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[.Requiem]

This is a first time a did effect like this and I was just wandering if this is correct. So any experienced members can help.

 

Effect:

If this card is successfully Normal Summoned on your field you can choose of following effects:

-This card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase of your turn.

-Deal 500 points to your opponent directly.

[Nijikioku]

I know I'm not that advance but I pay attention to cards. I personally think that it would be.

Effect: When this card is successfully Normal Summoned you can choose from one of the following effects:

-This card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase of the turn it's summoned.

-Deal 500 points of direct damage to you opponent's Life Points.

[ShadowRSonic]

This is a first time a did effect like this and I was just wandering if this is correct. So any experienced members can help.

 

Effect:

If this card is successfully Normal Summoned on your field you can choose of following effects:

-This card gains 500 ATK until the End Phase of your turn.

-Deal 500 points to your opponent directly.

Effect:

If this card is successfully Normal Summoned on your side of the field you can select and activate one of the following effects:

•This card gains 500 ATK points until your End Phase.

•Inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponent

 

The bits in BOLD are the modified parts.

It's ALT + 7 for the bullet but It might not work in the card maker, if not just continue using the hyphens

 

@ the last poster sorry, but you used bad Card grammar and English grammar.

Also, you don't use "when" Because it might not be summoned.

[Seta]

When this card is successfully Normal Summoned on your field, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects:

• Increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the End Phase.

• Inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent.

 

That's right.

[Luna Diviner]

When this card is successfully Normal Summoned on your field, you can select and activate 1 of the following effects:

• Increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the End Phase.

• Inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent.

 

Remove the bolded word and it's right. It doesn't have to be succesful. If you opponent negates it, call priority and inflict 500.

[Seta]

Your right, DisHonest (I'll call you like that, you know why XD)

[Luna Diviner]

Yup, I know. And I'm usually right. (not being cocky or anything)