dxjxc Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 I made these cards based off of my friend's ideas. In fact all I did was reword them to make them sound more official. Okay, I added the difference effect. But who's seen a second stage level monster w/o an effect? I edited this one a little. The prototype said "only card" I changed it to "only monster". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 These should go in pop culture... End PhaseTributeSpecial Summon1, not onelvl = Lv (in this case, but in all other cases it is Level)DeckDefense PositionBattle DamageSummoned...opponent's Life Points directly... Other wording problems too. The first 2 pics could use backgrounds and the effects could be more interesting. Also, you lack artist credit and/or a link to where you found the pics. I'll give you 24 hours before I report this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted November 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Like I said, I only did a quick edit. As for the pictures, I googled, no idea who made them. Also, these are close to the pictures in the prototypes and I was to lazy to edit them. Lastly, I moved it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Don't use fake types. Effects are kinda simple. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dxjxc Posted November 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 Again I say, these are MY FRIEND'S cards. I'm not going to make may changes. I'll probably fix a few mistakes and if I'm really bored I can try to fix the backgrounds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexeaus Posted November 10, 2008 Report Share Posted November 10, 2008 mehteyr are alright i guess5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dray Kaiba Posted November 11, 2008 Report Share Posted November 11, 2008 These should go in pop culture... End PhaseTributeSpecial Summon1' date=' not onelvl = Lv (in this case, but in all other cases it is Level)[b']D[/b]eckDefense PositionBattle DamageSummoned...opponent's Life Points directly... Other wording problems too. The first 2 pics could use backgrounds and the effects could be more interesting. Also, you lack artist credit and/or a link to where you found the pics. I'll give you 24 hours before I report this thread. These are in Pop Culture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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