pokeslob Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ŞťřïЖЄѓ™ Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Sweet!I like the background and text. What program did ya make it on?If Paint,100/10!If any other proffesinal programs,I will think about because they are better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 I like it but I doubt other members will coz it has alot of problems.Try to make it blend more and and more flow. Other members like Problematic will say the text sucks and all that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 I don't like it. Bad border.Text kills. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeslob Posted November 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Sweet!I like the background and text. What program did ya make it on?If Paint' date='100/10!If any other proffesinal programs,I will think about because they are better.[/quote'] I made it on Fireworks MX as described in my sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted November 30, 2008 Report Share Posted November 30, 2008 Sweet!I like the background and text. What program did ya make it on?If Paint' date='100/10!If any other proffesinal programs,I will think about because they are better.[/quote'] ^^^ This is an example of someone who knows nothing of GFX, or just wants to get a post count up. Never give a 100/10 for something, even in Paint. And Paint DOES NOT have the power to do this. *Sigh* Just another reason I don't critisize much anymore. Okay, the banner. Now I'm critisizing this piece as a sig. If it isn't, then my apologies. Anyway, the text. I will say this, the text isn't as bad as I thought it would be. Most text destroys tags frequently, this isn't good, but it isn't horrible. The color isn't appealing, but text is very hard to master, espacially for someone I have never seen do a tag before. Not bad, man. Next, the border. The border is not good. I don't do borders very often, as they are very unappealing on most tags. This is an example. The black line that starts the border is VERY ugly, and the tag wouldn't be as bad if it didn't have this. Next, just everything else. The background colors are pretty ugly. The green brushing with the greyish colors look bad. The brushing is very messy, and it looks like you blurred them too much. Made it's the type of brush you used, but that's the way it seems you did it. There is no blending, flow, depth, lighting ETC. No offense, but I didn't expect those as I have never seen you make a tag, but these you will need to work on if you are going to try again. Before I'm done, I would just like to say that even though I have never used Fireworks, I don't think it would be as ideal for this as Photoshop or GIMP would. Anyways, not bad for the first one I've seen you make. Read some more tuts and you'll get better.Hope this helped. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ŞťřïЖЄѓ™ Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 IN SUBJECT:I think the background looks like plasma,and effected to give it a good greenish color.Thats how I like it. And the text looks good enough. OUT OF SUBJECT:Duh,Disturbed064. I am 8 Years old. And I do have GFX skills.And anyway,why be nice to him,and not me.Does that make everything fair? No.So get the hell out of my f***ing sight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 If you have GFX skills, you would know that Paint doesn't have that power. I'm not being mean to you, it just pisses me off that some one would give a 100/10 for something like this. I also could've said worse about your post. No need to get all pushy just because I made a comment. =/ I'm done spamming this thread. You can say anything else through a PM. Sorry about that, Pokeslob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 I laugh how you say you have GFX skills and you tought it was made in Paint XD. On the sig, never put the text over the render. Don't place more than 1 render in a sig, and if its just 1, its a bad render...The border is bad. I ussually put none since borders always look bad.If you brushed, its badly brushed, try again.No depth, flow or lightining. Just try again.Read a tut, and if you used a tut, use other one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obi-wan Cannoli Posted December 1, 2008 Report Share Posted December 1, 2008 Problematic will say the text sucks and all that.Wrong' date=' if Problematica where to rate this she would [i']murder[/i] the sig. On topic. As Frlf said never use more then one render in a sig. Try to keep the border to the very edge. It doesn't look to good otherwise. The color of the render and the lime green background clash against each other and it makes an unpleasant effect. The text is bad, however, compared to some sigs its actually quite decent, like disturbed said. Sigs look incredible when they have an aspect called flow, which you are lacking. Flow is when there is a sense of motion in the sig and the render seems to fit right in "flowing" along. At least thats how It is to me. One more thing to watch out for is depth. Depth is a sense of, well, depth... In a sig that has depth is seems like the background is far off and the render is up close. Or the other way around. It makes the sig seem a lot less flat, which looks nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokeslob Posted December 2, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 this whole thing was supposed to be a little tribute to my favourite artist and his greatest works,the brushing isn't bad, its bad assas for lighting n shading n stuff, I tried but it just doesn't fit what I wanted to doit IS multiple rendersI agree the text could use some workand NO I did not use a tut, those are for noobs and I do everything free handed otehrewise to the people who liked it thank you! to those who liked and gave some constructive critisim on how to make it better thank you! I don't think I saw anyone being a douche so this is a good thing :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 The brushing is bad, no matter what you say. It has no real appeal and has an abnormal and unattractive contradiction of a pale gray and bright vibrant green. Also goes off in various directions while maintaining a distinct shape, very bad.Do not do more than one render. I don't care if it's a tribute, it looks like hell and kills off most hopes of lighting, blending, and any of the other basics. There isn't even a consistency in the style of art either.No blending, depth, lighting, flow, etc...Border is really bad, just don't even do oneReally, really bad text I am kind of tired, so I might've missed something, but there isn't much to say since there isn't much there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Obi-wan Cannoli Posted December 2, 2008 Report Share Posted December 2, 2008 The brushing is bad' date=' no matter what you say. It has no real appeal and has an abnormal and unattractive contradiction of a pale gray and bright vibrant green. Also goes off in various directions while maintaining a distinct shape, very bad.Do not do more than one render. I don't care if it's a tribute, it looks like hell and kills off most hopes of lighting, blending, and any of the other basics. There isn't even a consistency in the style of art either.No blending, depth, lighting, flow, etc...Border is really bad, just don't even do oneReally, really bad text I am kind of tired, so I might've missed something, but there isn't much to say since there isn't much there.[/quote'] Pokeslob, you where pretty much asking for that to happen by saying how good it was in your eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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