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All the time? OK' date=' that works. And I just realized a few posts ago that I can recolor the Pokeballs to match the color scheme of the Pokemon. :D

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Whoops, left out a word, "not" all the time.

And that is good, recolor the balls.

Add a few more guys into the mix for a splice.

And a hint: You can use a pokeball for eyes ect.

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In general I don't like Poke splicing. I find it stupid to put a huge Pokemon feature onto a Pokeball. I could at least be Ok with it if it were done fairly subtly, but you were very blunt about it.

 

The Moltress one for example. It doesn't look right to just throw flaming wings and tail onto a Pokeball. You also didn't put them on all that great either. There also could have been some recoloring done. What happened to the left wing also, it is messed up.

 

Now with your second set, you at least started to move away from replacing entire bodies with them and got a little subtle. Still though, feet and tails coming out of Pokeballs just looks weird and stupid. The fins on the water one in particular are placed really bad.

 

The third sheet is more of the same. You lack recolor, which would help blend the pices to the pokeball. That ninetails one would be a lot better if the tails and pokeball faced the same way. The beedrill one is just really odd.

 

What I'm trying to get at is you have to do smaller changes. Don't turn a Pokemon into a pokeball, try altering a pokeball with little bits to make it something cool and neat. New designs and shapes that are based off of Pokemon would be fine with the right amount moderation and subtlety.

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Thanks for killing my confidence, yeah, thanks. Anyways, I see where you are going with the first set, I admit they were way to... random. It was like a Pokeball in place of the body. The second set, I thought was my best, as it actaully looked like a Pokeball. So, basically, I need to work on recoloring and placement?

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Thanks for killing my confidence' date=' yeah, thanks. Anyways, I see where you are going with the first set, I admit they were way to... random. It was like a Pokeball in place of the body. The second set, I thought was my best, as it actaully looked like a Pokeball. So, basically, I need to work on recoloring and placement?

[/quote']Jappio ruined your confidence? Bad Jappio. [Dark] gets to make Pokeball Splices at my shop. He enjoys it. He gets a point every time someone orders it.

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I think those are really good. I don't even see anything wrong. Ignore those other jerks.

 

You mean' date=' "professional Pokemon splicers," don't you? We're not jerks. We're giving [i']contructive criticism[/i].

I don't know if I am a professional... I just make good splices when I am not in a hurry. But I only make splices if someone orders at my shop so it is rare to see my splices. Except at my shop that barely anybody goes to.
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Some of this is constructive criticism. Some of it is "jerk-ish".

 

If any of mine was jerkish I'd like to know specifically what, I try to make my critiques to help and if I'm coming off as a jerk, it would be nice to know why so I can fix that. I try to critique to help, there are plenty of people who appreciate it. Even the artist in this case seemed to appreciate the help that I gave him, he actually listened to what to do to make his things better. He did have that broken confidence thing, but that could be sarcasm or an exaggeration.

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