harhar Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 CnC and junk =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Bad c4d. I can't see the render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 The C4D sticks out too much. And does the background look like another person or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted November 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Bad c4d. I can't see the render. XD Your telling me I have bd c4d's XDLook at your own ;)But you tetra you are right about the c4d's sticking out to much I will have to work on that =/The bg is of a city ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Bad c4d. I can't see the render. XD Your telling me I have bd c4d's XDLook at your own ;)But you tetra you are right about the c4d's sticking out to much I will have to work on that =/The bg is of a city ;)I was talking about the postioning. It looks like it goes right through your render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harhar Posted November 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Bad c4d. I can't see the render. XD Your telling me I have bd c4d's XDLook at your own ;)But you tetra you are right about the c4d's sticking out to much I will have to work on that =/The bg is of a city ;)I was talking about the positioning. It looks like it goes right through your render. I used a stock ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 The c4d could do with a little bit of erasing over the stock. I think it would look nice without the c4d (could you post a version without the c4d, just to satisfy my curiosity lol) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
problematica Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Biggest problem, other than the whole thing, is the focal. The guy (I think it was a guy, couldn't tell really, he looked more feminine than some of the girls) is too out of focus while the c4ds are right there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥ ЅϯᵲåώӀӞ℮ᴙʀɣ−ɴɨɨ−ƈħåɴ ♥ Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 The background looks more like a person's hair than a city. Might want to make it stick out a bit, if that's the case. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marisa Kirisame-ze Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 The render doesn't show to much. Just make the render show a bit more and your fine. lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted November 25, 2008 Report Share Posted November 25, 2008 Pretty good, though not of your best caliber.Maybe add some text in that empty upper right area? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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