Star wars the rise of the nuntral

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[align=center]Stars wars

the rise of the Neutral Force[/align]

 

[spoiler=INTRODUCTION]

 

A new age

 

15 YEARS AFTER, LUKE SKYWALKER KILL HIS FATHER DARTH VADER. He became a Jedi Master and was allow to be in control of the new Republic Academy and unaware to him he had a son called Nathan Skywalker. Even though the Empire & the republic made peace, The feeling of War was raining all over the Galaxy. A new force is Coming and A new war many begin but Has the Empire & Republic build more troops, the empire took Hoth and the plants near it. So even tough the republic was rebuild with the new rebel troopers there new planet naboo was the empire next target but with both sides strong will there ever be an end to this war which 15 years later a new war is about to bring.

 

 

[spoiler=characters]

 

Nathan Skywalker-

age:16 unaware to Nathan and luke skywalker is his dad. he was born with an hidden Nuntral Froce dragon sealed inside him. later on turns to the dark side.

 

Luke skywalker-

Age: ??

He became a Jedi Master and was allow to be in control of the new Republic Academy. unware to him that Nathan skywalker was his son.

 

Mary Ross-

Age:16

Nathan's skywalker mate until later on when there are together.

 

Lee

age:25

Lee is the master of Nathan and Mary Ross

 

Darth vader-

age: 30

After luke skywalker killed darth vader in the battle of the new hope, a unkown people rebuild him and gave in more power and soon he will remake the army that was in star wars episode 1 & 2 witch the bad side has. you see him reborn in the hour long episode at the end of the sason.

 

Van-

age:18

He was taking from is home by the dark lord and he taught him the ways of the force. He late became the dark lord new Padawan

 

Tom-

age:??

the first member of the New Republic council.

 

dark lord

age??

bio: it is said ears after the Slith was killed, a powerful rouge jedi was made the dark lord after a hard battle of the empire

war.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Season 1]

 

[spoiler= Episode 1- The battle On Hoth:]

 

It was a old republic transport ship, Nathan Skywalker with about another 30 Jedi on board. It was heading to Yavin 4 where unaware to him his father Jedi master Luke sky walker owned the republic first Jedi Academy. Though the window Nathan could see stars but with No Fleets. Has there across the Tatooine, a Jedi name Mary Ross that was sitting next to Nathan said “ I wish this Academy is good has I head that the battling has ended between the empire & republic. Has there was getting near the hyper jump place two new scout places flew by and was heading to some were near the Sun.

 

About 25 miles away, near Roche asteroids a Hidden empire outpost Space station. Inside the new empire Jedi Van walking into the control were four storm troopers was watch the screen and he said “ Ok, anything to report. A clone trooper said “ yes Sir we have hear form our scout plane that a Republic transport ship is getting ready to hyper jump into the Meridian Sector.” Van “ What, sent out 0ur fleet of are new fight jets and shoot them down.” stromtooper 12343 “ Sir we have made peace with the republic for 15 years now.” Van “ So what send them out now”

stromtooper 12343 “ Ok Sir I will.”

Van “ soon the republic will know that we will have another war until there is no Republic left. “

 

Inside old republic transport ship the pilot look out the front and saw a fleet of empire fight jest heading towards then. The Pilot said “ Ok we need two Jedi to man gun down the floor below has we are about to get into the Flak.” Nathan & Mary “ we do it.”

Pilot “ Ok be careful.” Has the fighters came closer Nathan & Mary jump on to the guns which unknown to them there are all in heavy Flak has the fighters started shooting. Mary “ We lets fire.” has the ship was shaking and fighters flying passed, Nathan and Mary started shooting. The gun spun around fire at an oncoming fighter and destroyed it, Nathan “ I got one.” Mary “ Same here lets do this.” The clatter of the Transport ship was slowing down has a fighter blew out a engine with is missile. On Tatooine the Hidden rebel village look up and saw a space fight. Has there turn away a fighter ship was blow down my Nathan and was heading towards a house with 4 people inside.

 

Has the fight in space was still going on and the ship was shaking, Nathan & Mary kept blowing fighters. Nathan “ Ha, I got 10 so far.” Mary “ I only got nine but there only 15 left so lets see who win in this game.” Nathan “ you will lose.” At the hidden space station, Van rush back in and use grip to kill a storm trooper and he said “ Hey, what happing.”

Storm trooper 12342 “ the transporter ship seems to be firing and blew up our fighter fleet. Van “ Dam, that old republic transporter ship has to be blew down so fire missile full power in the gun ports of the republic ship.” storm trooper 12342 “ right away Sir.” the two missile was fired form the space station and head towards Nathan & Mary, but at the transporter ship, the flak was getting more deeper has a fleet of another 20 xyz fighters came though hyper jump. Pilot thinking “ Dam I lost nearly all engine and when we are finally across Tatooine And near the hyper jump.” The fighters twist and turn around the republic transporter ship. Has Nathan and Mary kept firing at the oncoming xyz fighter jets.

 

Has the transporter Ship was about to make a last jump into Hyper space the missile was about to hit the gun port and Nathan said “ Jump.”

Mary “ what”

Nathan jump and speared Mary near the door just has the gun ports blew off the ship. The wind was to strong and Nathan with Mary was heading out of the hole but just before there fall off the small hook Another Jedi open the door and push the though. Tom “ are u guys alright.”

“ yes thanks and how about to Mary.”

“ I am fine to thanks.”

“ well come you tow we have to get back to top has we about to make a hyper jump but don’t worry a call went out to the republic new council.” Both “ Ok lets move.”

 

At 19:00 at the Naboo republic base, A rebel trooper ran in to the council and said “ We have got a back up call form the transporter Ship.” new Jedi Lord Labtec said “ What, the empire has started war again after 15 years of peace.”

“ yes Sir.” all the council look at each other and said “ Ok, trooper 2243 Send out a Small fleet witch is near and not being used also, I be sending two of my Jedi masters out to help with battle, plus we will gather a big fleet together just in case The attack happens again.” “ Right Sir get on it now.”

 

Back In space the transporter Ship just did an hyper jump but has there went a small republic fleet with two Jedi masters onboard arrived and has the ship was firing, a fleet of planes came from the hanger to started firing at the Empire. After the transporter ship finished the hyper jump there were near Yavin 4 where the Jedi Academy was but just before they got there the transporter Ship was heading on a crash course into Yavin 4. The Cockpit blew up and the pilot was killed, some of the Jedi inside the ship make it to the escape pod and left but Nathan and Mary was still on it heading down. “ Mary, come on we have to try to land this ship.” “ We can’t”

“ come on before the ship blows up. Just before Mary answered the door blew open and the equipment was going out of the hole. Nathan and Mary got to the Cockpit but the control was to damaged to try to land it. Nathan hug Mary has the ship went down but just then a Evil monster Voice came inside Nathan head “ unleashed my power and I can save you.”

Mary “ What was that.”

“ I am not sure but come on the control are working a bit o Mary pull the brakes down before we crash in that mountain.”

“ Ok.” The ship was heading near the mountain and has there look at the window there saw little monster walking about crying. The ship landed but it blew Mary way has Nathan was knock out cold.

 

One day later Nathan woke up inside of what was left of the ship. Has we got up he was thinking “ Dam better go find Mary.” Nathan ran out of the door but has he did two storm troopers came out and said “ Stop right there.” He look around but saw a unused gun laying on the floor so has he was about to get shoot he jumped to pick up the gun and blast it at the two storm troopers. Nathan said “ Strom troopers here why, better find Mary.” Has Nathan ran close to the woods on Yavin 4, he Mary crying so he ran towards the sound. until he reach a waterfall were a tree was there. He shoot at the tree and the tree fell so Nathan ran across. Mary said “ we have to be at the Academy before noon.” “ Dam come lets get moving.” while there ran a small army of about 25 storm troopers came running behind then. After a while there got to the old temple on Yavin 4.” there hid behind a small wall has the 25 storm troopers ran passed then. “ what a there doing there.”

“ Not sure but come before time runs out.”

 

Nathan and Mary carried on down a small river which would lead them to the Academy. Has there hot close to the Academy there jumped behind a rock and look around and saw 50 storm troopers looking around. Mary “ Nathan what should we do there to many.” Nathan “ I know.” just then a sound of a dual light saber and gun shots. After a few minutes it was quite then has there jump out there saw another Jedi looking at them. ??? “ don’t worry I took care of all the storm troopers o are you guys heading to the Academy.

“ Yes we are.”

“ well follow me and I take you a safe way but just then two of the empire Jedi’s jumped down with there single light saber has well as with there black coats.” “ what are there.”

??? “ don’t worry I take came of this.” Has Nathan and Mary sat down on some logs then see this unknown Jedi fighting with other two Jedi’s. Has the unknown Jedi jumped into the and roll behind the first Jedi is slice him with his dual light saber.

Then he use Mind tick, to control the other and kill him. “ ok that finish lets go before the time runs out.

 

Finally there arrive at the academy and there stood in the first line has there was another three behind them. Has over 40 Jedi look at like sky walker he said “ thank for coming to this Academy, here you learn the ways of the force has well getting good with your light saber that I will give. Now in a bit you will begin training but first the dark side of the force is powered my hate and if you have an hate inside it may turn you so hear my words.” Then a another pilot ran in and spoke to Luke. A few minutes later like said “ Ok the rest of you go with your master to train but Nathan and Mary come with me outside quickly.” there ran out side but only to see three transport ships land right at the Academy and on each 20 rebel troopers. Luke sky walker “ Ok here or light saber, a gold for you Nathan and a sliver for you Mary.” Nathan “ cool I like these light saber.” “ Ok now here your master- Lee who will be teaching you about a the force and u will make a pit stop on the way but one more thing you must take Hoth before the empire finds are new plans, so go.”

 

Three transporter ship took of and when it got out of Yavin 4 inside the first ship Lee said “ Ok, we will be heading to a planet called TAANAB to teach you some core tanning but for now I want to teach how to use a light saber so you know if u have to use it.” Has Nathan look around at the 20 rebel troopers that was the ship him and Mary “ Ok, lets do this.”

Has the ship was travelling in space lee got out a small ball with fire small bullets and he said “ Ok, now I will give these two balls now just hit the bullets with your lights Saber when there come out.” So Nathan and Mary started hitting the bullets but meanwhile back on Hoth at the new empire main base, was a new Jedi that the dark side train came out with about 20 storm troopers. He went to the Dark lord and said “ Ok, we have look but we could not find anything.” Dark lord “ what, dam the republic, get two of my powerful here now with a fleet of storm troopers.” “ Ok, Sir right on it.”

 

After a while two Jedi masters came in with sum stromtooper and said “ what do u dark lord.” “ I want every fleet that is close by guarding Hoth o also I need you to go to Naboo to kill a Jedi knight.” “ right this won’t take long see you when it finish.” “ you better do it.” So has the Jedi prepared to go to naboo. The dark lord, sense an unknown power in the force.

Back at the transporter ship and has it came cross wayland Nathan and Mary fell asleep but lee use push to get them up. “ hey don’t go to sleep we have work to do so come lets do that again.

Nathan “ Do we have to,”

“ Yep we do” then has there got back to work a rebel trooper said” we are near TAANAB and about to make a hyper jump.

“ Ok do it.” the three transporter went into hyper jump were there was in the Expansion region near TAANAB.

 

Has there came across aquaris, there saw a small light flying passed them. Has there look out there saw a few empire xyz fighters heading back to base. There arrive and land in the rebels hidden Training centre in TAANAB. When Nathan got out he said “ what the hell is all this men here.”

“ doesn’t matter come on I will take you both to the training course.” has Mary walked she saw a few bounty hunters watching them. Finally there arrive at the training course and lee said “ Ok, Nathan u take left, Mary you take right.”

“ Ok lets do this.” So has Nathan walked though the left door lee was watch over both. Has soon has Nathan reach the first room is come see two doors so has he ran up to one it shut. Lee said “ Ok Nathan use the speed force to get though onto the next part.” Nathan use the speed force and roll into the next sera which was more differ cult has Mary said “ well, until I finish my course this should keep you busy. He saw two Jedi robots come out and he got his gold light saber out ready. Nathan jump over the first robot has the other counter is attack and has there was in a saber lock the other robot was attacking Nathan from behind.

 

After a while Nathan passed out. Meanwhile has lee look down on Nathan , he could hear the scream of Mary but that Monument he could sense a unknown evil power in the force. Has he look down he saw dark energy coming out of Nathan and has the dark energy came out a twister followed. The twister blew passed the two robots which blew up and has it reach the door, the door just blew up also then the power went and the force was back to normal. Lee thinking “ Dam, what was that better no tell him.” Nathan awake up and passed into the next area unaware if the power he has a neural force with a dark power inside him. He got to the next area where he used push to open the door to the finish line. Back, at the transporter Ship the pilot got a message from the republic council witch tom said “ this is code red get to Hoth and take it before there find the plans.”

 

Has the ship are ready to take off Nathan, lee and Mary jumped onto the ship. When left the planet of TAANAB two empire fighters was on there back. Lee look out and saw that a empire fleet was heading towards them. “ Lee, what happing.”

“ Nothing, but two rebels troopers ge ton the guns.”

“ Ok sir.” once again a gun war happen has there travel, the rebel troop fired the guns has the fighter jets keeps coming and the spaceship cannons would not fire. There twist turn but the rebel troops was blasting passed the fighters like there were toys. Has the fighters return back to the battle ship, there knew that soon the empire would sense them coming. Nathan jumped into an escape pod with Mary has there left the ship. Lee said “ what you doing.”

“ we meet you at Hoth we try to hold them back.”

“ be careful there are two powerful for you rookie Jedi.

“ ok.”

“ he reminds of Anakin sky walker.” the escape pod was heading to a unused spaceship.

 

 

[spoiler= Episode 2- The battle on hoth II]

Has there look out the pod there see it old and dirty republic war ship. The pods land right inside the hanger when there saw two old X wings still stay so we out a second thought there hotwire it and flew outside of what was left of the ship to find the transporter ship. Mary “ well, I did not know that flying was so fun.” “ I know it is but come lets do what we came to do.” “ Ok, lets go tough the empire air space to reach Hoth quicker. “ No we stay on track, just in case a space wars started but I wish I was at the Academy.” “ I know but don’t worry we be there soon so we can get new missions or train more. “ ok but look were coming across Tatooine and I think that there are our transporter ships that just went passed.

 

At the space station near the Roche asteroids Van runs into the control room and said “ what is it now.” “ Sir we report that three republic transporter ship just passed Tatooine, has he look around he saw the storm troopers waiting for his next order. “ well you know what to do.”

“ sorry to say but we have no spare ships.”

“ What, we in that case send the message to the dark lord of Hoth that the republic are heading that way.” “ Yes Sir.” Has Nathan and Mary follow beside the transporter Ship, another empire Fleet just missed seeing them has there go towards Hoth. Just before the space was about to fire there hyper jumped again and now was in Bothan Space. Has Nathan and Mary was still beside the ships there saw space ship which was picking up gold. Inside the ship a rebel trooper said “ request to shoot it down.”

“ No, Nathan and Lee see what that his then head back here,”

“ Ok master we do that now and Mary lets go.”

“ O yes lets go.” Mary flew behind Nathan and she said “ Hey, lets land inside to see what there.” “ Ok.” has there landed inside there saw three space thief’s holding them at gun point, has there was about of fire Nathan and Mary roll over and slice them with there light saber.

There ran further down the ship has well slice more men in half.

“ Get out of there now.”

“ Not yet.”

 

Nathan said “ Mary, we have to get to the control to blew this ship up so no knows that we was here.” “ Ok.” meanwhile back inside the first transporter ship Lee said “ Dam, what are there doing we be doing another hyper jump soon.” “ Sir, not long before we make the jump.”

“ can’t it wait.” the rebel troopers look around and said “ nope sorry.”

Has Lee, was trying to reach Nathan and Mary, he look out the window. When he look at he sees the ship blew up, the parts form the ship was going everywhere but fine lee was happy when the two x wings flew out.” the X wings fighters made it back to the transporter and went alone side again. There were near nearly the Hyberjump but just before it made the jump all three transporter Ships were under attack my a fleet of space thefts. Pilot said “ there got our hyper drive.”

“ what.” the ships was shaking and the firing could be heard.”

After a short firing the three transporter ships made the hyper jump but when there got to the into the out rim and was near naboo, the second transporter blew up. It sent the other ships flying though space until there got control back. Lee “ Dam we lost one.” “ Sir, what should we do.”

“ Just get to Hoth.”

“ Yes Sir.”

On naboo the two Jedi’s arrived at Moenia town. There walked in and said “ have you seen a Jedi night.” Just then the Jedi knight jade jump down form the roof and got his three way lightsaber has the other two got there dual red lightsaber out.

Roo said “ give you Jedi knight you will never win.” then he jumped and was I in a light saber lock with two empire Jedi’s. she said “ Never.” then has Jade jump back the other two Jedi was swing there lightsaber top, down, left and right has jade block anyone of there attacks and push the two Jedi into a building.

 

The two Jedi jumped and said “ nice move but we got one better look up.” “ What.” then one Jedi cut in her left arm.

“ Dam, take this the two Jedi attack has Jade block off the moves. The sound of lightsaber clashing could be hear, sparks come off, has it move up down left to right. Jade jumps over and in that one second kills a Jedi with a slice. “ You got one but I am stronger.” jade push him into the wall, but he get up and push jade into the wall. Jade “ I see you a bit strong then the that one but your still weak.” “ die” William jump up and attack jade with full force. “ well I see your mad but guess what you made an mistake.” “ what.”

“ you forgot to look down.”

“ sure” Jade slice him in his leg and pull him to the other side of the wall. “ well take this dark energy wrap around William. “well I see the dark lord taught you dark rage but do you know what I use my one protect then has green lights warp around her the lightsaber dual carry’s on.” both Jedi’s jumping, rolling and blocking each other moves.” has William slice Jade in the right arm he jumped onto the top of a building that the door was broke. Jade jumps up was taking the fight to the roofs, there jumped over roof by roof has the people ran inside their houses. Jade slice William in the left arm and he said “ Good move but lets try down here again. “ fine bring it but you will be going down.” Both jumped down and the light saber crash again, up down and right but then out of no were the protect worn off and just before the dark rage took it effect William slice jade in half. “ Yes I won but better get out of here.

 

Then a big Army of rebel troopers got around the Jedi but has the dark rage took it effect the Jedi guards came and said “ Take him away.” “ yes Sir, move.” so has the Jedi walked with five rebel troopers point the gun at him, the Jedi guards return back to their posts. Back in space and just has the transporter Ship passed Rutan. The pilot said “ you will no believe this but a massive empire fleet is guarding Hoth. “ No, way.” “ their attacking.” xyz fighters and the empire ships started firing at the transporter has Nathan and Mary was in combat with the empire fighters. “ Dam we lose another on.”

“ keep driving, you two mount the guns but sir your students our in combat.” “ I believe in them has there flying good and blowing the empire fighters but we need to sent out an sos.”

So has there sent out an SOS message, the transporter was under heavy attack has a gun port blew off. The fighters rush passed the ship firing at the second gun port. Nathan flew behind two and blew them up then lee said “ get inside the hanger to take the ship out. So has there flew into an energy Hager there saw storm troopers surrender them and then jumped out with there light saber and killed the storm troopers. Nathan and Mary ran different ways though out the ship. Outside the ship has the transporter ship was getting attack, a massive republic fleet came form hyper space and, has their got there, they opened fired has well as there sending out there xy fighters. Inside the ship has Nathan took out another two storm troopers and was at the com room. Nathan said “ Mary were are you.” “ I am at the control room but under heavy attack.” Nathan “ I be right there.” Then the com room door blew up and a small Army of storm troopers ran in and fired. “ hold it right there .” Nathan took his light saber out and slice up the storm troopers but has he did a storm troopers shot him in his hand. Nathan “ Dam, die.” He jump and kill the last storm trooper. Then Nathan ran out of the com room to save Mary. Back in space the fighting was getting worst has both side was under flak. The transporter Ship blew up but just in time Lee jump onto an empire fighter and took control of it. Has the first squad of republic fighters was blew up has the empire fighters was much faster and flew pass them at speed. Lee flew and use the force to get passed the particle beams but has the two enemy fighters was behind him he moved up. The republic saved him by firing there Particle beam.

 

The xyz fighters Killer beams ripped passed the oncoming

Republic fighters. The Republic fighter squad two loop into evasive spirals has the more Republic fighters and, empire fighters did evasive rolls. Has there blew each other up.

At the control Nathan kill all the storm troopers but Mary was out cold. Nathan looked out of the window and saw Empire and Republic wars ship getting closer has well has the laser coming from the outside. A storm trooper wake up and throw a bomb at the Exposing fuel tank. Then has he die it blew up and has Nathan was blew back the ship was coming apart. With both Jedi’s out cold, the ship was going down has the com room blew up. Has the fight outside was carrying on Nathan started to wake up just has the ship was about to crash. Lee flew passed to empire fighters and saved Nathan plus Mary. Then he flew down to Hoth but with five fighter jest on his tail. The other republic fighters was heavy in battle with the empire fleet.

Has lee headed towards Hoth he flew around and blew up two fighters with another on his tail. Lee Spun his xyz fighter ripped the laser blast. Has he mirror to get further he look and saw the republic fleet getting destroyed has the empire fighters was being blow up. Then just has about he landed on Hoth the xyz fighters was destroyed. When there got out of the ship Nathan, Mary and Lee got out. Has there look up there could still see the firing happing still in space, then a few minters later 10 republic transporter ship lands on Hoth with 20 Jedi’s walking out with 300 rebel troopers walking out. A Jedi called Mace win said “ we are here to help you take Hoth.”

Lee “ glad you’re here.

“ hey, me and Mary can take care of this.”

“ there he to help so lets get started.”

“ right attack” has 20 Jedi ran up in line with 300 rebel troopers behind, the storm troopers came running in and firing has well has there new standing machine with also two radar guns firing.

 

Has the rebel troopers with 20 Jedi were fighting with the storm troopers. More storm troopers ran up firing and has the z fighter machine kill one Jedi, a empire fighter was blew up and land right onto the z-fighter were is was destroyed. Nathan jumped up and kill two storm troopers, has Mary said “ look out.” Lee “ you 150 storm troopers go left, the other got right and the rest come with me.” “ Yes Sir.” has the Jedi kept fighting Nathan, Mary and Lee jump forwards leaving the other Jedi with rebel troopers fighting. Mary ran forward with Nathan has lee stayed behind fighting the defends near the Hoth empire base. Nathan “ Mary get ready we are about to break down the door.” “ Ok, lets do this.”

 

The battle on Hoth was getting more dearly has more Jedi’s was kill as well has some rebel troopers. The rebel troopers fired at the incoming storm troopers. The Jedi’s jump and slice them but back at the base Nathan jumped over the wall and kill five storm troopers before he could open the gate. Fine has Nathan and Mary ran inside a new Jedi landed but has he look around he could see bullets firing anywhere, rebel troopers being killed. Is Jedi robe, with his two purple light saber a dark top with a yellow bottoms, he ran towards one of the outpost guns. The rebel troopers ran into a small hole taking cover form the firing of a squad of storm troopers. After a while there rebel troopers got up and shot then down has there were reloading. Lee kill the Jedi but two of the dark lord Jedi guards jumped down form the roof of a new Hoth building.

 

Lee got his light saber back out and was getting ready to kill the two Jedi’s guards but before he could the two Jedi guards ran at him using drain to take away his force powers. Just has Lee jumped back just before death he use speed to kill one of jedi guards. The other guard said “ what, no way.” Then has lee roll behind the second Jedi guard, the other guard jumped back over lee to slice him. Has lee used is light saber to block the incoming attack from the saber, he force powers was weak due to effect of drain. The guard got out of it and kick Lee into the wall of an old outpost. Just has the jedI guard ran towards lee to kill him he though of luke sky walkers words.

 

Goes back to the passed

 

Luke sky walker “ If you ever find yourself trapped and about to die belive in the froce then you will win.”

 

“ How do I.”

 

“ you will know.”

 

Then has he closed his eyes is used the force to find a spot were he could killing.

 

Back to the Present

 

Lee stab his light saber into the heat of the Jedi guard then he ran inside the building.” Meanwhile has the fighting on and space as still going Nathan was slice storm troopers I half. Nathan hope that Mary would be alright on her own. He saw storm troopers running down the hall saying “ Get Him.” Nathan got his light saber and has the storm troopers fired he used his light saber to bounce the lasers back taking down the storm troopers. When got to the storm troopers sleeping place she used push to take down the storm troopers. The fighting was going on, Mary sliver light saber was move around to slice the storm troopers that was heading into when she was. Finely there got to the command post and has there open the door there could see that dark lord with his dark clock and claw with him holding a dual red light saber. The dark lord is the new most powerful Jedi. Nathan and Mary got out there gold with sliver light saber out. Nathan “ Dark lord you are going to die.”

Mary “ we will beat you.”

Dark lord “ ha, soon Hoth will not be taking my the republic but if you want to kill try.” Nathan and Mary “ Fine take this.

Nathan ran forward first using his light saber to clash against the dark lord. Then Mary jumped in with Nathan an with both of their light saber block the dark lord attack.

 

The dark lord use lighting to whack Mary into the wall. Nathan saw Mary out cold so a bit of his power went into his hands. The dark was a bit shock seeing Nathan defend of his attacks so easy. Nathan light saber was hitting and blocking. In one move Nathan push the dark back into a glass wall full force. Nathan turn around thinking his won but the dark lord get back up and use dark rage to blast Nathan into the wall with the lighting full power. The dark lord was walking towards then ready to kill them just has Lee jump in and started on the dark lord. Both light saber was clashing against each other, Lee was still weak from the drain but je was giving the dark a run for his money has he jumped and slice a hand of the dark lord knocking out one of his light saber. Dark lord “ you will pay for that.” Lee saw dark rage again so he try to put his protect but the force inside him was still weak. Dark lord has rage which was making lee losing. Lee jumped back to avoid Death then he jumped right back in.

 

the Dark lord push lee back to the wall but just before the dark lord killed lee the door blew up with 200 rebel troopers pointing guns at him just has 10 Jedi jumped in with there lightsaber getting ready to attack. The Jedi Mace said “ give your self up dark lord you can not escape. “ we see about that.” then dark lord jumped up and broke the glass roof has five Jedi went after him. Nathan, Mary got up just has lee did to. Lee said “ could we better be getting back to Yavin 4.” “ Ok master.” has there all left the empire base there was happy has there took Hoth back after a heated battle. In Space the empire was hyper jumping away from the republic fleet.

 

Mace said “ thanks for your help before we head back to naboo we be clear up on this planet o and Nathan he a spare ship that will fit two of you inside called the x wing 2. So has there left Hoth a few xy fighters followed them back to Yavin 4 so nothing would happen to them.

 

 

[spoiler= Episode 3- The dark killer]

Finely they got back to the Academy and has the ship landed, Luke sky walker was waiting for them. Has Nathan got out, Luke said “ I see you made it back alright. Has ships flew in and out of the Academy, Mary got out but was still a bit weak

from the fight with the dark lord. Luke told the two rookie Jedi’s to go inside while he was talking to Lee. Nathan “ well Mary, this place is almost empty.” “ I know and I wonder what there are talking about.” has Nathan look around he saw a few Jedi’s resting. Then has Luke came in with lee he said “ ok, well due to you always getting wipe out, you will not be going on mission until you done a bit more training. “ “ now Luke has said because of you getting wipe out I am allow to teach heal so you are luck has rookie are not allow to learn to after the first year.” “ well, go on with your training I have things to do.” “ right Sir!” meanwhile has Nathan and Mary began there training on planet Kuat in a village called Aran a dark Jedi which is nickname is the dark killer. With his two dual red lightsabers and a dark clothing.

 

He went into a bar hoping to find someone. When he got to the bar he said “ Have you seen Jedi master Luke sky walker.” inside the bar people was walking, drinking. The barman said “ Nope sorry.” “ wrong answer.” he took his two dual light sabres and slice the barman in half.” has the people inside the bar watch has he took out lot of rebel troopers which was trying to arrest him. Has the fighting was still going on everyone started to run but has there did a back squad of rebel troopers form a nearby outpost base came in firing. The dark killer unleashed a power of lighting which as well has taking out 15 rebel troopers he also killed 20 A riders. He then ran out and jumped onto the roof to find an hiding place just before more rebel troopers arrived.

Back at the Academy Nathan with Mary was doing a bit of light saber tanning to warm them up so there can learn heal quickly. Has Nathan was battle with Mary the sound of the light saber crashing could be hear throughout the Academy.

Mary jumped over Nathan near slice his hand off but Nathan counted with his gold light saber. The fighting was getting more good has there some how used speed bashing into each other. Finally when Lee came back in there was ready to learn heal the first move of the force. At Naboo in the Jedi council camber inside the republic main base Mace said “ the empire is moving forward towards Hoth.” Carl “ What, we need to sent some of are fleets in to stop them in the tracks.” the leader of the council said “ Not yet has we have got not many spare due to attack on KASHYYK.” “ how many do we have which are fightable.” “well only two small fleets.”

“ we have to sent them out before it to late.”

“ Ok, I will order the two small fleets to stop the empire.”

 

On the space station near the Roche asteroids has van was training the dark lord told the space station to attack Tatooine.” missile flew out of the space station hit down on Tatooine. The ground was blowing up, rebel troopers due to the attack. Rock fall down. A unknown Jedi on Tatooine was trying to run for cover but has he ran a few more miles a rocket hit him. Has he went flying a unfightable fleet was coming out of Tatooine to stop the attack. At the republic academy on yavin 4 Nathan passed out again. Lee did not know why he passed out but has he fell Mary, was trying to learn heal to save Nathan. Lee pick up Nathan to take him to the Academy hospital wing. Luke saw Nathan going to the hospital wing but before he could find out what happen, a new mission came him. A Jedi Master came out of a transporter ship and ran inside, he said “ Luke have you got any Jedi spare so we can kill the dark killer.” “ yep I have, ok Hoo, lee, money go with this Jedi master to help find the dark killer.” “ yes Sir.”

Meanwhile over Tatooine space has missile kept landing down on Tatooine the fleet fired, at will hoping to kill someone or something. Has the fighting was still going on a missile blew up the entire fleet. Vans was laughing has he sent out xyz bombers to attack Tatooine. Has the bombers was heading to Tatooine, the dark killer use the force speed to get into the republic air base. He jumped inside and flew off while the rebels troopers was preparing to take on the xyz bombers with there new a-air guns. Has the republic fleet was firing at a massive empire fleet in Hoth space, about 15 big empire transporter was heading to a unknown a bit form Hoth. In KASHYYK space has more fleet form both sides came in the republic sent 20 transporter down on KASHYYK, Back on Tatooine the dark killer flew out with ten yz fighters following behind and he was heading to the Tion cluster he saw a massive space battle going on between the Republic and the empire.

 

Has the xyz bombers was letting rip on Tatooine the rebels troopers open firer has a few more empire transporter ship landed on Tatooine. Has the door open their came out firing,

After a while the rebel troopers was firing at the last few storm troopers on Tatooine. Then the council came down with 10 Jedi and 30 rebel troopers. He said “ Hey, what happen here.” “ we was just attack but for some reason it stopped.”

“ I will leave these here with you and the two elite rebel troopers be coming back with me.” At the Academy, lee thinks that Nathan and Mary has finally learn heal but has there rest in the hospital wing the dark killer about to make is move again.

 

In the Tion cluster the dark killer landed on a planet called DELLALT. Has he got out his ship he could, the planet was no more then a waste battle filed, with dead bodies all over the place, which when he saw closely he could see that there were, empire storm troopers has the has the Republic rebel troopers. He walked up into what was left of a village called, the hunter crib. Then out of no were came about 300 unknown

Rockets. He jump onto the roof has more rockets was heading towards him. Then a massive group of space hunters came out and said “ hold it right there.” The dark killer got down but instead of fighting he lets them take him to prison so he could see what there are planning. A hunter knocked the dark killer out. At the academy Luke sky walker walked into the hospital wing, he said “ Ok, Nathan and Mary lee told me that you learn heal but to be sure I give you another mission has we wait for the were about of the dark killer.” Nathan “ What the mission.”

Luke “ well, we have an SOS from a small fleet that crashed on the planet Zeltros.” Mary “ lets do this.”

“ wait a sec has you know, a massive space battle is still going on over KASHYYK and In Kashyyk has well has Hoth.”

 

“ What you want us to do.”

“ well Nathan and Mary if you encounter a empire fleet run towards the planet Zeltros.” Mary “ Ok, but will there be any storm troopers on Zeltros.” “ yes but do not kill what you don’t have to, the fleet is under firer in the north part of the planet so move out.” “ Yes Sir.”

“ one more thing this is a c class mission, well better get back to the Jedi that have return from there mission.” Nathan jumped into a ship with Mary, there flew out and headed towards Zeltors. Has there hyper jumped to the mid rim there saw a fleet of xyz fighters firing at them. Nathan “ Mary get on guns we will fight them off.” “ he told us to run.”

“ I know but we have no choice before there call backup/”

“ Ok I am ready.” “ Mary open firer has I spin to destroyed these fighters.” Lee said “ Luke, do you think Nathan and Mary are ready for this mission.” “ I don’t know but we must find out if there learn heal, o now Lee you head to the planet before Zeltors to do this s rank mission.” “Ok”

“ when you finish you can check on them but I must get back to train we these other 300 Jedi’s.” “ Ok I go.” back into space has Mary fires Nathan keeps spin to blew up the tie fighters. One by one there are getting blew up. Nathan blast past two xyz fighters as Mary does a 360 spin basting past another two xyz fighters. Has there headed towards Zeltors a small fleet of fighters blew up the rest of the fighters. There span around, Nathan said “ hey, Mary I am losing my engine I have to make a crash landing on Zeltors.” Mary “there will know that we are there.” “ I have to.”

“ Ok, look missile inbound.”

“ Move” Nathan and Mary roll around but the missile still hit them both. The planes was starting to go on firer. There was going on the crash course towards Zeltors were them got to do there mission. At the Tion cluster on DELLALT. The dark was threw inside prison on the hunters base.

 

The leader of the hunter walked into the cell with two hunter guards behind him. He said “ well, the dark killer.”

Dark killer “ so!”

“ we will be give a lot of money for you.”

“ go head if you want.”

“ look at you, your powerless inside them power chains.”

“ boo!”

“ see you later.” outside of the rounded Base, was four guard towers with hunter look outs. With over 300 guarding the outside has well has another 400 inside the hunter base.

The leader of the hunters called, Lzz use a hologram to speak to the dark lord. “ what do you want.”

“ we have the dark killer locked up and if u want to see him again….. Meanwhile inside the dark killer cell he walked up to the font of the cell. Dark killer “ hey, your dead.”

Guard “ why you.”

“ He ran him and slash with his sword but the Dark killer got it so his chain broke off. Then he use lighting to kill the guard. He started to run to get out of the base. He used his lighting to kill the oncoming guards.” He use his lightsaber to blow open the doors into the canteen area of the base, then 100 hunters square around him and was ready to firer. The dark lord said “ come on there is no need fight.”

Hunter 100 “ don’t move or we shoot.”

“ Ok I won’t.” Then he jump on the table and started slice up the hunters as well has blast them with a lot of the lighting force. He jumped over five to get to the next area. As the hunter shoot he use push to close the door down.”

He Carry on running passed rooms, but finally has he reach the 25th room he was shoot with a sleeping dart. The Lzz said “ you took out half of my men on the inside but it time for you to go back to your cell.” As the dark killer started to awake up he hear Lzz say “ get more guards to this cell block so he does not escape again but give him some food.”

“ yes Sir.” Then when he got back to the canteen he saw a door blow off and, the dark lord appeared on the hologram to say that there can keep him.” Lzz got mad that there re getting no money so he took the dark killer and hanged him up with lighting blast him form the tow small holes in the wall.”

Lzz “ since we are getting no money die.”

 

The dark killer was clam with over 30,000 volts hitting him. Lzz “ why are you calm.”

Dark killer “ because when the times comes your planet will be blew up.”

Lzz “ what ever.”

“ what you think I did before you shot me with the sleeping dart.” ( all hunters laughing).

“ you did nothing.”

“ O wait and see.”

Meanwhile Nathan and Mary crashed landed on there mission planet Zeltors. As Nathan got out he was Surrounded by storm troopers. The squad leader said “ Stop.”

 

Mary jumped out and slice up the storm troopers. Nathan “ thanks but come no we must save them pilots.”

“your right lets go.” Nathan and Mary ran down the small path though the wasteland but as there carry on Nathan said “ incoming fighters take cover.” Mary jumped down in the small hole with Nathan right behind. He fighters flew passed then Nathan use sense to see that storms troopers was over the hole.” Nathan jumped out with Mary to slice up the few storm troopers. After there died Nathan with Mary ran down the path again. There jumped over a big hole with water below and landed inside a old house.” Has the thought that there better sleep, a big Empire Machine which look like the old one apart from that it had a new gun with ammo with about a small Army behind. Nathan fell asleep right after Mary, on the outside a storm troopers said “ should we try that old house.”

Then another one said “ No come on we have to build a bridge so our backup can get over.”

“ your right.”

 

The next morning, Nathan and Mary ran down the path again but only to find storm troopers point guns at them again. Then Nathan said “ Mary you ready.”

“ o yes.”

Then Nathan and Mary used the speed force to run though the storm troopers. As they was in the cave, Mary lightsaber hit the wall which came down. Nathan saw a shortcut so there ran down it knowing that there many still be storm troopers waiting for them.” when there got passed an old gate with water running out of it, there saw some storm troopers heading down. Nathan and Mary ran but just has the storm troopers was firing Nathan block of he bullet to kill the two storm troopers. Mary “ Nathan come on we have to move.”

Nathan “ Ok, lets move.” So has there ran further down the shortcut there could hear firing coming from the outside has water started dripping in. Finally Nathan and Mary made it to the outskirts of Loo near North part of the planet. Before there step out of the hole there hid and wait for the petrol to go passed. Then just has there went passed Nathan jump out with May right behind. When there got out Nathan said “ well this town is small, with it’s wood house has well has market with people walking about with storm troopers also there. “

Mary “ why don’t we jump on the roof tops across.”

Nathan “ we could always go though.”

Both check there lightsaber and Mary “ Dam it does not work for some reason.” “ Mine to.”

“ So what do we do.”

“ we have to take the roof tops but we have to be silent.”

“ Ok.” So Nathan and Mary jumped onto the roof top of the first house.

 

Nathan jumped across with Mary roof to roof until there got to the sixth building and then there jumped down to land on the path in the town of Loo. Mary ran left has Nathan ran right, Nathan jumped back onto the roof to follow Mary. Then Mary was getting chase by five storm troopers has there were firing Nathan kill them to look after Mary. Finally after a few miles Mary saw a repair shop. Mary “ Nathan let get them fix in that repair shop.” “ Ok.” So Nathan followed by Mary went into the Loo repair shop were a women called Zin said “ Welcome what can I do for you.”

Both “ could you look at our lightsaber.”

“ well I see what I do.”

“ how much.”

“ this time it free.” Then a knock on the door.”

storm trooper “ sorry we have to check your place for two Jedi’s.” “ Ok I will take care of your lightsaber but while you wait rest in he under this trap door so there don’t find you.”

“ Thanks.” The storm trooper broke down the door and started looking around has she work on fixing the lightsaber. There saw her but there did not know why she was doing it. The leader said “ Ok, thanks and sorry if I broke your door.”

“ your welcome.” After the storm troopers left Zin open the trap door to let Nathan and Mary out. Zin “ Ok, here your lightsaber. Both “ thanks but we better get going.”

So Nathan with Mary got out of the repair shop but then the storm troopers saw them so there ran towards were there had to get to but with storm troopers right behind. Nathan “ come a bit faster there our near us.” “ Ok, we could jump to the rooftops.” “ No, not yet we have to get passed that first check point.” “ Get ready Nathan we are nearly there.”

“ O I am ready draw your lightsaber.” At the checkpoint near the north part of the planet a storm trooper said “ open firer.”

Nathan jump first, followed by Mary and she roll over five storm troopers. When they finish killing them Mary used push to block the path for the oncoming storm troopers by pushing a few rocks form the top of the house. There carried on down the path passing lots of wasteland with a few ruin hut.

 

 

[spoiler=Episode 4- the power of Nathan]

In the Tion cluster the dark killer on a planet called DELLALT at the hunter base as the Dark killer was still getting hit my 30,00 volts the leader of the hunter walked to talk to the dark lord again. The dark lord “ I have already tell you that the empire does not care about the dark killer. “this is for final change give us $100,000 then we will spare his life.

“ forget bye o and if even call me again I will have your planet gone.” hologram faiths. Just has leader walked back into the canteen the hunter base was shaking.

 

Then a guard ran in and said “ the south hunters are attacking us again. “ Ok let go prepare your men o and you two don’t let the dark killer escape. John, Jill “ Yes Sir.” As the base was shaking and sound of gun firer could be hear the dark killer “ lets us out of these chains.” “ Why.”

“ I can help you.” “ sorry but no way we will not betray our leader.” Dark killer “ I warned you.”

(Both looked confused)

With the force the dark killer slice his chains off my his light sabre. Then just before the two guards fired he slice them both up.” used is light sabre to open the door into he next room. When he got there he saw south hunter running towards him.” south hunter #1 “ kill him he is one of the north hunters.”

Dark killer “ really.” he open up his lightsaber

#1 “ Run he a Jedi. As the all ran the dark killer “ I don’t think so.” he used push on the ceiling which came down crushing the few south hunters. “ Better find the control room.”

 

As the dark killer kept running down slice anyone who got in his way a Jedi jumped over and said “ Hold it right there.” As the dark killer got ready to battle, a hunter guards shoots him. Dark killer die, a rush of lighting blast out of the killer to take down a small Army of hunter guards. As the war go bigger the place was felling down. Tons of rocks fell but the dark used the force push to kill to the incoming guards. Outside the hunter base a few more south hunter ships landed with a lot of hunter coming firing at the north. The dark killer finely got to the control leaving a lot of dead people in his wake. When the dark killer got to the control room, he press the button to open the hanger way but two south hunters Jedi jump in. so the dark killer pull his two dual lightsaber out. There two Jedi jumped up to launch their lightsaber at the dark killer but with his dual lightsaber he got into a saber lock. The two Jedi kept launching attacks towards the dark killer. The dark killer jumped, roll as did the other Jedi. lightsaber were crashing, force powers were going. The dark killer blasted a lot of lighting towards the Jedi as there use speed to escape then jumped forward with their lightsaber attacks. Dark killer kept blocking the shots with his awesome fighting skill. After a while the dark killer slice both Jedi’s in half and took there lightsaber. He stared running towards the hanger as the fighting was getting worst.

 

Inside the republic main base on Hoth, the leader ran into the com room to reach the Republic council as rebel troopers stood guarding the com room. Qui “ we need more men we are starting to be over run.” Tom “ most all are fleet and men our on plus over Kyashyyyk.” Qui “ we more men soon we are losing as there just sent more troopers. Then a explosion could be heard blowing up the main base door as storm trooper went in firing the gun shots could be heard as rebel troopers fought back. Qui “ we are being over run there got into this base we can’t hold out for more longer we need more troopers as we have not got a enough to hold of the attack.” Then the hologram went. At the Republic council on Naboo tom said “ we have not choice we have to send our back up that we got ready if our troopers need more on Tatooine.” John “ Ok, request the back up to go to Hoth instead but I just hope we can still take Tatooine.” Tom “ Ok, I also sent two more Jedi’s to head up the defend with the back up we are have sent.” “ Ok, dismissed.”

 

On Zeltros Nathan and Mary was nearly the crash Site but just as there ran closer there saw another road block with storm troopers waiting. Mary “ what we going to do.”

“ We have to go underground though this hole so that there don’t see us coming.” “ Ok” So Nathan with Mary jumped underground. As there were running towards the crash site there heard more empire transporter Ships coming in.” “ We have to hurry.”

There both used the speed force to quick head toward the crash Site. In the Tion cluster the dark killer on a planet called DELLALT at the hunter base the dark killer final made it to the Hager bay but just as he took off more south hunters came in but he said “ bye.” He threw the two lightsabers down that he got form killing the two south hunter Jedi’s. Then just as he left the planet he threw a spare lightsaber which blew up DELLALT as it hit the mine which were at the core of the planet. He hyper jumped out of the Tion cluster and back into the Meridian sector near the planet of Ossus. Using the force the dark killer could sense two empire xyz fighters behind him ready to firer so he roll over and within less then a second he blew up the fighters then hyper jumped again to the mid Rim near Anzat.

 

Back on Zeltros, Nathan and Mary just made it bear the crash. As there ran closer there could hear the gun firing coming form the top but just before the jumped up two storm troopers appeared and said “ stop.” Mary did not know what do to do but Nathan said “ lets give up.” as the storm troopers got close it look like that there were going to give up but out of no were Nathan slice them up.” “ Come on we better get onto that mountain looking down on the crash site.”

“ Ok.” there both jumped out of hole but when there got up there look down and Nathan said “ Dam, how many.”

“ there must be thousand all in the line firing but we can’t take that many on.” “ we can lest go,”

“ If your sure.” Both pull out there light saber and jumped down fighting loads of storm troopers. As there run towards the pilots there slice, rebound bullets and keep rolling as well as jumping taking storm troopers in there path. As they battle though, the dark killer was getting closer to the crash site on the planet Zeltros.

 

Finely After a while Nathan got to the crash site with Mary, but just as there got there Nathan got shot. Pilot 1 “ Thanks for coming we be holding out for a best that we could but we already lost 2 and there only three of us left.” Mary “ I will go behind the plane ot heal Nathan but while I do could u hold out a little bit longer.” “ we can, look out.” Then as the other pilots kept firing at the oncoming firing storm troopers the second one shot the storm trooper who was about to kill Mary.” as Mary was healing Nathan another pilot was shot my a storm trooper, as the battling was getting worse the third pilot said “ we need more Help.” Then as Nathan was resting Mary jumped back out fighting.” 2nd pilot “ we cover you.”

“Ok, thanks.” so as Mary, push tons of storm troopers away just as she slice up tons. The lightsaber was spinning around as she jump up and took down some more storm troopers. Just as more storm trooper came the dark killer jumped blasting all the storm troopers away. Then he said “ well, I going to kill you Jedi. Mary thinking “ Dam, Nathan his still resting well better try to hold out.” Then she said “ Ok, I take you.”

 

 

Then the dark killer said “ I see you got some pride even though you are just the rookie.” I kill you and pilots stop firing.” “ Ok.” dark killer “ Lets begin.”

“ Fine.” Mary use speed and jump launching her light saber at the dark killer head but as he rolled out of the way he blast lighting at here just before it hit Mary jumped and the two sabers lock together as there kept smash each other. Sparks were coming off as there carry on fighting. Mary roll back launching her attack again with the force speed, as the dark killer did it also. Mary fought as hard as she could but, she was getting tried. Mary keeps slashing and crashing with the dark killer lightsaber. “ come on can’t you do better take this.” blast of lighting came out and just as Mary secram as she passed out Nathan jumped in slice a hand of the dark killer. Nathan and the dark killer carry on fighting. Like Mary, Nathan was blast away with lighting hitting the floor and when the dark killer jumped over Nathan “ Don’t.” The just as the dark launch is lightsaber near Nathan body he look at Mary lying out cold. Then as he was thinking of Mary he punch the dark killer which made him fly back. Has Nathan got up a burst if dark neutral energy surround Nathan, just as he saw the dragon appearing up in the burst of energy he tough “ what happing what is he.” a dragon roar could be hear form Nathan. Demon Nathan “ I going to kill you.” the ground was shaking as more power burst, In the empire base On Bastion the dark killer said “ what is this power I sense in the force.

Luke sky walker “ what is that power.” on Zeltros near the crash site, as the power faded after a while of twisting like around Nathan. Nathan eyes turned red, as his hand because dragon claws and as he was standing like a dragon he ran forward the dark killer just barely jumped out of the way but while is back was turned Nathan use the neutral force twister. The dark killer try to counter with lighting but it did not work.

 

Nathan ran forward with light saber, the dark killer burst another lot of lighting out but Nathan quickly jumped over firing another move, earth missiles. Thousand of small earth spikes came out from the ground hitting the dark killer but as it did dark rage wrap around the killer. Nathan fought against the dark killer his power increasing every blow. The dark killer was once again blast away. He firer a twister with earth missile inside which was the final blow but after Nathan hit the dark killer the power went and he passed out. Dark killer “ what it can’t be but were is that burst of power and the neutral force I felt.” the dark killer finally die but so did the survive pilots because of the power that burst out of him.

 

 

Finally Lee arrive just as Nathan wake up taking one of the dark killer light sabers. Mary walked up after.

Lee “ Glad you to are alright but what happen he the ground is nearing gone.” don’t know when we wake up it was like this.”

Lee thinking “ I could tell I was you Nathan but I can’ let you know that the dragon sealed inside you did this as it would become stronger.” So Lee got on two a republic transporter sip with two rebel troopers aside. As it left Zeltros it was heading to Yavin 4. While there saw more fleet head towards Hoth as well as Kashyyyk. Lee said “ we are going home.

 

 

[spoiler= Episode 5- Death star plans]

Back on Yavin 4 as Nathan, lee and Mary got out, Luke greet them to say “ well done for killing the dark killer.”

Lee “ I think there need more training.”

“ Not yet, there another mission that I want you to do.”

“ What that.”

“ Well, Nathan you be heading into the Tion cluster to see what happen to the planet Dellalt o Mary you must head to TELEI to search for when the new death star plans could be before the Empire get there.”

Mary “ Ok.” Then as Nathan left Yavin 4 again, Mary got into her ship ready to take off.” Meanwhile Back inside the Academy a Jedi Name Ran was hearing voice from the dark lord, but as the other Jedi’s go of to train, the empire fleet move closer to TELEI. The war still over Kaskyyyk as well as Hoth the republic are trying to get more troopers.

 

In space near GALA Nathan flew passed a few empire xyz fighters as he make is way towards the Tion cluster. Nathan “ Hey, Mary how far are you.” “ I am near getting closer but I see an empire fleet, heading my way.” “ hyper jump before there see you.” “ I know but I worry about you.” “ don’t worry I am coming closer the Tion cluster as I am passed KORRIBAN.”

“ Ok, well talk to you later I am trying to get there before, the empire does.” “ Ok.” chat closed

As Nathan keeps flying towards the Tion cluster, on the planet of THOLATION right near the massive war, Van landed on the planet with five transporter each with 50 storm troopers on board. As, there arrive on the planet there could see that a big war took place during the clone wars with a lot of storm troopers on the ground. It was a wasteland with Nothing but sand, as well as a few sand worms on it. As Van ordered the storm troopers to scout the area unaware to him he was being watched. (Van turn is hologram on)

Dark lord “ what did you find.”

“ nothing yet but I have sent the storm troopers out looking.”

“ Ok, find out what you can and report back to be after we head to TELEI to find out were the plans are.”

“ Ok.” (hologram fainted)

Van walks forward then a storm troopers runs back and said “ we are under attack my sand worms.” “ what, alright I send more men.” another 25 storm troopers left, neat were Van was to fight the sand worm. He only had 25 storm troopers left around the landing zone.” “ Ok, you two put a lot of mines down around this landing area.” “ Yes Sir.”

 

As more storm troopers try to kill the sand worms, more kept coming. Van was doing a bit of training while he waited for the sand worms to die. After a while more storm troopers ran back

Hoping to get away safely. While the sand worms get closer to van as well as the storm troopers who are still alive Mary was being chased by five xyx bombers, two xyz fighters. Mary roll over trying to avoid the missile. She turn Left hoping to take out one of the fighters. Mary fir her missile we blew up one xyz fighter. Has Mary was fighting With the fighters, in the new Empire Federation battleship the dark lord wait inside is camber. Dark lord could sense a Jedi getting closer to the Ship. A Empire pilot ran in saying “ dark lord this Jedi I think his trying to find the plans also. “ What! Ok sent out more xyz fighters to kill that Jedi.” “ Yes Sir.” Then backing the hanger 15 more xyz fighters flew out of the Empire tie battleship.

 

 

 

 

Back in space near Tatooine, as Mary finally took out the last lot of xyx bombers, xyz fighters as she carry on towards TELTI. Another 15 fights that the dark lord sent out form the empire tie battleship was firing at Mary. Mary saw this and said “ bring it on.” Mary flew back away form Tatooine trying to kill the fighters but then Mary flew near Tatooine blowing up fighters. As she kept blowing up fighters hear ship was hit by a missile and the ship was heading towards Tatooine, then the fighters flew back and the pilot ran into the dark lord room on the empire tie battleship to say “ we shoot down the Jedi Sir.” “ Good full speed head we must get them plans if we ever going to build up the death star again.” “ right Sir we get right on it.” On Tatooine Mary got out and found herself at the republic outpost were a master Jedi walked out with two rebel troopers right behind. As she look around she could see rebel troopers building defends as well as preparing weapons. ??? “ hello, young Jedi rookie my name is Sam and this is a republic outpost and what bring you here.”

 

“ I was shot down, my the empire.” “ I see your ship is in a bad state with anything nearly broke o why don’t you come in for a bit we get that fix, Cody, rocky.” “ Yes Miss.” Inside the republic outpost Sam said “ Ok sit, down.”

“ what going on here.” as she look around she saw doors and rebel troopers walk up as well as down.” “ we have near finish building this outpost, so were was you head anyway.” “ I was giving another Mission.” “ O yes, like sky walker sent you on another mission plus I know what happen on Hoth.” “ it was not our fault.” “ I know but this is still your first year at the Academy.” “ when will my ship be ready I need as soon as possible.” “ not for a while but take one of our transporter Ship plus I will also sent this squad with you.” “ Ok squad 1 you must look after her.

[legendhiro]

interesting. i would read this.

[Kyubi20017]

the first episode will be up shortly

[Kyubi20017]

the 1 & 2 are up

[Kyubi20017]

am am doing more episode but liek it says on the characters page, there will be an hour special to finish of season 1 which is called the return of Darth vader! he back but how much powerful has he gotten since the last time.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

LOLZ.

 

I can't even begin to describe how horrible this is. It seems to fail every aspect of a polished novel.

•The worse-than-a-third-grader grammar (I'm deadly serious; my sister is in third grade and she can do much better than this)

•The uninspired plot (and that's an understatement; not only does it completely ignore large patches of EU material, it's insanely n00bish)

•The linear, static, undeveloped, oft-overpowered characters (you should never be able to sum up a character in a sentence; also, you have one OP'd hero with a useless girlfriend and the power to easily demolish any foe)

•The idiotic revelations to future, boring plots (OH NOEZ ANAKINN I SBAKC!!!!!! NATHAN SAVE UZ PLZ!!!!!!1111!! At least tell your bad plot twists in story form)

•The total lack of background development (the few descriptions there are serve to set almost none of the scene, and that's ignoring the total lack of character development)

 

Final Judgment: Über-Epic Fail; F-

[Kyubi20017]

right! the character are not to powerful apart from the the main character Nathan who is stronger then dark lord becuase of his dragon demon seal inside him and the power to use light,dark, nuntral force. it not a bad stoylie so your wrong there. it the funture of star wars. so it 15 years after the star wars VI. so shut the hell up! :x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

right! the character are not to powerful apart from the the main character Nathan who is stronger then dark lord becuase of his dragon demon seal inside him and the power to use light' date='dark, nuntral force. it not a bad stoylie so your wrong there. it the funture of star wars. so it 15 years after the star wars VI. so shut the hell up! :x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x:x

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1. It is a bad storyline.

2. They've written up to at least four hundred years after RotJ.

3. You realize that it's spelled "neutral," right?

4. The main character is OP'd.

5. You think "OMG NATHAN SAVE US WITH UR UBERNESS FROM MR DARK LORD OF EVILZ!!!" is a good storyline?

[Kyubi20017]

believe what you like, but that nt the stroyline you find that l8 on but the inuction is the polt and it based 15 years after, A new hope

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

believe what you like' date=' but that nt the stroyline you find that l8 on but the inuction is the polt and it based 15 years after, A new hope

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The fact remains that there is already semi-canonical material written for the time period, and that their complexity, depth, and intrigue are far superior to this one (even if they're bull as well).

 

Also, I hope you realize that your grammar is worse than the purposefully crappy stuff they write in second grade workbooks for the kids to correct.

[Kyubi20017]

this anew stars stroy is for all stars wars fans

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this anew stars stroy is for all stars wars fans

 

I qualify as a Star Wars fan' date=' and this story is enough to make me vomit.

Also, I hope you realize that your grammar is worse than the purposefully crappy stuff they write in second grade workbooks for the kids to correct.

[Kyubi20017]

I am no long using this form so it closed! if you want to read then click on the new from that i made.