superbull Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Please rate these and give any comments on them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superbull Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 please leave some suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Don't expect people to reply within 2 hours. - Text is bad on all- Flow is bad, try to use images that have a natural flow.- Blending needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Getting better.1 is the best I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hobbes96 Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 first is the best, the rest suck. the render has a green line around it so I would say that you should stick a few c4ds on it.your text draws away from the focal point a little so move it a little towards the left and a little towards the bottom, and make it a little smaller.the right wing doesn't look solid, so don't erase quite as much next time.good job. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superbull Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Thanks for the info and I am sorry blood rose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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