PrimalFear Posted December 8, 2008 Report Share Posted December 8, 2008 Due to not being able to come up with any ideas i have decided to End my FanFic Yu-Gi-Oh the elite duelists, but as a gift to my readers I've come up with a better story that i wish to share with my fellow readers. The name of this story is "The Chronicles of Forbidden Glory" i hope you enjoy it. [spoiler=Plot Outline]The story starts out with Takumi and Isamu creating a summoning power, there father the Hideyoshi who sees this forbids them from using it. After disobeying his fathers orders Takumi and other villagers get expelled from the Village of Sekoye. After the Death of the Hideyoshi, Isamu informs Takumi about there fathers death. Being still expelled from the village Takumi returns to a foreign village. Two years later Isamu becomes the villages Hideyoshi or King. Five more years pass and Takumi teaches Two young students the power of the summoning and while they are off training Takumi's clan gets anihalated by the Sekounen clan. After returning to there home the two students find there clan killed and there teacher mortaly wounded. After his death Isamu, Takumi's brother and Hideyoshi of the Sekoye Village invites the two students into a ninja exam which they pass and become ninja. In a last fight the two students become part of the Sekyoe's Takehiko Black Ops. In a quest to kill the Sekounen who had murdered there clan the two students as well as the Sekounen unbenounced to them try to retrieve the two Forbidden swords, Sonic Wave the wind element sword and Electro the lightning element sword. [spoiler=Main Characters]Here are a list of the main characters:1) Takumi Hideaki2) Ismau Hideaki3) The Hideyoshi4) Villagers others will be added as story continues. [spoiler=Episode 1; "The Begining"]The Chronicles of Forbidden Glory“The Beginning” Episode 1 It was dark out; the sun had fallen from the sky. In the flickering fire light the trees were casting dancing shadows. Two boys not more than 18 where seen by the fire not more than a foot or two apart. One was grasping a forbidden glove; the other mumbling so low that he couldn't be heard unless you were an arms length away. "Allhah Etarie Sindron Tekai," Takumi chanted. The boys watched as a lightning bolt shot from the glove onto both boys’ arms. Upon the boy's arms appeared a Glowing skull where they were hit. The skull was a symbol known only by the villagers and was referred to as there gods symbol. “Did it work Takumi?" Isamu asked. “I’m not sure Isamu!” Takumi exclaimed. At that moment Takumi had touched his arm where the symbol appeared. There was another flash of blue light and a wolf leapt out of the boys arm and landed a few feet from them. The wolf turned to face the boys, with terror in there eye’s they watched the wolf pace in front of them. “What should we do Isamu?” Takumi asked scared. Takumi Had touched his brother’s arm exactly where the symbol had appeared. A second wolf came out of his brother’s arm. His brother staring at the wolves paralyzed with fear; couldn’t respond to his brothers’ question. The wolves started to move but instantly disappeared. In shock the boy’s sat trying to figure out what had happened. Neither boy could say anything. “What have you done,” the Hideyoshi said walking from behind them, “That glove has forbidden powers you fools.” The Hideyoshi grabbed his forbidden glove back from his sons. “I don’t want you boys playing with that magic again I forbid you from ever using that summoning powers again.” With that there father, the Hideyoshi turned and walked away. Both boys stunned not understanding why their father had forbade them from using there summoning powers, stood watching as their father disappeared into the night. The next day the boy’s father walked into there room, “I have something to tell you two,” He said, “I’m the one who created that summoning.” He then pulled the arm of his robe up until he showed them the same symbol that appeared on there own arms. “You see boys I forbade you from using that summoning because it drains your life force slowly but in the end it will kill you.” There father spoke softly, “I myself had felt this awesome power and its effects, I will soon die from the effects of it. I’m telling you this because I don’t want you to end up like me.” He then turned around and walked out of there rooms. Several months had past and Takumi continued to practice the summoning against his fathers wishes. On the other hand Isamu had listened to his father and refused to use its magic. One day when Takumi was teaching a few others his summoning power on the outskirts of the village he came once again face to face with his father. “What are you doing Takumi, didn’t I tell you not to ever use that power again,” The Hideyoshi shouted, “Because you have disobeyed me I have to take action, I can’t allow you to continue this and reveal the secrets behind this magic. It could cost many villagers lives. I have no other choice but to expel you and these people from this village, you are no longer welcome in this village. You have one day to pack your stuff and leave the village as an outcast.” With that his father walked away. Takumi then went and packed his things, saying goodbye to his father, brother and to the other villagers he met with the others that he was teaching at the front gate. From there Takumi and the others left the village never to return again. Until two years after his expulsion Isamu’s brother hadn’t step foot in the village, now as he stood at the front gate he awaited his brother’s arrival from a foreign land. -To Be Continued- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 hey the banner is Rose from The Legend of Dragoon! i love that game... its seems... well... interesting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted December 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 thanks force Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 this would make a great rp! and yea again Rose from LoD awsomely epic game! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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