Dante Dimercurio Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 I made these from the top of my head.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CardAce Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Don't put Alpha in all caps. It should be: "For every monster with Alpha in it's card name on your side of the field, this card gains 200 ATK." And for the first and third cards, they don't really make sense. When do you gain or they lose LP? When they're summoned, when it's destroyed, etc. Final Rating: 3.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 not very original.use parentheses.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 not bad 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dante Dimercurio Posted November 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2008 Cardace you are the only person to tell me My ocg errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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