sdfsdfa Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 [spoiler=1st day ] AND [spoiler=2nd day ] [spoiler=3rd day ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Not so good... Practice a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Ok I am kind of new to sprite well ages ago I could do them amazing but i deleted them so I am trying to make them again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 If you were so amazing ages ago, why didn't you keep that nack? Surely you don't lose something like that even after ages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 But I swear I was good at it ages ago Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 What Blood Rose said.Even after ages you should remember to:1. Fix outlines2. Save as .png Sorry, but, not good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 I'm awfully baffled by the sprites. They very well might be good ideas, but you have such an incredible disregard for the quality that it doesn't shine through very well, it takes a proper eye to see what you were exactly doing. I could be wrong though and what you did isn't that good. That's the problem with things like saving as anything other than .png. I can also look and see you have some nasty border problems too, which is also very unappealing. Other errors I can maybe see would be things like color, and how there are probably a tad too many of them, and how Ninjask and Scisor I think are a little too under represented. The second one needs a lot of work too. In general the simple copying is pretty bad and it even randomly overlaps and blends. It doesn't even make sense and doesn't look that good. Moving on though, we'll discuss wings. Position, angle, sensibility, and even color by the look of it is all screwed up. You also lacked any recoloring. Also some ugly erased spots randomly on it and stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 YYaaayyy, Jappio stated the truth. I agree with him. MY CnC: First off, simply cutting and pasting is NOT splicing. Second, MAKE EM BLEND IN ^.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 added somemore splices Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 Hmm...I can see that you're getting better, but it's still not all that good.You need to work on your outlining. On the second splice, all you did was just paste Uxie's face on Raquaza's body. On the third, all you need to do is draw in the outlines. I like the first one, personally. I can't tell where Manaphy's head ends and Darkrai's body begins, though. That can be fixed by some simple outlining.My advice: Outline, outline, outline! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted November 18, 2008 Report Share Posted November 18, 2008 These are terrible.If you forgot to save as PNG, you were never amazing.bah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 How should you know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 sweet splices! i like Scizeye! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Thanx atleast someone likes my spilces Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 I have really improved look at the 3rd day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 OMC! Day three is better than mine! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 I have practiced a bit that is why Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 You obvious have alot of time on your hands.The 1st and 2nd spoilers are terrible.The third, some are excellent while others are too bland. In total: 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 I know the 1st two ones were not good but I like the 3rd one too its the best one i have made Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Wow, just wow. I mean the first two days, you weren't that good. Now you are... well I want to say good, but at the same time I don't. You have now over 50 splices. The problems is some are amazingly good. One of them being far superior to anything I've ever made. Yet on the same sheet you have like 20 splices that are either .jpeg or don't have recolored borders. How you even made this many is beyond belief. The incredible deviation in skill is what I want to think as impossible. In fact, I feel the need to claim theft.. I know though as of right now there is no definite proof so I won't, but I can't say I trust you 100%. I'll now just pick and choose a few of the things that I would consider you're average or better. I won't even bother with things that are .jpeg or not. Dewgong+Suicunelooks really nice. It has it's flaws though. The head pieces coming off at what i find to be a bad angle. You also are missed an ear. There is a right ear, but no left. The separation between blue and white on the belly I find a tady too straight. Teddiursa+Gardevoir is a little bland, only things on the head were added. I don't like the cressent moon, it looks flat and doesn't really curve with the head. The right ears seems irregularly small compare the left. The read chest piece also seems out of place with the brown and tan. Sandrew+Shaymin is adorable, but there are a few flaws also. On the head you lost a border. The shading and shape of the bush also is on a bad angle compared to Sandrew. Spoink+Spinda is well very odd. The shading is off, body is brighter than the head. Borders are mess up or missing in some areas. The head is too big for the dody, and doesn't even look attached. Pikachu+Mothim's wings are very natural look, as if not one with Pikachu. Also very bland as a splice. Blastoise+.... ummm I think Goldeen. I for what ever reason can't tell what it is. It's right next to Glagar+Heracross. It scare me I have to say, something is weird and messed up about it. It needs a lot of work, and touching up, also blue borders don't go on top of brown shells. Gardevoir with the black dress has a good number of flaws, even though from afar it looks almost good. With the dress, you can't do just a simple copy/flip, if you do, change it up and fix the shading. The way you did it too makes it look unnaturally symmetrical. Under the arm you have black all colored in for no reason. Without it though, Gardevoir get's super skinny for no reason, too skinny in fact. The feet look weird. Horns, fin, and wings don't seem to make much sense, also the color of the wings don't either. The fin looks sloppy, along with the horns. Well that's all I guess I'll do. Consistency is key though, don't make just one good thing, then get lazy and do bad on all the others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Could u rate the 3rd day pleaz out of ten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 I stopped giving "/10" scores a long time ago, they were too much hassle and no one here really has the same rating system. I mean I give a 5/10 for average, while others would give a 7/10. I also am not afraid to give a 1 or 2 out of 10, while other users will never go that low, but will go to 0 or even negatives. When high scores are involved, I give 8's probably where other users give 10, 1,000,000 or even infinite. So I really don't give them for these reasons. Not saying my grading system is the best, but I mean it's too much hassle when a person is offended by a 5/10 because it wasn't the 100/10's they were use to. You would be especially hard to judge out of 10 though. I mean a few of your things could get 5/10, while others could get 7 or 8. You even might have one or two that could get 10/10. Yet you have so many ones that are worth 1 or 2 out of 10 that it all cancels out. If I really have to, I'd average you at maybe 4/10, maybe 5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 Ok do not rate out of ten then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 You stole at least one splice in your 3rd set. It was entered by csaman3 in a splice contest that I was a judge in. You stole that Poliwhirl splice and probably many others. That is low. Don't do it again!Remove the splices you stole immediately! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 [spoiler=1st day ] AND [spoiler=2nd day ] [spoiler=3rd day ] You stole at least one splice in your 3rd set. It was entered by csaman3 in a splice contest that I was a judge in. You stole that Polywhirl splice and probably many others. That is low. Don't do it again!Remove the splices you stole immediately! Excellent catch Raelen, as I said before I was fishy about this guy. I think thoguh you mean Polywrath Raelen. Point is though sprite theft is serious offense, most sites ban people for this type of thing. I hope Conker you weren't planning to use that stolen splice in our contest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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