-DJ-'s 1st sig

[-DJ-]

I tried to make this as simple as possible for my first

[Raenii]

Try using more colors okay? Also don't think if I say this it's good. It's not.

[Careless Whisper]

Too dark, brighten it up abit.

 

Text should never be on top of the render. And if it's gonna be that small of text, put it in the corner so it's not popping out as much like that.

 

Work on lighting by following the lighting on the render and then producing the sig based on that lighting.

[-DJ-]

Too dark' date=' brighten it up abit.

 

Text should never be on top of the render. And if it's gonna be that small of text, put it in the corner so it's not popping out as much like that.

 

Work on lighting by following the lighting on the render and then producing the sig based on that lighting.

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thanks for the help

[+Jono]

Try using more colors okay? Also don't think if I say this it's good. It's not.

 

Great, another problematica who thinks she/he's really good. This sig is pretty good for a first try. If it's not too much to ask, where is your amazing sig?

 

Now for my rating:

 

- Too Dark (-1.5)

 

- Bad Text (-2)

 

- No Lighting (-2)

 

- No Depth (-2)

 

Total: 3.5/10. This is an amazing first try. Keep at it. I suggest colours and work on your lighting and depth. If you want any fonts then PM me. Oh and follow Kox's tut on good text. It's in the tutorial section.

[Miazo]

This isn't your first sig. Made blending. Maybe try a c4d.

[Kizzi]

Text sucks, don't put it on the render

Don't recolour the render, it actually DOESN'T look good

Too dark and over contrasted

Stop using C4Ds wrong

[Cyber Altair]

Shut up guys, this is really good for someone new.

 

stop making stuff monotone and lay off the text for a while ;D

 

PM me if you really want to get good, you have potential.

[Miazo]

How coome I didn't get that offer from you a while back Altair?

[Cyber Altair]

zman shows the material of a sex beast for someone new =P

 

His sigs have good bases and looks like he did read and find some good to start with. It lacks a lot obviously but I'd love to see what he would achieve if he got some good training.

[+Jono]

This isn't your first sig. Made blending. Maybe try a c4d.

 

Are you blind, he has a C4D in the background. -_-" You should be saying "Maybe try a C4D that works with the sig."

[.:|Fallen|:.]

it to dark

light it up a bit

the text is bad

[Spire]

Too dull and too dark. Also, text be of improvment. That's all I can say.

[Tefached]

text over render

 

all one color

 

basic text

 

 

try harder next time please.

 

it seems you did a signature and just click colorize in gimp...

[Paranoia_Survivor]

You guys are pretty single minded, always finding the flaws, not the strengths.

Blending is actually not bad.

Background is pretty good for brushing, or at least that's what it looks like.

Text isn't awful, but not the best placing.

 

Darkness/color/flow need work, but overall, its a great first sig.

[D-Striker]

All of your sigs are like one color, maybe try to walk away from that.