Chaos Universe: The Unknown Past Ch. 1 - 84 (Chapter 76: Fight for the Throne Pt. 2) has arrived

[Haou Devil 12]

Chapter 32 is updated. Please read and comment.

[ragnarok1945]

still too short of a duel. I'll wait for the whole duel to end

[Haou Devil 12]

Chapter 32 is finished. (quote: FINALLY!!) Please read and comment.

[ragnarok1945]

this is just going to make Zane angrier for not defeating Nick. Well done of a chap

[Haou Devil 12]

Here's Chapter 33 everyone. Enjoy.

 

[spoiler=Chapter 33]Previously:

 

("Exodia now thinks you're worthy." said E.N. "I thinks it's time we leave.")

 

("Right." Zane answered. "Until next time, Cunningham.")

 

("We may not know how to stop him, but I do know this, he'll be back and we'll be ready. With all of us together, there's no one who can stop us." explained Nick.)

 

("YEAH!!!" yelled Everyone.)

 

The story continues:

 

Everyone got back on the interdimensional Expressroid and while riding for 45 minutes, they have arrived.

 

"Here we are." says Nick. "Neo Domino City."

 

"Wow!" said a person. "Look over there." said another person. "Look at the size of this place." said a third person.

 

They soon stopped at the station and everyone got off. Nick had to pay for everyone, though, but not it real world currency. He had to pay in stars from each of his cards, which was no problem really. Anyways, everyone was walking together, following Nick to the tallest hotel there is in Neo Domino.

 

"Alright." yelled Nick. I'm going check everyone in, but since some of the rooms of this hotel are occupied, some of you people might get roomates while the others have the room to theirselves.

 

"Aw man!" said a person. "Come on!" said another person. "I hope I get a room all to myself." said another person.

 

"Alright." yelled Nick. "While we still have some time, you people can choose your roomates. Since we're gonna stuck here for a while, you don't have a choice. Until then, go check out the city and report back here if you get tired. I'll have the person at the front desk hand you your room keys if you come back. Alright. Go have fun."

 

"WHOO-HOO!!" Screamed everyone.

 

Everyone just ran off in groups, without knowing that the security cameras from school are following them and watching them. The cameras are also watching Nick and the gang.

 

Meanwhile back on earth:

 

"You have a brave kid there, Cunningham." says Dr. Schneizel. "He's a true leader."

 

"Yeah, he sure is." says Nick's Dad.

 

"ZANE!!!!!" screamed a woman crying.

 

"Poor woman." said Dr. Schneizel. "Her son giving into power was too much for her to bear, but I'm sure your son bring him and everyone back home safe. Especially him."

 

"I sure hope you're right." said Nick's Dad.

 

Meanwhile back in Neo Domino:

 

"Alright." said Nick. "I got everyone checked in. Now let's go."

 

"Go where?" asked Rein.

 

"To find some answers." Nick answered "And I know just the guy to go to."

 

Nick and the gang were walking until they stopped at a small building that looked like a house.

 

"Link?" said Nick, knocking on the door. "Link, are you there?"

 

Then the door opened all the way but there was no one at the door. They soon went into the building and all through the place there was notes, cards, and also computers.

 

"So this Link kid, he's sort of a braniac, right?" asked Cody.

 

"You might call him that." answered Nick. "He's also a card creator, too. Whenever he gets an idea in his head, he just has to make it and/or write it down. He doesn't clean up afterwords, though."

 

Just when Nick was about to go to the next room, a kid with grey hair, with a white coat on and has glasses like Carly from Yugioh 5D's swooped down and is hanging from the ceiling surprised them.

 

"What's up?" said a voice.

 

"AAH!" screamed Nick. "Link! Will you quit doing that everytime someone visits?"

 

"Sorry, I just felt bored. That's all." said Link.

 

"Anyways, do you have any information on the darkness surrounding the city?" asked Nick.

 

"I've been working on that." said Link. "Still no answer, but don't worry. This city's force field keeps out that shroud of darkness, so anymore questions?"

 

"Do you know the whereabouts of D.C.Q. and her servants?" asked Nick.

 

"I might tell you." said Link. "If you can help me."

 

"With what?" asked Nick.

 

"Since I've created some card ideas, I've made those ideas into decks." explained Link. "Test Decks to be exact and I have been wanting someone to Duel me so I can test them out. Will you Duel me, Nick?"

 

"Alright." said Nick. "I've been waiting for some action since I got here."

 

"Great!" yelled Link.

 

"Why don't you Duel me when you create new cards?" asked ????.

 

"Who's that?" asked Rachel.

 

"Oh. That's my Mechanically Engineered Computerized Helper." explained Link.

 

"Or M.E.C.H. for short." says Nick.

 

"Don't worry, MECH." said Link. "I'll get to you."

 

Link then pushed a button on his computer that opened a containment panel on the metal table where his computer is and out came 2 Test Decks.

 

"Choose one.", asked Link.

 

"The one on the right.", said Nick.

 

"Ah. Good choice.", says Link happily

 

Link grabbed the Deck and his Duel Disk. (quote: His Duel Disk looks exactly like Nick's, except it's blue.)

 

"Follow me.", said Link.

 

Everyone then followed Link downstairs and he turned on the lights. And everyone saw there was a giant Duel arena down there.

 

"How can you build all this?", asked Alice.

 

"He has helpers.", answered Nick.

 

"Like who?", asked Cody.

 

"Ahem.", said MECH on the intercom.

 

"Oh, right. Sorry.", said Cody

 

"Let's go.", said Link

 

"You don't have to tell me twice.", said Nick.

 

Duel!

Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000

Link/ 5 cards/ LP 8000

 

Link: Turn 1

I draw. I summon "Synchronized Angel"(LV4/LIGHT/Fairy/Tuner/ATK/1500 DEF/1000) Next, I play the spell "Double Summon", so I can summon another "Synchronized Angel"(LV4/LIGHT/Fairy/Tuner/ATK/1500 DEF/1000) Now I'm tuning both of my "Synchronized Angel"(s). (Nick says: You can't do that. Synchro Summons are only done with only 1 Tuner.) I've found a way around that. Thanks to the effects of my "Synchronized" monsters, my Synchro Summons can be done with more than just 1 Tuner. As I said before, I'm tuning both my "Synchronized Angel"(s)(LV4 + LV4) to Synchro Summon "Synchronized Giant Raven"(LV8/WIND/Winged-Beast/Synchro/Tuner/ATK/2400 DEF/2600) (Nick says: A Tuner Synchro Monster?) The fun doesn't stop there. I activate the effects of both my "Synchronized Angel"(s), if they were used in a Synchro Summon, I gain 1000 LP and since 2 of them were used, I gain 2000 LP. (Link: LP 10000) I play 2 cards face-down and end my turn.

 

"How do you like the Deck so far?", asked Link.

 

"It's awesome!", exclaimed Nick. "Why didn't I think of it?"

 

Nick/ 5 cards/ LP 8000

Link/ 0 cards/ LP 10000

 

Nick: Turn 2

I draw. I play the spell "Level Draw", so I pay 500 LP (Nick: LP 7500) and select 1 monster on the field and I can draw cards from my Deck, so I choose "Synchronized Giant Raven", so I draw 4 cards. (Nick: Hand: 9) Now I summon "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/1900 DEF/1500) Now I play the spell "Triple Summon", so I can summon 2 more times, so I summon "Chaos Spirit Searon"(LV3/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/600 DEF/800) and "Chaos Spirit Landcaron"(LV4/EARTH/Spirit/Effect/ATK/900 DEF/850) Now "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior", "Chaos Spirit Searon", and "Chaos Spirit Landcaron" use "Triple Cross Fusion" to Fusion Summon "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior"(LV9/FIRE/Warrior/Fusion/Effect/ATK/3000 DEF/2600) Now his effect activates, he gains 400 ATK & DEF for every card in both our Graveyards and that makes a combined number of 4, so he gains 1600 ATK & DEF. (3000 + 1600 = 4600 ATK/ 2600 + 1600 = 4200 DEF) Now "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior" destroy his "Synchronized Giant Raven". (Link counters: I activate the Continuous Trap "Synchronized Guard", when this card is activated, by removing 1 "Synchronized" monster from my Graveyard from play, I can negate your attack and your monster's ATK & DEF go down 400 points.) (4600 - 400 = 4200 ATK/ 4200 - 400 = 3800 DEF) I play 1 card face-down and I play the Field Spell "Chaos Realm", so "Zeo" gets 1000 ATK & DEF stronger. (4200 + 1000 = 5200 ATK/ 3800 + 1000 = 4800 DEF)

 

Nick/ 3 cards/ LP 7500

Link/ 0 cards/ LP 10000

Field: "Chaos Realm"

 

Link: Turn 3

I draw. I activate my face-down "Synchronized Draw", when this card is activated, I can select 1 "Synchronized" monster from my Graveyard and I can draw cards equal to the level of the selected "Synchronized" monster, so I choose "Synchronized Angel", so I draw 4 cards. (Link: Hand: 5) Next, I play the spell "Cost Down", so all monsters in my hand have their levels decreased by 2. Now I summon "Synchronized Archfiend"(LV4/DARK/Fiend/Tuner/ATK/1500 DEF/1500) Now I tune my "Synchronized Giant Raven"(LV8) with my "Synchronized Archfiend"(LV4) to Synchro Summon "Synchronized Dragon"(LV12/DARK/Dragon/Synchro/Tuner/ATK/3000 DEF/3000) (Nick says: You forget that since you sent more cards to your Graveyard, "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior" gets stronger. (5200 + 1600 = 6800 ATK/ 4800 + 1600 = 6400 DEF) Now I activate the effects of my "Synchronized" monsters, "Archfiend"(s) effect allows me to send a Tuner monster from my Deck to my Graveyard. (Nick says: Which gives "Zeo" more strength. (6800 + 400 = 7200 ATK/ 6400 + 400 = 6800 DEF) "Giant Raven"(s) effect returns all Spell and Trap Cards on the field to the owner's hand. Now I play another "Double Summon", so I summon "Synchronized Arsonist"(LV3/FIRE/Pyro/Tuner/ATK/1500 DEF/500) Now I play a spell card you know as "Level Draw", so I pay 500 LP (Link: LP 9500) and I select "Synchronized Dragon", so I draw 6 cards. (Link: Hand: 6) (Nick says: You're only making "Zeo" more stronger. (7200 + 800 = 8000 ATK/ 6800 + 800 = 7600 DEF) Now I play the Field Spell "Reverse-Synchronized Realm" (Nick says: What does that do?) You're about to find out. Now I tune my "Synchronized Dragon"(LV12) with my "Synchronized Arsonist"(LV3). (Nick says: But there isn't a level above 12 in the game.) Now "Reverse-Synchronized Realm"(s) effect activates, when a monster is used for a Synchro Summon, its controller can instead have the level of the monster be treated as its current level multiplied by -1. (Nick says: Meaning "Arsonist"(s) level becomes -3.) Right. Now as I was saying, I tune my "Dragon"(LV12) with my "Arsonist"(LV-3) to Synchro Summon "Synchronized Leviathan"(LV9/WATER/Sea Serpent/Synchro/Tuner/ATK/2700 DEF/2700) Now I activate the effects of my "Synchronized" monsters, First, "Dragon"(s) effect destroys all face-up monsters on the field except face-up "Synchronized" monsters, so "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior" is destroyed. (Nick counters: I activate from my hand, the Quick-Play Spell "Awakening of Zeo", when a Fusion "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" is destroyed, I can Special Summon "Zeo The Chaos Warrior"(LV7/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/2500 DEF/2200) from my Deck. And thanks to "Chaos Realm", he gains 1000 ATK & DEF. (2500 + 1000 = 3500 ATK/ 2200 + 1000 = 3200 DEF) So you can't attack me.) But I can inflict damage to you. "Arsonist"(s) effect inflicts 1500 points of damage to you. (Nick: LP 6000) I play 1 card face-down and end my turn.

 

"This Deck is awesome!" yelled Link. "I think I might use this in the tournament coming up."

 

"What tournament?", asked Nick.

 

"The Duelist Rising Tournament at the Kaibadome." answered Link. "The director of the city announced it to all the dimensions last week. I know I'm gonna win with this Deck. You should enter, too."

 

"Why not? Could be fun.", said Nick. "Alright. Let's finish this Duel now."

 

"How are you gonna do that?", asked Link

 

"I always have a way out of everything. You'll see.", said Nick

 

Nick/ 2 cards/ LP 6000

Link/ 4 cards/ LP 9500

Field: "Chaos Realm" & "Reverse-Synchronized Realm"

 

Nick: Turn 4

I draw. (smiles) I play the spell "Gift of Forgiveness", by paying 1000 LP, I can draw 3 cards. (Nick: Hand: 5) (smiles) I equip "Zeo" with "Chaos Sword" and "Zeo Strike". First, "Chaos Sword" gives "Zeo" an extra 1000 ATK. (3500 + 1000 = 4500 ATK) Second, "Zeo Strike" gives him an extra 800 ATK. (4500 + 800 = 5300 ATK) And not only that, when he successfully destroys a monster, the destroyed monsters ATK are dealt to you as damage. Now "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" destroy his "Synchronized Leviathan" and when "Zeo" attacks, he gains 500 ATK. (5300 + 500 = 5800 ATK) (Link counters: I activate the Continuous Trap "Synchronized Guard") I play the Quick-Play Spell "Mystical Space Typhoon", so you trap is destroyed. (Link thinks: He really does have a way to get out of everything.) (Link: LP 6400) Now "Zeo Strike"(s) effect activates. (Link: LP 3700) (Link says: I still have LP.) Not for long. Since it's still my Battle Phase, I can activate the Quick-Play Spell "Graveyard Cross Fusion", when this card is activated, if there is a Fusion "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" in my Graveyard, I can send the Material Monsters from my field or Deck to the Graveyard and Special Summon the Fusion "Zeo The Chaos Warrior" from my Graveyard, so I send "Zeo-Nexus The Chaos Warrior"(LV4/LIGHT/Warrior/Effect/ATK/1900 DEF/1500), "Chaos Spirit Searon"(LV3/FIRE/Spirit/Effect/ATK/600 DEF/800) and "Chaos Spirit Landcaron"(LV4/EARTH/Spirit/Effect/ATK/900 DEF/850) to the Graveyard and revive "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior"(LV9/FIRE/Warrior/Fusion/Effect/ATK/3000 DEF/2600) Now his effect activates, which means his ATK go all the way up to... (8800 + 3000 = 11800 ATK) "Now "Zeo The Erupting Chaos Warrior" END THIS!!!" yelled Nick. (A giant maelstrom of fire surrounded Link and his Life Point meter dropped to 0.)

 

Nick: LP 5000/ Winner

Link: LP 0/ Defeated

 

When the fire let up, Link was standing there, all burnt up, but he's alive. Then he fell on his back with a silly look on his face.

 

"That... was... incredible.", said Link all tired.

 

"Sorry about that.", said Nick. "You're all right, aren't you?"

 

Then, as quick as he could, he got back up and he was feeling great as ever.

 

"I've never felt so alive!", yelled Link. "Now to answer your question from before, please follow me."

 

Everyone followed Link to a secret door inside the basement. Behind the door was his lab.

 

"Okay.", said Link. "I've been doing some research on the flow of Darkness outside the city. Knowing that I couldn't research it just by watching it, I went outside the city and got a sample of the Darkness. It's in this jar, but I still can't make anything with it."

 

"What would happen if you opened it?", asked Cody.

 

"That's what I'm gonna find out.", answered Link. "Stand back."

 

Everyone stood back as Link opened the jar and out came a tiny dark aura that took the form of a spider and landed in Link's right hand.

 

"It looks like it's harmless." said Link.

 

Then the spider crawled into the sleeve of Link's coat and Link's eyes widened, then a purple mark of a spider was glowing on his wrist.

 

"Link!", yelled Nick. "Link, are you okay?"

 

"I'm more than okay.", said Link with a distorted voice. "I'm a Dark Signer."

 

"A Dark Signer?!", yelled Nick. "Then I was right. There are more people here besides D.C.Q. I just didn't think it was them."

 

"Now I have a question for you." said Link. "Are you ready for a rematch with my new and improved "Synchronized" Deck?"

 

Nick's face was angry about what they did to Link, so he only had one choice.

 

"Bring it on.", said Nick.

 

They went back to the Duel Arena and they have their Duel Disks ready. Then a circle of purple fire surrounded Nick and Link and they both shouted...

 

"Let's Duel!", shouted Nick & Link.

 

Card of the Day: "Synchronized Dragon"

 

 

Link finally tested out his Deck, but Nick was victorius. But I'm afraid now thing are going to be a lot worse now that Link turned into a Dark Signer. "Next Chapter"! Link's new and improved "Synchronized" Deck has really taken its anger out on Nick in their life or death battle. Will Nick come out alive, or will he fall under the power of the Dark Signers? Find out next time. Until then, KEEP ON DUELING!!

[ragnarok1945]

Getting no cards in his hand isn't smart so quickly for Link

[Mysty]

I think I have an idea what Link will do next. It's cool that you're using the Synchronized archetype.

[ragnarok1945]

ok, what do you think he'll do next?

[Mysty]

Here's what I'm thinking:

He'll probably use another draw card in order to get at least 3 cards in his hand if he doesn't already have 3 cards in his hand. Then he'll activate Double Summon or something similar, allowing him to summon Synchronized Arsonist from his hand, who will be Level 3 because of Cost Down. Then he'll activate Reverse-Synchronized Realm, which will allow him to Synchro Summon by changing his Arsonist's Level to -3 (I'm not sure if that would work with how Cost Down works. If it doesn't work this way I would have to slightly change the wording of the Field Spell so that it would work like that because that's how I initially intended for it to work), therefore letting him Synchronize his Dragon and his Arsonist to Synchro Summon Synchronized Leviathan (ATK 2700). Synchronized dragon will destroy all cards on the field except face-up Synchronized cards, Arsonist will inflict 1500 damage, and Leviathan will attack directly.

That's what I think anyway.

 

Bad news Haou:

Script format' date=' writing your fanfic with a layout similar to a theatrical play or a film manuscript, is not allowed.

[spoiler=Example']

Alice: Hey, Bob! What's up?

 

Bob: Nothing special, Alice.

 

A fanfic that uses script format is reportable. You will be given ONE WEEK to adjust your fanfic to this rule.

[Haou Devil 12]

Bad news Haou:

Script format' date=' writing your fanfic with a layout similar to a theatrical play or a film manuscript, is not allowed.

[spoiler=Example']

Alice: Hey, Bob! What's up?

 

Bob: Nothing special, Alice.

 

A fanfic that uses script format is reportable. You will be given ONE WEEK to adjust your fanfic to this rule.

 

Aw man! Look you got to help me or they'll lock my Fan Fic. I put a lot of work into making it this far in the story. Please?

[Mysty]

I'm not sure how I would be able to help. After all, I don't know what any of the monsters look like.

[Haou Devil 12]

I'm not sure how I would be able to help. After all' date=' I don't know what any of the monsters look like.

[/quote']

 

Oh well. Then I decided to continue the story by creating another thread on Fan Fic. But this time, I'll describe everything that going on in the story. Once I finish Chapter 33, I'll get right on it. Since all the chapters I've written already have script format, I wouldn't blame them if they locked this thread.

[Mysty]

They'll lock that one as soon as you make it because fan-fics shouldn't take more up than 1 thread. Just make all the chapters on the first three pages of this thread into regular writing and then the last three pages and chapters after that in non-script format and change all the other ones in your spare time. You'll have to sell out all your spare time to this thread because you only have at most about 100 hours to change all the chapters into non-script format. that doesn't sound too hard, since all you have to do is add quotation marks, remove the "[name]:" things and describe things.

[ragnarok1945]

I'm not sure how I would be able to help. After all' date=' I don't know what any of the monsters look like.

[/quote']

 

you never thought of this when you were writing the fic?

[Haou Devil 12]

Chapter 33 is finished and script format is changed. (sort of) Please read and comment.

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I'm not sure how I would be able to help. After all' date=' I don't know what any of the monsters look like.

[/quote']

 

you never thought of this when you were writing the fic?

 

I didn't forget the monsters. It's just that my monsters are too hard to describe. No one would get what I'm saying anyways. So when I started writing the Duels of my fic, I visualize the battles, the attacks, the features, and the outcomes of each Duel so I can continue the story. It's not hard to visualize the Duels while writing them. Even when you're writing in Script Format.

[Mysty]

Chapter 33 was good, especially in the new format. Even though you still didn't describe the monsters, at least you got rid of the basic script format. If you can't describe the monsters, at least describe what the people are doing while they're talking.

[Haou Devil 12]

Thanks. BTW, thanks for giving me that strategy in your above post.

[ragnarok1945]

also too quick of a rematch for one Link lost. Usually don't see one that fast

[Mysty]

Hey Haou, if you aren't already doing so, you should at least change the format of a few more chapters at the beginning of the fic.

 

Anyway, I hope Link can duel well with the Dark Tuner side of the Synchronized cards. We can wait for that chapter until after all the other chapters are changed from script format though, since that should be your top priority right now. If I could help with this process, please tell me how.

[Haou Devil 12]

Hey Haou' date=' if you aren't already doing so, you should at least change the format of a few more chapters at the beginning of the fic.

 

Anyway, I hope Link can duel well with the Dark Tuner side of the Synchronized cards. We can wait for that chapter until after all the other chapters are changed from script format though, since that should be your top priority right now. If I could help with this process, please tell me how.

[/quote']

 

Don't worry. I'm way ahead of you. Chapters 1 - 8 are already reformatted. I just have... (depressed) 24 more to go. In any case, Chapter 34 won't be written until I get done reformatting. And at the speed I'm going, I'm sure to be done in 2 days.

[ragnarok1945]

that's not too long of a wait, how long does it usually take to reformat 1 chapter?

[Haou Devil 12]

that's not too long of a wait' date=' how long does it usually take to reformat 1 chapter?

[/quote']

 

Aside from all the videos and T.V. I watch, about 15 minutes more or less.

[ragnarok1945]

I considered that quite fast, but that's usually because I spend so long proofreading if I upload a chap

[Haou Devil 12]

Okay. I have 4 more chapters to go. How long until they check my Fan Fic?

[ragnarok1945]

beats me. Depends on how well your selling skills are