Please rate my spellcaster/ d.d. deck

[thewounderkid]

This is my deck:

 

Monsters (24)

Horus the black flame dragon lv 6 (x2)

Horus the black flame dragon lv 8 (x1)

Dark Magician (x2)

D.D. Survivor (x2)

Caius the shadow monarch (x1)

Gren Maju da eiza (x2)

Dark magician girl (x1)

D.D. warrior lady (x1)

kycoo the ghost destroyer (x1)

Golden Homunculus (1)

D.D. Warrior (x1)

Skilled Dark Magician (x1)

Mobius the frost monarch (x1)

Kuriboh (x1)

Exiled Force (x1)

Field commander Rahz (x1)

Breaker the magical warrior (x1)

D.D. Assailant (x1)

Bazoo the soul eater (x1)

Banisher of the light (x1)

Slate Warrior (x1)

 

Spells (17)

Magical Dimension (x1)

Mystical Space Typhoon (x1)

Magical Mallet (x1)

Swords Of Revealing Light (x1)

Brain Control (x1)

Reinforcement Of The Army (x1)

Sage's Stone (x1)

Dark Magic Attack (x1)

Lightning Vortex (x1)

The Shallow Grave (x1)

Monster Reborn (x1)

Soul Exchange (x1)

D.D.R- Different Dimension Reincarnation (x1)

Dimensional Fissure (x2)

Heavy Storm (x1)

Soul Release (x1)

 

Traps (9)

Bottomless Trap Hole (x1)

Skull Lair (x1)

Draining Shield (x1)

Shadow Spell (x1)

Sakuretsu Armor (x1)

Covering Fire (x1)

Magical Cylinder (x1)

Magician's Circle (x1)

Negate Attack (x1)

[Tsuki ni Mau Majin]

What the hell is this?

[thewounderkid]

its ur mom

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please rate this or ill kill a panda. and nobody wants that

[Tsuki ni Mau Majin]

Please refrain from insulting my mother. It'll get your failing deck no where. Scrap this crap, and build Bushi Box, Zombie Synchro, or Macro Mill.

[ShinobiDark72]

Simply terrible.

 

It's got too many random things thrown in, and shouldn't have the Spellcaster stuff in it. The Monarchs are good, the removal stuff is good, but it's off, by quite a bit.

 

Here's Macro Monarch Turbo, or at least as Turbo as it can get:

 

Monsters(20):

3 Caius the Shadow Monarch

2 Kuraz the Light Monarch

2 Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch

1 Raiza the Storm Monarch

3 D.D. Survivor

1 Breaker the Magical Warrior

1 D.D Warrior Lady

3 D.D. Scout Plane

1 Card Trooper

3 Cyber Valley

 

Spells(14):

3 Dimensional Fissure

2 Machine Duplication / Light of Redemption

3 D.D.R. - Different Dimension Reincarnation

2 Allure of Darkness

2 Soul Taker

1 Reasoning

1 Monster Gate

 

Traps(6):

3 Solemn Judgment

2 Macro Cosmos

1 Mirror Force

 

I hope I somewhat helped out.