.Requiem Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 I was trying to find wings for noctowl that was open, but my search for was in vain. I had to make them from scratch, so you guys if there good or not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Is it the entire sprite that is from scrath? Or just the wings? Anway it rcoks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 To answer the question, no he didn't do this entirely from scratch. The body, head, and feat are all from the 2nd frame image of the emerald sprite of Noctowl. This only makes me question though why then he did this though, in the second frame Noctowl already has its wings out.... Well I guess you mean more like "wings that are open and flared out." Well looking at Noctowl wings though we see a few problems with yours though. Noctowl tan feathers take up a lot more room under the wings, but the way you have it, they only take up a small amount. There really should extend farther. Depending also, maybe none of those brown tips should really be there. Also biologically, I don't know if owls and Noctowls are able to flare there feathers that high and stuff, but I wouldn't know for sure. The wing style also doesn't match exactly right, it's much more like Ho-Oh's wing type. In fact, it almost looks like a sloppy edit of Ho-Oh's wings. As far as spriting goes, there are flaws. One thing I noticed how you have a large lack of shading. You mostly just have borders and inside color, which is almost missable to the untrained eye. The top left corner though of the left wing should though probably have highlights and near the shoulder of the right wing it probably have more shadows. There is also a general level of sloppiness. You must have rushed near the end and neglected to get to the many stray pixels. On the left wing are a good number of dark black pixels that look weird, including a large block of them. On the right some borders seem randomly dark too. Near the left side of Noctowls stomach you can fine a stray pixel. Also the borders and stuff of the ends of the feathers seem sloppy. A few look ok, but others look blocky and unnatural. Well that's all I have to say really. Keep a keen eye for sloppy mistakes, and work on neatness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ropp Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Jappio just eat you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted November 12, 2008 Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Well better than my sprites anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted November 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2008 Well I tried my best on it thx for all the comments. Wait also I could of tooken it from Ho-oh wings because I just looked at some images off google of noctowl flying in the sky. I tried and trying to improve. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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