Knight121198 Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 Hi all im new here and this is the first time im posting, if u guys dont mind checking over my OCG for my cards that would be great.I love Cbs but found that Crystal Abundance even though is used well i believe its over used and that Rainbow Dragon being the only Crystal God was a little short so i developed 2 others 1 is here the other im still working on all with the 7 cbs on the field or in the grave cost for the summon to add more stratagy to a cb deck, this is my first time creating cards so please be gentle with me:lol: This monster cannot be Special Summoned by the effect(s) of "Crystal Beacon", or "Crystal Promise". Tribute 1 "Crystal Beast" as a face-up Continuous Spell Card to destroy 1 card on the field, if you activate this effect this card cannot attack this turn. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. The idea for this card came to me when i realized that the card Crystal Raigeki is bearly if not used at all so i gave this monster that functionality with the same cost and at an added cost of not being able to do battle the turn it uses its effect,and as you can see it cant be special summoned with Crystal Beacon, or Crystal Promise, so it cant be summoned that easily i thought it would be a little much if it could. During your Main Phase, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of face-up "Crystal Beast" monsters as Continuous Spell Cards on the field x 500, if you activate this effect this card cannot attack this turn. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. This card holds a special place in my heart and i dedicate it to my cat Jade who passed away some time ago she was a beautiful soul and i miss her every day:(.The idea for this card is that it replaces Gem flash energy which is also a good card but rarely used. If this card attacks and destroys an opponent's monster it may attack once again during the same Battle Phase, if this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. The idea for this card came from the lack of attacking monsters with good effects accept for Topaz Tiger,this card can attack twice but only if it destroys my opponents monster,theres always a catch isent there lol. Once per turn during your Main Phase you can discard 1 card from your hand to place 1 "Crystal Beast" monster from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone, it is treated as a Continuous Spell Card. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. Ah this card is likely to make waves as you can see this beast being a unicorn is a flightless version of Pegasus so it should share the same effect but with one differance you must pay 1 card to activate it,but with that cost comes the advantage that its a persistant effect,i hope i dont get yelled at for this one hehe. When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, you can Special Summon face-up from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard 1 Level 4 or lower "Crystal Beast" monster, if both monsters are on the field due to this effect destroy both monsters. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. The idea behind this card is for when you need to use a Spell card that requires 2 or more Crystal beasts in your spell and trap card zone a good way to start a duel with beacon or promise, or to end a duel with abundance. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.(Damage calculation is applied normally.) Once per turn during your Main Phase you can place this monster in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned, you can Special Summon as many "Crystal Beast" cards as possible from your Spell & Trap Card Zone. If this card is destroyed while it is in a Monster Card Zone, you can place it face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as a Continuous Spell Card, instead of sending it to the Graveyard. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except from your hand while you have 7 "Crystal Beast" cards with different names on the field or in your Graveyard. Increase the ATK of this monster by 1000 for each "Crystal Beast" in your Graveyard or increase the ATK of this monster by 1000 for each "Crystal Beast" on the field. During your Main Phase you can remove this monster and all cards on your opponents side of the field from play. If this card has been removed from play by this effect, during your 2nd Stand-by Phase return this card to your deck, shuffle, then draw 1 card. The idea for this one...well Johan(or Jesse whatever :P) has his Rainbow Dragon and now i have Rainbow Phoenix along with my own 7 Crystal Beast monsters.Rainbow Phoenix is the 2nd Crystal God card Rainbow Dragon being the 1st and Rainbow Emperor being the 3rd. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, select 1 "Crystal Beast" monster with an ATK of 1500 or less from your Deck and add it to your hand. The idea for this card came to me when i began reading the story behind the Crystal Beasts, the gems were being transported by ship to Rome when it was caught in a storm and sunk,the gems were lost untill Pegasus discovered writings on them,but my gems however the writings were never found so Pegasus never knew that these gems were also onboard the ship,so i thought i would depict this event in the cards history by making a card to honor it. If there are 2 or more "Crystal Beast" cards in your Spell and Trap Card Zone, you can select up to 2 "Crystal Beast" monsters from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard and place them in your Spell & Trap Card Zone, face-up as Continuous Spell Cards. This is just a little help for abundance yet again and has other uses for Rainbow ruins and a special Monster, also used in conjunction with Crystal Blessing to bring 4 CB monster into your Spell and trap card zone. This card can only be activated when there are 7 "Crystal Beasts" cards with different names on the field, or in your Graveyard ,Special Summon 1 "Rainbow Emperor - Tryshan" face-up from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard, this cards activation cannot be negated, once per tur during your Main Phase place 1 "Crystal Beast" from your Graveyard face-up as a Continuous Spell Card. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, this card cannot be Special Summoned accept by the effect of "Rainbow Palace The Crystal Realm", all opponent's card effects are negated, by tributing 5 "Crystal Beasts" with different card names as face-up Continuous Spell Cards to the Graveyard, destroy all Cards on your opponent's side of the field. With this card i wanted a game ender but not something that can be easily summon it. The idea behind this Card is that as one of the Crystal Beast Gods he should have a specific power something like Abundance but with the cost of all your Cbs on the field but thats why hes a game ender with 4500 atk u have to use him at the right time or it wont help you.Alright guys thats all for now i hope that you all dont think i have created nood uber cards i tried giving cost and draw backs to there use but with the ability to help a CB deck flow more.I will update this post with the finished cards as i go along. Link to comment
dendalus Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 i like theme alot you OCG is spot on. the only thing i would change is make the field card a ritual, and change the ritual monter to a real type for some reasone these people hate divine and normal cards. 9/10 Link to comment
dendalus Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 yeah dude as i said your gonna go far here. i would run these in my CB deck. Link to comment
Knight121198 Posted November 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 Wow thx Dendalus i hope to have pictures for the cards soon. Link to comment
dendalus Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 well only you can do that. remeber THE POWER IS YOURS! Link to comment
Cody Frost Posted November 13, 2008 Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 These CB's are a must have on the CB theme. OCG is good, Score: 9/10 I made "Trimmed" CB's on my card thread but I need to ask you this question: Could I make "Trimmed" CBs out of your cards? :? Here's the thread to take a look at the "Crystal Beast"(s) I made: Click Link to comment
Knight121198 Posted November 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2008 These CB's are a must have on the CB theme. OCG is good' date=' Score: 9/10 I made "Trimmed" CB's on my card thread but I need to ask you this question: Could I make "Trimmed" CBs out of your cards? :? Here's the thread to take a look at the "Crystal Beast"(s) I made: Click Hi thx for posting and i thank you for the rating...now i looked at your trimmed monsters,now if you wish to make them if you can please credit me for the original creation of the cards that your trimmed ones are based from and if its ok add a link to my thread that way the people can see where your trimmed beasts come from k so yes you can use them ill keep my eyes open for what you come up with :D:D Link to comment
Cody Frost Posted November 14, 2008 Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Alright, thx! :) Link to comment
arme_nyuu Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 that is one of the old cards verey rare:D:D Link to comment
Knight121198 Posted November 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 that is one of the old cards verey rare:D:D Now thats cool,did u draw the dragon ur self? great work.:D:D Link to comment
Dhpo Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 that is one of the old cards verey rare:D:D Now thats cool' date='did u draw the dragon ur self? great work.:D:D[/quote'] Its cool but..... @arme_nyuu - May you please don't post in other peoples threads? Link to comment
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted November 17, 2008 Report Share Posted November 17, 2008 A Ritual Summon IS a Special Summon. Link to comment
Knight121198 Posted November 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Hi all just wanted to give an update on how far ive gotten with the pictures for my cards and ive just finished my first one Crystal Beast Diamond Lion....im not very good at drawing so please be kind but i wanted to just show what it would look like,i had some trouble with the coloring on that diamond in the center so if anyone has any ideas on that im glad to hear em i still need to color and place the big diamond behind him like the other CBs have the gems behind them so mine will be no different. going to start work on Crystal Beast Jade Panther and hope to have it ready soon. Link to comment
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 That's actually a pretty good drawing, but you have a few OCG issues, and I think some of your cards are overpowered. Like I said, Ritual Summons are Special Summons >> Link to comment
Knight121198 Posted November 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Hi Slayer about the Ritual monster im over that and just made it into a regular effect monster as u can see in a later post i made in this thread so i get the ocg issue on that one but its not nessacary to change that card if u can point out the others for me ill change them as quickly as possible.Now on the subject of over powered i beg to differ there effects are quite reasonable Diamond lion for example has a similar effect to Snipe hunter but he still pays a cost of tributing a face up Cb as a spell card,Rainbow Emperor may seem over powered with his negating and removal effect but if u read closely he cannot negate the activation of traps or quick play spells just cards face up on the field,like monster effects that cannot be destroyed and other things like that,the other cbs i have are essentially searching monster which cbs lack a bit just having pegasus so i thought about putting in 1 or 2 more,Onyx wolf is just a beat stick i mean ever themed deck needs one,jade panthers effect isent unreasonable it still involves 2 tributes for the special summon,her effect compared to jinzo i mean doesnt compare hes over powered i think,the game is full of many over powered monsters its how we play that make the differance but if u can give me an example of which ones are overpowered ill take a look k :). Link to comment
Cody Frost Posted November 19, 2008 Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Nice 8) I made your "Crystal Beast"(s) into "Trimmed-Crystal Beasts). They're in my thread if you want to take a look at them. Note: I think, they might be overpowered... Link to comment
Knight121198 Posted November 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2008 Nice 8) I made your "Crystal Beast"(s) into "Trimmed-Crystal Beasts). They're in my thread if you want to take a look at them. Note: I think' date=' they might be overpowered...[/quote'] Lol they might be a little u need to add more cost to them maybe but still u put a lot of thought into them im glad to see u liked my cards enough to make ur own based on em(makes me think they are real cards to begin with hehe) Link to comment
Cody Frost Posted November 21, 2008 Report Share Posted November 21, 2008 The art does need more improvement. If I knew, I would tell you how to add shading. Also, try to make the background for your CBs the same that is used for the original CBs. :) Link to comment
senron Posted November 22, 2008 Report Share Posted November 22, 2008 I like it 9/10 because this has potential though I suggest you edit all your cards to the first post so people can find them easier. Link to comment
Chaos Impact™ Posted January 9, 2009 Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 I like the new ones the but the ones with out pics would make the rating higher from me but since you don't,grade B Link to comment
dragon300 Posted January 9, 2009 Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 well,some cards i cant see the pics of that card Link to comment
Cody Frost Posted January 12, 2009 Report Share Posted January 12, 2009 Cool! This is a sub species deck! (Sub species=A different version of the same theme.) Nice new cards! Link to comment
Toffee. Posted January 12, 2009 Report Share Posted January 12, 2009 Seriously... Why a Jade Panther? Link to comment
Sapphowako Posted June 22, 2011 Report Share Posted June 22, 2011 Can I use the pictures for these in my own Crystal Beasts? I am in the middle of making a series with synchros Link to comment
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