Knight''s Title Book 1~ Secret of the Hyuuga: Finished. Now Discusing FanFic

[ragnarok1945]

ok THAT is going to leave a major skeleton in Neji's closest. He's going to be scarred for life seeing his father killed

[Fen.]

Yeah, I think that's where he always gets his "Destiny" shpeal.

 

New Chapter is up! Neji Finds a secret that will blow his mind!

[ragnarok1945]

great. A 2nd confrontation with the Orichalcos. This ought to prove interesting.

[Fen.]

Yeah, it really should. Just you wait. Sadly this fight won't happen for another 9 chapters.

The story is going to shift to The Knight's Title on their journey to Tragic Kingdom.

[ragnarok1945]

don't worry. As long as you make it longer than 1 chapter and it's intense, I'll be satisfied

[Fen.]

That fight is three chapters long btw.

 

NEW UPDATE! I have added a theme song for every character in this fanfic!

[ragnarok1945]

oh and you may not know this, but the Orichalcos's asymmetrical star was actually taken from Dartz before he was infected with it

[Fen.]

Really? I thought that was just a coincidence!

[ragnarok1945]

Well, if you had watched the flashbacks Dartz was showing Yami and Kaiba about how his city had encountered the Orichalcos, I suggest you pay VERY close attention to what was hanging around Dartz's neck (it's ep 177 and 178, if you need specifics).

 

If you look VERY carefully, you'll notice a green medallion around his neck, with the exact asymmetrical star the Seal of Orichalcos forms when it is played. If you pay attention to the flashback, you'll notice he had this medallion before the Orichalcos even came.

[Fen.]

Oh my god you're right!!! That's what you call forshadowing!

[ragnarok1945]

Most people I talked to didn't even realize about that medallion

[Fen.]

The medalion really comes in handy for Dartz later on. It's kind of his.....last resort.

[ragnarok1945]

you're going to make his medallion serve the greater purpose than the anime?

[Fen.]

Yep...in his fight....it's kind of his ace in the hole.

 

 

Chapter 10 is now up! The Knights finally are ready to go save Neji!

[ragnarok1945]

you know with Jake's sneezing I won't be surprised if he eventually set everything ablaze

[Fen.]

That's very funny that you should mention that........

HINT: Foreshadowing.............kaboom......

[.:Abarai Renji:.]

the fanfic is great so far. But, as a true Shadow fan, i just have to ask: Will he, or will he not, have to turn into Super Shadow in any of the future chapters??? I just wanna know :)

[ragnarok1945]

That's very funny that you should mention that........

HINT: Foreshadowing.............kaboom......

 

I only see him setting things on fire, not exploding things, unless the area he sneezed is fill with explosives.

[Fen.]

the fanfic is great so far. But' date=' as a true Shadow fan, i just have to ask: Will he, or will he not, have to turn into Super Shadow in any of the future chapters??? I just wanna know :)

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Shadow fan huh? Oh you are going to just LOVE chapter 14 then.

(Shadow fights in that chapter)

 

That's very funny that you should mention that........

HINT: Foreshadowing.............kaboom......

 

I only see him setting things on fire' date=' not exploding things, unless the area he sneezed is fill with explosives.

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Something along the lines of that.......^_^

[ragnarok1945]

that's good. You going to make grotesque death scenes that way then?

[Fen.]

Blood is going to be spilled imensly in these next few chapters.

There are going to be up to 4 fights coming up. I won't spoil much...but let's just say that Dartz has a few "Familiar friends."

[ragnarok1945]

if you're going to bring Alistair, Rafael, and Valon back, there'd better be a good explanation as to how they've been tricked a 2nd time

[Fen.]

Oh no, nothing like that....but that is a good Idea for a future book............

[ragnarok1945]

that'd be good. If you intend to bring Mai back, this time make the roles reversed since Joey saved her so many times: it'd be interesting to see how things work if the roles got reversed (not to mention she first has to earn forgiveness first)

[Fen.]

No...Mai is a good girl at heart, I don't want to tarnish that at all.