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[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Tribute Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Zombie-Type monsters and 1 WATER Attribute monster. This card's Type is also treated as a Warrior. Once per turn, Flip a coin,if you get Heads,Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Deck. If this card sucessfully destroys a monster by Battle,both players must discard 1 card from their hands to the Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by battle,Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard.

 

 

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gamekrazzy Newbie

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XEVIL, you may be better, but I found an error in your OCG. Change "Tribute Summoned" to "Normal Summoned". Because you confuse the reader. You cannot say "this monster can only be Special Summoned by tributing..." When at the beginning you say "This monster cannot be Tribute Summoned..." Do you understand?

Also, (Change "in" when you say "Special Summon 1 'Zombie' type monster in your Graveyard" to "from".

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Sparta™ Newbie

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DARK Attribute = DARK

Battle = battle

Tribute Summoned = Summoned (or Normal Summoned)

Type = type (only if you don't include an actual type like Zombie-Type)

please, please space after commas, I see it all the time.

Flip a coin = flip a coin (I think)

Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard. = Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard.

Heads = heads (I think)

I love that pic!

8.2/10 ^_^

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Killey Newbie

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XEVIL' date=' you may be better, but I found an error in your OCG. Change "Tribute Summoned" to "Normal Summoned". Because you confuse the reader. You cannot say "this monster can only be Special Summoned by tributing..." When at the beginning you say "This monster cannot be Tribute Summoned..." Do you understand?[hr']

Also, (Change "in" when you say "Special Summon 1 'Zombie' type monster in your Graveyard" to "from".

 

Yes, it needs to be changed to Normal Summoned because Tribute Summoning a monster is still considered a Normal Summon. However, you are incorrect in that it would confuse players (well to a certain extent) because he is saying that it can't be Tribute Summoned but the next sentence says it can't be Special Summoned except by... The tributing clause to get it on the field is part of the Special Summoning requirements meaning it's not a Tribute Summon to begin with.

 

Lovely card you made because it is difficult to get out since most players that run a dedicated Zombie deck don't run a WATER Zombie and there aren't many WATER Attribute Zombies out there nor are there ones that are very useful to begin with. However, this monster has it's definite uses once it hits the field. The ability to SS a Zombie from your deck if you get the coin toss is excellent and being able to discard a card from your hand when you destroy a monster is a plus to the Zombie theme since Mezuki and Plaguespreader are more useful in the grave then in your hand. Furthermore, if it's destroyed by Battle it can SS itself from the Grave since it fufills it's own requirements so it has some staying power. Honestly though I don't think this card will see much play due to the lack of good WATER zombies out there and the fact that adding WATER zombies to the deck will screw up their ratio of DARK monsters in their deck making Allure of Darkness a counter productive card since there won't be enough targets for it.

 

As for the card text let me make some corrections:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 2 Zombie-Type monsters and 1 WATER monster. This card's Type is also treated as Warrior. Once per turn, toss a coin, if the result is heads Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Deck. If this card destroys a monster by battle, each player must discard 1 card from their hand. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard.

 

I added the clause that it needed to be sent to the Graveyard when it is destroyed by battle for the SS effect. This makes that part of the effect a little more fair since a macro deck would stop that effect cold. It's up to you whether you want to keep that clause or not.

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I agree with Killey XEVIL. and Killey is right too, because your effect most definately does not confuse everyone. It depends on how they read your effect, and the way I read it, that is what I understood. I knew that wasn't what you were trying to say, so I corrected you by how I understood it. So Killey is right. It confuses people to an extent.

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Killey Newbie

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I just realized I made a mistake when I said this card could SS itself when destroyed in battle. It can't since it has the clause "can't be Special Summoned except by..." which dramatically reduces the usefulness of this card. Since the summoning requirements are pretty uncommon for a Zombie deck I would probably change the SS clause to "can only be Special Summoned by..."

 

Also did a quick search for Water attribute Zombies and none exist in the TCG, which I find quite odd. So definitely fix the SS clause because getting this guy out is going to be harder then usual in a deck that has any sort of Zombie engine built into it.

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Sleepy Mentor

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ok. you can mix some Water-Type monsters into the Deck, it's not a big deal and the Water Tribute doesn't nessesarily have to be a Zombie. for me that efect is not a problem. but if you want to avoid keeping this controversity of the "Tribute or not Tribute?" you can change that part to : This card cannot be Tributed Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Zombie-Type monsters and 1 Water-Atribute monster you control to the Graveyard.

that should do it :) and I don't have any posible corrections for the rest of the card. without anything further..... ;) a 9/10

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before any1 reads anything let me make this perfectly clear, I do not claim any type of ownership over the following card what so ever. this card was created PURELY to help out Xevil and get an idea of the card without the "water" throwback.

now... on to the card:

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Zombie-Type monsters and 1 DARK monster. This card's type is also treated as a Warrior. Once per turn, Flip a coin, if Heads, Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Deck. If this card sucessfully destroys a monster by Battle, both players must discard 1 card from their hands to the Graveyard. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field.

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Sleepy Mentor

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the reason of why I didn't change the "Tribute Summon" to "Normal Summon" is because there are some cards that allow this one to be normal summoned. and if not now. Next buster pack there will be a spell cards that makes 500 LP damage to you for every star that you want to downgrade the monster. so it can be normal summoned without being tribute summoned

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Killey Newbie

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the reason of why I didn't change the "Tribute Summon" to "Normal Summon" is because there are some cards that allow this one to be normal summoned. and if not now. Next buster pack there will be a spell cards that makes 500 LP damage to you for every star that you want to downgrade the monster. so it can be normal summoned without being tribute summoned

 

Tribute Summon still counts as a Normal Summon. If the card states "This card cannot be Normal Summoned." then you can't Normal Summon or Tribute Summon this card regardless if you lowered the level of the monster through a card effect.

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the reason of why I didn't change the "Tribute Summon" to "Normal Summon" is because there are some cards that allow this one to be normal summoned. and if not now. Next buster pack there will be a spell cards that makes 500 LP damage to you for every star that you want to downgrade the monster. so it can be normal summoned without being tribute summoned

 

Tribute Summon still counts as a Normal Summon. If the card states "This card cannot be Normal Summoned." then you can't Normal Summon or Tribute Summon this card regardless if you lowered the level of the monster through a card effect.

 

that's what I mean but this card CAN because it doesn't say it can't be Normal Summoned, it only says it can't be Tribute Summoned. therefore it CAN be normal summoned :)

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