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The_Harbinger

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Wow. Maybe check some advice threads BEFORE posting cards?? :(

 

These are really offensive, seeeing as i am a BIG comic-geek. My rates/comments:

 

Names: Self explanitory, not much you could have done. Although i'd have made mine like: "Iron Man- Mk 1" "Iron Man- Mk 2" and so on. 7/10

Pics: Gah!! no backgrounds?! I think not. 2/10

Types/Attributes: Okay, we've got some problems here. The effects should either be "Warrior" or "Machine," not all of those ridiculous ones you've used. It's really not good. 0/10

Effects/OCG: Oh boy am i about to cry. For one thing the English and spelling is horrible. Next, the effects aren't original, short, THE SAME, and just plain stupid. And Iron Monger's is "This card is destroyed?!" Come on now, be serious. the effects don't sound like cards, either. 0/10

ATK/DEF/OP'ed: Tony needs to a much higher ATK; Mark 1 should not be stronger than Mk 2, it should be the reverse; Mk 3 should be stronger than that; Iron Monger should be about 2800. All of them are either OP'ed or UP'ed. 0/10

Final words: Wow...um, you might want to try A LOT harder before you ask for rates again. i'd consult a lot of tutorials and advice threads that this site has. 0/10

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