Nexev Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 But then he has to find a reason for it, maybe Kim has seen things in the Kingdom clan that causes her to be upset with John's alligence to it? Maybe John kills Saitire (or attempts to but can't due to duel spirits immortality) and Kim leaves due to thier ruthlessness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 yeah well they don't have to love each other either. Do that and you'll have less room to maneuver in the sequel No comment' date=' except "touché."[/quote'] glad to see you agree with me, or you can make their relationship go downhill at the end of the 2nd, which in turn opens the opportunity for it to go back in the 3rd Slow down Rag. I'm just barely thinking of the plot for the next one and you're thinking of ideas for a third!? Just remember, I wrotenot everything will play out like you thinkfor a reason. You'll see why in the end. Also Frohawk, I'm making Satire a human. The only one who won't be human in the Scrap Gang is the leader. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 Very well then, have it your way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 yeah well they don't have to love each other either. Do that and you'll have less room to maneuver in the sequel No comment' date=' except "touché."[/quote'] glad to see you agree with me, or you can make their relationship go downhill at the end of the 2nd, which in turn opens the opportunity for it to go back in the 3rd Slow down Rag. I'm just barely thinking of the plot for the next one and you're thinking of ideas for a third!? Just remember, I wrotenot everything will play out like you thinkfor a reason. You'll see why in the end. Also Frohawk' date=' I'm making Satire a human. The only one who won't be human in the Scrap Gang is the leader.[/quote'] Sorry, I guess I tend to think WAY far ahead when it comes to fics Which at times surprise myself as well because I'm not known to think THAT far ahead on most other matters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 yeah well they don't have to love each other either. Do that and you'll have less room to maneuver in the sequel No comment' date=' except "touché."[/quote'] glad to see you agree with me, or you can make their relationship go downhill at the end of the 2nd, which in turn opens the opportunity for it to go back in the 3rd Rag, your idea for the fanfic is truly genius. However, I will not use it because I have my own idea about how to end this fic and I'll stick to it, even if it is a worse idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 26, 2009 Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 oh all right. I was just making some suggestions. If you won't use it here, perhaps in another series? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted April 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 26, 2009 oh all right. I was just making some suggestions. If you won't use it here' date=' perhaps in another series?[/quote'] It was a great suggestion. I might do something similar to that idea in the sequel. You'll find out how. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 I look forward to seeing what you intend to do then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 I look forward to seeing what you intend to do then We all do, actually. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 you know what I mean though. Plus the fact you may not show as much enthusiasm as I do :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 you know what I mean though. Plus the fact you may not show as much enthusiasm as I do :) I like this fic waaay more than you think I do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 27, 2009 Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 ok fine but this applies to other readers nonetheless Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted April 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2009 Chapter 70 up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 impressive duel John prevailed, as I expected him to. And you cut it close too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Wow. Good one. My Revolution Deck never worked. :(Since when can you perform 2 Summons in one turn? And why would he waste a perfectly good monster to summon the same LV4 Monster?Now I tribute my Oppressed People for Oppressed People for Frostosaurus (ATK 2600).Just joking, it's only a typo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 I thought that was just some other effect we didn't know about that allowed you to summon twice in a turn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Wow. Good one. My Revolution Deck never worked. :(Since when can you perform 2 Summons in one turn? And why would he waste a perfectly good monster to summon the same LV4 Monster?Now I tribute my Oppressed People for Oppressed People for Frostosaurus (ATK 2600).Just joking' date=' it's only a typo.[/quote']Yeah, I'll fix that. It happens. Also, did I use Double Summon when I summoned PRA and UR? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
som3guy Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 mate what i like about this is its fast pace. enables you to read and get a good understanding of whats going on without worrying of it taking forever, good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Wow. Good one. My Revolution Deck never worked. :(Since when can you perform 2 Summons in one turn? And why would he waste a perfectly good monster to summon the same LV4 Monster?Now I tribute my Oppressed People for Oppressed People for Frostosaurus (ATK 2600).Just joking' date=' it's only a typo.[/quote']Yeah, I'll fix that. It happens. Also, did I use Double Summon when I summoned PRA and UR? I thought you did that intentionally to make the duel work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Super Stability is waay overpowered, I mean you get to start at full life while your opponent can't even continue his turn. Sure your opponent has field advantage but it seems that after you use you draw a way to completely negate that advantage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Wow. Good one. My Revolution Deck never worked. :(Since when can you perform 2 Summons in one turn? And why would he waste a perfectly good monster to summon the same LV4 Monster?Now I tribute my Oppressed People for Oppressed People for Frostosaurus (ATK 2600).Just joking' date=' it's only a typo.[/quote']Yeah, I'll fix that. It happens. Also, did I use Double Summon when I summoned PRA and UR?I thought you did that intentionally to make the duel workYes I did. I was just making sure I used Double Summon, because otherwise that combo wouldn't be possible. Super Stability is waay overpowered' date=' I mean you get to start at full life while your opponent can't even continue his turn. Sure your opponent has field advantage but it seems that after you use you draw a way to completely negate that advantage.[/quote'] Yeah, there are a lot of cards in the Kingdom Archetype that are overpowered. Examples:-City - costs a lot of cards to use, but with all the cards that work with remove from play, that's more of a blessing than a cost. Plus it's the ultimate Toolbox card and it allows for the instant working of the Kingdom Traps.-Guards - I could win duels with this card. Ultimate Kingdom! is practically obsolete, but really cool if it can be activated, since it protects all your other cards. Plus there are ways to protect UK!-Kingdom Judgment - like Solemn Judgment, but much more powerful. There are two things that make it kinda worse:1. Only activates during Main Phase, so can't be used on Mirror Force or any others.2. Takes away 3/4 of your Life IF IT SUCCEEDS, so that's a better and a worse.Either way, too powerful, especially with 2 in the grave and a Kingdom - Royal Castle Guard in play, as long as the Castle Guard used the Princess as Synchro Material.-Kingdom Super Stability - It needs to be removed from play, but that's not really hard when using the Princess, especially if you have the City out as well. In fact, the City can search out both the Princess and the Stability card. As for the fact that John always draws a way out, in the anime or fan-fics the main character generally does get the card he needs. In real life this probably wouldn't work so well. When I make cards, I consider how they would do in real life. In fiction, I kick their powers into overdrive with lucksack draws.Overall, I tried to balance out the card's good effects with their bad effects or tough activation requirements, but it doesn't always work out well. I make some balanced cards, some overpowered, some ridiculously hard to use, like Kingdom - Royal Family. I need to make it easier to activate, as it is the only one that is truly hard to activate, even with the King's ability. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysty Posted April 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 Chapter 71 up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 28, 2009 Report Share Posted April 28, 2009 now a duel for Kim. I see how this will tie in quite well with the sequel to come. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 Ladies and gentlemen, Satire has left the building! roflThe next Duel seems to be an interesting one. It should be up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted April 29, 2009 Report Share Posted April 29, 2009 That's my hope too. Makes me wonder how Kim will react to all this when it's over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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