EliminateHRN Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Hello, I have been working on a PokeMon fan-fic for a while. The story is about a girl (yes, girl) named Akira Ivey. She starts her her own PokeMon journey with her friend Felix Dixon. But Akira's rival, Sapphire Potts, and Felix's rival, Andrew Borlock, are getting in the way. The first season takes place on a made-up region called Iscarc. Well here's other infomation and the actual story. [spoiler=Characters] Name: Akira Ivey Age: 13 Gender: Female Appearance: [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/dptr002.png[/IMG] Home Town/Region: Shyclove Town, Iscarc. [spoiler=Akira's Pokemon Team & Items] [b][u]Pokemon Team[/b][/u] [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/dpmfa390.png[/IMG] Chimchar, LV. 5 Female Attacks: Scratch Leer --------------------------------------------------- [b][u]Items[/b][/u] 5x PokeBalls PokeDex[/spoiler] Name: Felix Dixon Age: 13 Gender: Male Appearance: [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/frlgemtr135.png[/IMG] Home Town/Region: Shyclove Town, Iscarc. [spoiler=Felix's Pokemon Team & Items] [b][u]Pokemon Team[/b][/u] [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/dpmfa393.png[/IMG] Piplup, LV. 5 Male Attacks: Pound Growl ---------------------------------------------------- [b][u]Items[/b][/u] 5x PokeBalls PokeDex[/spoiler] Name: Prof. Ronald Grave Age: Unknown, possibly above 30. Gender: Male Appearance: [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/frlgemtrex010.png[/IMG] Home Town/Region: Unknown Name: Sapphire Potts Age: 14 Gender: Female Appearance: [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/dptr050.png[/IMG] Home Town/Region: Shyclove Town, Iscarc. [spoiler=Sapphire's Pokemon Team & Items] [b][u]Pokemon Team[/b][/u] [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/dpmfa007.png[/IMG] Squirtle, LV. 5 Female Attacks: Tackle Tail Whip --------------------------------------------------- [b][u]Items[/b][/u] 5x PokeBalls PokeDex[/spoiler] Name: Andrew Borlock Age: 14 Gender: Male Appearance: [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/dptr048.png[/IMG] Home Town/Region: Shyclove Town, Iscarc. [spoiler=Andrew's Pokemon Team & Items] [b][u]Pokemon Team[/b][/u] [IMG]http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii63/Shadow_Avian/dpmfa252.png[/IMG] Treecko, LV.5 Male Attacks: Pound Leer --------------------------------------------------- [b][u]Items[/b][/u] 5x PokeBalls PokeDex[/spoiler] I'll update any time a [u]important[/u] character is revealed.[/spoiler] [spoiler=The Iscarc PokeDex] 1. Chimchar 2. --- 3. --- 4. Treecko 5. --- 6. --- 7. Piplup 8. --- 9. --- 10. Squirtle 11. --- 12. ---[/spoiler] ----------------------------------------------------------------- [spoiler=Episode One: The Journey Begins] [align=center][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7En9uIDdc50]Opening Theme[/url] [b][u]Episode One: The Journey Begins[/b][/u][/align] [b]Akira's Mom[/b]: Akira! Get up, honey! Akira yawned and opened her eyes. She got out of bed and put on her clothes. Akira was excited today because today was the day she starts her PokeMon journey. Her friend, Felix Dixon, was also coming along. She ran downstairs to see her mother putting plates on the table. Her mom looked up and smiled. [b]Akira's Mom[/b]: Are you excited? [b]Akira[/b]: Yes, mother. What time is it. Her mom looked at the clock. She frowned. [b]Akira's Mom[/b]: Fifteen minutes until noon. Akira jumped. [b]Akira[/b]: I have to be there in fifteen minutes? I better eat fast. Akira sat down and started eating. She shoved foood after food after food into her mouth. Her mom stopped her. [b]Akira's Mom[/b]: Honey, stop eating so fast. Akira cheeks glowed red. She swallowed the food. [b]Akira[/b]: Sorry, I'm trying to not be last. [b]Akira's Mom[/b]: Well you can do it without shoving food in your mouth. The next five minutes were silence. Akira finished and got up. She grabbed a backpack and looked inside of it. Her mother came up. [b]Akira's Mom[/b]: Got everything? Akira nodded and put the backpack on. She hugged her mom. [b]Akira[/b]: I have to go get Felix. Bye. I'll try to come over when I can. Her mom waved as she ran out the door. She ran down a long dirt road and stopped at a house. She ran up the driveway. She stopped and caught her breath. Akira knocked on the door and a teenager boy, Felix, opened it. [b]Akira[/b]: Ready, Felix? [b]Felix[/b]: Yep. Bye mom. Bye dad. See ya later. Felix closed the door behind him. They ran to the end of the dirt road. [b]Felix[/b]: Where is the Grave's lab again? [b]Akira[/b]: Downtown. Come on! They ran as fast as they could until they got to downtown Shyclove. They walked until they found a big, tall building. [b]Felix[/b]: Here it is. They ran inside the lab. A middle-aged man was behind a desk with two other trainers. [b]Akira[/b]: You have to be kidding. Sapphire and Andrew? [b]Felix[/b]: What are they doing here? The man noticed them. [b]Man[/b]: Akira, Felix. I was wondering when you would get here. [b]Akira[/b]: Hello, Prof. Grave. What are [i]they[/i] doing here? The man, Prof. Grave, looked at the other two trainers. [b]Prof. Grave[/b]: Sapphire and Andrew is here to get there Pokemon as well. Felix sighed and walked over to the desk. Akira stood beside Sapphire. [b]Sapphire[/b]: Hi, nerd. [b]Akira[/b]: Shut up. Prof. Grave gave them all a PokeDex. It tells the data of all Pokemon you catch and/or see. [b]Prof. Grave[/b]: Akira, I'll let you pick first. This is Chimchar, this one is Treecko, This Pokeball is Piplup, and this final one is Squirtle. Grave said the names while pointing to it. Akira picked the first one he pointed too, Chimchar. It was really cute. Felix was next and he chose Piplup. Sapphire picked Squirtle and Andrew picked Treecko. Grave gave them all five Pokeballs to start off with. [b]Prof. Grave[/b]: You can buy more at the PokeMart. They left and Andrew looked at Felix. [b]Andrew[/b]: We'll see you later. Come on, Sapphire. They walked off. Felix shrugged. [b]Felix[/b]: What to do now? [b]Akira[/b]: We have to head to Ashworth, but we need to go through Shyclove Forest first. I heard it's a good place to find battles and wild PokeMon. Felix nodded. [b]Felix[/b]: We'll head to Ashworth then. And with that, they were off, chasing a giant dream. [align=center]To Be Continued... [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5I9rrqN7q0I]Ending Theme[/url][/align][/spoiler] Hope you enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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EliminateHRN Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Thanks! The second chapter will be up soon. UPDATE: I added the characters PokeMon Team/Items. Look there if you want to know their pokemon/items. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Great, I See This Turning Into A Big Thing........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Guys, I'm sorry I haven't updated this. I been busy with the holidays and school. I should be able to post the next chapter by tomorrow. Sorry again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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