Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Thanks... the next chapter shall be posted the latest by tomrrow @ 4pm eastern time. cuz I get home @ 3 and i haven't started it yet plus homework and that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 i'll be sure to read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 chap 7 was more of the dueling, but chap 8 is finally showing a little of the plot, and I'd say it's well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Well Chapter 7 was the end of the tournament so it was supposed to be all dueling Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 ok then. Can't wait to see how the plot turns out like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Heres Chapter 9 ENJOY! Chapter 9When we opened the door to get the not, a bunch of thoughts had been running through our heads, but the most important one was… what’s inside and what does it say? I opened the note reading it aloud. “I hope you are ready to face the ultimate task, the lives of your families depend on it. However as you will se I am not as bad as you think. For I am giving out the location of the first rare hunter. If you lose, you have to fork over your top three rare cards. Then if they manage to leave you in one piece then you can get a second chance at them. After that there won’t be a third chance. Anyway, the location of this duelist is going to be in Town Square. Good Luck duelists. Signed, Marik.” “Looks like we should get a move on before any harm comes upon our families stated Amanda.” “Let’s get into the van so we can get this party started said Janet” We piled into the van one by one, after everyone was in the car we left the house hoping that our families were still in one piece. Once we arrived at Town Square, a couple of blimps appeared soaring around the city. It was Seto Kaiba. “Greetings duelists, and welcome to the Battle City Tournament II. I hope that you are ready to get busy. This is not going to be as easy as my last tournament. Here’s the deal, like last time you will duel for locater cards. However, this time you need a grand total of 10 locater cards, making this one of the toughest tournaments ever. If you win you get the opponents locater cards and the location of 10 random duelist profiles in your duel disk, that will not only give you the info on the duelist but it will give you their location. If you don’t want to duel then you turn your duel disk off. If you are in the mood for dueling then you leave your duel disk on stand-by. Now if everyone understands this then let the tournament commence.” We split up hoping to locate the where abouts of the first rare hunter so we could rescue our family. When we split up we went in pairs of two. Janet went with Frank, I went with Aaron, Kevin went with Dylan, and Amanda went with Debby. We decided to meet in front f the courthouse in one hour. If we didn’t find him we would start dueling other people so if we were to lose we would still have locater cards to challenge him with. It had been a had hour before we had seen each other. We decided if we saw him we would call him on the cell phone to alert the others. When Kevin and Dylan had been walking looking at every possible direction they heard a voice. “So are you gonna stand there all day while the chances of your friends seeing their families slithers away.” The duelist came out of the crowd. He was wearing a black cape and a laptop. He had a big grin on his face. “Let’s duel said Dylan” “I don’t duel squirts. But if your brother wanted to give you a hand I wouldn’t have a problem with that. However, if I am victorious, I get both of your souls with no questions asked.” “Fine by me. How about you Dylan?” “Fine by me Kevo. It’s time to duel. Let me alert the others that we found him. Hey, my cell phone isn’t working.” “Please, did you honestly think that I’d let you contact your friends. It’s just gonna be us three that now about it. Follow me into the courthouse.” Kevin and Dylan followed him into the stone wall building climbing to the top. When they arrived there were a set of doors. They walked on through. It was a courtroom. It was old though. Everything about it was outdated. By the plaintiff and defendant stands were two steel platforms with chains on them. “Please step onto the platform and strap yourselves in. And just so you don’t think I’m cheating I will do the same.” “What are these for …. What’s your name?” “You can call me Seeker. And the chains and platforms shall be explained. I am going to set a timer for two minutes. Every time the timer reaches zero, the chains are going to shock you for the amount of damage that you took that round. Then in the end, the two duelists with the lowest lifepoints get shocked again. When you win there will be a box that appears in front of the winner. If its one of you there will be two keys, one for each of you. If it’s met hen I am the only one to walk out of here with my soul. Everyone understand the rules said Seeker as he turned on his duel disk?” Both Kevin and Dylan said yes and they turned on their duel disks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lightning112 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 great i hope you keep adding on and by recommendation I would recommend adding another character if you need any Ideas PM me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Well I was thinking about it but its enough work keeping up witht eh 8 that I have as it is. But I do wanna here your ideas though so I will take you up on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 3 rarest cards and 10 locater cards? You win those 10 you'd have almost an entire deck by then. In the anime Kaiba had said that his new rule did wonders for Joey's deck. This time his rule is going to give every finalist a completely new deck for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Which would help shuffle it up. but the 8 characters aren't going to take the cards... unless they were already taken from them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 well, it also depends on your opponent. If you run a zombie deck and you won the 3 rarest cards from an opponent with a machine deck or something, it's not going to be of much use Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Well, you don't have to accept the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 true, but if it'll weaken the opponent's deck, that's what counts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Over all, what did you think of the chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 I feel it's good, almost feels like Kaiba wanted the god cards again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Well, I shall begin Chapter 10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 you know if this really IS Kaiba's plan to get the god cards, I wouldn't be too surprised Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Oh but you will be surprised :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 well I never said anything about that's definately his plan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 Here is Chapter 10. i hope you enjoy. Chapter 10“I’ll begin this duel you rookies. I summon Stone Statue of the Aztecs in defense mode (300/2000). To end my turn I activate the spell card Swords of Revealing Light. Now for 3 turns you are unable to attack. Your move fools.” “Good so I think I will begin with this; Elemental Hero Wildheart. Then to end the turn I play one card facedown. You’re up brother.” “So I am. I start and end the turn by summoning Solar Flare Dragon in defense mode (1500/1000). And whenever I end my turn you lose 500 life points. It’s your move, and now the first turn of my dragon’s effect activates (4000/4000/3500).” “I draw and end my turn.” “My draw again. I play another Wildheart, but this one is going in defense mode (1500/1600). I end my turn.” “My turn, I place a defensive card which ends my turn, only to activate the effect of Solar Flare Dragon. Incase you forgot, that burns away 500 lifepoints (4000/4000/3000)” “You realize I will put a stop to all of this. I draw only to play Gear Golem the Moving Fortress (800/2200).” “Back to me. I summon Elemental Hero Sparkman in attack mode (1600/1400). That ends my turn.” “My turn? Wow, this duel is going by so fasssss. Oh that hurt. “The first of many shock waves have begun. But it seems I have “accidentally” forgotten to turn on my shock waves. Looks like I don’t get to participate in all of your fun.” “Yeah, you really “forgot”. Whatever, my move. I play a defense and flip up my Fire Sorcerer in attack mode (1000/1500). When she is flip summoned, I can send two random cards from my hand to the graveyard to deal out 800 points of direct damage. And let’s not forget about my dragon. When I end my turn he deals out another 500 points of damage (4000/4000/1300).” “Alright time to end this now. I activate Graceful Charity. This card allows me to draw 3 cards as long as I discard two cards from my hand. I activate the spell card Double Summon, which lets me summon twice this turn. I summon two more Stone Statue of the Aztec (300/2000). That ends my turn.” “Dylan just pass and I can win this for us.” “Alright bro, but I just don’t wanna get shocked so can I play my trap card first?” “Sure!” “I reveal the trap card Elemental Recharge, and for every Elemental Hero on my field I gain 1000 life points (4000/7000/1300). It’s up to you bro.” “Fine with me, I am gonna end this with two cards. Now I flip Lady Assailant of Flames. By removing the top 3 cards of my deck from play you lose 800 life points (4000/7000/500). Now it’s time to end my turn said Kevin with a smirk on his face. And as you know once I end my turn you lose the duel. “NOOOOOOOOOOOO! This can’t be. I refuse to lose to a bunch of kids.” “You just did because I’m ending my turn now (4000/7000/0). Seeker fell down after losing the duel and a clack box with that same eye insignia had appeared out of the floor. Also, as the box rose, the judge’s chair had sunk into the desk. When it came back, two family members had appeared. Dylan unlocked the shooken Kevin after being shocked that one last time. After that they rescued the family members, who turned out to be Amanda’s parents. After everyone was safe they used Amanda’s cell phone to contact me. We arrived 5 minutes later. We tried to get information out of Amanda’s parents but they couldn’t remember a thing. Just then Seeker had risen after all of that silence. “I congratulate you on your victory. As a reward I thought it would be nice to show you I did nothing to your parents Amanda. Plus, look at the cards my rare hunter had in his hand.” At the moment I was wondering why the rare hunter was referring to himself in the third person. But that question was no longer in my brain once I saw the cards he was holding. They were four out of five Exodia cards. Then the rare hunter drew one card. It was the fifth Exodia piece. If Kevin didn’t end it when he did, they would have lost. “I bet your wondering why I keep calling out in third person. The truth is I am Marik. I have what is known as the Millennium Rod which allows me to take over the minds of my servants trapping their minds in the Shadow Realm. But there is no need to worry about that. I am here to congratulate you on your victory. As for the location of the next Rare Hunter, I can only give you a clue. Don’t PARK your car in the wrong place. Well, have a nice day.” Just then Seeker had dropped to the floor. We had decided to take Amanda’s parents to the Ryan’s house for now and then get some lunch. After that we would start the search for Rare Hunter 2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PremierAameer Posted December 3, 2008 Report Share Posted December 3, 2008 Great stuff! Duels run smooth as butterMake sure to read my fic when i post it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KageKatana Posted December 3, 2008 Report Share Posted December 3, 2008 Hey nicely done master Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master52394 Posted December 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2008 Thank-You, thank-you XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 3, 2008 Report Share Posted December 3, 2008 Well done, your dueling is superb yet again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 3, 2008 Report Share Posted December 3, 2008 very nice. good dueling sequences as always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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