Luna Diviner Posted November 16, 2008 Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 Info.There once lived three warriors, each loved by their people. One day during a battle against the ruthless king, Caius. The three warriors disapeared. But they soon came back but this time they were different and they were working the monarchs. Will the three warriors find the good inside them and defeat the monarchs once and for all. Or will the world of duel monsters stay unsafe for the rest of eternity. Misc.The three warriors are duel monsters, that fought against the monarchs but now follow the monarchs. They were cloaks and masks, which morphs them to fit into the uniform no matter their size. Each warrior has a different mask, which gives them special abilities. CharactersName : HonestImage : Abilities : Honest has the ability to destroy his opponent and convert them into Antimatter if he defeats them in a duel. He can also fly at extreme speeds that makes him look like he is teleporting.Bio : Honest was once the leader of the three warriors and was the first to be defeated as he risked his life for the others. He now obeys the monarchs and is ruler of the 'Realm of Light'. As he tricked his people into signing away the rights of the 'Realm of Light'.Deck : Monster (22)Lumina (2)Ryko (3)Lyla (3)Wulf (3)Gragonith (1)Garoth (2)Celestia (3)Honest (2)Guardian of Order (2)Judgement D. (2)Sangan (1) Spell (14)Card of Safe Return (2)Mystical Space Typhoon (1)Foolish Burial (2)Monster Reincarnation (3)Monster Reborn (1)Lightning Vortex (1)Heavy Storm (1)Solar Recharge (3) Trap (6)Glorious Illusion (1)Beckoning Light (1)Torrential Tribute (1)Solemn (3) Name : KurazImage : Abilities : When Kuraz defeats somebody in a duel, they are transformed into antimatter. Kuraz has the ability to generate intense lights, which he can use as a torch or for more destructive purpouses.Bio : Kuraz became good after being defeated by Honest. He was a great help during the batle against Caius but he was unable to defeat him. Kuraz now rules 'Ancient City - Rainbow Ruins'.Deck (Monsters - 23)Rainbow Dragon (2)Crystal Beast Ruby Carbuncle (2)Crystal Beast Sapphire Pegasus (3)Crystal Beast Topaz Tiger (2)Crystal Beast Amythest Cat (2)Crystal Beast Emerald Tortoise (2)Crystal Beast Cobalt Eagle (3)Crystal Beast Amber Mammoth (2)Morphing Jar (1)Kuraz the Light Monarch (2)Rescue Cat (2) (Spell Cards - 15)Crystal Abundance (3)Crystal Blessing (2)Crystal Beacon (3)Crystal Release (1)Ancient City - Rainbow Ruins (2)Crystal Promise (2)Lightning Vortex (1)Monster Reborn (1) (Traps - 2)Torrential Tribute (1)Crystal Counter (1) Name : ReficuleImage : Ability : Reficule can transform his defeated opponent's into antimatter. Reficule can turn his enemies positive emotions into negative emotions.Bio : Reficule was a witch in an old run down village, after meeting Honest. She became one of the three warriors. Reficule is cold hearted and that didn't change even when she became taken over. Reficule only shows emotion towards Honest and Kuraz.Deck : Monster (21)Reficule (3)Burning Algae (3)Fire Trooper (3)Solar Flare Dragon (2)Mystic Tomato (2)Volcanic Slicer (2)Rapid Fire Magician (2)Stealth Bird (2)Mask of Darkness (1)Sangan (1) Spell (10)Upstart Goblin (3)Ookazi (2)Goblin's Secret Remedy (2)Rain of Mercy (1)Lightning Vortex (1)Heavy Storm (1) Trap (11)Gift Card (3)Bad Reaction to Simochi (3)Solemn Judgement (2)Dark Cure (2)Brutal Potion (1) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2008 [spoiler=Chapter 1]Chapter 1 - Like Father. Like Son"Move on, you unworthy excuse of a monster!" cried a Jinzo as he began whipping E-Hero Avian. Avian's wings rose upward and it let out a powerful screech of pain. "Oh be quite!" shouted the Jinzo and it whipped the Avian once again. Jinzo moved forward along with Avian until they stood in front of a group of Maniacal Servants. Jinzo pushed Avian towards them, "Deal with this filth." and he walked away.A gust of wind blasted towards the Maniacal Servants making them fall to the ground, Honest appeared. "I see the trash has just come in.,” laughed the masked angel. Avian was on his knees crying. "Please have mercy, I have a wife and kids to look after!" he cried."Fresh victims, huh?" joked Honest."No, spare them please!" cried Avian hoping he had never told Honest about them."Well I've got any idea, how about we duel. If you win, I'll let all of you go but if I win, you and your family will become antimatter!""No, I can't risk their lives.""It's to late now. Duel!" said Honest and Avian was in some kind of hold, a vice-like grip over him forced him to activate his Duel Disk and duel Honest. Even if it risked his life.START DUEL Honest : I start by activating Card of Safe Return. Now I play Foolish Burial to send my Wulf to the graveyard and now because of its effect it is Special Summoned and because of Card of Safe Return I draw 1 card. I set two cards and I end my turn.Avian : I normal summon, E-Hero Burstinatrix and I equip it to Axe of Despair. Burstinatrix, attack his Wulf!*The axe in Burstinatrix's hand began to red and a ball of flame shot from it and destroyed Wulf.*Honest : I activate Glorious Illusion which allows me to Special Summon Wulf back to the field and because of Card of Safe Return, I draw an extra card.Avian : I end my turn. Honest : Is that all? I tribute Wulf for Gragonith, which now has 2300 ATK. Gragonith attack his Burstinatrix, Holy Ray!*The beam of energy emitting from Gragonith's wide jaws destroyed the hero. *Avian : No my Burstinatrix!Honest : Well it's your turn. So I send the top three cards of my deck to the graveyard.Avian : I draw. Yes I finally have a chance, I activate Lightning Vortex and I send E-Hero Clayman from my hand to the graveyard to destroy your Gragonith!Honest : Not so fast, I play Solemn Judgement so by halving my Life Points I negate your vortex keeping my monster safe.Avian : Well I can Normal Summon this turn.Honest : Ha! What can you do?Avian : I set 1 card and I end my turn! Honest : I Normal Summon, Lumina and I use it's effect and I discard another Lumina to special one of the two monsters in my grave (Wulf and Lyla) but as I had targets for the effect when I discarded Lumina, I can Special Summon it instead of one of the other monsters. And once again I use my name Lumina's effect to discard a Garoth and now I can Special Summon Wulf!Avian : No, so much power!Honest : Yes my field is packed with 2 1000 ATK monsters, 1 2100 ATK monster and 1 2600 ATK monster. You are surely going to lose. Gragonith, Holy Ray!*The face-down monster was revealed to be an E-Hero Clayman, which was destroyed by Gragonith. *Avian: How am I taking damage?Honest : Gragonith inflicts piercing damage. Now Lumina, Lumina and Wulf attack for victory!*The three powerful monsters began attacking Avian, lowering his Life Points to 0.* END OF DUEL Avian transformed into small, purple orbs of light and flew into Honest's hand. "Is that all you have?" said Honest as the energy flew into his hand. "I guess his family are going to have to pay because of his weakness.""Please spare my son.” cried an E-Hero Burstinatrix and she spread her arms back to cover her child, Hero Kid."Me and Avian made a bet and he lost, so you’re coming with me.""Avian? Who is he?" asked Burstinatrix."Oh, so I've got the wrong family eh? Well you'll make good enough prisoners for master Caius!""Leave my mum alone!" screamed the Hero Kid."What's your name little boy?" asked Honest."My name is Chris." replied the little boy."Well Chris, it's my job to transform your family into antimatter to strengthen master Caius. So either get out of the way or I'll have to duel you!""Well bring it on!" shouted Chris."Oh you are ignorant like your father to bother protecting your family. And Burstinatrix, don't play games with me! I know Avian is your husband, I felt it in his energy whilst I absorbed it.""Ok, let's duel!" said Chris as he activated his duel disk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2008 Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 This seems like a great start for a fic. I can't wait to see what else you've got. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 Ep 2 is going to be posted on Saturday or Sunday. This is actualy the most fun I've had writing in ages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2008 Report Share Posted November 20, 2008 I'm glad to hear it. Then I look forward to seeing it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 [spoiler=Chapter 2]Chapter 2 - Like Father. Like Son (pt.2)START OF DUEL Chris: I start and I draw a card. Prepare to pay for what you did to my daddy, I set 2 spells or trap cards. And now I summon, Mystical Magician and I use his effect to special summon, Darknight Magician! Now I tune my Mystical Magician to Darknight Magician!Honest: What? A weak kid like you, having access to synchro monsters?Chris: Magical Force! Release your strength; prepare yourself. Unlock the gates to my opponent's demise! Synchro Summon! Arcanite Magician! Your move.Honest: My move, I summon my Lyla and now I use her effect and switch it to defense position, to destroy your face-down card on the left.Chris: Not so fast, I chain by activating my face-down card! Buster Mode, now I tribute Arcanite Magician to special summon it's /Buster form!Honest: No, how did you get a Buster Mode? I set a card and I end my turn, thus the top 2 cards of my deck are sent to the graveyard (Foolish Burial and Guardian of Order) Chris: Prepare for your end! I activate my Arcanite Magician/Buster's effect and now every card you control! Now I summon, E-Hero Wildheart and I chain to that by activating Torrential Tribute! So my Arcanite Magician/Buster is destroyed which allows me to special summon an Arcanite Magician! Now both of my monsters attack him!*Wildheart threw a large boomerang whilst, Arcanite Magician began blasting Honest with beams from his magical staff. *Honest: Aaah! So much power, how did you learn how to duel so well?Chris: My father!Honest: Avian? He couldn't duel out of a paper bag!Chris: My dad used this deck but he gave me it because he knew I’d need it one day.Honest: How touching. Do you end your turn, kid?Chris: Yes I do!Honest: I draw and I activate Monster Reborn to special summon Lyla! Now I tribute her to summon, Celestia. And now, I discard the top 4 cards of my deck (Sangan, Honest, Card of Safe Return and Heavy Storm) to destroy both of the monsters that you control!Chris: No my plan was foolproof.Honest: Well kid, you've obviously never dueled somebody like me! Celestia attack him. Now, I set 2 cards and I end my turn. Chris: I draw and now I activate, Allure of Darkness! So now I draw 2 cards and I remove from play my Sangan. I activate Fissure to destroy your Celestia!Honest: Not so fast, I pay half my points to negate it, thanks to my Solemn Judgment.Chris: Oh shoot! Well I set one monster and I end my turn.Honest: That's more like it kid. I draw a card from my deck. Now Celestia attack his face-down monster with Trinity Cascade!*Celestia's began to fire powerful shots of feathers alongside blasts of magic from her staff, destroying the face-down monster! *Chris: Not get to cocky because the card you destroyed was Grave Squirmer and now I use its effect to destroy, Celestia!Honest: No, my last line of defense. Well I set one monster and I end my turn. Chris: I draw a card, I set 1 card and then I summon, E-Hero Stratos.Honest: Oh no you don't, I activate Solemn Judgement to negate your summoning!Chris: Damn, not again. I set a card and I end my turn.Honest: I draw and I activate Foolish Burial to send Wulf from my deck to the graveyard and with its effect I special summon it!Chris: I play Threatening Roar, which will keep me safe for the rest of the turn.Honest: Well I set one monster and I end my turn. Chris: My turn. I start by summoning E-Hero Stratos and using his effect to get, Wildheart from my deck to my hand. Now I activate Polymerization to fuse my Wildheart and my Avian from my hand to fusion summon, E-Hero Wild Wingman!*A large, winged man flew upwards and stood in fighting stance, facing Honest. *Honest: A synchro summon and now a fusion summon?Chris: Yes and now I will make your demise, even closer! Wild Wingman attacks his face-down with Wild Wing Cascade!*Wild Wingman began firing feathers at the face-down card. *Honest: I flip my face-down card monster, Ryko. And because of its effect, I destroy Wild Wingman and send the top three cards of my deck to the graveyard (Guardian of Order, Honest and Solemn Judgement). Unfortunately Ryko is also destroyed because of the attack but if you end your turn, I will win.Chris: I guess I have to end my turn but one day the spirit of my father and I will find hope and on that day, you will pay.Honest: My turn, I draw. Wulf attack Chris for game!*Wulf slashed Chris causing him to fall down, his duel disk deactivated and he began glowing yellow and in a small amount of time, Chris turned into antimatter and flew into Honest's hand. *END OF DUEL Burstinatrix was watching the duel and she began crying. "You monster! How could you do that to my baby?""Oh, you want to know? Well, I can show you! But I don't think you'll like it!A cloaked figure wearing a red mask approached another figure, this one wearing a white mask. "Do you think he needs help?" said the one in the white mask to the one in the red."No Reficule, I think Honest can handle this himself.” said Kuraz."Ok but I think I hear crying.""That's nothing you should be worried about."Honest walked out of the house, and faced Kuraz and Reficule, "I did it, the entire family. Gone. I guess Cauis should be paying me a fine bounty for this one.""Well, Honest I believe we should be leaving now." said Kuraz."Yes, I agree with you." replied Honest.Honest spread his wings and took of quickly. Kuraz pulled a card from his duel disk and it began glowing, Rainbow Dragon flew down from the sky and it stopped before Kuraz."Get on Reficule, we need to get to the castle." said Kuraz as both he and Reficule boarded the giant dragon. By this time, Honest was nowhere in sight.Honest flew close to the castle, "I wonder where those guys are?" he thought to himself and he quickly came to a halt at the castle.A Summoned Skull walked up to Honest, "Caius is waiting for you in the Royal Magical Library." it told Honest."Ok, thanks for telling me."Meanwhile, Kuraz and Reficule were riding Rainbow Dragon it was fast but the distance from where they were and there final destination was large, so they sat quietly doing nothing until Rainbow Dragon began flashing blue and then it just disappeared. Kuraz looked down to see a Compulsory Evacuation Device and he pointed at it, "Look! They must have used that on our Rainbow Dragon!" he said to Reficule."Yes we did!" said two different voices in unison."Who are you?" shouted Reficule."We are - Swamp Battle Guard and Lava Battle Guard!" they both shouted, in response to Reficule."And what do you want?" asked Reficule."We want to duel" they said."Ha ha ha! Oh, Caius is going to be happy when we tell him that we just created more antimatter! Bring it on and have fun, as this duel will be your last,” shouted Kuraz."Oh but this is no normal duel, we challenge you to a tag duel!""What? You are stupid enough to face both Reficule and me? If Honest was hear I bet he would be laughing his head of,” said Kuraz."Oh so you accept? Lets duel!" said Lava and Swamp Battleguard. And they activated their Duel Disks.Back in the castle, "Honest where are Kuraz and Reficule?""I don't know my lord,” said Caius."Why did you ask for me to come here?" asked Honest."I have heard of your defeat over Avian and Hero Kid and for that I thank you but I my sources say are rebel army is moving towards the castle and if we let them get here, the consequences will be disastrous." said Caius."Yes my lord, what do you want me to do?" asked Honest."I want you to defeat their leaders; the actual identity of those behind the rebel movement is unknown to us for now. Find out and make sure that they become antimatter!""Yes my lord, I shall make a plan as soon as Kuraz and Reficule come back.""Okay my faithful minion, go back to your quarters." said Caius."Thank you my lord." said Honest.Honest walked out of the Royal Magical Library and walked up a flight of stairs into his sleeping quarters; he walked up to a dusty old chair near a large window, overlooking several small villages. Honest looked down, "I wonder were, Kuraz and Reficule could be?" he asked himself. In fact, he felt positive that he had to find out. He couldn't wait or just sit around expecting them to come back, riding on Rainbow Dragon. He had to go look for them. Honest spread his wings, and with that he was off with the wind venturing the skies with one thing on his mind. Find Kuraz and Reficule. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xXxXDuuuudeXxX Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 I like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 Excellent duel. You've got more coming soon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 I update same as real, one a week. (Unless I'm on holiday, maybe then I might make a special) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 23, 2008 Report Share Posted November 23, 2008 does this mean you'll put two up since Thanksgiving is so close? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathvader20 Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Nice story (= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 No, I do not celebrate thanksgiving. I don't even know when it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 ok fine, I'll just wait for the next chap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Sorry, you've got to wait till the weekend. Which is a better idea than releasing it now as I have more time and so does most other people. It doesn't change much as your the only one reading this but I've got to at least try. I will start writing soon, I've got to do some homework. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 No one here is rushing you, I'm patient on the fic updates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 wow.incredible piece of writing.but,monster reborn is banned :(. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 oh please. I've written fics were you're allowed 2 monster reborns in a deck. This doesn't have to follow ALL TCG guidelines Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted November 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 Monster Reborn is limited. I am very up to date. Neg if you say it isn't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 yeah that's like the only anime rule that follows TCG, you can only have ONE monster reborn in your deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexev Posted November 24, 2008 Report Share Posted November 24, 2008 so, they are duel spirits, they don't have people like Toei to ban things, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 [spoiler=Chapter 3]Chapter 3 - Tag Duel! Kuraz and Reficule vs. Lava and Swamp Battleguard! START OF DUEL Lava: I start this duel, by activating the Field Spell, Molten Destruction!*The field changed to a land near a large volcano. *Swamp: Good move brother.Lava: But I'm not done yet, I summon UFO Turtle! I end my turn!Reficule: I start my turn by drawing a card. I normal summon myself, Reficule to the field. Now I activate 3, Upstart Goblins!Swamp and Lava: What? How could you be so lucky!Reficule: I draw 3 cards and you gain 3000 Life Points but because of Reficule, you take 3000 points of damage instead! Now I set 2 cards and I end my turn. Swamp: You think a mere 3000 points of damage can affect us? I draw a card; prepare to suffer much more than we did! I activate Brain Control and for a small cost of 800 Life Points, I take control of your Reficule.Reficule: No, that means we're wide open.Kuraz: Don't worry, Reficule, we will still be 300 points ahead.Swamp: Oh really? Not if I play this!*Giant Rat appeared on the field. *Reticule: Now this is bad.Swamp: Now my three monsters attack them directly!Kuraz and Reficule: Aaah!Swamp: I set and I end my turn so, you get your Reficule back! Kuraz: I begin my turn by picking up a card from my deck. I thought my hand was good already but now, I think we can turn the tables! I summon my Pegasus and I use his effect to add another Pegasus from my deck to my Spell and Trap Card Zone. I activate Crystal Promise to Special Summon the other Pegasus, and I add Ruby to the Spell and Trap Card Zone! Now I discard my Emerald Tortoise to activate Lightning Vortex!*A bolt of lighting struck Lava and Swamp Battleguard's field, destroying their monsters. *Lava and Swamp: No, you fool!Kurtz: I attack with all my monsters!Lava: Aaargh, the pain! But I activate Compulsory Evacuation Device to return one of your Pegasus to your hand!Kuraz: I end my turn. Lava: I draw a card, and I activate Tribute to the Doomed by discarding Great Angus, I destroy your Pegasus,Kuraz: That only helps me as it will go to my Spell and Trap Card Zone.Lava: Not after I play this, Heavy Storm!Kuraz: No, how do you have so much luck?Lava: Is it luck or skill? Now I activate, Meteor of Destruction causing your Life Points to decrease to 2300. I remove my UFO Turtle from play to Special Summon, Inferno! Now my monster, attack their Reficule!Reficule: Aaah! No!Lava: I end my turn.Reficule: I start my turn by drawing a card, damn dead draw. I flip my face-down, Bad Reaction to Simochi. Now I activate Goblin's Secret Remedy, lowering your Life Points by 600 thanks to my Bad Reaction to Simochi. I set one monster! I end my turn. Swamp: I draw a card! Now my Inferno destroy her face-down monster! You can't win; when my monster finally destroys yours you will lose the duel!Reficule: Oh, really? I activate my face-down Gift Card and thanks to Bad Reaction to Simochi you take 3000 points of damage!Swamp: But you still take 1500, making this duel become a draw!Lava: No! Brother, we have failed. END OF DUEL Honest was still in the air, looking down from the heavens looking for Kuraz and Reficule. He had found them at last, he saw a large fiery creature charge towards a face-down card but it seemed Reficule used a combo with Bad Reaction to Simochi and Gift Card but the duel ended in a draw. How could they have left him to duel and the worst part was that they didn't even win. Honest rushed down to where Kuraz and Reficule were standing. He looked at them angrily, "You better be happy that the outcome of your duel was a draw, as neither of you will become antimatter but Caius sure will be disappointed.""I'm sorry, Honest but their tactics were great. One of them increased their defenses whilst the other inflicted burn damage. And they forced us into a duel anyway." said Reficule."Yes Honest, they seem to be quite powerful. Please forgive us,” asked Kuraz."I have already forgiven you but will Caius? Wait do you mean they forced you into a duel!""They attacked Rainbow Dragon and left us stranded, and we took the bait. Expecting them to be weak, we dueled but the outcome proved us wrong.""Why couldn't you just call on Rainbow Dragon and leave?""We are sorry Honest but this not the time." shouted Reficule.Why not." said Honest.Reficule got hold of Honest and turned him around so he was facing the same direction she was and pointed, "Because of that!" I have update episode 1 so, Arcanite Magician isn't illegaly summoned. And if somebody says I have used a banned card, then I laugh in their face and tell them that it is not banned. I am VERY up to date so if I am wrong then a new banlist must have came out of nowhere. Sorry about the wait and the short episode, I didn't have a lot of time as I kept on having to go somewhere leaving me away from the laptop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 interesting to end the tag team in a draw. First time I've seen that happen. Great chap Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Thank you, and I don't choose how the duel goes. I just scan a list of cards, find a few put them together and work from their. I had to end it as a draw as the only other way was for them to lose. It is true that Reficule could have just played her card but being evil. She toyed with her opponent and got the wrong end of it. Now I just something to follow on from the cliff hanger. And look forward to the christmas ep coming soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 this is why sometimes you try ending a duel quickly, not string your opponent along Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C-man21 Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 when is the next chapter coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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