The great escape

[KageKatana]

PROLOGUE

 

^ ENTER DUEL ^

 

The TV screen flashed as Jake began his first duel on his new

game: YU-GI-OH Championship 2025 online. A picture of his first opponent, Ryuu came on the screen.

"I'll go first," Ryuu's voice came on the game's speakers.

"I summon Death pawn [1000/1000] in attack mode!"

"I summon Elven warrior [1300/2000] in defense mode,

then activate the spell card Demonic Blade which gives

my monster 300 attack points!" Jake shouted in to the mic.

Death pawn [1000/1000]

Elven warrior [1600/2000]

"I'll attack Death pawn with my Elven warrior."

Death pawn exploded into a shower of sparks.

[Jake:8000/Ryuu:7400]

"I activate the spell card Infernal rage, it inflicts 1000 direct damage

strait to your life points!"

[Jake:8000/Ryuu:6400]

"I summon Petit squid [0/4000] In defense mode and activate the spell

card Squid egg, it causes petit squid to be protected for 5 turns and it gets 4000 ATK.," Ryuu shouted.

 

CHAPTER

ONE

 

After the duel with Ryuu, 15-year-old Jake felt tottaly different about dueling. He had just gotten a Duel Disk that you can plug into the game

and your cards are vertually scanned into the game. It was 4 months

after the duel with Ryuu and Jake was on the last level of the game

 

^ENTER DUEL^

 

JAKE VS. MASON (computer)

 

Jake put on the duel disk and drew.

"I'll go firs..."

The screen went blank and there was a bright flash.

His eyes went blank...

 

When he came to he found him self in a baron waist land

It took his eyes a while to get used to the light,

he found his cards on his chest and his duel disk beside him

he sat up hooked the Black and purple duel disk to his arm and stuck the deck in the deck slot and started to walk.

[KageKatana]

Click here to feed me a Star Fruit!

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[ragnarok1945]

a good prologue, can't wait to see the rest of the fic. A black and purple duel disk? Are you trying to refer to the ones played in WTDs back then?

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

Just give up, spammer. Read a good book (J.K. Rowling, Andre Norton, Mercedes Lackey, or both of the previous two; try Alastair Reynolds or J.R.R. Tolkein if you must), stop spamming, lrn2grammar, and try again. Or not; maybe wait a while and spare us your disastrous anti-eloquence and monotonous lack of creativity. It hurts my diseased eyes.

 

Did I mention STOP SPAMMING yet?

[KageKatana]

CHAPTER

TWO

 

Jake walked for what seemed like hours 'till he came to what looked like the ruins of a large city. He kept walking 'till he came to a sign post that read "Broadway"

"BROADWAY!" Jake shouted. "NEW YORK!"

He kept walking 'till he came to a half crumbled building with a calendar

that read: November, 3526!

"NOO!! No I lost! I... I CAN'T LOOSE!" a voice shouted from a distant ally.

Jake ran to the ally. He looked down the ally and saw two men wearing long black coats with duel disks on there arms, in front of them was a man on his hands and knees with his cards and duel disk in front of him.

There was one card heads up, it was called "Remus, the Elven King"[5500/5500]

"Take the card brother," One of the men said. He noticed one man was shorter

than the other.

"Stop!" the word just slipped out of Jake's mouth.

"Well, well, well... two birds with one stone," said the shorter one.

"I'll take care of this little sucker," said the short one.

 

"DUEL!"they both shouted.

[Guest Supreme Gamesmaster]

You didn't read a word I wrote, did you?

 

STOP. You aren't writing chapters, anyway, you're writing paragraphs. STOP WRITING. READ GOOD BOOK. THEN START OVER.

 

Honestly. I can't believe you're still writing this crap.

[ragnarok1945]

too short a chapter, please make them longer and more interesting