ragnarok1945 Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 pffffffffft. Fortune telling duels. You hear that all the time but they're always fake in RL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 Chapters 19-20 are good. Check out my chapters 9 & 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 pffffffffft. Fortune telling duels. You hear that all the time but they're always fake in RL. It isn't really a fortune-telling duel. More like he has a non-Yugioh Tarot deck and he'll give a reading with it if he loses the duel. By the way, what's RL? Oh yeah, it must be Real Life, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 28, 2008 Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 exactly. And I personally never favored tarot card decks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 28, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2008 Ragnarok1945, I may not be getting exactly what you're saying, but I'll write the duel soon, and then the next chapter, and you tell me if I wrote a situation like you are explaining. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 Posted Chapter 21. The duel between the kid with the tarot deck (who I forgot to mention was a girl) and John. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 not bad of a come back for John. I hope he gets a duel soon where something REALLY serious is on the line for him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 We'll see Ragnarok. We'll see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 then we'll finally be able to see him play more seriously Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 I get what you're saying. If he duels with his life on the line or something, he should duel more seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 yeah. Most of the duels I've seen he's having fun in it, which is ok (and thus was the major flaw in GX, because Jaden has way too much fun no matter how much is on the line, no seriousness at all). Maybe now with something on the line, John will see this more than a mere game Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 yeah. Most of the duels I've seen he's having fun in it' date=' which is ok (and thus was the major flaw in GX, because Jaden has way too much fun no matter how much is on the line, no seriousness at all). Maybe now with something on the line, John will see this more than a mere game[/quote'] That wasn't always the case. In his duel with Brron, Mad King of Dark World, his friends were sent to the stars and he unlocked the power of the Supreme King, which made him very serious. Also, in Season 4, in episode 161, he was extremely serious and had no fun. He didn't start having fun again until late in episode 162. But I understand what you're saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 ok, well my point is Jaden doesn't STAY serious very long, and that erodes character. Just don't make John that way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 Aright. I'll try my best to make John more serious, but not "Supreme King" serious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 of course not. It was overdone with Yami in DM, but underdone with Jaden in GX. Hopefully they got the balance right this time in 5Ds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 The new chapters were good again. Try some story development in the following...Life isn't just about Dueling! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Have you seen Yu-Gi-Oh!? Everything they did either resulted in or from a card game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 it was almost overdone if you ask me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 it was almost overdone if you ask me  Yeah, like when Kaiba wanted to jump from a castle if Yugi didn't let him win. (How would you be, that little *f*-er fused a Spell card with his Blue-Eyes) Or when Joey said Duke should stop his company if Duke lost to him. (Nyeh!) Or when Yugi dueled Kaiba over the last piece of cheesecake.(Since it was Yugilicous). Or when...OK I'll stop it now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 I don't recall the last one (unless that came from abridged) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 It's a reference to his signature. It has the "Get your hands of that last piece of cheesecake, Kaiba! It's Yugilicious!" line in it. Anyway, what do you want in this fan-fic, other than duels? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 well make the duels have something more on the line than mere fun. Unless you want to go DOTD style, now THAT'D be interesting to watch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 What's DOTD mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Dawn of the Duel (ygo season 5) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 What was special about Yugioh season 5 Dawn of the Duel? What happened in that season that was different from the other seasons? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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