick, so she transports him, the gang, and his Schools entire student body to the Duel Monster Realm except the teachers who were mysteriously called out to the front of the School along with the principle and assistant principles. The team then runs into an unexpected guest sent by the Dark one. Will Nick and everyone get home safely, or will they be trapped forever? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 No Zane for now to act all psycho, that's a good start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 He must be running Bad Eggs. Interesting idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 2, 2009 Report Share Posted March 2, 2009 I still want to see more of Zane's violent ways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 It keeps sounding like you like Zane, Ragnarok. P.S. I am running your Bad Egg cards, Mystery Guest. That's why I decided in my future chapters that I will post the cards my friends made while they have been here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 It keeps sounding like you like Zane' date=' Ragnarok. P.S. I am running your Bad Egg cards, Mystery Guest. That's why I decided in my future chapters that I will post the cards my friends made while they have been here.[/quote']Â Only because I want to see what insanity he'll pull off next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haou Devil 12 Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 Chapter 18 is updated. Please read and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 5, 2009 Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 update is slight, but I like it, still no sign of who has the upper hand in the duel as of yet though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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